Richard Fray, the Infamous Bounty Hunter was born in the year 2260, in the year 2281 he is the most feared bounty hunter in the area that once was Upstate New York. He has fought and killed more people in the Scrayper (intentionally spelled wrong) then anybody who has ever lived.

That's a great start, but to avoid this being spam, why don't you add some more detail to it. How about some more detail on Scrayper? It is intentionally spelled wrong and peaks my curiosity. Why don't you elaborate. Shoot for a couple paragraphs, that would make a nice character.

The Scrayper, founded in 2251, was made by Daniel Ayper (pronounced Ai-Per) and his small group of ex-raiders... A few years before Daniel saw his raider gang leader force to people traveling together to fight to the death, which was the birth of his idea of a fighting arena where you can pick one of three types of fighting, hand to hand, meelee only, or hand guns. The three rules are 1) Never use a weapong type not in your category (ranged and meelee can use no their fists) 2) Never shoot or aim into the crowd 3) You MUST kill your opponent before you can exit the fighting arena... There are many people who gamble on who's going to win and 50% goes to the winning gamblers, 40% to the fighter, and 10% goes to the Scrayper...

The Scrayper was named due to it being located in a Pre-War Scrap Yard and the founder's last name being Ayper (It was originally named the Arena, but later changed to owner the original founder) they were combined to form the word Scrayper...

Part 1: Richard Fray

Richard Fray was born to an alcoholic and a drug addict who were murdered by a group called the Pure who believe anybody addicted to material things (mostly drugs and alcohol). They took him in but once he turned fifteen he broke in to the armory and left. He became a bounty hunter and wandered the wastes for years until he was hired by a man to kill Hugo Qway, the new owner of the Scrayper. But once he got their he decided he'd get more money fighting then he would for killing Qway. After about two weeks mercenaries showed up looking for him and shot up the Scrayper, killing five gamblers and seven guards. Richard killed them and fled into the wasteland, trying to find the many who hired him to kill Qway. After seven years he finds him as one of the seven highest crimelords in New Brooklyn. He kills him and earns a bounty of 10,000,000 caps on his head. He then procided to kill many crimelords in New York, earning his name as the Infamous Bounty Hunter. Eleven years after the crimelord's mercenaries showed up at the Scrayper Richard Fray returned, everybody more afraid of him then they are of possible mercenaries.

Part 2 will be release soon!

Edit: This is Chapter 1 Part One, Chapter One is called: The Deadly Hunter

This is cool! Lots of detail as well, imo. Pretty good, looking forward to part 2.

The Deadly Hunter
Part 2: Ridgetown

2293- Twelves years since the bounty was put upon Richard Fray's head. A man, far different from any man he's ever seen walks into the Scrayper. That man is different because he looks perfectly clean, his tuxedo and shoes are perfect. He walks up to Richard, who's wearing a faded old trenchcoat, MKII hemlet with a crack in the visor, and his old rebreather (he was born with a birth deffect due to his parent's use of drugs and alcohol), felt weak and exposed. The man said, "I am Charles Strike. Are Richard Fray?" He nodded in repsonce. "I have a job offer for you, as you might know I own a large corporation in Aban (ruins of Albany) known as StrikeCo. But I wasn't always in that position, I gre up in a small town on the cliffs of the Atlantic called Ridgetown, and my home is in trouble." Strike said. "What do you need me to do?" Richard asked, his voice slightly metallical due to his rebreather. "I want you to deal with this small group of tunnelers (creatures that are a fusion of a chemical similar to FEV mixed with radiation to form a thin monster with large, sharp claws that they use to rip anybody who has the misfortune to run into) there," Strike continued. "You shall have 50,000 caps delivered to your room here at the Scrayper, but only once those tunnelers are dealt with or you're dead." Strike finished. "You've got a deal." Richard Fray responded.

Richard traveled a day and a night to reach Ridgetown, following Charles Strike's very detailed map. He walked into the town and was greeted by a man named Fredrick Cuttingham, the town mayor. Richard told him how Charles Strike had sent him to deal with the tunnelers and Cuttingham repsonded that the town deputy, Landon Irksway, knows where it is. Twenty minutes later Richard and Landon were standing in front of the cave entrances. They went inside, Landon holding a hunting rifle and Richard holding a 12 gage shotgun. "How many are there?" Richard asked. "About four." Landon replied in a deep New York accent. Soon they were to deep into the cave to see anything so Landon pulled out his match box and lit one elminating a tunneler right next to him. He didn't even have time to react before it's claws tore him in half. Richard fired his shotgun, killing it. The match, which was still in Landon's hand lit his corpse's arm and soon the entire top half of his body on fire, giving Richard enough light to seetwo other tunnelers heading towards him. He shot and killed the closer one but then his gun jammed. The second one sprang at him and earned a knife in the eye. Richard dropped his shotgun and pulled out his lucky revolver. He found a stick towards the side of the cave and used a shred of cloth and Landon's corpse to light a torch. He walked deeper into the cave, ending up in a large room where there slept a queen tunneler, on top of a large pile of unhatched eggs. He holstered his revolver and drew a grenade, awaking the tunneler queen. He quickly threw the grenade as she got off the pile, wounding her and destroying the eggs. He then drew his revoler and fired four shots into her head, killing her.

He had told the mayor what happened and recieved his pay. While walking back he heard the sound of an engine and, a second to late saw Road Raiders on motorcycles sped towards him. They trapped him in a tight circle and he was forced to surrender. They tied him up and brought him back to their base, an abandon factory. 'This is hopeless. was all Richard Fray could think.

Part 3, the end of chapter one coming soon!

I'm trying to decide whether to edit this and re-post it on a new thread... This was orignally supposed to be a thread where you just posted ideas for what you want charatcers to look like, now it's all about Richard Fray. Should I put it in a new thread or will the moderators get mad?