Tell me what you guys thing about it :disguise:


This is Jacob Dealings. Jacob was born and raised in the town of Goodsprings, in a very poor family. He had an abusive father and a druggy mom. By the age of 15 Jacob finally had enough, so he decided to leave and become a business man to get his mom the help that she so desperately needed. By the age of 18 years old he had acquired a wealthy estate. So he had decided to return to his mother to bring the good news but was horrified by what he saw. He saw his mother and father dead on the floor and all that was left was a note from his dad which read “Son if you’re reading this then you know that we are dead I couldn’t stand life anymore your mom was a junkie I’m an alcoholic, but probably my biggest mistake of all was you.” After reading the note Jacobs’s life starting going towards the worst. He had started gambling his money away and started drinking. After years of gambling he had bet his estate and lost. And was only left with a mysterious chip with the numbers 38 on it, which was obtained through gambling with a mysterious man. He thought his life was over until he met a man named Benny who offered a great amount of money for the chip so he accepted the deal. They decided to meet on the hill where his parents were buried, sadly Benny betrayed him by taking the chip and before shooting him in the head he said “The game was rigged from the start.” After being revived by a man named Doc Mitchell all Jacob could remember was a man named Benny and the note his Dad left him.

Its a interesting backround, but try spacing the paragraphs out a bit. Blocks of text make people piss and run the moment they see them.