A Guest for Glory RP

Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 2:34 pm

Simply Im startin an RP nothing epic. (And funny) And once all 3-5 people have been selected I will open a new post witch is going to be named ''A Guest For Glory The Story Begins''
Anyway there are only few rules.

Rule number 1: Just regular people, I mean 3 major skills and 2 minor skills and 1 ''special'' thing and no they dont have to be from the game. (Hint! No one likes an uber character)

Rule number 2: Please for love of god make your caracters interesting in a unique way. Fuse your own personality and character in oblivion (Some racisim between races is always funny).

Rule number 3: Must have some knoledge of cyradil. (TES 4 World, if you cant be bothered to open up the game take a look at this map http://www.oblivionmap.net/Cyrodiil.html)

Alright the story is simple one character, witch is decided seperatly is looking for mercs after finding out that in the mountaing near Cheydinhal live some very rare mountain lions that have white fur (1200 gold per fur) but things always get complicated and soon the people wish they would have just stayed in the inn located at Skingrad.

My character

Name: Rilgar

Race: Argonian

six: Male

Apparel: Instead like other Argonians Rilgar is pitch black but you still clearly see the scales and his eyes are red and some main parts of his body are some what reddish.
He is a little muscular and mysterius looking, thou he is couple cm:rs longer than a human he somehow seems clumsy. As hair he has those two fishy thing on his head and they are some what reddish.
And he has a russian like accent you know slow but strong and says ''r'' sharply not muffeld like in normal english.
Wears and medium armor with is rough leather and has metal parts all over it.(No helmet)

Skills:
Major skills: Blade, athelics, acrobatics.
Minor skills: Destruction, medium armor.
Special: Can take more damage because of his race and gets fatiqued slower because of his muscular built so overall a good endurance.

Dont be shy! Your first time? Nervous? Dont be! Id actully would preffer noobies.


PS: Sorry about my bad English.

EDIT: Also Im the dungeon master and control 2 characters, heres my second character.

Race: Imperial

six: Male

Name: Malko

Personality: You just wait and see

Major skills: Blunt, block, light armor,

Minor skills, Spear, blade

Special: Has a perfect memory

Wears a leather armor (No helmet)
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Richard
 
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 4:24 am

There he was, staring at the inn of Skingrad hoping to find mercenaries for his guest. As Malko walked in the crowded inn he noticed that it was full of humans, he was expecting at least some orcs.

Malko looked around and decided go to talk to the bartender, he walked to him and asked ''Bartender! Do you know any good warriors for hire?''
As the bartender turned to face him he said ''Well everyone here is for hire depending on the job.''

''Well what about if they would have to travel to Cheydinhal?''

The bartender looked at him for a while then he said ''Well theres this one guy who wants to leave but hasnt done it yet.''

''Why?''

''Well my guess is that no one wants to hire him because his..... Well.....''

''What?'' Said Malko as he raised his eyebrow.

The bartender looked at him clearly scared and pointed in the corner of the inn. Malko looked at the corner where there was a guy with a hoody ''Thanks, I guess?''
He said and started walking there. He noticed that people were avoiding him for some reason. When he stopped in front of the sitting stranger the stranger looked at him and asked with a deep voice
''Yes?'' with an odd accent.

As Malko swallowed he said ''Im looking for people to hire.''

''Why do you want me?''

''I heard that your the best.''

''Please sit.'' And the stranger waved his hand in the direction of an empty chair. As Malko sat he said ''The pay is a few thousand gold once the job is done and it takes a month to do and its other side of Cyradiil.''

Malko could clearly hear the stranger making some kind of noise as he was rubbing his chin thinking about it. The stranger still under his hood said ''Deal!''

''Great! By the way the names Malko.''

''Rilgar.''

Then some people came to talk to Rilgar yelling ''What are you still doing here you demon!?''

Malko watched the three armed men who were yelling at Rilgar and asked ''What do you want?''
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:21 am

''None of your business!'' The leader of the thugs yelled. ''Where here for this demon.''

Then Rilgar asked ''What demon if I may ask?''

''You of course!'' The thug leader pointed and yelled

Then Malko got mad. ''Rilgar isnt a demon cant you see?!''

One of the thugs suddenly attacked Rilgar but before anyone noticed Rilgar had shoved his sword in the mans chest. Then another thug attacked Rilgar and he trew his robes at him and kicked him away, then the leader of the thugs attacked him and Rilgar grabbed his hands raising them above their heads and Malko was utterly shocked.

