Not bad for 4 hours?
Still felt like forever doing the suit textures.

cool picture man) wanna see this girl in the game))

legs are wayyy too big

u draw pretty well

I draw too look this
http://www.gamesas.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=5621

;D

EDIT: here the link xDD
http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg52/dark-nazo/DSCN3334.jpg

btw they had right the legs are two big...but the draw is pretty good

legs are wayyy too big
This ^

Just broke my nose face palming.

u draw pretty well

I draw too look this
http://www.gamesas.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=5621

;D

EDIT: here the link xDD
http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg52/dark-nazo/DSCN3334.jpg

btw they had right the legs are two big...but the draw is pretty good

Holy crap dark-nazo, that's amazing. Same with you OP (of course, minus the legs).

Time well spent doing the suit texture, looks great with the rest of the drawing!

Proportions are way off, but nicely detailed.

What's wrong with her right hand? Also, why is there a grenade attached to her wrist?

Great picture!

Heres a tip. when you draw in pencil try using another piece of paper just to rest your palm on, it will minimize the smudging. Also ALWAYS keep your pencil as sharp as possible. One more thing, use a variaty of pencil sizes. =]

It seems you spend a long time on the detail, try using pencil marks to create detail rather than spending hours drawing it "perfect" when the final product is somewhat lacking. For an example check this out, I know its been drawn with a tablet but its the same concept. You can see how they've built up textures using pencil marks. rather than simply colouring in an outline.

http://www6.incrysis.com/images/Art_CD/trooper_concept.jpg

You should really find a good book or search online for some tips. I was lucky enough to have an education in art. It seems you have some real passion for it, well considering how long it must of took you to create that piece.

One more thing, try and get away from the Manga, it will just hold you back and limit your technique.

Heres a tip. when you draw in pencil try using another piece of paper just to rest your palm on, it will minimize the smudging. Also ALWAYS keep your pencil as sharp as possible. One more thing, use a variaty of pencil sizes. =]

It seems you spend a long time on the detail, try using pencil marks to create detail rather than spending hours drawing it "perfect" when the final product is somewhat lacking. For an example check this out, I know its been drawn with a tablet but its the same concept. You can see how they've built up textures using pencil marks. rather than simply colouring in an outline.

http://www6.incrysis.com/images/Art_CD/trooper_concept.jpg

You should really find a good book or search online for some tips. I was lucky enough to have an education in art. It seems you have some real passion for it, well considering how long it must of took you to create that piece.

One more thing, try and get away from the Manga, it will just hold you back and limit your technique.


I did use pencil marks?

I thought Manga-ish was a unique take?

And this pencil was 2B, pencil sets fail when you've lost half the pencils.

very cool, i like seeing a girl in the nanosuit, its a new twist and well done. I like the detail in the suit textures, waay better than i could do

I did use pencil marks?

I thought Manga-ish was a unique take?

And this pencil was 2B, pencil sets fail when you've lost half the pencils.

Don't bother with pencil sets, they give you far to many pencils which you never really need and they're usually low in qaulity. Go for 2H, HB, 2B, 4B pencils and buy them seperatly from a good manufacturer

I did use pencil marks?

I thought Manga-ish was a unique take?

And this pencil was 2B, pencil sets fail when you've lost half the pencils.

Don't bother with pencil sets, they give you far to many pencils which you never really need and they're usually low in qaulity. Go for 2H, HB, 2B, 4B pencils and buy them seperatly from a good manufacturer

I don't like H.