Eleania - The Dovahkiin

Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 2:32 pm

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The call had come, shaking the very mountains to their core and cracking the sky through it's thunderous volume. Even now it echoed unending inside her head, a constant beat beckoning her to follow. Frightening but with the absense of threatening. She hadn't known why it had called her name, why it had spared her any thought and dragged her out of the constant loneliness that she led her life in. But then, she liked it that way, with no objective, no purpose, just her and the world in all its wild and beautiful glory. But now, the voice had called her, it had called her. And for someone reason, unbenknowst even to herself, she had been compelled to answer. To follow. Perhaps she should have fought against this feeling, said no to the world like so many times before and turned her back again. But this time she couldn't ignore the feeling, and followed it with urgency. Perhaps it was destiny, though to herself that sounded stupid, and she didn't believe in such.

Eleania Verdelf made a sandwich for The Dovakiin, who was a brave man who killed lots of dragons.

The End

I really like the intro, and it really sets the mood. I just made a few alterations of my own...
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Kim Kay
 
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:08 pm

I really like the intro, and it really sets the mood. I just made a few alterations of my own...


Are you insinuating a female shouldn't be Dovahkiin. You want me to make a sandwhich for a male Dovahkiin? =O
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:51 am

Awesome, you are a welcome sight in the fanfic subforum!
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Assumptah George
 
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:27 pm

Are you insinuating a female shouldn't be Dovahkiin. You want me to make a sandwhich for a male Dovahkiin? =O

... Maybe? :whistling:

The Dovakiin likes PB&J in his sandwiches. Do not disappoint. :verymad:
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Sarah Kim
 
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:06 am

... Maybe? :whistling:

The Dovakiin likes PB&J in his sandwiches. Do not disappoint. :verymad:


D=

How insulting.

This Dovahkiin is gonna stick an arrow in your face =P
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:44 pm

D=

How insulting

This Dovahkiin is gonna stick an arrow in your face =P

It's ok! There's plenty of things for female characters to do in Skyrim, like http://pcmedia.ign.com/pc/image/article/114/1149185/elder-scrolls-v-skyrim-20110211094552237_640w.jpg
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:17 am

Archer, if I had put that much effort in, only to have to read rotated's comments, I'd report him to a mod. The story was grand, and prejudice, whether racial or sixual, even in 'humour', should not be tolerated on this forum.
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Ashley Campos
 
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 4:48 pm

Archer, if I had put that much effort in, only to have to read rotated's comments, I'd report him to a mod. The story was grand, and prejudice, whether racial or sixual, even in 'humour', should not be tolerated on this forum.

To be fair it was well written and I did enjoy the story :P Well done.
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 9:55 pm

Great story, hope you'll enjoy the game as much as you enjoyed writing the intro for your character :)
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 10:35 am

You got a Mod to comment! Its not every day this happens! Well done! Oh, and have a fishy stick.
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:28 am

Archer, if I had put that much effort in, only to have to read rotated's comments, I'd report him to a mod. The story was grand, and prejudice, whether racial or sixual, even in 'humour', should not be tolerated on this forum.


Thanks for the support =)


Great story, hope you'll enjoy the game as much as you enjoyed writing the intro for your character :)


I hope so too! Thanks for reading! =)

You got a Mod to comment! Its not every day this happens! Well done! Oh, and have a fishy stick.


TY! =)
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:33 am

'twas a decent read, nice to see people have their imagination intact :)
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Post » Tue Aug 10, 2010 10:40 pm

'twas a decent read, nice to see people have their imagination intact :)


^^
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