Character Stories #9

Post » Wed May 11, 2016 6:17 pm

Ha! Excellent Andra! When I read "...you can surely believe this." With that, I pulled out..." I was certain the next word was going to be some kind of weapon...



@ Serethil - I know I'd said I was going to stop reading, but I couldn't help myself. :) Once I got started on it, I realized you've still got some distance to go before you get to the point of my farthest endeavors on the MQ, so I'm still with you -and enjoying it- for a space. :D



RG - Good update. I always have problems with Potema it seems... Mostly because I tend to rely on magic, I suppose.

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 6:16 pm


Eh, Potema's a right b1tch - especially if you're a mage. You really NEED shock resist pots and spells....



And thanks.... Yeah, lots of road to go before the end. Serious. It's been literally YEARS since I did the MQ - really. Right after release. Haven't done it since....



And - that makes me think.... just WOW. This is the Main Quest to end them all.... In all honesty, no game I've ever played has had an MQ so convoluted, so involved, so torturous, so.... vast. Yes, I've done it in the past.... and I really didn't want to do the whole thing again....



But... kudos to the devs for it regardless.

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 11:48 pm

Ghost.... Very nice update! Potema is a very nice quest, that for some reason I very rarely do.



Serethil... Very nice way to deal with Paarth and that part of the MQ. Very moving.


- it always bothers me when I see someone saying how short the MQ is... it is linear, though I think gives many places to pause and do other things in a natural way.




Andra.... very nice... cranky paranoid old men...and a great way to deal with them!

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 5:13 pm

Still mostly playing Other Character and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3-8iSdgPO2M It should probably be obvious where i got the "storytelling" angle I'm going with now.


But here's more Dovahkat and his storytelling adventure.



High Hrothgar



Spoiler

Now, where did we leave off? Oh, of course. High Hrothgar.


Well, not long after leaving the College and its current crisis behind, I began to have second thoughts about approaching the Greybeards. One reason was due to the fact that I would have to start my journey from Whiterun as it was the nearest anchor to the Throat of the World. Everything else was due to the turmoil of the day before and me being less...emotionally compromised.


If we were to ignore the fact that the universe was conspiring to make me unhappy if I tried to follow my own path, what exactly drove me to continue this pilgrimage? The desire for power? Or knowledge? The shame of not living up to expectations? To escape the thought that my time here was growing short? I could easily say all of them, but even combined it wasn't enough to motivate me to climb up what's considered Tamriel's tallest mountain.


With that in mind, what surprised me the most was that this province made enough of an impression on me that I even considered staying longer than I needed to. I suppose I had Alois to thank for that. What on Nirni is wrong with that creature? More importantly, what is wrong with me for letting him sway me like that?


So just because I told Alois I would--and killing him now wasn't an option--I made the long journey east around the mountain. My first destination was Ivarstead, which was at the base of the seven-thousand steps leading up to the monastery of the Greybeards.


Unfortunately, that meant I had to scale quite a bit of mountain before that point. It was safe to assume that in general, all of existence wanted to make me miserable. Well, if it would appease whoever is pulling the strings and it got me back safely inside the College, then I would push through and get this over with. Times like these served to remind me how frail I really was.


I suppose it's better than having to make a single climb or scaling the mountain without a predefined path. Besides, I had my wonderful haven bag. Additionally, I found yet another word of power in my short time in Ivarstead. It could have been much worse.


Now, was the trip worth it? Yes. Very. The Greybeards wasted no time in testing my power and instructing me in its use. In addition to that, their speaker Arngeir gladly answered...most of my questions regarding the Thu'um, the Greybeards and their "Way of the Voice", and most importantly of all, Dragons and Dragonborn.


To summarize:


The Thu'um is a power that is intrinsic to Dragons. It is a primal magic that transform's the speaker's will into power. The Dragons, in their tyranny, enslaved mortalkind, which eventually pushed them to retaliate. The goddess Kynareth...or is it Kyne in this instance?...anyways, she took pity on mortals and through one Paarthunax gifted them the ability to speak as the Dragons do.


One exception is Dragonborn. Dragonborn are mortals gifted with the souls of Dragons by Akatosh himself, giving them the intrinsic ability to Thu'um which, like Dragons, can be strengthened by drawing power from other dragons they've slain.

