Dreams of the Fire chapter 3

Post » Thu May 03, 2012 8:06 am

I wrote literally one line of Max's dialogue (Gauis dont kill me) :bolt: but it should work to get things rolling, it's edited in the old post, so go take a look at it.

You live, for now.
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sarah taylor
 
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 8:43 am

You live, for now.
Lol XD but does the dialog work...?
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Donatus Uwasomba
 
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 6:01 am

Lol XD but does the dialog work...?

Sure, you can do minor stuff, just keep in mind that he is the Illusive Man of Tamriel, not Snidely Whiplash...
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 11:39 am

Sure, you can do minor stuff, just keep in mind that he is the Illusive Man of Tamriel, not Snidely Whiplash...
I'll keep that in mind, I was just using what Charon had given us last night, BTW did you read the other stuff I put up last night... about the whole meeting and all that jazz?
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 8:20 pm

I'll keep that in mind, I was just using what Charon had given us last night, BTW did you read the other stuff I put up last night... about the whole meeting and all that jazz?

Yeah, I have developed a motive and a plan of attack for Max, not that I'll reveal it, I like to keep his motivations a little secret so everyone's interactions with him are more realistic.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 5:14 am

Yeah, I have developed a motive and a plan of attack for Max, not that I'll reveal it, I like to keep his motivations a little secret so everyone's interactions with him are more realistic.
I would personally tempt him with the revealing of who his mother is and how he is being "indoctrinated," but thats just my opinion.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 8:19 pm

BTW we should probably call the next thread Stars In The Night Sky, to quote Raize.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 7:24 am

BTW we should probably call the next thread Stars In The Night Sky, to quote Raize.
I have an English Paper to write today, but tonight I could start the new Thread...
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 8:41 am

I have an English Paper to write today, but tonight I could start the new Thread...
No no, it was just reccomended that it would be the title, plus I can do it if you are writing up an English paper. Nevermind, I can't due to time constraints sorry Gaius, What about Charon or Soul...?
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 11:31 am


Friend of yours...?

Never seen him before in my life.

Me either.

And with a snap of his fingers the Maximillian made the Imperial disapear, Good then you shouldnt miss him, On to business then?

What business?

Oh Charon, dont be so modest. You and I both know whats happening.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 5:22 pm

Never seen him before in my life.
Me either.
And with a snap of his fingers the Maximillian made the Imperial disapear, Good then you shouldnt miss him, On to business then?
What business?
Oh Charon, dont be so modest. You and I both know whats happening.
How should I make the place look...?
Ornate fancy stuff
Or
Eternal nothingness
Or
Beaten old shack.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 11:36 am

How should I make the place look...?
Ornate fancy stuff
Or
Eternal nothingness
Or
Beaten old shack.

If you're referring to Raize's house, it's closer to ornate fancy stuff than beaten old shack.
If you're not then I've got no idea what you're talking about, please explain.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 5:23 pm



If you're referring to Raize's house, it's closer to ornate fancy stuff than beaten old shack.
If you're not then I've got no idea what you're talking about, please explain.
Wherever I was just teleported
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 5:49 pm

If you're referring to Raize's house, it's closer to ornate fancy stuff than beaten old shack.
If you're not then I've got no idea what you're talking about, please explain.

Max just teliported him someplace else. Max (from my understanding at least) likes luxury but not lavish over the top luxury.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 4:09 pm

Wherever I was just teleported
I don't think the location matters that much, honestly. It seems that Max just wanted to get him out of the way for the time being. Put him wherever you like, perhaps somewhere that Raize and Charon might stumble upon later to find him properly.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 6:39 pm

Drake found himself in a vast empty black space. He looked around and saw just nothingness. Suddenly though, two chairs and a table between them formed out of no where. On the table was a bottle of fine Telvanni Wine with two empty glasses. Drake walked closer, and saw a note on the table. He picked it up and read it.

Sorry, I will only be a few seconds, please, get situated, and don't wait for me to open the bottle.

M.

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A small flame jumped from Maximillian's finger and lit his pipe. He took a a few puffs, and continued.

You know, it's funny, you never know how precious something is until you lose it, and before you say anything, I know the stakes. Better than you.

As you have surmised, the kidnapper is not on a simple ransom job, but you don't really know why your son was taken. Perhaps I can help.

Where is my Son? Can you help us?

Maximillian raised his hand to silence Raize.

Patience, in all good time. Now, Boethia has kidnapped your son, and you are in luck, because Boethia is currently interfering in my affairs. That has put me in the odd position of asking for your help.

Maximillian took another puff from his pipe.

You've heard of the war to the East, in Morrowind? I need your help, one of my pawns has gone rogue, and only you can calm him down again. You might now him. You worked alongside him once, before the coming of Alduin.

Who is he?

Belan Indarys Helseth

I've never heard of him.

I feared as much, a side effect of the Dragon Break. Ask Charon, he'll know who he is. Belan is currently playing general in northern Morrowind, despite my best interests, I need you to stop him. When you do, I will tell you how to find your son.

