Beaten. Again. How bad could I be at caravan? This was the 5th time this night that Holmes had beaten me, probably because I was drunk and probably because my mind was on other things. I tugged at my jumpsuit which was 2 sizes too small because James -the requesition officer- was an [censored] who hated me and was always missing his VDS meds. I looked at my caravan hand, cursed and took another swig of beer. 'Poker face' was a term I was yet to learn. The lights flickered and Holmes swore at the ceiling, as if the roof could help. The lights flickered again and holmes just rolled his eyes muttering ''If the engineers dont fix that damn reactor soon I'll go and fix the thing myself.'' I thought that was highly unlikely but nodded anyway. I decided it was time for bed.

I awoke in complete darkness. What the hell was going on? In 22 years in Vault 113 the lights had never gone off completely. I got up put on my 2 sizes too small jumpsuit which is hard enough in the light let alone the dark and punched the door release to my room. 'CLICK'. Perfect. I pulled the emergency release and the bottom part of the door fell into the floor but the top stayed down. I pushed the top half up and ducked under. I could hear people shouting as I tried to remember the way to Holmes' room. I eventually found my way to his room, I pulled the release and found Holmes asleep. I remembered the cateye in his cabinet and took 2 jars. When i turned around to wake Holmes up, he was sat upright talking to himself. ''Holmes. Hey buddy it's me. Listen, the electricity went out in the night. I've got some cat-eye for you.'' I gave him some and took some myself and I started to see everything clearer. He muttered somthing like 'thanks Adam'' which was more than I'd expected. Just then I noticed there was a girl in the bed with him. Holmes stood up and pulled the covers off the bed and I got an eyefull of them both. I could handle one but the other wasn't appreciated.''oh sorry!'' whispered Holmes whilst covering up. I nodded at the girl who was revealed to be jasmine (a total [censored] and a half) and Holmes explained as he was dressing. I shuddered and we both walked into the hall where we started talking about the power cut. Just then we heard screaming from down the hall, we both ran towards the noise but tripped over what appeared to be cord . An obscured face looked down on us and then we where knocked into unconciousness.

I awoke again in complete darkness, the cateye had worn off. I was tied up. I heard movement and shouted out for Holmes. No answer. a light flickered on in the corner of the room and I saw Holmes on the floor in front of me. I tried to wake him up. Nothing. A voice from behind me said, '' He's dead.'' as somthing cold and hard hit me in the back of my head I lolled back into unconciousness... End of part 1

I like I'll definitely watch this. Other than a few grammar mistakes it's pretty good.