Eventually the Nords of Skyrim used the Thu'um in their conquests, up until the Battle of Red Mountain where they suffered a major defeat. Jurgen Windcaller, a powerful Thu'um user or Tongue, took it as punishment for their misuse of Kyne's gift and withdrew to the Throat of the World. There he founded High Hrothgar and his "Way of the Voice," where his followers used the Thu'um in worship of Kyne.


Once again, Dragonborn are the exception to this rule. As it is believed that Dragonborn are sent to the world in times of great need, the Greybeards--followers of the Way of the Voice--take it upon themselves to instruct them in the use of their Thu'um in the defense of Skyrim, completely disregarding their teachings.


Hm, you paid attention to the plaques along the path, too. Very good.


There was just so much information so soak up! I may be off on a few details but I believe that was more or less accurate.


Just about. What interested me the most was what Arngeir had to say about the current crisis. He had no doubt that the Dragons' return and the rise of a Dragonborn were more than just coincidence. In spite of the possibility that there may be more than one Dragonborn sent into the world, so far I was the only one that had been revealed to them.


The more I thought about it, the more uncomfortable I felt about the situation. It started to seem more and more likely that I was indeed strung along this entire time...for what? For a Province of humans I never cared for? A province that not only disrispects my vocation, but ostracizes my kind as well? I couldn't accept that. I couldn't even find it in me to spin it into something that stroked my ego.


I demanded more answers. The Greybeards knew far more than they let on, but Arngeir wouldn't say more about it. He said I wasn't ready, said I shouldn't let my easy mastery of the Thu'um tempt me into the arrogance of power. Too late for that. Well, it couldn't be helped. If I wanted to learn from them I would have to be compliant. At least until I was sure what this...gift meant. Until then, I had a task to do. Retrieve the horn of their founder from a barrow in Western Skyrim.


So with that, I was off. Since it appeared that I wasn't ratted out to the guards, I returned to Whiterun to think about what I've learned. As far as this Dragonborn business went, I would continue to hunt dragons and word walls. Nothing more. I'm not entirely sure I subscribe to the idea of the Way of the Voice, but I don't see much problem in continuing to study with the Greybeards. Maybe his was my calling all along. Master of obscure forms of magic. That was something I could agree with, at least.


As I began to wind down I realized there was one more thing I could do. When I began to learn about Shadows and the many worlds that existed alongside mine, one of the things I tried and failed to do was to reach out to one of my other selves. Shadow mages would use this ability to predict outcomes in their lives or exchange knowledge and experiences with their alternate selves or even call upon them as a shadow to aid them in their world. The more talented mages are even able to combine their power with their other selves, some even simultaneously existing in multiple worlds.


After everything's that's happened and what I've learned about myself and the weave of shadow, I thought that maybe it was finally within my power to seek guidance from another self. In the half-light of the setting sun I reached deep into my shadow, hoping to find the one that its form reflected. Yet no matter how much I searched, no matter how many near-identical worlds I traveled through, I couldn't find them. Something was still missing. Some crucial piece of information I had yet to discover.


Well, until then I was on my own.


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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 2:42 pm

This time, it's only one entry. But, it's a long one (for me).



---Heartfire, 18th, 4E 201---

As time goes on, I have found myself to rely more on my magic than on my swordplay. It's true what they say: there is more to swords than just strength. At least, I have enough bodily stamina and force to wear the Legion's armor.


I decided to deepen my magical talent and stop relying on field testing. I signed up for the College of Winterhold. Guess I'll get more mastery over it. I hope Jordis can tend to Proudspire while I'm gone...


Just as I signed up, we are already set to go study the history on how magic was used throughout the years. Our stop is Saarthal. Knowing my past experience with crypts and catacombs, that'll be a breeze. Yes, I'm being sarcastic.


This time, I'm on my own. Then again, I'm with other students and one of the teachers. I hope we won't end up like those missing apprentices Phinis was talking about and even left a note about it. Yes, they were working on improving their magic (or using their magic to make better mead), but anything in life can go worse.
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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 10:26 pm

Loved it monkeye, but he has so much to figure out! It's funny how he doesn't like that he likes Skyrim and Alois, lol. I'm with him about being Dragonborn though, and the Greybeards....



