Blood, Money, Booze and more Money : Fallout Series Discussion

» Sat Mar 13, 2010 10:33 pm

Shadow, I'm not trying to tear you down in anyway. But you've read what we've been discussing on "So you think you can Rp?", and you see what we mean first hand now. I wouldn't give up on the Rp, but I would probably (if he's willing) ask Dr. Strangelove on some pointers for your Rp? Maybe he could explain better why not to rush, which I think he did in "So you think you can Rp?"

Ya man, take this advice. Because this RP does have a LOT of potential, so don't quit. Maybe take break and skim up on what MAD-MAX said to do.

EDIT: Also what Stream said.

» Sat Mar 13, 2010 7:38 pm

Well, you guys are right.
But please bare in mind, this was my first, and I am still a youngling to the forums.
I just wanted this gone, and think real hard on a good story.
Setting: Good
Potential: Good.
Story: where did I put that again?
And even if I do give a lot of story, some consider it "Info dumping."
Or at least that's the case on fanfics.

» Sun Mar 14, 2010 4:06 am

Ok, this is done, sorry.
I'm writing something new soon, FanFic, can't exactly rush those.
The Death Of Law, which is the one I started a few days ago.