Humble Fan-Fic : The Elder Scrolls Series Discussion

» Fri May 27, 2011 2:42 pm

Thank you very much for your nice comment. Hope you will like the rest just as much

Kira is... well, I am Kira. She's on my avatar, on my website, in my story and the way she acts, talks, feels, she's me in every way. Well, save for the fact I don't have a tail IRL and such, apparently.

Some of the other characters are based loosely upon my companions, but the screenies don't really depict any characters from my story, other than Kira. Truth to be told, I haven't touched Oblivion ever since starting my fan-fic and I never planned to make it that big, but the positive feedback makes it just too much fun to stop :hehe:

» Fri May 27, 2011 7:45 pm

After reading all the chapters...

There was a little hat on its rotting skull and it wore a necklace, which was woven entirely out of wild flowers. "NAAAAAAAAALAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!"... "But master, why can't we leave him the way he is now? Just this once? Pretty please? I'll take good care of him and stay away from your other zombies! Please, can I keep him?" ...

:rofl: LOL :rofl:

"I have poisoned you. Your intestines are slowly dissolving as we speak. Two hours from now, your innards will be but a bloody mess, which will pour out from every available exit. Nasty way to die, if I may say so."

Again, :rofl: .

Sometimes all it took was a vial of water and a convincing story.

LOL, and I mean LOL. :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

I'll be waiting for the continuation. Its been a while since I've taken a shot at writing something, but reading this makes me think I should try again. Nice job

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» Fri May 27, 2011 11:22 pm

It's comments like this one, which make me continue my fan-fic with such enthusiasm

Well, it's also comments like this one, which make me a total egomaniac, but what the hey... :hehe:

» Fri May 27, 2011 10:25 pm

It's comments like this one, which make me continue my fan-fic with such enthusiasm

Well, it's also comments like this one, which make me a total egomaniac, but what the hey... :hehe:

There is nothing wrong with being happy about your story doing good. Just dont let it get to your head, and you'll be fine. You just have to remember that pride will bring about your downfall and that will kinda put you back to normal,

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When's the next chapter? :hehe:

:dance:

» Fri May 27, 2011 6:53 pm

I'm still in the process of reading but I think it's absolutly hilarious, the first time I ever read fanfiction and I couldn't have guessed other people would appreciate imgaination as much as me.

Looking forward to anymore stories or chapters.=P

» Fri May 27, 2011 6:17 pm

You guys have absolutely no idea how much all of this feedback means to me! :hugs:

The next chapter is probably due this weekend, provided, work and Final Fantasy XI won't keep me too busy :hehe:

Part of the reason for my slow story progress is my insanely short attention span. I cannot focus on a single thing for more than 5 minutes without going insane. When I'm writing fan-fic, the TV is running in the Background, I'm on some MMO, the DS or my PSP is on and I'm chatting on MSN, ICQ, IRC, AIM all at the same time, permanently switching from one thing to the next.

» Fri May 27, 2011 11:11 pm

Part of the reason for my slow story progress is my insanely short attention span.

Welcome to my world, Tv and rye's fault :celebration:

» Fri May 27, 2011 11:49 am

No update this weekend. My ordered Xbox360 + Soul Calibur IV just arrived, so there will not be even the slighest trace of Kira until early next week :hehe:

» Fri May 27, 2011 4:01 pm

awwwww that bad.. *sniff*.... I would say that the rye talking but i actually mean that

EDIT: Ok i don't even remembre saying this...

» Fri May 27, 2011 9:36 pm

No update this weekend. My ordered Xbox360 + Soul Calibur IV just arrived, so there will not be even the slighest trace of Kira until early next week :hehe:

Ok lady :stare: , put down that game controller :nono: , step away from the TV :slap: and back to the writing, NOW! We want more Kira stories! We want more Kira stories! We want more Kira stories...

*five minutes later*
Weee... wha...nt... mor... e... K... ira... sto- ...

*falls drop dead tired from screaming*

On second though, keep playing. Soul Calibur will do some good for your fighting scenes descriptions

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» Fri May 27, 2011 10:27 pm

Yeees, I've been a bad Kira and oh-so concerned about my rank on the Soul Calibur 4 leaderboards. I sooooooo wanna make it to the world's top 100, but I'm sure I'll manage to squeeze in some time for another chapter this coming weekend! :angel:

» Fri May 27, 2011 5:44 pm

Yeees, I've been a bad Kira and oh-so concerned about my rank on the Soul Calibur 4 leaderboards. I sooooooo wanna make it to the world's top 100, but I'm sure I'll manage to squeeze in some time for another chapter this coming weekend! :angel:

Dam that Soul Caliber, its been nothing but trouble since you bought it

» Fri May 27, 2011 5:01 pm

EDIT: Ok i don't even remembre saying this...

:rofl:

That'll teach you to drink and post! :lol:

» Fri May 27, 2011 9:24 am

:rofl:

That'll teach you to drink and post! :lol:

Yeah i did sumthing esle that night that i don't remembre saying, lets just day it invols 2 things that shoudn't be done together... So let's leave it at that and get back on topic before we/I get a warning :deal:

» Fri May 27, 2011 11:16 am

I'm waiting patiently for Kira's next entry. I'll leave the screaming for others lol. I'm too tired to scream right now. Though, I consider getting Soul Calibur while I wait.

» Fri May 27, 2011 3:40 pm

So, I said I would read it, and here I am! :hehe: And wow, was it worth it. I am really enjoying this!

Your command of the English language is immaculate, and if you hadn't made it clear, I would never have suspected you weren't a native speaker. Your narrative is light, humourous and super easy/enjoyable to read. Your characters are adorable, mainly because it's clear you love writing them! I think that's what makes the difference in fiction - you can really tell when people care about the characters they're using. If they don't, the story falls flat and there's no empathy. But your writing is so warm.

Hope you update soon

Love it!

» Sat May 28, 2011 12:30 am

Wow, I think this is the coolest bit of feedback I've ever got. Thank you! :hugs:

» Fri May 27, 2011 7:41 pm

You are most welcome ^_^

» Fri May 27, 2011 9:24 pm

Wow, I think this is the coolest bit of feedback I've ever got. Thank you! :hugs:

Rumple is good with that kind of thing ^_^

» Fri May 27, 2011 10:49 pm

Ok, So Kira won't be able to Update over the weekend due to Forum stuffs.

She sent me a PM to pass this along.

» Fri May 27, 2011 4:04 pm

Ahhh, for the love of.... Why! What did we do to deserve this? Somehow I have a felling this is Soul Caliber's fault.

» Fri May 27, 2011 3:29 pm

Ahhh, for the love of.... Why! What did we do to deserve this? Somehow I have a felling this is Soul Caliber's fault.

Well it ain't.

» Fri May 27, 2011 9:37 am

Well.... hmm lets see. She can write it and have someone post it fro her. Although there a 100% chance that that ain't gonna happen, its worth a try.

» Fri May 27, 2011 2:42 pm

Having somebody else post parts of my fan-fic is not very desirable, as I couldn't edit and correct the posting at a later point. Anyway, I can post again, so expect the next update sometime this week. And please, resist the urge to write another 3 or so replies to that, as the thread is spammy enough already :hehe:

» Fri May 27, 2011 10:59 am

I love these stories! I can really get into the personality of the characters. I don't think there was a character in there that I didn't really like. And I was gullible in some parts, like believing the poison was actually poison when instead it was just water. :lol:

Awesome!