Desert Rose

Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 5:03 am

Ok, first of all, a question. Is there any kind of problem in reading the Bosmeri side of the RP? Because I am really having a great time at it, but I don't know, since this will evolve to PvP later on... I suspose there's no harm to do it right now hein? :) If I can keep it out of character hein? I don't think it will harm the experience...

I love how fleshed out your characters seem, I already have some favourite characters from your side (not going to say, hehe). Too bad we only have 3 posts yet for the Elsweyr part... C'mon guys, we gotta keep this active! :toughninja:
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Laura Ellaby
 
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 1:33 am

there's no harm in reading the bosmer part when on the elsweyr team. so long you won't make your character know things he shouldn't know.
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 5:02 am

Ok, first of all, a question. Is there any kind of problem in reading the Bosmeri side of the RP? Because I am really having a great time at it, but I don't know, since this will evolve to PvP later on... I suspose there's no harm to do it right now hein? :) If I can keep it out of character hein? I don't think it will harm the experience...

I love how fleshed out your characters seem, I already have some favourite characters from your side (not going to say, hehe). Too bad we only have 3 posts yet for the Elsweyr part... C'mon guys, we gotta keep this active! :toughninja:


Do you mean, is there a problem with you reading the opposing team's posts? I wouldn't think reading it would be an issue. :)

EDIT: yeah, what Gavril said...^
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Antonio Gigliotta
 
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:31 am

Yes, I will of course keep things separate! Allright then, keep on posting guys, I love the conflicts already emerging! :tes:
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 1:17 pm

I have also sent this character sheet to Ni!, who hopefully will approve it pretty quickly so that I can get up and running quickly.
I'll probably start in my shop in the Rp, however if need be i'll move to a more appropriate and public position to get myself involved.
I've not done any from of writing (other than school work) for a good few months now, but I couldn't resist this.
Wish me luck ;)


Spoiler
Name: Kain Ironmaster
Nickname: Scar
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Race: Nord
Birthsign: Warrior
Who you're fighting for: Elsweyr

Skills: Much like a typical Nord, Kain is far more gifted in the art of combat than any other, he is trained in both the use of Blades and Blunted weaponry though his favoured weapon, unusually for a Nord of his size, is a Katana. Without a weapon at hand Kain loves to exercise his skill in hand-to-hand combat, he has practised for most of his life and can out manoeuvre and overcome most opponents without the need for a weapon. Outside of combat he has a simple knowledge of Alchemy, able to concoct simple healing potions and weak fatigue restores (though he rarely uses them in combat), otherwise his magical talent is non-existent. He relies in battle upon stamina and incredible strength; though he is not unintelligent and will more often than not outwit his opponent before he has to resort to his reserve of resilience and power. Kain has been educated in the art of Armoury explained partially by his surname, the expertise is hereditary in his family-line who have built up quite a reputation over the years, which is the sole reason he has found himself in the heat of Elsweyr.

General Appearance: Nordic genes have blessed Kain with his tall and powerful figure, with daunting height and heavy bones Kain is noticeably larger than most other men. His history and upbringing as well as many years spent in the harsh wilderness have taken their toll on his muscular frame and allow for strength that is hard to equal. Concave cheeks, a strong jaw and a long, sharp, broken nose added with his low brow and slanted eyebrows give Kain a hard and rugged looking face, which often appears unfriendly and often serious regardless of his actual mood. His eyes too are unforgiving and their steel blue gaze reflects the harshness of the freezing cold environment that Kain has grown up with, complimented both by his thick black eyebrows and darkened surrounding sockets. His hair is unkempt and knotted; a black tangle left to trail down his back. His fringe is almost spikey and trails off down to the left side of his face, often falling in front of his eye and the scar that is ripped across it. The scar is his most distinguishable feature; it remains from a bear’s paw swipe that managed to catch his face when he was younger. The scar is also what gives him his nickname, and it has left him partially blind in his left eye (though it would be impossible to guess so).

Weapons: The Katana commonly used by Kain is a family heirloom, passed down from father to son, and is cherished by Kain to the highest degree. Given its age the Katana is in surprisingly good condition. Though the blade itself remains sharp, there are various scars, chips and cuts into the swords sharp edge, the sword’s hilt is black with a simple steel blade. Kain also keeps a small knife on his belt for the majority of time, though this is not used for combat, rather an item for skinning animals or even eating. Though Kain keeps no other weapons with him, he has been known to use other weapons in the past; such as spears and axes, it is clear though that he uses his favoured katana more so than any other weapon.

