Today at School I was bored in math class so I decided to write up a fan fiction, I think it is pretty good but I do not have a title, and I do not know which brother should narrarate it.

Well, I just chose Hyde because I like the name. I don't know anything about the story so I just chose one.

What just the title? tell us the story!

Making a topic with no information to ask for a title without telling at least the outline of the story seems not only something else done in your boredom but also a little spammy.

If you want help you need to give more information.

Ok here is the story.

Two brothers that grew up in Canterberry Commons are about to become part of a war that they were never meant to be in and they will finaly realize that war, war never changes. That is bassicaly what it is about

Don't you think you have your hands full with 5 Rps? I mean, you're already slacking in some. No offense, but this story doesn't seem to give much interest. Two brothers fighting a war they didn't want to. Kinda sounds like that one show..... Supernatural to me. But I'm guessing you've never seen that, so it might just be me who thinks that?

Yeah you are right have never even heard of it and I am having second thoughts on the war part

Like it's been said before. Don't jump on the first idea that pops into your head, usually that's the worst. Sometimes not, but this sorta seems like it would be rushed for some reason?

My small, meaningless word of advice?
The weekend is approaching for me, and I like to think of potential FF's at that time, you should do the same.
It gives me plenty of time to think, just play some Moonlight Sonata, sit in your room, and let the ideas flow.

You should take a rest for a while Josh, your starting up way too many Rps. Wait till things die down a bit, write an Rp which you would spend time on. Manhattan War was a great Rp, we know you can do a good job Josh so take your time on one Rp, making it unique.

Well I guess the only RP I have going rite now is Vault 111 and this was going to be a Fan Fic but I guess not.
Anyway's the only RP's that I think I am in are Mile High City, Canada Rising, Vault 111 and that other one at the purifier.

I don't know if your in Canada Rising anymore. You have been neglecting your posting time. Don't join so many Rps at a time, then you won't be over loaded. Stick to one or two Rps before going off and doing more stuff.

That's true, Manhattan war was a sorta a breath of fresh air.
(Prince, Bel-)