Atlas stood over the terminal staring down at the way the lights sequences.

"Good, now press the green buttons." Said the voice over the intercom.

Atlas thought about this for a while and decided that wasn't a good idea.

"What do you think could possibly happen? Press the green buttons please."

Atlas's fingures twitched.

"What do you think Regahn?"

Atlas's mind lurched. He began seeing things that he had never seen before.
He looked up and smiled.
He pressed the buttons that where glowing green.
Out the window he could see an orbital strike on phyer's base.
The explosions burried his cell under miles of rubbel.
But for the first time in his life, the door opened.

"Atlas...." A new voice in his mind said.

I take it this is a continuation from the other one? Your only allowed to have one Fanfic at a time.

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Yes sir. Only one at a time. Good start though, but a tad bit of advice:

The sentence, 'Atlas stood over the terminal staring down at the way the lights sequences.' Is a little off.


It would sound better if it was more like: 'Atlas stood over the terminal and then stared at it, noticing the way the lights flashed in sequence.'

Indeed, and if kept as written it would still need to be sequence rather than sequences

Yay grammar

Its not a continuation yet. I just put this up for those of you who prefer this over the trailer. I'll delete it in a day.