Raging Ghost, good one! I lol'd over the sarcasm!

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 4:31 pm

Okay, I give up. I've been trying to figure out what you're trying to say there, and had no success. It's driving me crazy... :D



So, what gives with the font?

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 9:57 pm

Neil... I have no idea why the font is that way, my phone did it... why I don't know. All I was saying its that I think the story is nice, I like it... no hidden messages.

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 9:48 am

Ach, monkey - I keep waiting for Jo to just admit that the whole thing is growing on him.... but I'm pretty sure that's not happening! RG - that was PERFECT (especially the sarcasm - sounded like something I would say myself!) Neil, I knew exactly what happened with that post from Areial - phones are just stupid mostly.



Veri's Tale:



Well, not so onerous - if you ignore the fact that it was turning winter, and the bandits were out in force. Bjorlam and I - and the anonymous but burly Nord sharing the carriage on this trip - had to kill more than our fair share, and patch each other up in between. Thankfully, I was decent now at making potions.... Bjorlam, good man that he is, refunded us the fees when we got to Windhelm. I blessed his heart - I didn't need the gold, but the Nord seemed very thankful. I supposed he was headed to pledge to Ulfric. So he needed blessings, for true. I bunked in the stable with the horses- Ulundil was happy for the gold too. And the next morning I headed down the road to Kynesgrove.



I didn't have any feel of homecoming. Home now was Morthal.... But at least there wasn't a damned dragon this time. The town was quiet - likely everyone was already down the mine. So I headed there myself. I hunted around a bit before finding anyone - and then it was a man I hadn't met before. I asked after Dravynea.



"Eh, they're all out tryin' ta git that damned hag that's come to roost in tha uld shack not far away. Best they do it, I ain't any good with a weapon."



I thanked him, and headed out fast. I wasn't sure which direction, but just went with a best guess - and right I was. I slithered into the midst of the major populace of Kynesgrove, poked Dravynea and said "Hey. I can do this a lot easier than you lot can. Just get everyone back enough to be out of range...."



She looked at me, stunned I thought. "You would take our danger on your shoulders, why?"



"Don't argue with me. Let's just call it personal, and let me get on with it. Work for you?"



She nodded, and got started pulling the villagers back from a sure-to-be-their-deaths situation.



Once they were decently out of range of explosions, I started a bit sneak up to the shack. Well, it worked for a time, but eventually a screech let me know the hag was feeling me. I hoped she felt her death approaching. Pulling the swords - one of Derda's, and the other the very nice one I'd brought out of that Blades temple - I keyed the song, and was startled to feel the Blades sword respond as well. Um.... NO. Veri, deal with the hag and THEN think about the rest of it! Idiot....



I leaped through the un-glassed and un-shuttered window rather than going in through the door. Good idea. The hag was watching the door, and I got in several really good hits before she realigned on me. At that point.... well - I had my hands full. But finally, I wore her down enough to take her head with the Blades sword. She settled to the floor, already going to dust. I shuddered - because I didn't know they did that.... or what it meant....



I held the sword up before my eyes, bowed a bit, and said "Your name is Hunger. Your sister here is Thirst. My thanks." I cleaned them on rags left around the stinking shack, and then went out to the villagers.



"She's dead. It should be some time before another arrives to take her place - and once I've done with this dragon thing, I'll be dealing with the hags. That's a time down the road though, so you need to be vigilant. For now, return to Kynesgrove. Dravynea - you should salt and burn the body - and the shack probably. No doubt you know better than I.... I came here to talk to you though....



"I'll get a room, and find a hot pool - I NEED to be clean! I'll buy you dinner - in an hour?"



She looked at me oddly, as if I wasn't making much sense, but finally agreed. "An hour, at the inn."



I headed into the steam pools. I was like to die of my own stink after all that. But just short of an hour later, I was sitting at a table in the inn, waiting on Dravynea, a full (and VERY nice meal) laid out. A few minutes later, the mage slid onto the bench across from me. We both ate a bit, then she said quietly "If you came here to speak with me, it must be important. Kynesgrove's a long way from Morthal...." There was an uptick of question in her tone.



"Aye. And farther from Whiterun, and the Throat of the World. I've been across this damn province more times now than I even want to think about. And still, I'm set off on another wild hare chase....



"Dravynea - I need to find an Elder Scroll. This is to do with the dragons. It is MY quest to do, to finish. I am - Dragonborn." She paled, but nodded. "So. I'm told I must go to the College (AGAIN!) and beg entry showing I can use magic. And then I must agree to join as an apprentice mage, before someone will tell me how to find this Elder Scroll. Now - I know you've looked into me. I have no magic as mages know it. I carry dragon souls, and I know Shouts. But I have no 'mages' magics'. If you have any information about how I may find an Elder Scroll without having to mess about with the College, I would more than appreciate that you tell it me."



She ate. She studied her food. She studied the (nice) wine in her goblet. Finally she shook her head, and I despaired. But then.... "Well, Verinne Ravenwing - you have done many things since you left here looking for family. We have heard a few.... So far, most that we have heard is that you uphold the age-old honor of Raven Clan, no matter what happened in the middles there. Oh yes.... I knew, at least some of it. Perhaps.... one day.... you will tell me the rest. So." She drained the wine, and I motioned for more.



"There was, when Tolf and I were at College as apprentices, a much older mage, Septimus Signus by name. He was.... asked to leave. His studies caused the other masters to - worry. So he removed from the College. We all knew he was trying to open a puzzle box. And for that opening, he needed an Elder Scroll. I don't know that he ever found one. But I'm sure he's still alive somewhere. Mages, you know, age slowly...." She stared off into some other time for a while.



"I will.... contact Tolfdir, and ask him to meet you in Winterhold, in the inn. He would be the most likely to know where Signus is now. I.... wish you good cess, Verinne Ravenwing. You will need it...." She drained the mug of wine, and stood, bowing a bit, then heading out the door.



Well. That was a - poser. She now had some way to contact Tolfdir, where she'd not had before? Or was I just witwandering? Ach. I finished my own wine and went to my room, falling like a log into sleep. And NO dreams, thank the Divines.

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 3:02 pm

hehe, Sere, loved that...the battle, the new blade...and the fear and mystery! I liked how you handled bypassing the college very much!

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 9:58 am

Thanks sis.... You know.... games like this are - in some ways - grist to my mill. They EXIST in their own world, their own time, and within that space they are part and parcel of my imagination. My imagination EXISTS to live in that world, to make a coherent whole....



Um. Well, speaking of witwandering.... I might have had a bit too much wine tonight....

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Areial - Thanks! It just seemed so... odd. :) though I own a smartphone, I have no experience with using phones to go online, so it just didn't occur to me that it was not intentional.



For everybody else, I enjoyed your tales very much.

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Brandon Wilson
 
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And.... I have to add a bit from someone else (Nora Roberts this time):



"A big perk of writing was that when her own world got a little bit too complicated, she could dive right into another."

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Post » Thu May 12, 2016 1:33 am

Raine


Entry 5



I do not know if Tullius was aware of my former service in the Legion. He never mentioned it, though I did not think it was meant as any kind of disrespect. I knew that he was very stressed, due to essentially dealing with the Civil War in Skyrim like no other in Solitude was. That, and having to deal with every person who came into Castle Dour, looking to join the Legion. Even so, there was some surprise that I was asking about joining. Given my uniform, the question did come up if I was abandoning my post, to which I said no. Technically the only orders I had, did not prohibit joining the Legion, nor much else.



I was then told to speak to the Legate, Rikke. Rather than the perhaps usual task, I was to do something more...proving. I was to clear out one of Skyrim's old forts, Hraagstad. I told her the fort would be able to be garrisoned by the Legion within a day. Even as she chided the bravado, I proved it. I returned to the Castle by noon the next day, the fort being free for the Legion to occupy. Though what I returned to was not just acceptance into the Legion. Rather, just after taking nearly the same oath I had some years ago, there was something else. This time, a task that was not solely for myself, but for a few members of the Legion that Rikke was going to command. I was given the rank of Auxiliary, and told about the operation.



