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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 3:30 am

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By Joshua Shaw

Epilogue
In the 1945 Einstein created the ability to split the atom, he created the nuclear bomb, with that the American army used the " Fat man " on Hiroshima since then war has evolved and so has man, Hitler made Germany into a fully economised country of the 20th century, but War... War never changes, Since when our ancestors learnt the killing power of rock and bone, conflict has gone on through the ages, from God, to War to simple psychotic rage... But war... War never changes. This is the end.

Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Vault-Tec sells underground bunkers known as Vaults to the public in case of a nuclear war. They were correct what the public of north Florida don't know is that Vault- Tec is correct.

"Hey how come I can't get an application?" Says a citizen "Sir, were not allowed to give forms out because umm..." Says a Vault-Sec guard "Because it's classified. Tell you what I'll ask you some questions and I'll see if you can have an application form" Interrupts' Sergeant Bill Howard "Okay then." Says the citizen "Okay Question 1. Do you have a wife and children?" "No" "Then I'm sorry that is the main requirement to enter vault 17 as a resident" "What else can I join as?" "You can join as either security or an engineer." "Can I join as a Vault-sec?" "Not here, go to town. Then head to the Vault-Tec building. And go sign up." Says Sergeant Howard "Okay see you later Sarge." Says the citizen. Bill is age 23 and built like a marine.

Bill walks inside the vault into the atrium where the final parts were being done, he then headed to the living quarters where he lived next to the females quarters just one corridor away. He then went to his hidden safe underneath his bed and entered the code (14, 9, 31, 8) and pulled out the M16 assault rifle and put 3 magazines into his assault vest. He walked back out to the vault entrance which was a long cave that had a wooden door at the end letting light in through the medium sized gaps, Bill thought of it as the escape from the real world as once the vault door closed there's no outside world left to him any more. With the stars still out and Bill missing his wife and kids. Bill looked at his watch "0:23... Going to be a long day. Said Bill
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Lynette Wilson
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 4:57 pm

What the [censored] was that?
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Makenna Nomad
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 3:56 am

Jesus that was awful.
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NAtIVe GOddess
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 7:10 pm

Jesus Christ... the prolouge... so so inaccurate...
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Christine Pane
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 7:10 am

I'm confused...
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Ernesto Salinas
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 6:17 pm

^ I agree. I'm confused? is this guy just standing around or what. Maybe it should be longer and then add some description. And dont just say, “Hey how come I can’t get an application?” Says a citizen", say something like "Hey how come I can't get an application?" the man said with a curious look on his face", something like that would add just a little description. ADD DESCRIPTION! Besides that it was BAD.
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Charlotte Buckley
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 7:31 am

http://www.gamesas.com/bgsforums/index.php?showtopic=940194

One topic is enough. As the comments are more acceptable in your other thread I am going to close this. Remember guys that constructive comments are acceptable, off topic and pointless ones are not.
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