Armour/Clothing: Despite his history of craftsmanship in the iron industry, Kain prefers to stay away from metal armours, more likely relying on fur or leather protection. Since his move to Elsweyr however his wardrobe has changed significantly; being used to the freezing cold Kain found it hard to adapt at first to the change in climate, and has stuck to mainly light clothing, and minimal armour whilst moving around in the hot deserts and forests of the Elsweyr border. Normal apparel for the Nord would include a silk or linen white shirt, or perhaps on a hotter day, no shirt at all. Simple cloth pants are often the choice of the Nord, as they allow him for ease of movement and are cooler in the southern heat.

Other items: Kain keeps a utility like belt of helpful items to aid him on his travels:
- A map of Elsweyr.
- His hunting knife.
- 30+ coins. In case he needs something.
- A leather skin for water.
- Sometimes, some ingredients that may help in making a potion or two, or simply for eating.

Personality/Mentality: Kain is renowned for his clear mind and his kind heart. Though he is quiet in person, he possesses great people skills and can often build a strong relationship with those that he interacts with. He tries to be friendly and well liked, though he will not lie nor go out of his way to impress or attract someone whom he feels would not like him for who he is. He is a good leader, confident in himself and those around him, and as a great leader can influence and build a strong team of friends, comrades or otherwise through his ability to promote a good atmosphere and raise confidence. He is, in battle calculated and precise with his movement, relying on his able speed and stamina as well as his increased strength. Resilient, Kain is tough and rarely takes failure as an option, when he does; he does it with pride and a certainty that there was nothing more he could offer to resolve a situation. He is strong in spirit and in mind, and though it would take a lot to break him down mentally he has a weakness in that he can be overly trusting or ambitious.

Brief History: Born and raised in Skyrim, a young Kain was nothing more than a working class Nord. His father and his father before him had long been in the line of both armour and combat, focussing on the craft that is armoury and the production of fine iron goods. From weapons to armour Kain had been trained since a young age to be both able to craft and to wield such weapons, as well as in the art of various combat styles. After signing up with a Nordic army, Kain gained practical knowledge and experience of both frontline warfare and guerrilla style combat in the thick Nordic forests and mountains. His ability to lead in combat as well as produce quality gear for the forces eventually lead him into Elsweyr, where with a small group of smiths, he found himself on the western border of the province along the Xylo River. He had originally been sent to supply the fighting Khajiit with armour and weapons, however after this was proven to fail, he decided to stick around and help the Khajiit with a fight that seemed an almost impossible victory.

Reason for Fighting: Kain had built a small group of friends among the Khajiit during his time in Elsweyr, the small town of Heimthor was a close community, and Kain now owned a small wares shop where he crafted and sold his own weapons getting to know the locals, as well as the soldiers that often passed through the town located so close to the forests staging the battle. He had seen the atrocities of the war the Khajiit were fighting, victims and casualties of the battlefield that he had never grown used to despite his experience. He feared for the Khajiit and hoped that he could play a part in saving what, to him, had been a hospitable and welcoming community, despite how nigh the end for the Khajiit seemed to be.

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Vickytoria Vasquez
 
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:19 am

Can you guys please add character tags to the start of your posts? Like what Gavril, Werewolf&Vampire and Blademaster are doing, it just helps understanding a lot, especially at early stages in the RP.
I love how fleshed out your characters seem, I already have some favourite characters from your side (not going to say, hehe). Too bad we only have 3 posts yet for the Elsweyr part... C'mon guys, we gotta keep this active! :toughninja:

I don't think its going to die any time soon :P

I have also sent this character sheet to Ni!, who hopefully will approve it pretty quickly so that I can get up and running quickly.

