This is NOT a rp, it's a fanfic!

Welcome to the game of? LIFE OR DEATH!!!
My name is Peter Lucas and I will be with you in 18 episodes of the game Life or Death.
The rules are simple:
Our 18 competitors will fight in one fight each. Each fighter will fight until death. He will be resurrected after that. After all of them will complete the task, I will anounnce the winner.
And, the awards are:
-fame,
-glory
-lot's'o'caps,
-Tenpenny Tower Suite
-life spared
The other 17 fighters will be killed. Hey, they signed in, it's their fault!
The winner is the one, that gets the most points.
Also, every fighter may carry one pistol, one melee weapon, one bigger gun, three grenades and one set of armor. If anyone doesn't do what the rules say, his head will explode, as they are all wearing a slave collar.
1 kill - 1 point
100 points ? 10 stimpaks or 100 bullets for any weapon
Killing a boss gives the killer 5 point.
Killing a Behemoth gives the killer 10 points.

So, let the game? BEGIN!

Our first fighter is Dean. Let's see his profile

1.Dean
Role: Mechanic
Starting location: RobCo Facility
Equipment: Lead pipe, RobCo Jumpsuit, Dirty Water (2)

3?2?1?START!

He's off! It looks like he is going IN the RobCo Facility! He is in, and look, it's a mole rat in front of him. He made his first kill! He hits a nearby radroach. That's two down. A mole rat attacks him from behind and is killed in seconds. Another radroach is smashed. Where did they find this guy? He jumps on the platform, and? Kills another roach! Behind the corner, a mole rat. Great job, Dean! He picked some energy cells from a protectron, that's good. Oh, he found another radroach! He made 8 kills! He made it to the ammo box, too! And a DOUBLE KILL. Two radroaches killed with a single hit. And it looks like, he is going out of the building. What will he attack now? He aims at te Tinker Joe and? he nailed him! So, robots are next? Looks like he is going with Tinker Joe's Laser Pistol. ? Ok, he destroyed them but, is badly wounded. He heals? and uses up all his stimpaks! He goes South, enters the grocery store. Kills three radroaches. OH NO!!! THat was a begginer's mistake. He shot at the fire extinquisher! Good, he healed with his last supplies. He goes out? kills an eyebot, and a waterbeggar! Looks like he found a 44. magnum, but has no ammo. Ge walks southeast, to the trainyard. Ouch, he got attacked by a bloatfly. But, it dies off quickly. He's out of ammo, runs to get some ammo from a little office opposite the train?
AND HIS HEAD EXPLODED!!!
Hmmmm, I've got reports, that he didn't drop the 44. magnum. Well, disobeying the rules isn't a good idea.
This was Peter Lucas with you, have a great day, and see you next time. Goodbye.
NEXT TIME ON LIFE OR DEATH: Sarah Jane, a Vault Dweller... And, she nailed the brahmin... boom... I just, I just wasn't ready...
You'll see more... next time...
Jedi Marko Production, 2009

Very... interesting. And funny in a good way :flamethrower: :clap:

*Cough* Rip off of several fanfics 0/10 *cough*

A rip off of what fanfics? :stare:

Part 2 coming tommorow!!!

Nice! very funny and with a nice use of action too looking forward to part 2 :goodjob: :clap:

Well, it does take a lot from an RP called "The Game". I think I've seen it before then as well, can't remember. But a fairly unoriginal idea all the same.

I'm not too interested. Sorry

Our next contestant is? Sarah Jane, a Vault Dweller. Let's see her profile.

2. Sarah Jane
Role: Vault Dweller
Starting Location: Vault 101 Entrance
Equipment: 10mm pistol, Vault 101 Jumpsuit, Purified Water (3), 10mm ammo (30)

The game starts in?3?2?1?START!

That's a good start. She can kill off Megaton to get lot's'o'points. Looks like she's going for the stealth approach. Two shots and Mickey's on the floor! Deputy Weld's harder. Ouch! She is quite injured but she killed the Deputy AND Stocholm. She hides behind the gate? Boom! Sherrif's out! A sneaky attack killed him in three shots. She reloads? enters the town? Oh, 10 villagers attacking her! She has to run, or else she will die. The settlers are giving her a hard time. Ugh, a crippled leg! She enters Sherrif's house, settlers following her. There's only one way to escape: through the small hatch. She dispatched three settlers and is climbing out. It looks like she escaped? for a moment. Deputy Steel has joined the fight! What is that? It looks like she is going to jump down! She jumps! And the Brahmin broke her fall!!! She quickly heals and reloads her weapon. And she nails the Brahmin! Looks like Confessor Cromwell isn't going to walk anymore! And she has taken a hostage ? it is the small girl, by the name of Maggie! Everyone stopped. Is she going to kill the little child, or what? No, she surrendered! Oh, pity, pity, pity, for her! We'll be back after the brake, with Sarah Jane.

Everyone likes him, everyone buys from him,
it's Lucky, the man.
BUY GUNS AND AMMO, FROM LUCKY HARITH, TRAVELING MERCHANT?

We are back, and here, on the Tenpenny's balcony, is Sarah Jane. What happened, Sarah? Why didn't you fight anymore?
Sarah Jane: I just, I just wasn't ready for this. I couldn't kill her. I mean? it's evil?
That was Sarah Jane speaking. Let's see her score. She scored 9 points! That means she is the best! Of course, tomorrow is another day. So, this was Peter Lucas. See you next time!
NEXT TIME ON LIFE OR DEATH: Jimmy Cooper?this isn't the way of the Regulators!...I ain't a murderer!...
You'll see more? next time?
Jedi Marko Production 2009

a good style, but highly dirivitive and unorigional

3/10

I have to agree with Is It Just Me?, it's a good style but... Unoriginal in bad ways. It's kind of funny and all that, but... Meh.