The Jagged Crown. An ancient relic, once bore on the head of a High King of Skyrim, Borgas, I think she said? It was lost with the location of his tomb, and it seems that Ulfric's second, Galmar the Stone-fist had located it. Apparently it was within Korvanjund, a Nordic ruin in the southern part of the Pale. The mission was to retrieve this Crown, not letting the Stormcloaks take it to Windhelm.



It came as a surprise to be that, even with how stealthy I was being, and perhaps I am mistaken on that point, none of the others were following the example. Take out the Stormcloaks before they see you, so they can't alert others? Why would we ever want to do that? Just run in and kill them, making more noise to have the rest come running. That is the smart thing, right? NO. UGH.



Another one of these doors. I am not even going to ask why I found the claw nearly at the foot of the door. If only because the answer was there too – about two stormcloaks, who were apparently trying to get the door open. While I don't see why it is that difficult, the door is made to perhaps hurt those who get the wrong combination. The only difference to the last was that this one was made from Ebony. I guessed that there were more, made from different materials.



When we did find the Crown, it was on the head of a Draugr, perhaps King Borgas himself. The fight was not the best I've been in, but in the end, the Crown fell from his brow, and I was free to take it. Rikke nearly screamed at me to return it to Solitude. As if that wasn't already the idea.



I fled the ruin with the Crown, returning to Solitude as instructed. The success was only barely acknowledged, as it seemed that Tullius had something else for me. A message, that I was to take to Whiterun, and more specifically, to it's Jarl, Balgruff. I knew Whiterun was the only hold that had not picked a side in the Civil War, and even if some gossip said that the hold had more leanings toward the Empire, it's two major families were split, one supporting the Empire, and the other, the Stormcloaks. Tullius wanted Balgruff to not only make a choice, but to support the Empire – along with allowing the Garrison of Legion troops in Whiterun.



I took the long Carriage ride to Whiterun. When I arrived in the city, the first thing I saw was a man in Legion armor speaking with what I took for the city's blacksmith – he was asking her to make weapons for the Legion. She told him that making that many weapons was something that she could hardly do on her own, mentioning that the soldier should seek the help of a Eorlund Grey-mane. I knew the name – he was a rather famed Blacksmith in Skyrim, who worked a unique forge, the Sky Forge. Though this was absolutely refused with - “I would sooner bend my knee to Ulfric Stormcloak.”



As I walked through the city, no one really commented on my armor or my status otherwise, but then I said little to anyone as well. The most I had were my thoughts, much of these being about the city itself. In one of the districts was the famous mead hall Jorrvaskr, home of the Companions. As well as a statue of Talos, which I felt no compulsion to admonish.



I entered Dragonsreach, palace of the Jarl in Whiterun. I was accosted by his Housecarl when I approached the back of the hall, and I said that I had a message for the Jarl – just as I had to the guards at the city gates. For a time though, this message would go unread – since there was a seemingly more pressing matter. Helgen, a fortified village in Falkreath had been attacked recently, and the rumors were, countless. But they all suggested one thing – it was attacked, by a Dragon. Some of these details I knew, since Tullius had been there, along with Hadvar, one of the Soldiers I had fought with in Korvanjund.



Asked by Balgruff to speak with his Court Wizard, who was researching Dragons, I was given the task to enter into another Nordic ruin, Bleak Falls Barrow, to retrieve a Dragonstone. It was supposedly a map of Dragon burial sites. I do not know why that would be useful, though perhaps that question would be answered later.



I do not know why I agreed. But I did, and now I stand outside this Barrow, and were it not for this armor, I would be freezing. Ah well. At least Meeko seems to be having some fun in the snow.



Inside I kept low, and heard a few bandits talking. They mentioned stealing something from a local shop, and “Arvel”, who apparently had went much further into the ruin. I did so myself, and eventually found the Dunmer bearing that name. Only, I found him bound in webs, with a large spider descending from the ceiling. I dealt with the Spider, and freed the man, asking about this, “Golden Claw” I had heard about. He said little about it, only that he knew how it all worked. “The Claw, the door in the Hall of Stories...”. Rather than saying more, he ran off, thinking that he was going to find some great treasure beyond that door. But he never reached it. As in the next few rooms I found his body, surrounded by a few awakened Dragur. I dealt with them, and continued on.



When I reached the door myself, I opened it and entered. I soon had a number of bats flying into my face, which after was a bit of a laugh. Just as I reached the large chamber ahead it happened again. But then I was taken by surprise. I saw another of those walls, like I had seen in Folgunthr. Only this one had a Sarcophagus very close to it, and a chest. When I approached the wall, again I somehow knew this word in a language I did not know. “Fus”.



Um...WHAT DO YOU MEAN, I HAVE TO FIGHT A DRAGON?

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 12:46 pm

Oy, Max. That was very well done! It's all the stuff we've all done numerous times - but you made it new and that's a very good thing!

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 12:19 pm

I like that we can all write our own stories, just using the world Beth provided. We don't have to follow any exact storyline from the game. (which would get boring fast!)

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 3:46 pm


Exactly. Beth gives me WORLDS to play in. Bless them!

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 11:18 am

Well done, Maxus.






For my own part, while I enjoy reading a story based (wholly or in part) on a description of a player's part in a major quest line, I don't so much enjoy writing a detailed story of a pre-written quest. I prefer to write about random encounters that make life interesting (as well as random) along the way. That way it doesn't matter what quest line my character is doing when such and such happens and I get a truly infinite world to to draw my stories from.


That's when I'm at my happiest. :D



A little add-on update here:



The morning after Brand's night of drunken debauchery, he woke up bright and early. About 2pm. His head was throbbing, his stomach queasy, and the rented room at the Bannered Mare insisted on spinning haphazardly at odd and unexpected moments. He was pretty sure it had been a hell of a night, but it was all a little fuzzy.


He stepped out into the mid-afternoon sun, nearly fell down the shot flight of stairs, and tried to think of what to do next. While standing there trying to silence the gnomes in his head, he saw the small daughter of the vegetable stand vendor run by... and that brought back unpleasant memories of the night before, and another little girl who had no mother.


He was lost in thought for a while, and with a bit of surprise suddenly realized he was standing inside Dungeon Reach.. Err.. Dragon Reach. Hmm, an odd slip that, eh (of course he'd never heard of a Freudian slip)?


He walked the length of the hall and found himself speaking to the Jarl's steward. Before he knew it, he had bought Breezehome, and purchased a few furnishings. A living room, Kitchen furnishings, and... What the hell? A child's bedroom? Why on earth would he buy that? Must have been an accident, but since he had already bought the room, he asked Proventus about how to go about adopting a child. Just in case, you know?


He left Dragon's Reach nearly broke, and it occurred to him that maybe he should find that little beggar girl and see if she'd like to be adopted by a gruff, impolite, ill-mannered Breton who had scared her out of her wits the night before... Hmmm, thinking about it that way, he decided that maybe what he needed was a bit of the "hair of the troll" before facing this terrifying little girl.


He stepped into the Bannered Mare, and walked up to the bar barely noticing the robed figure planted on a stool near Hulda. He wouldn't have noticed the man at all except that as Brand stood beside him, he spoke in a challenging tone.


"If you're looking for a challenge, you've come to the right place! How about a drinking contest to win a staff?"...

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 11:47 pm

As to the stories, I couldn't agree more, obviously.



Brand is headed for more troubles, LOL, of various sorts! Great update Neil! hehe

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Charlotte Lloyd-Jones
 
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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 2:41 pm

Maxus... very nicely done!



Neil.. nice update




One of the reason's that I love writing my character stories is that I don't have to follow Beth's story line, I can follow my character where they decide to go. Otherwise I would probably just write "a" story.

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 4:26 pm

*giggling* Oh, Neil.... Brand is going to need a lot more than hair of the dog!

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 3:26 pm

neil, I’m also a fan of those random occurrences that can have major impacts on my characters. Whether or not they get involved in big questlines and save (or try to destroy) the world, it’s their personal lives and journeys that I enjoy the most.



I’m deep in my April writing camp, only two days left! But I’ve been sneaking looks at my phone to follow our stories here. I have to say, Hagravens?! Serethil, that was astonishing! And neil, you make Brand’s search for his mystery bandita tug at the heart.




Here’s a little snip from Jensa’s Journal, Page…32?



I’m helping Aela with a hunt, something she’s been reading books to find. She told me she would be honored if I joined her. I think she got that backwards, but I was too choked up to say. Things have been off between us since what happened with the old man. His choice doesn’t make her wrong any more than it made him right. If I could pray, I’d ask for the strength to follow him. Maybe that makes her uneasy.



Hunting with Aela is as pure a joy as I know how to find with my boots on. She was raised wild, and she hunts just like I do. She knows how to use her skin to read the breeze and keep her scent from the prey. She can ease through brush without touching it, and her feet slip under the leaves to find the silent ground. She said she felt our brother’s spirit with us. I feel it, too. When he’s near, all my doubts just burn away.



We’re only going to camp for a few hours, until moonrise. Aela doesn’t sleep much either. I don’t know what she has in mind for tonight. Maybe just more travel. I sure hope she loosens up a little so we can turn together. All I want is for us to run free under the moons.


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Bethany Short
 
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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 10:13 pm

Oh nice one Grits!! One can almost feel the freedom! :D

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 8:58 am

Very nice, Grits! I hope they have a wild run together.



The Ravensdaughter:



I repeat: I am deadly tired of criss-crossing this damn province. I miss Black. But he's better off in Morthal for now. Way too many days to get to Winterhold.... but at least the innkeeper said Tolfdir had been in every noon and evening to see if I'd arrived yet. Since it was near midnight before I dragged into the inn, I just headed for a room. I'm pretty sure I was asleep before I actually hit the pillow. Unfortunately, there were dreams - of hags, and ravens, and whatever unholy melding happened to join them.... Sometimes, a good imagination is not a blessing.



I sat myself at a table around noon the next day, and before long Tolfdir wandered in. He gave me a small smile, and settled across from me. I waved Dagur over with a meal and ale. Once we'd started to eat, Tolfdir said "So. What can I help you with this time?"



"I need to find Septimus Signus. I have to find an Elder Scroll...." His eyebrows climbed toward his hairline.



"That's.... interesting. Why?"



"I'm Dragonborn. And it seems to be my job to take care of the World-Eater, Alduin. So I need a specific Shout - and to get to where I can learn that Shout, I need an Elder Scroll. The head of the Greybeards said I'd probably have to join your College as an apprentice to find anything out about the Scroll. But I don't have magic, you know. I have dragon souls, and Shouts. And this thing hanging over my future...." I sighed.



He reached out a hand and touched mine. "That's - a hard thing. But, if you die, then who will defeat this dragon?" Well, I didn't have an answer for him, but I think it was likely a rhetorical question anyway. He went on "I can give you an idea where to find Septimus. He could still be alive - magic works to keep a mage alive a long time. Now, not many folk know where he went when the College told him to get out. But - well, being a nosy bastard, I followed him a fair distance. If you head directly north from the College, you'll find him I think - hopefully before you freeze to death, or fall into the Sea of Ghosts. And that's about all I can tell you." He paused for a long moment, then looked me in the eyes.



"I don't have a good feeling about this. Septimus was judged to be - mentally unhinged, deranged, and dangerous. And that was 30 years ago. He's no doubt not improved...."



"Well, my thanks. I'll have to see if I can find him, and get him to listen, make sense, whatever - I need the Scroll. Dravynea said he was looking for one, something to do with opening a puzzle box. If I live over all this - one of these days I'll come back and tell you the whole story, shall I?"



He smiled gently. "I'd like that - I think your time in Skyrim will be a tale for the ages...." We finished the meal in silence, and then he stood, bowed, and walked out the door. I sat in more silence, hoping that I'd be able to find - and deal with - Septimus Signus. And that he'd actually HAVE an Elder Scroll by now. I wondered what you could offer a crazy mage in exchange for something like that....



I decided to spend another night in Winterhold and start early in the morning. Was I procrastinating? Yes, I surely was.

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Post » Wed May 11, 2016 8:20 pm

Sere, oh I LIKE your Tolfdir!! Much better than the absent minded professor, lol. I think they could be great friends! I'll wait to see what Veri discovers with Septimus, it should prove interesting indeed. *grin*

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