Kentrek

Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:01 pm

The Brotherhood of Steel Outcast's have recentley sent out a broadcast strong enough to reach across all of D.C. they are calling for some people who are willing to test a Pre War Machine they have fixed and they cannot do it themselves so they have sent out this radio message "Attention people of the Capital Wasteland this message is to inform you that us the Brotherhood Outcasts have rebuilt and old machine called Kentrek it is supposed to send you to another universe but we do not know if it is safe which is why we want you people to send it you would be risking your lifes but if this machine succeds then you will be praised with 100,000 caps". This machine Kentrek will bring you to the Mystical Land of Cyrodiil but you do not know that yet!

OK THIS IS A IDEA THREAD SO GIVE ME SOME IDEAS FOR MAKEING THIS BETTER
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Harry Hearing
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 8:13 am

Hey Ringman you should put that this is just an idea thread and me and you have some good ideas
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Marquis deVille
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 3:04 pm

ok just did
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Symone Velez
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:03 pm

COME ON I NEED YOUR IDEAS PEOPLE
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Amy Melissa
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 4:41 am

Dude..lame,you cant do cross fictions,especially half formed ones like this.Plus,your "Message" sounded so annoying and un-outcasty that I couldnt take it seriously,why would the outcasts want to send people to other dimensions.It seems more in their interests to just scrap the machine for parts.

And you spelled "Sense" as "Sence","Might" as "Mite","Draft" as "Graft","Yeah" "Ya".
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Mandi Norton
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:26 am

Um ya you can and this is gust a idea one so im trying to get ideas to make this better
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:03 pm

Dude..lame,you cant do cross fictions,especially half formed ones like this.

I wasn't mean enough to say this outright... So I'll just say I agree with this, as well as the fact you aren't using correct grammar, punctuation or spelling doesn't help either. Use an application like Word to help you with that and try and form your idea into something a little more structured. :shrug:
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tannis
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:45 pm

Dude...This just wont work. I refuse to go further
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Scott Clemmons
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:40 pm

Hey you guys are really being mean seriously! You have not even given the RP a chance and you are already saying that it isn't going to work I mean how in the name of Megaton do you know that this could be one of the greatest RP's of all time and you are already trashing it I mean seriously give it a chance!
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Ricky Rayner
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 1:57 pm

1) The spelling, grammar and punctuation behind this is so bad I can't even understand what it's supposed to be about.

2) The ideas are completely ripped off and are nothing new; I've seen at least four RP's a similar thing that all fell flat on their faces.

3) YOU CAN'T MIX FALLOUT AND TES

Those are my reasons against. My reasons for:

1) This MAY be alright as an RP for newer people.

2) Some people who enjoy crossing worlds will like it; but this is also the biggest downside as you can't mix FO and TES.
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Darian Ennels
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:05 am

....I have to agree with Francois, I mean TES and Fallout?

"Oh no, Dremora!!"
*pulls out fat man*
"All gone."
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sally R
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:53 am

Edited my reasons a little as they were hot headed...

Sorry, but I really think you should take longer time and come up with a better base idea. :(
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 3:47 pm

Its just a rough graft i have a bigger and better plan for this
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Petr Jordy Zugar
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 4:00 pm

Well, mixing TES and Fallout is a dangerous road that only very experienced hosts should use. It could work, but it has the slimmest of chances making it past the first thread. This wouldn't be fun for either party, but I did have something stashed away in my docs account that concerns something both TES and Fallout writers can participate in, but again, it's a slippery slope that'll most likely end face first in the snow.

My suggestion is to completely change how they're being transported to Tamriel. It's very unimaginative and makes zero sense. Perhaps, for example, you could use something like the animus from Assassin's Creed? But, then again, there wouldn't be any room for the power armored soldiers with guns fighting archers in leather armor. I would honestly keep this under wraps for now, keep it away for a month, then come back at it from a new angle.

Participate in more RPs before you host your own. I just started up mine and it fell right on its face. I've really only seen you in Josh's RPs or rehashing Manhattan War, broaden your horizons a bit.
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Adam Baumgartner
 
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Post » Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:59 am

Well ok ill make it around halloween when all the horror and sifi stuff will be booming then it mite make more sence
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