If you're going to critique, please do it with constructive criticism and respect, otherwise I don't think you'll get much of it from others.
Luckily for me I wasn't critiquing you. If you want me to critique your idea, fine. First off, suggesting New York be the next location makes your post not belong in this thread in the first place, but rather, in the Locations Suggestions thread. But on to your idea:
1. As I said, New York is an incredibly cliche place to set a game. Hundreds of games, many of them post-apocalyptic, have been set there. It's a very tired setting and there are many more interesting places in the former United States besides NYC.
2. The bit of fan-fiction you added to that post was rather pointless. If Bethesda,
god forbid, does set a game there, they wont include any elements of your story. If you want to post fan-fiction, there's a sub-forum for that.
3. Your idea could take place in any city. Why did you choose New York City? Especially considering the tiny island we call NYC would be absolutely obliterated in the war, so there would be absolutely nothing left that would identify it as NYC.
4. Don't say NYC could have been missed by the bombs, either by accident or by a deal like New Vegas was. NYC is extremely vital to the world's economy. Absolutely nothing would stop the Chinese from destroying it. They probably even sent multiple bombs just to make sure it was gone. As I said, there would be nothing left identifying it as NYC. Various factions would have no city left to rebuild.
Yes, obviously I hate the idea of setting the game there. I love the city, but I hate the thought of having anything but a DLC set there. It's so
painfully cliched I get angry just think about it. I love Bethesda, and I love Fallout, but if Bethesda stooped so low as to set a game there I would be convinced they've lost a lot of the creativity they used to have, especially with so many other interesting locations to set the game in, like Ronto or The Commonwealth.