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You should really break that huge text block into paragraphs. In it's current presentation it's a royal pain to read.

Heh, sorry about that, I'm relatively new to posting..

So is this a beginning of an RP, a fan fiction or just an aftermath of a brainstorm?

This is just me introducing the charector that I RP in elder scrolls games, so I guess the result of a brainstorm that has been going on since i started playing Morrowind. I just thought it would be a fun and more interesting way of saying hi.

Normally we don't just openly say hi, as it usually leads to nothing more than spam. But seeing as how you've added a rather intriguing background to your first post here, I'll oblige and say it was a good read. I enjoyed it thoroughly. The only thing I'll add is that paragraphs are a bit easier to read, and the constant use of commas rather than periods felt like it was just one long statement.

Other than that, good writing and hopefully you'll clamber into the world of fanfic or rping.

Oww, my eyes are bleeding.

Paragraphs please.

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