Maximillian then vanished into dust.

(Yes, I know that Raize should know who Belan is, but I thought that Charon should have some sort of tie to the character if this story is going to work)
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 2:48 pm

Drake read a note stating

Sorry, I will only be a few seconds, please, get situated, and don't wait for me to open the bottle.
M.


At least the man gave me a bottle to satisfy my thirst. he couldn't help but wonder how this man had achieved this mind-bending power. This man can bend reality itself, why in Oblivion would he take me out of the situation? Drake almost felt jealous, but there was no time for envy, because as soon as Drake had opened the bottle dust began to form into an Altmer. The man sat in the opposite chair, got rid of the pipe and began a conversation in the most casual manner possible.
Sorry for the delay, now to bussiness.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 8:13 am

Drake found himself in a vast empty black space. He looked around and saw just nothingness. Suddenly though, two chairs and a table between them formed out of no where. On the table was a bottle of fine Telvanni Wine with two empty glasses. Drake walked closer, and saw a note on the table. He picked it up and read it.

Sorry, I will only be a few seconds, please, get situated, and don't wait for me to open the bottle.

M.

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A small flame jumped from Maximillian's finger and lit his pipe. He took a a few puffs, and continued.

You know, it's funny, you never know how precious something is until you lose it, and before you say anything, I know the stakes. Better than you.

As you have surmised, the kidnapper is not on a simple ransom job, but you don't really know why your son was taken. Perhaps I can help.

Where is my Son? Can you help us?

Maximillian raised his hand to silence Raize.

Patience, in all good time. Now, Boethia has kidnapped your son, and you are in luck, because Boethia is currently interfering in my affairs. That has put me in the odd position of asking for your help.

Maximillian took another puff from his pipe.

You've heard of the war to the East, in Morrowind? I need your help, one of my pawns has gone rogue, and only you can calm him down again. You might now him. You worked alongside him once, before the coming of Alduin.

Who is he?

Belan Indarys Helseth

I've never heard of him.

I feared as much, a side effect of the Dragon Break. Ask Charon, he'll know who he is. Belan is currently playing general in northern Morrowind, despite my best interests, I need you to stop him. When you do, I will tell you how to find your son.

Maximillian then vanished into dust.

(Yes, I know that Raize should know who Belan is, but I thought that Charon should have some sort of tie to the character if this story is going to work)
Great post :) the reply is above...
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 5:37 pm

Drake is it, please take a seat.

We have much to discuss.

But, before we get started, I just wanted you to know that I know you are a servant of Mephala.

Drake just stared at him.

Please, sit down, I want to have a civilized chat.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 12:02 pm

Drake is it, please take a seat.

We have much to discuss.

But, before we get started, I just wanted you to know that I know you are a servant of Boethia.

Drake just stared at him.

Please, sit down, I want to have a civilized chat.


Its not Boethia it's Mephala.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 2:34 pm

Its not Boethia it's Mephala.

just caught that... I was so caught up in Boethia up above...

But I hope you see why I like to control this character now...
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 8:13 pm

Drake is it, please take a seat.

We have much to discuss.

But, before we get started, I just wanted you to know that I know you are a servant of Mephala.

Drake just stared at him.

Please, sit down, I want to have a civilized chat.
I'm going to italicize thoughts.
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How in the name of Mephala is he so well informed, perhaps he can read thoughts...
Drake sat in the chair poured a glass of wine for the Altmer and then one for himself and asked
Who are you and how do you know my name and my allegience...?
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 4:47 pm

I'm going to italicize thoughts.
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How in the name of Mephala is he so well informed, perhaps he can read thoughts...
Drake sat in the chair poured a glass of wine for the Altmer and then one for himself and asked
Who are you and how do you know my name and my allegience...?

Maximillian took a sip of wine, and smiled.

Perhaps you have heard of me, I am Maximillian, the last of the Telvanni, the mortal that dares to do battle with gods. In my business, it pays to know your enemies. I want to have a chat.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 5:30 pm

Maximillian took a sip of wine, and smiled.

Perhaps you have heard of me, I am Maximillian, the last of the Telvanni, the mortal that dares to do battle with gods. In my business, it pays to know your enemies. I want to have a chat.
So that's how he achieved his power, he is a godslayer
Ahh, Maxillian, I'm afraid I dismissed the tales of you as a myth. Then again you did just materialize a room, he said with a grin... perhaps I was mistaken. Ok I could use a wiff of a pipe right now, if you don't mind.
with that he lit up his pipe and said
now, for that chat.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 6:20 am

So that's how he achieved his power, he is a godslayer
Ahh, Maxillian, I'm afraid I dismissed the tales of you as a myth. Then again you did just materialize a room, he said with a grin... perhaps I was mistaken. Ok I could use a wiff of a pipe right now, if you don't mind.
with that he lit up his pipe and said
now, for that chat.

What precisely has the Webspinner told you about what is going on? She talks so much, but says so little.

What do you think of the character?
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