Personnal journal
US commando designation: Luke Thomas
co-ordinates: mainland china

entry 1 2077:

We did it we nuked the red bastards!!!!! Socre one for uncle Sam and the good old USA. If only i was home, i can see the celebrations now, partys in the streets, the president anounceing our victory over the commies. One step closer to the end of the war, all we need is for the reds leaders to surrneder to capatilism from whatever hole they have hidden themselves in. I hope they all burned with the rest of the worthless red devils. All of the things i have seen these savages do in my time here has made me proud to be an american government executions of innocent people, soldiers getting away with pure murder things that i dont even want to say outloud. Seeing such a desolate wasteland as i am now makes me yearn for Americas crystal blue lakes, glistening in the autumn sun, the great redwood forests proud and tall like huge wooden patriots and of course our great cities, New York with its huge glass skyscraqers, to DC, centre of the free world. when i think of all that that i realise that we could never have lost this war, because as long as they remain and the people still selute the old star spanlged banner then america lives on. I wonder Mable and the kids are doing right now, probably sitting down to dinner watching the news for details about this glorious event, I hope they dont worry about me too much though im may not be all tucked up safe in downtown DC where our forces are strongest but ill do just fine. Come to think of it i was lucky i was scouting out some of the nueclear bunkers the red government were building for their people, they really could have used the vaults we have back home, hevean knows we dont need them i mean who would have the guts to even think about lockin' horns with us after this conflict. But you know what really re-enforced my faith in the mission, these vaults they were building they were meant to test some sort of super soldier serum or something of that sort. imageine that turning your own people into guinea pigs when you have charged them huge money and ensured survival, makes me sick, but the USA will never let a country get away with that. anyway im off to try and find a working radio, maybe i will be able to catch the president anouncing where has been bombed. i expect word about my extraction from this hell hole any day now.


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what do you think my of first attempt at fan fiction, any creative critisism is welcomed. as you have gatherd he is a US commando in china immeadeiatly after the bombings who doesnt know america has been hit. for his voice imageine a sort of hybrid between bill dotreive from king of the hill and stan smith from american dad. i will develop this regularily and hope to have about 15 entrys by the end, any creative ideas are welcome to

thanks

For the second time... what the [censored] was that?

Jesus that was worse than the last one.