First of all before i begin i want to clarify that this is NOT a Fan Fiction based upon the Fallout Universe.

It is a pot-apocalyptic wasteland, but the technology and history is vastly different from Fallout's

I am writing this as a book, I'm hoping to publish it someday, seeing as how this is a great place for constructive criticism i wanted to put it up here to get some good feedback.

Enjoy

Then it will not be allowed, sorry. Fan Fictions here have to be based on the game.

There is a http://www.gamesas.com/bgsforums/index.php?showtopic=1034718, you may post it there.