55 years after Oblivion...Cyrodill has gone into madness.Everyone is controlled by a sinister ruler called Varox Ura.This era is called Era of Doom.The Imperial City is now full of crime and bandits are releasing trouble.But one man stands up and makes a difference...Varkania Exo.Varkania knew that Varox is corrupted and he made a army of black iron armoured knights with black bucket like helmets called The Iron Rebels.They hired thousands of workers to build a castle with both underground and ground levels.There was 10 guards guarding it.One guard was Dragath.There was also a very skilled mage who helped Varkania his name was Long.Together they would be known as The Iron Rebels.


However when Varox sent scouts because of reports of soldiers gone missing he discovered that a army is trying to stop his army.The castle was known as Castle Varkania.Varox was mad because of this army.However Varkania told the builders to build multiple towns so that The Iron Rebels had some defense.Varox began to send armies into their castle but it was hopeless.They were always outnumbered.However one day a storm came.Varox had hired assassins during this storm to kill the guards at the front gate of the castle.They did...but the mage saw them and he told Varkania.Varkania knew he had to do something...He had to stop Varox.


The Iron Rebels had millions of soldiers.So did Varox.The Iron Rebels prepared the attack at the front gate of the castle when suddenly thousands of arrows came firing upon them.Varox and his army had arrived.The Iron Rebels got onto their horses and grabbed their swords and fought the army.The Rebels had fought Varox and his army when suddenly Varox snuck into the castle and confronted Varkania at the bottom level.Varkania grabbed his golden hammer and Varox grabbed his glass sword and they both fought.Varkania smashed Varox and Varox slashed Varkania.Varox however succeeded but he realized the army was powerful.They smashed through the front gates.Varox knew what he had to do.He yelled to Long to destroy all of the supporting things that held the castle together.Long did.The castle was overrun.Soon the castle came down.A legend was torn apart.But it was torn apart for the greator good...

This is brilliant writing. You my friend, are a diamond amoungst a heap of coal.

PLEASE KEEP WRITING. You are the best contributor to this forum yet. I cannot wait for more. This is an epic tale of battle and betrayal, and I hope everyone reads it.

My favourite part is your vivid battle description.