Hey, decided to make a story teaser, it more or less turned out how I hoped it would.
Let me know what y'all think. Do you personally wanna' see the full story?

Any constructive criticism is welcome, I'm fairly new to editing etc. Cheers!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TrNlfw7-2I8

Comments, likes & subs are really appreciated. I read all the comments.

Its a ghoul; I WIN! :celebration:

Maybe improve the camera view. Don't have it zoomed some far away.

Kay, thanks
A ghoul? Maybe you're right. Maybe you're not.
Or maybe there's more than only some ghouls... who knows.

It looks really good! I'm excited to see it, at least.
Is the text always gonna be like that, or are you putting voice acting into it?

I don't know yet, my native language isn't English. So unless you want my not-so-perfect english pronunciation (I can speak some english with a decent accent, but I sound like a [censored] when I do xD), I guess not. Or I could look for a voice actor or something. I'm not sure. What would you do? ^^

Ty for the feedback btw (: