Some comments on Chapter 37 above, then a new Chapter - 38.
@mALX - Well, we do know of Maxical's aiming challenges?. I didn't see a forester this time and Buffy even managed to avoid hitting Mazoga in all the chaos. Thank you so much for your advance help on this story and the wonderfully kind words. I am so pleased you liked it! :twirl:
@SubRosa- Gripping action, good depiction of Mazoga - my goodness, I couldn't ask for nicer feedback than that! Thank you. Curious you mentioned the Order of the Green Mare for Mazoga. Buffy was hoping for the Order of the Black Mare for Superian. Methinks there may be a future Dame Buffy.
@D.Foxy- I didn't want to bother you by asking you to preview my big combat scene, so I reviewed your thread and the things you have taught me and gave this very complex battle scene a shot. Since it seems that it turned out ok, let me simply thank you for teaching me how to do it. At least I didn't write 'Mazoga waved her sword around until they all died.' You have been such a help to me? bow, blade, craft, encouragement, all of it. Thank you my friend.
@bobg- Keep Buffy in charge vs Black Brugo - Thanks for that GOOD advice! I hope you will see that Buffy listened to your wisdom in this next chapter.
@Wolf - Potent team, yes - I hope the next story depicts that Buffy's problem with melee goes somewhat beyond her lack of ability. The combat scene at Fisherman's Rock went close to as described, just messier. She did get that Cobra Dance spell off nicely, but had to spam her 'run away' spell a couple more times than depicted in the story. Thanks for the kind words!
@D'emjii- Buffy's lesson to Mazoga- I'm so pleased that it not only caused you to laugh, but created such an accurate image in your mind. You do indeed know Buffy well. Thanks!
@treydog- Buffy's thoughts and bonding with Mazoga- Buffy does love to ruminate, and sometimes on the oddest things that would never occur to me. The bonding with Mazoga is great fun to write. I am trying to do it via action and dialogue so it is taking more words than I had intended. I love the interaction between the two ladies however, and just could not bear to speed things up. Your encouragement and advice are priceless.
@Digz- Thank you so very much for continuing to graciously give me feedback of what you perceive in the stories. It helps more than you know, in trying to assess how close to target I am. Thank you even more for your steadfast encouragement. I hope your trip went well!
@RemkoNL- Wow! Better than the game? High praise indeed. I have always loved the Mazoga quests and Buffy is having a wonderful time - well, except for all the blood and carnage that seems to follow Mazoga around? more about that in this next story.
@mcbeanie- I'm so glad I was able to depict some of the lethal power and ability of the fearsome Orc that Buffy sees in Mazoga. :toughninja: I see the makings of a close friendship, forged in blood and trust.
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---------- 38 Leyawiin Expedition- Telepe ---------- I slid Slayer from my back, nocked an arrow and aimed towards the two distant pink glows. By concentrating, I pulled the area around Telepe clearly into focus. "I see the life sign of one man or mer atop the ruin, hidden by a ledge. That's a good shooting position - it must be an archer up there." Slowly continuing my sweep, "there's the other bandit by the camp fire, a hedge wizard. That's it, just the two." I carefully eased tension off the bow and removed the arrow.
"You can see farther than I can, Buffy." Mazoga seemed impressed with my scouting abilities. "What do you want me to do?"
"Your eyes are fine. I'm using a couple scout tricks. I want you to stay close and protect me so I can shoot." As I poisoned the arrow, I added, "I'm worthless without a 'safe perch'."
Mazoga looked down at me and nodded acknowledgement of the difference in our stature. Nevertheless, she cheerfully replied, "you're in charge."
This would be a very long shot. I was pleased to note a lack of wind and no intervening high branches as I nocked the arrow and applied some tension. I again pulled the hedge wizard into clear view. After calculating my offset, I took in a normal breath. Exhaling half, I smoothly and fully drew the bowstring as I adjusted up and left to my final aim point and loosed the arrow. The impact was a tiny bit lower on the Breton's chest than I had hoped for, but still knocked him off his stool. He struggled to his knees before succumbing to the poison.
"How'd we do Buffy?"
"A good kill. Sir Mazoga, I can't get a shot at the archer. We need to move closer and draw him out. Do you see that large tree ahead?"
Mazoga nodded again.
"I need you to move up behind it. The archer will probably take notice and stand to fire at you - in fact I'm counting on it. Use the tree or your shield if necessary. Once he shows himself, I'll do the rest." I poisoned another arrow. "Let's go."
Mazoga clanked and rattled towards the tree, as I offset to her left and snuck closer. I was touched by how much she trusted my judgment, even when it meant drawing fire for me. I hoped I knew what we were doing.
Sure enough, the archer took note of the Orc's approach and stood to fire. An arrow darted past Mazoga as she deftly stepped behind the tree. The Bosmer remained standing, waiting for another shot. I loosed an arrow that knocked him from atop the Ayleid ruin to the unseen ground behind. Whether from arrow, poison or the fall, his pink glow extinguished.
These two perfectly elegant kills gave me a familiar sensation of exhilaration - something I had not felt during my recent white-knuckled bloody fighting alongside Mazoga.
Looking up at the late afternoon sun, I said to Mazoga as she rejoined me, "We have plenty of time before Black Brugo shows up. Let's rest by the campfire for a bit and talk about what may happen inside this ruin." I stripped off my leather armor, placed it in my pack and produced a black cat suit. I saw Mazoga staring. "What?" Standing in my underwear, I held up the shrouded armor. "I wear this inside dungeons so I can hide better in the shadows."
