I have a idea for a rp

Its one year after the oblivion cruises and a man named maroen exlare was expelled from the mages guild for necromancy. he went on a journey to the tomb of lord valore a famous necromancer who died 30 years ago and used his powers to take valores powers and have his revenge. He then went to the imperial city using his powers to summon hundreds of undead on the city. The guards fought of the undead but before they could get to maroen he made a portal to escape to the tomb but a mage caste a fire spell and disrupted his portal and sent him to another universe to the capital wasteland. But the portal stayed in the imperial city, there in the capital wasteland maroen found a place to remake has army. The brotherhood has sent a team of paladins lead by the lone wander,and the empire has sent a group of elite imperial guards lead by the champion. You the RPers would decide witch group the lone wander witch would be lead by me or the champion witch would be lead by the person who would like to be him.

Spelled Legend wrong, and I'd use more than one period if I were you.

Sorry about that :facepalm:

Holy run-on sentence, Batman. :blink:

I can hardly make heads or tails of anything you typed. Please edit for grammar and punctuation, to make that a little easier to understand.

This sounds a bit more like a fanfiction than an RP, just because the background seems heavily focused on one character... Although, that may be because I am confused about the role the RPers are taking in this. Please elaborate on that.

there we go edited :tops:

Its like if you would like to join the team of paladins to tamriel chose the lone wanders group if you would like to go look for maroen in the capital wasteland chose the champion

Not to be rude, but with your grammar/spelling, I think this RP is WAY over your head. Some of the best roleplayers on the server have trouble with leading political RPs...

This is like 100x harder than a political RP.

Do you use correct grammar in RP's and in other writings? If so I suggest using it in OOC posts as well. Makes you look more... welcoming. I think that's the word. Not sure...

I've never been on an Oblivion Cruise, whats it like?


Also this Idea just sounds absolutely terrible. Uber Necromancer summons hundreds of undead in a city with no corpses to raise? Then he some how makes a portal to the Fallout Universe?

No thanks. Universe cross overs are bad.

Actually i've heard that sometimes they are quite fun...

I think this could work...

It is one year after the Oblivion Crisis, and a man named Maroen Exlare was expelled from the Mages' Guild for the dark practice of necromancy. He left for a tomb of a famous wizard, Lord Brinne (he is actually a real person who died in the making of MW). When Moroen arrived he found the fabled Mentor's Ring. With it he studied necromancy in private in the tomb. Eventually after years of practice, he became a great necromancer. He then headed for a small town called Hla Oad, where he found many poor commoners and a few House Hlaalu guards. He slaughtered them mercilessly, and took the corpses back to the ancestral tomb. Inside the tomb he ressurected them as his dead servants. He then headed for the Imperial City, luckily, the one survivor of the slaughter of Hla Oad headed for Fort Moonmoth, where he told the legion of the imposing threat. Now Chancellor Ocato has hired some freelance adventurers to defend the city, knowing that Moroen is a very dangerous foe, they have been hired to assassinate him, when he passes the border of Morrowind and Cyrodiil.

Yet you still decide to make one kinda

That was just an idea...

What was just an idea? Your RP? Well every RP starts off as an idea, my good man

Speaking of RP ideas, would you lot be keen for an RP set entirely in Space above nirn? And there will be pirates of space that breathe air using magic and the renrijra krin will have a giant wooden ship that delivers skooma across space. And there will be space towns and space warriors called Soldiers of the Flaming Star and they do battle with these highly intelligent form of space-zombies that were brought to life by one of mannimarcos space-necromancers.

Yeah sure I'd love to.

My character will be a space-ninja!

Nah that's not as good as my Chuck Norris alien! HAH! Beat that!

My character's power level is OVER NINE-THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAAAND!!!!!!!!!!!!1!

Mah boi, Chuck Norris is what all true warriors strive for! (I'm hoping you get the reference)

Or else you will DIE!

It is written: SPAGHETTI will DIE!

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Guys, just because the OP bit off a bit more than he could chew is no reason to be nasty. We're not seven-year-olds on the playground. :nono:

Hey, I'm not being nasty. Just making silly comments

I didn't detect any nastiness. Just ridiculousness.