You did? My Personal Messenger tells me otherwise. Nevermind
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Prisca Lacour
 
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 3:36 am

I have also sent this character sheet to Ni!, who hopefully will approve it pretty quickly so that I can get up and running quickly.
I'll probably start in my shop in the Rp, however if need be i'll move to a more appropriate and public position to get myself involved.
I've not done any from of writing (other than school work) for a good few months now, but I couldn't resist this.
Wish me luck ;)


Spoiler
Name: Kain Ironmaster
Nickname: Scar
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Race: Nord
Birthsign: Warrior
Who you're fighting for: Elsweyr

Skills: Much like a typical Nord, Kain is far more gifted in the art of combat than any other, he is trained in both the use of Blades and Blunted weaponry though his favoured weapon, unusually for a Nord of his size, is a Katana. Without a weapon at hand Kain loves to exercise his skill in hand-to-hand combat, he has practised for most of his life and can out manoeuvre and overcome most opponents without the need for a weapon. Outside of combat he has a simple knowledge of Alchemy, able to concoct simple healing potions and weak fatigue restores (though he rarely uses them in combat), otherwise his magical talent is non-existent. He relies in battle upon stamina and incredible strength; though he is not unintelligent and will more often than not outwit his opponent before he has to resort to his reserve of resilience and power. Kain has been educated in the art of Armoury explained partially by his surname, the expertise is hereditary in his family-line who have built up quite a reputation over the years, which is the sole reason he has found himself in the heat of Elsweyr.

General Appearance: Nordic genes have blessed Kain with his tall and powerful figure, with daunting height and heavy bones Kain is noticeably larger than most other men. His history and upbringing as well as many years spent in the harsh wilderness have taken their toll on his muscular frame and allow for strength that is hard to equal. Concave cheeks, a strong jaw and a long, sharp, broken nose added with his low brow and slanted eyebrows give Kain a hard and rugged looking face, which often appears unfriendly and often serious regardless of his actual mood. His eyes too are unforgiving and their steel blue gaze reflects the harshness of the freezing cold environment that Kain has grown up with, complimented both by his thick black eyebrows and darkened surrounding sockets. His hair is unkempt and knotted; a black tangle left to trail down his back. His fringe is almost spikey and trails off down to the left side of his face, often falling in front of his eye and the scar that is ripped across it. The scar is his most distinguishable feature; it remains from a bear’s paw swipe that managed to catch his face when he was younger. The scar is also what gives him his nickname, and it has left him partially blind in his left eye (though it would be impossible to guess so).

Weapons: The Katana commonly used by Kain is a family heirloom, passed down from father to son, and is cherished by Kain to the highest degree. Given its age the Katana is in surprisingly good condition. Though the blade itself remains sharp, there are various scars, chips and cuts into the swords sharp edge, the sword’s hilt is black with a simple steel blade. Kain also keeps a small knife on his belt for the majority of time, though this is not used for combat, rather an item for skinning animals or even eating. Though Kain keeps no other weapons with him, he has been known to use other weapons in the past; such as spears and axes, it is clear though that he uses his favoured katana more so than any other weapon.

Armour/Clothing: Despite his history of craftsmanship in the iron industry, Kain prefers to stay away from metal armours, more likely relying on fur or leather protection. Since his move to Elsweyr however his wardrobe has changed significantly; being used to the freezing cold Kain found it hard to adapt at first to the change in climate, and has stuck to mainly light clothing, and minimal armour whilst moving around in the hot deserts and forests of the Elsweyr border. Normal apparel for the Nord would include a silk or linen white shirt, or perhaps on a hotter day, no shirt at all. Simple cloth pants are often the choice of the Nord, as they allow him for ease of movement and are cooler in the southern heat.

Other items: Kain keeps a utility like belt of helpful items to aid him on his travels:
- A map of Elsweyr.
- His hunting knife.
- 30+ coins. In case he needs something.
- A leather skin for water.
- Sometimes, some ingredients that may help in making a potion or two, or simply for eating.

Personality/Mentality: Kain is renowned for his clear mind and his kind heart. Though he is quiet in person, he possesses great people skills and can often build a strong relationship with those that he interacts with. He tries to be friendly and well liked, though he will not lie nor go out of his way to impress or attract someone whom he feels would not like him for who he is. He is a good leader, confident in himself and those around him, and as a great leader can influence and build a strong team of friends, comrades or otherwise through his ability to promote a good atmosphere and raise confidence. He is, in battle calculated and precise with his movement, relying on his able speed and stamina as well as his increased strength. Resilient, Kain is tough and rarely takes failure as an option, when he does; he does it with pride and a certainty that there was nothing more he could offer to resolve a situation. He is strong in spirit and in mind, and though it would take a lot to break him down mentally he has a weakness in that he can be overly trusting or ambitious.

