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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:06 am

There is a Realm Adjacent to that of Nirn. That place is called Freiqshoa ruled by the Daedra Sheogorath, one of the many realms beneath his thumb. The Inhabitants are all of the standard races of Nirn. The society is far less developed the cities are few and far inbetween.With many outlaws and powerul and corrupted creatures hungry for the unware travelers. The place allmost has a Wild Wild West feel to it. With long flat rolling plains,surrounded by mountains with a large river running through. Psychics are rare,but not unheard of and oddly enough magic is dwindling. Everyone is just trying to make their way in this near-lawless society. But deep beneath the earth a dark and malicious power is growing so steeped in shadow even Sheogorath himself doesnt know


King:Aronial Talkazta (Red Guard)(Shoegorath)

Major cities:
Dodge
Silvertown
San Zone
Terra Corta

Minor towns:
Oak Sheet
Allison Square
Briar

char sheets are

Name
Alias
race
gender
class
age

skills:(pick6)TES3 style

appearance/tattoo/scarsetc

Attitude

armor

weapons

misc gear

misc skills


short biography


notes on char
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Cameron Garrod
 
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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:59 am

Um... more description would be good for one.

That, and the fact that we arent quite sure whats going on.. at all... its just what seems to be a very chopped up intro..

BSparrow... you there? I dont want to give all the advice! Im to lazy!
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Miragel Ginza
 
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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:15 am

Sheogorath also has the Shivering Isles, why would he need this one?
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Lyndsey Bird
 
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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:29 am

Sheogorath also has the Shivering Isles, why would he need this one?

A spare?

You know Sheogorath, always making kingdoms full of crazies, then completely obliterating them for no reason at all. Sound's like something I'd do out of boredom.

I would join, but more information would be required for me to decide.
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Flutterby
 
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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:12 am

im not sure how to flush it out
what do you guys wanna know?
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Nathan Hunter
 
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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 7:01 am

A spare?

You know Sheogorath, always making kingdoms full of crazies, then completely obliterating them for no reason at all. Sound's like something I'd do out of boredom.

I would join, but more information would be required for me to decide.

I dunno, Sheo isnt the type for this kind of world. He would have an exact copy of Tamerial, but everything opposites or something
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Sanctum
 
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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:09 am

I dunno, Sheo isnt the type for this kind of world. He would have an exact copy of Tamerial, but everything opposites or something


Isnt that malacath or another daedric prince who has the dark version of tamrial?
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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:48 am

Isnt that malacath or another daedric prince who has the dark version of tamrial?


Molag Bal, actually. And this RP really needs a lot more detail put into it, you know? I wouldn't join anyway, since I'm busy recently, but still. Mainly though, I don't see why Sheo needs more than the Shivering Isles.

And hey Nilloc, haven't seen you for a while around here!
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Racheal Robertson
 
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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:33 am

BSparrow... you there? I dont want to give all the advice! Im to lazy!


Ack! Summon'd! :ahhh:

I probably wouldn't join this one either, because I'm already in a pseudo-post-apocalyptic survival RP (Swift-Blade's Bitter Dawn).

The main thing you need to flesh out is the world. You're essentially creating your own plane of Oblivion. Look at what Bethesda did for Shivering Isles; you have to do just about everything they did. You'll need to make cities or settlements. You'll need to design a bestiary, and make it detailed enough for the RPers to understand it. You'll need to make dozens of NPCs. Heck, you'll probably need to make a map, too. And devise a history (at least a vague one) of things that have happened in this realm.

Also, consider how the people got here in the first place. Were these people abducted from Nirn, or did they enter through a metaphoric Door in Niben Bay? Are they all dead Sheogorath worshippers, or is there a mix of all the above?

What confuses me most is this line:

Psychics are rare,but not unheard of and oddly enough magic is dwindling.


...Psychics? As far as I know, psychic ability has never really played a huge part in the Elder Scrolls, excepting prophecy and certain Illusion skills. Please be more specific about what you mean by that. Also, why is magic dwindling? Are the teachers dying out? Is there something physically blocking magical power, like a Resist Magicka field or something?

This is what the others mean. Be specific and thorough. Creating an entire realm should take several pages in Microsoft Word. Fill in the smallest detail. The only thing you should leave out are things directly related to the important secrets of the RP's main conflict... and even those should be hinted at in the introduction, to help entice RPers to join.

Also...Nilloc sighting! :wave:
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Samantha Mitchell
 
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Post » Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:38 am

WAAAAAAAY too much work

i dont have the time

maybe some othertime guys,sorry
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