So this is why they called him a demon. Rilgar was pitch black reddish argonian. Then Rilgar trew his opponent aside and grabbed Malkos hand.

''Come on we need to get out of here!''
And so they ran outside only to discover that the Skingrad guards were outside. ''Guards there is a bar fight in there!'' Rilgar yelled and pointed inside.
The guards looked each other for a while and then ran in the inn. Rilgar started running to the gates and Malko soon after him, outside Skingrad Malko couldnt hold it anymore.

''What the £&%@ was that all about!?'' Rilgar just laughed for a while and then said ''Dont you see? Im a demon just because Im different.''
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:19 am

''I dont think you're a demon.''

''Well thats good to know. Do you have supplies?''

Malko looked little stupid for a while. ''Well uhh, I only have my armor and sword sooo no, but I know a supplier in imperial city!''

''Alright. So what are we doing Cheydinhal?''

''Well were going to kill some rare animals.''

''Animals?'' Rilgar asked while he raised his eye brow ''Why? Do they pay well?''

''Yes and no, they pay about a thousand gold for a single pelt if you know who to sell to.''

Rilgar looked at him with an angry face ''And how many pelts we are going to get?''

Malko understood that he was angry for a good reason and decided to tell the truth. ''They are white mountainlions and they live at Hero Hill near Cheydinhal, and theres a lot of them.''

Rilgar walked right in front of him and asked. ''How many?''

''Near 30.'' Then Rilgar walked couple steps away and turned around putting his arms behind his head and said. ''So we are going to earn about 20 to 30 thousand gold?''

Malko was amazed how fast Rilgar could count that. and was a little scared when Rilgar said: ''So what's my cut?''
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Amy Smith
 
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 6:39 am

I have alot to say about this, but I will do my best to sound nice. First off, you need to wait for other people to join. Secondly....nevermind.
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Sophie Morrell
 
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 12:29 pm

I have alot to say about this, but I will do my best to sound nice. First off, you need to wait for other people to join. Secondly....nevermind.



I know but I waited for weeks and I said [censored] it and yeah I already started and people can PM me and they can jump in whenever they want so yeah
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 10:01 pm

Hmmm... you know... this reminds me alot about... well me when I first came to these forums. I one time made a roleplay, but ended up turning it into a fanfic... and a god awful one.

Your a few steps ahead of me though. So, first things first... this is more of a fanfiction then a roleplay. You are controlling every detail, every character.

And that's akright, but remember to advertise as a fanfiction instead of a roleplay. Next up, the first problem that caught my eye was the Inn's name. Now this is very minor, but still kind of there. Stalingrad. Im sure everyone on this forum knows of that little city oover in Russia. I recommend from now on to try and make up your own names for places you invent.

Another thing ill pick at is your spacing. Or lack thereof. People don't like reading blocks of text, which is what you have going. Remember to split things off into paragraphs, and evrytime someone talks to make a new paragraph. And space them out to! Example.

"Hey Scott," said Peter. "What's up?" Replied scott. "Your on fire." Said Peter. "Well that I am!" replied Scott.

Let's put spacing into play...

"Hey Scott," said Peter.

"What's up" replied Scott.

"Your on fire."

"Well that I am!"

You get the point.

Ill keep on reading this fanfic if you keep posting, and offer some advice when I can!
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:09 pm

I'll keep that in mind and a note I ment to write inn at Skingrad but I guess I got distracted
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loste juliana
 
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 4:48 pm

Ahh! That makes more sense! I recommend you edit that then, because the typo REALLY confuses things. I thought the inn was just in the middle of no where.
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:33 pm

I fixed it, I dont like bad critisism but thanks for pointing this out I wouldnt have beleved that I would screw up writing since I read a lot books and one more question Why I cant edit my first post it says:
I am not permitted? How Im not permitted if I made it?
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Post » Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:14 pm

Malko just stared at him for a while but then Rilgar turned around and asked ''Well?''

''How about 45%?''

''I want half.''

''Uhh, okay'' Malko knew he didnt want to start arguing with Rilgar after seeing him in that bar fight.''

Rilgar started walking along the road leading away from Skingrad.

''Where are you going?'' Malko asked

''Where do you think? To Imperial City ofcourse! You said you had a supplier in there!''

Then Malko understood and started jogging after him..........






Note from the game master: Any people who want to join in just PM me okay? Im going to get you in this guest.
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