Mazoga wasn't looking at the armor. "Kinda scrawny, aren't you?" she teased good naturedly.
"Thanks a lot." I frowned as I self-consciously wriggled into the black leather suit. "Just what I need to hear."
"It's ok Buffy. Not every woman can look like me. Besides, I hear some men like skinny girls."
I cocked my head and, with a raised eyebrow, stared at Mazoga. Was she that comfortable with who she was? If so, I sure envied her. "I don't really know what men like," I honestly shrugged. "Sit down Sir Mazoga, let's talk tactics. I don't suppose you know how to snea? um, nevermind." I used an arrow to draw diagrams in the dirt as we discussed procedures and signals to work effectively together. I knew she would protect me with muscle and steel; I hoped that mystic archery and planning would help me to protect her.
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"Wait here," I whispered as soon as we entered Telepe. I could see the life signs of two bandits and cautiously advanced, like a shadow, with Slayer in my hand. The first corridor to my right led to a room containing the pink glows. Signaling for Mazoga to reposition behind me, I was pleasantly surprised how carefully and quietly she moved up. I slinked along the wall until I could just see into the room enough for a shot. My target was in chainmail with a bow on her back. I backed away, selected and poisoned an arrow, then returned to my firing position. The archer jerked when the bodkin tip arrow pierced her cuirass. As her body flooded with poison, she fell.
The erratic movement of the other glow signaled I was detected. I backed up until bumping into the unyielding comfort of orcish armor. Sliding to the wall, I simply said, "I need you".
As soon as Mazoga rushed past me I followed. The unarmored Dunmer lunged at the Orc with a dagger. I didn't want to see what was coming, but I couldn't look away. Mazoga swept the dagger aside with her shield. She then stepped back to optimize her distance and opened the Dunmer's abdomen with a single slash of her long sword. I winced, involuntarily grabbing for my own midsection. I recalled Gladius, a Bravil guard, killing my friend City Swimmer with the same precision. The Dunmer bled out quickly on the stone floor.
I stowed Slayer and lit a torch.
Mazoga sheathed her blade. "How'd we do?"
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I looked at the mighty Orc. She was indeed my protector. Perhaps it was being in the middle of so much melee combat recently that disturbed me. I still remembered the carnage at Fisherman's Rock. Mustering an appreciative smile I responded, "Sir Mazoga, you were magnificent! Let's check the rest of this ruin before our host, Black Brugo shows up."
We discovered Telepe was a very small ruin. After clearing the three chambers, we returned to the room where we had killed the two bandits to wait.
"Buffy, how'd you learn to talk so good? You know lots of fancy words and string them together really well. You sound like you belong in that castle."
"Why thank you, Sir Mazoga. I'm just a simple orphan like you. Even my home town of Bravil is quite unsophisticated." I was done repairing our equipment and handed Mazoga her sword. "I did however, attend the Arcane University. While there, I read almost every book in the Mystic Archives. I'm sure that must have helped. I have found use, on occasion, for the ability to control and optimize words to suit my purpose. That is," I added with a smile and small giggle, "when my emotions don't get the better of me."
I looked at the corpses in the room and my smile faded. The archer simply had an arrow protruding from her chest. The Dunmer on the other hand, lay in a pool of blood with parts of his intestines protruding from the gaping belly wound. "Sir Mazoga, do you ever get used to the blood? I mean the way you fight is so close and... personal. You see the terror in your enemies' eyes before they die. If an enemy gets close enough for me to see their face, usually the terror's in
my eyes. When things go well for me, my enemies are just faceless targets that fall to an unseen arrow from the shadows."
Mazoga scratched behind her ear and thought for a moment. "It's the only way I know. I can't do what you can any more than you could wield my sword." There was a wisdom in her eyes I had not noticed before. "Look Buffy, we're pals, right?" she continued, "our differences in style are not important. Simply remember our cause is just. And no," she shook her head, "you don't get used to the blood when you live or die by the sword."
Voices! I could see three glowing figures moving. I watched silently, using hand signals to tell Mazoga what my magic rings were showing me. The three figures settled into the room directly across from us.
Mazoga and I quietly moved into the entrance corridor and towards the ruin's exit.
"Wait here please, and guard the exit," I whispered.
Mazoga engulfed my forearm in her hand and looked at me with concern. "Are you sure?"
I nodded, "Let me try my way. If it doesn't work, I know who to run to."
Bringing forth Slayer, I crept into the room with the three figures. The Breton woman with a dagger was arguing loudly with a Redguard man who carried a mace and was drinking ale. Black Brugo was easy to spot. The Orc had a sword like Mazoga's at his waist and he looked just as deadly. I didn't want Mazoga in the middle of this. No, I needed a plan that would minimize risk to? my friend.
Forming a glowing orb of green energy in my hand, I pointed towards Black Brugo and discharged the illusion magic from my fingertips. Instantly, I started backing out of the room.
By Mara! Shouts, weapons being drawn, more shouts, steel on steel, cries of pain. As the command spell was causing havoc, I crept into the entry corridor and slid into the shadows. Mazoga now guarded the only escape.
I watched the clashing dance of the glows on the other side of the wall until there were two. Finally one remained. Black Brugo limped from the room and headed for the exit.
I nocked an arrow as the green titans charged each other. Blades crashed into shields. The narrow corridor greatly constrained the combatants, but also provided me a steady shot of Brugo's back. The impact of my bodkin tip arrow caused Brugo to arch his back and involuntarily jerk his arms and head backwards. Mazoga ferociously thrust into the newly exposed neck. Before I could nock a second arrow, the leader of the Black Bow Bandits was dead.