Brief History: Born and raised in Skyrim, a young Kain was nothing more than a working class Nord. His father and his father before him had long been in the line of both armour and combat, focussing on the craft that is armoury and the production of fine iron goods. From weapons to armour Kain had been trained since a young age to be both able to craft and to wield such weapons, as well as in the art of various combat styles. After signing up with a Nordic army, Kain gained practical knowledge and experience of both frontline warfare and guerrilla style combat in the thick Nordic forests and mountains. His ability to lead in combat as well as produce quality gear for the forces eventually lead him into Elsweyr, where with a small group of smiths, he found himself on the western border of the province along the Xylo River. He had originally been sent to supply the fighting Khajiit with armour and weapons, however after this was proven to fail, he decided to stick around and help the Khajiit with a fight that seemed an almost impossible victory.

Reason for Fighting: Kain had built a small group of friends among the Khajiit during his time in Elsweyr, the small town of Heimthor was a close community, and Kain now owned a small wares shop where he crafted and sold his own weapons getting to know the locals, as well as the soldiers that often passed through the town located so close to the forests staging the battle. He had seen the atrocities of the war the Khajiit were fighting, victims and casualties of the battlefield that he had never grown used to despite his experience. He feared for the Khajiit and hoped that he could play a part in saving what, to him, had been a hospitable and welcoming community, despite how nigh the end for the Khajiit seemed to be.



Well then, good luck! And don't worry, I don't really know for sure what I'm doing here. I think I'm starting to get the hang of it, and I'm sure you will too. :)

EDIT: Oh, sorry, Ni! I'll go take care of that right away!
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:47 pm

You did? My Personal Messenger tells me otherwise. Nevermind


Hehe, I posted it here a few seconds before I sent it to you. You're lightning fast. ;)

Well then, good luck! And don't worry, I don't really know for sure what I'm doing here. I think I'm starting to get the hang of it, and I'm sure you will too. :)


Thank you! I've been roleplaying here for many years, so I know what to do; I just believe myself to be somewhat rusty. :sweat:
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 5:50 pm

Sure thing Ni!, going for it! :thumbsup: Sorry for not putting it earlier. And I'm just a bit too much enthusiastic I guess eheh Really want this to develop :)

Arathorn, I hope you make it into the game, since I really like your character. And I also like how you put him living in the village we are approaching, might increase your chances! :D Good luck!
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 10:24 pm

By the way, for those of you who have read my posts and already know how to RP, have I been doing all right? Please let me know if I need to do something differently, change something, and all that jazz.... :disco:
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JLG
 
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 1:08 pm

Same for me :-) i'll only gonna respond again tomorrow in the afternoon. Gonna go to bed, got school tomorrow :(
Good night all.
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Kortniie Dumont
 
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 3:01 am

Well, I've only made one post, so I guess it's hard to judge, but I too would be grateful for any feedback... Not sure about how much should I express my character's thoughts, etc...
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Jake Easom
 
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:02 am

By the way, for those of you who have read my posts and already know how to RP, have I been doing all right? Please let me know if I need to do something differently, change something, and all that jazz.... :disco:

Well, I've only made one post, so I guess it's hard to judge, but I too would be grateful for any feedback... Not sure about how much should I express my character's thoughts, etc...


You both write well, that's all that matters when starting. I'm not perfect myself, nobody is, but you've both made a great start and i've enjoyed reading your posts so far.
The rest comes with experience, and the more characters you create, the more you bond and connect with them, but as yet i'd have been hard placed to tell either of you lacked experience. :thumbsup:

While i'm here I may as well express my confusion as to what time it is? Within the Valenwood camp it seems to be clearly late at night, however I can't assume this to be the same case for the Elsweyr group as their posts as yet suggest to me that it is some point during the day?
I may be wrong, but some clarification on the matter will help with my introductory entry.

Thanks.
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Casey
 
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 1:48 pm

Don't worry - you're all doing fine!
urrinor - I liked Nee-Wom's post (and his name :laugh:), his observations were good and I like the way you make him speak.
Gavril - I've seen you around in other RPs, you have absolutely nothing to worry about.
Lady Syl - Your posts are great and descriptive. You make your characters likeable and easy to read about.

We've got plenty of awesome RPers here, if you think your post is sub-par, look at other posts and compare. Chances are, its better than you think.

While i'm here I may as well express my confusion as to what time it is? Within the Valenwood camp it seems to be clearly late at night, however I can't assume this to be the same case for the Elsweyr group as their posts as yet suggest to me that it is some point during the day?
I may be wrong, but some clarification on the matter will help with my introductory entry.

I knew I hadn't made it clear! The Elsweyr group is at early evening, around 6.30pm. I think Schmuty intended it to be around that time in Valenwood if not a little later.
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:59 pm

Indeed, I noticed that as well, though I think Elsweyr people can mention it's dark as well, seeing how they haven't made a direct line about what time it is, it wouldn't cause a mess of things.
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Laura Samson
 
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 4:35 am

Well, since the men fighting for the tree-huggers aren't doing much. I will go on a hunting trip for food(Not beetle larvae this time). Maybe some big game. I always imagined some of the creatures in Valenwood would match those of the South America rain forest. Of course, bigger and badder. I know they have Centaurs and Ape people and even Basilisks, but I mean food to eat that won't attack you back.
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Laurenn Doylee
 
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 9:12 pm

Seeing your nickname reminded me of something W&V. Since you guys are on Valenwood, here's a little lore from UESP that seemed really interesting to me:

"Vampires - Valenwood
In northern Valenwood, there are the Bonsamu vampires which are indistinguishable from normal Bosmer unless seen by candlelight, the Keelrlith who can disintegrate into mist, the Yekef who swallow men whole, and the Telboth who prey on children, take their place in the family, and eventually murder all of the family members."

Valenwood vampires sound insanely dangerous :) All the 4 types of them! And I bet the wild creatures can match them too....
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 5:11 pm

Seeing your nickname reminded me of something W&V. Since you guys are on Valenwood, here's a little lore from UESP that seemed really interesting to me:

"Vampires - Valenwood
In northern Valenwood, there are the Bonsamu vampires which are indistinguishable from normal Bosmer unless seen by candlelight, the Keelrlith who can disintegrate into mist, the Yekef who swallow men whole, and the Telboth who prey on children, take their place in the family, and eventually murder all of the family members."

Valenwood vampires sound insanely dangerous :) All the 4 types of them! And I bet the wild creatures can match them too....


Ooh, they do sound insanely dangerous, and creepy! Especially the Telboth... *shivers* I wouldn't want one of them sneaking into my family! :o
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 4:29 am

Seeing your nickname reminded me of something W&V. Since you guys are on Valenwood, here's a little lore from UESP that seemed really interesting to me:

"Vampires - Valenwood
In northern Valenwood, there are the Bonsamu vampires which are indistinguishable from normal Bosmer unless seen by candlelight, the Keelrlith who can disintegrate into mist, the Yekef who swallow men whole, and the Telboth who prey on children, take their place in the family, and eventually murder all of the family members."

Valenwood vampires sound insanely dangerous :) All the 4 types of them! And I bet the wild creatures can match them too....

I read about them ever since Oblivion was released. Valenwood got alot of vampire clans. I don't expect to run into them in this RP. But they do sound pretty savage, all of the vampires from the provinces are! I favor the Order though, they are my favorite Elder Scrolls vampires ;)
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 1:27 am

I read about them ever since Oblivion was released. Valenwood got alot of vampire clans. I don't expect to run into them in this RP. But they do sound pretty savage, all of the vampires from the provinces are! I favor the Order though, they are my favorite Elder Scrolls vampires ;)

Haven't you learnt not to give the GMs ideas?
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:01 pm

Haven't you learnt not to give the GMs ideas?


I think it would be cool to run into some vampires, to change it up a little, add some more action before the Elseweyr people find us! ;)
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Syaza Ramali
 
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 3:52 pm

Haven't you learnt not to give the GMs ideas?

Oh no.....well, I guess we might have a Lycanthrope vs vampire battle.....again.... :ph34r:
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Darlene Delk
 
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Post » Sat Oct 09, 2010 12:58 am

I'll find a spot to jump in soon along the way. Diary of a Madgod has had me swamped, reading through all the posts...
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Jordyn Youngman
 
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 5:37 pm

So Ni, am I allowed to go on a mini hunting trip? Meldor, care to join?
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Miranda Taylor
 
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Post » Fri Oct 08, 2010 10:29 pm

Yeah, hey, are we allowed to venture away from the camp occasionally?

I'll find a spot to jump in soon along the way. Diary of a Madgod has had me swamped, reading through all the posts...


Sounds good! (Also looking forward to more of Pepjiit's tale...*hint hint, nudge nudge, know what I mean? know what I mean?* ;)
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