[Fanfic] A Listener's Tale : The Elder Scrolls Series Discussion

» Fri May 27, 2011 9:14 pm

Edit: FC4 perhaps the editing would be best done through PM...this way if/when the changes are made there won't me irrelavent post.

:facepalm: I think we did do it by PM back in the day. I'm sorry Allshallfade, I have forgotten that over the long hiatus!

» Fri May 27, 2011 10:25 am

I want to start by saying my internet is down which means I'm posting this from my phone (which is a pain).

I am glad to have been able to influence your decision to return to the story. I have used the inspiration you have given me to contiune tracking down quality fanfic's, and to start developing character's for my future fanfic. But enough about me...

I loved the new chapter, again you amazed me by bringing something from the game to a whole new level. I mean honestly your depiction of Shadowmare, and her relationship to the story was amazing. Not to mention the intensity you protraied in the bear. I mean this chapter alone you brought two animals to life in a way I haven't ever seen in a fanfic. Yet with this new quality, and the effort required to implament it, you still managed to stay true to what has been your calling card (in my opinon). Which is your ability to depict, with great feeling and creativity, how the events of your story affect your main character. Yet with all the emotionally, and intellectually, stimulating content you never seem to let up. Even the combat in your work leaves nothing to be desired. The fleeing, and combat with the bear was amazing. As well as the scene in the inn (throwing knifes, pushing the sword back in to it's sheath, and every bit of pain relinquished upon the bartender) which fullfilled the combat desires of your readers. Great work, and looking forward to the next chapter!

Digz

Edit: FC4 perhaps the editing would be best done through PM...this way if/when the changes are made there won't me irrelavent post.

Wow... thank you for that wonderful review, Digz! I really appreciate the time you took to write this out, and it means so much- you pointed out several things I worked hard to bring out, and knowing that at least one person out there noticed those details (Shadowmere/the bear, the effect of the Purification, combat, etc.) and liked them means so much. And if you ever get to write the fanfic you're planning, let me know as I will be first in line to read it :celebration:

And FC4- don't worry about it! I appreciate that you put the effort in to editing it, and as I said next time I will PM you the chapter before I publish it online, so you get a sneak preview :ninja:

» Fri May 27, 2011 1:32 pm

Your's is the only one I edit to such an extent Allshallfade, mainly because you requested it (I think) at one point. I don't particularly like nit-picking everything.

So sending me early, means I proofread it, then I get to read it again and truly appreciate it when you post it! ^_^

» Fri May 27, 2011 7:33 pm

It's funny (in a good way) that even after all this time your quality has yet to lower even in the slightest. We're on the 21st chapter now, yet you still manage to keep us vastly interested, and with relative ease. Excellent work, as always of course.

I wish you would post more often, though

But hey, stupid life tends to get in the way, doesn't it? I just can't wait until your next chapter.

» Fri May 27, 2011 3:22 pm

DJ-luck, I don't have that account on box.net anymore (at least I believe not... *scratches head*) but it is all avaialble to be read on fanfiction.net at any time!

Ha, even if you don't have that account you can still download the files

i finally found the link to it after extensive searching. it only goes up to Chapter 19 though. Sorry but I still havent got round to reading it yet, but i will do soon, and then give you a review for Chapter 21.

» Fri May 27, 2011 11:52 am

It's funny (in a good way) that even after all this time your quality has yet to lower even in the slightest. We're on the 21st chapter now, yet you still manage to keep us vastly interested, and with relative ease. Excellent work, as always of course.

Correct!

» Fri May 27, 2011 5:09 pm

Thought I'd come back and see if there were any posts since mid last year

I haven't finished the second last chapter, but thought I'd point out there may be an error in the Chapter numbering.
The link on the first page and my copy/paste I've been comparing the two. I haven't gone through this thread (it's 2am here

) but can you tell me what chapters are titled Whodunit Part V and The After Party? If it's the same as the website I think you'll find the two are both Chapter 13 :blink:

I'm off to read then sleep :hehe: