Hello all.

I just finished putting this together. Truth be told, I'm not an online RPer by nature. I prefer systems, rules in place, and vaults to crawl through. I've been working on it for about 4 days now, and would love to know what I horribly screwed up. Or got right, depending. That being said, I cannot post a link to it since I just made this account, I am guessing.

My question is any experienced GMs out there?

And secondly, is this the right place for RPGs? Everything else seems to be FanFics and online RPs.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Byw-8mQqXCcWdTNrdG5rc1B0ME0

could you try reposting the link? It doesn't work for me.

Also this is the right place RPs

Fixed.