Make TES themed poetry! Good or bad just do what you can!

Post » Thu May 03, 2012 8:13 am

All types of poetry in all mediums are welcome. Post something! Make this a tribute to The Elder Scrolls series!

~From Ash~

Forgotten was love,
lost was their home.
Blinded by hatred,
dead or alone.

Resting rock falls,
no longer was held.
Fire, stone and ash,
left little to meld.

Mountain of Blight looms,
then it erupts.
Liquid flame then flows,
life's door soon shuts.

Survivors live on,
ancestors keening.
Wreathed with infernal wrath,
Ash-born need meaning.

Contested lands taken,
by old heritage shared.
Cursed brethren allied,
with coin that won't care.

Four winds ash follows,
but hindrance does abound.
When sap-born's revenge,
leaves the wind without sound.

Beaten and broken,
no good reason to live.
Ancient enemies,
have something yet to give.

Shelter and protection,
swallow our old pride.
Winter-sons welcome us,
no longer we hide.

Now lets see some from some other people! Hope this was good lol.
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Emilie M
 
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 8:16 pm

Good work.

Aspiring writers should know that both reading and writing poetry is a good exercise for your skills. It enhances your ability to craft metaphors, brings rythm to your prose, and helps you avoid "slightness" or lack of word count in your story.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 12:16 am

Good work.

Aspiring writers should know that both reading and writing poetry is a good exercise for your skills. It enhances your ability to craft metaphors, brings rythm to your prose, and helps you avoid "slightness" or lack of word count in your story.
Thanks.

Interesting. How did I do?

Also hoping other people post some poetry if they got it.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 4:20 am

The Elder Scrolls, infinite knowledge of Mundus,
In this Kalpa and the next
From before time and until the end, they will be with us,
All possible pasts, all possible futures are within the text.
Ancestor Moths try to interpret the Scrolls as much as they might,
But in return at a terrible loss.
In the end they lose the gift of sight,
But for infinite knowledge that is the cost.
Then there is the one,
Whose destiny is within the Scroll,
The one whose fate is bound by none,
But in the end takes his toll.

The Elder Scrolls; the gift to Mer and Man,
From the Anchor of Mundus; Lorkhan.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 10:27 am

The Elder Scrolls, infinite knowledge of Mundus,
In this Kalpa and the next
From before time and until the end, they will be with us,
All possible pasts, all possible futures are within the text.
Ancestor Moths try to interpret the Scrolls as much as they might,
But in return at a terrible loss.
In the end they lose the gift of sight,
But for infinite knowledge that is the cost.
Then there is the one,
Whose destiny is within the Scroll,
The one whose fate is bound by none,
But in the end takes his toll.

The Elder Scrolls; the gift to Mer and Man,
From the Anchor of Mundus; Lorkhan.
Nice! Ummm this sounds very familiar. In game text or your own work?

Might make another poem soon though. I find it fun lol
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 9:51 pm

Nice! Ummm this sounds very familiar. In game text or your own work?

Might make another poem soon though. I find it fun lol
Thank you, I liked yours as well. Its my own work; I'm making the poem for my English class too.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 5:49 am

Thank you, I liked yours as well. Its my own work; I'm making the poem for my English class too.
Thats great. I am sure your teacher will enjoy it. Though they might have that wtf factor lol.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 12:36 am

Thats great. I am sure your teacher will enjoy it. Though they might have that wtf factor lol.
Lol I was thinking that exact same thing too :biggrin: . The part that svcks the most is I have to present it to the class :cryvaultboy: .
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 3:49 am

Lol I was thinking that exact same thing too :biggrin: . The part that svcks the most is I have to present it to the class :cryvaultboy: .
Lol well everyone will know you are a "RPG Nerd" after that. Though I think the lines have blurred a bit on that being considered a "bad" thing in school.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 9:32 am

Lol well everyone will know you are a "RPG Nerd" after that. Though I think the lines have blurred a bit on that being considered a "bad" thing in school.
True, true. Me and my friends talk about TES and people will look at us with a "wtf are you talking about" face.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 12:57 am

Mai'q was a Khajiit
He wore a helmet of gaudy fur
and lived on an island
He liked nekked people
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 8:52 am

Hidden for ages, they were unseen,
Walking among others, living a secret dream,
The halls of shadows, a friend to them all,
Three always, replaced when one falls.

In secret they worked, guarding a key,
But no door it unlocked, nor treasure it freed,
Centuries untold, long had they kept hidden,
But now events, to the fore now they are bidden.

Still only three, that follow thier lady of night,
Silent and hidden, the daughter of twilight.
You may have met one, but never know thier full tale,
Or that you had stood, right next to a Nightingale.
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 5:57 pm

Mai'q was a Khajiit
He wore a helmet of gaudy fur
and lived on an island
He liked nekked people
I can tell there was a lot of effort put into this...lol still kind of funny.
Hidden for ages, they were unseen,
Walking among others, living a secret dream,
The halls of shadows, a friend to them all,
Three always, replaced when one falls.

In secret they worked, guarding a key,
But no door it unlocked, nor treasure it freed,
Centuries untold, long had they kept hidden,
But now events, to the fore now they are bidden.

Still only three, that follow thier lady of night,
Silent and hidden, the daughter of twilight.
You may have met one, but never know thier full tale,
Or that you had stood, right next to a Nightingale.
Great job! I like it!
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 7:29 am

I can tell there was a lot of effort put into this...lol still kind of funny.

It is the beginning of a 500 page epic I'll be writing.
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 9:25 pm

It is the beginning of a 500 page epic I'll be writing.
You may need to get your facts straight though. As I remember M'aiq does not like people being nekked. :deal: :tongue:
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 10:20 pm

Acrostic poems:

He
Explains
Reality's
Mysteries
And
Enlightens
Us
Students

Master
Of
Renowned
Apocrypha

Mighty
Aldmer
Lord
Absorbed
Corrupted
And
Turned
Hideous

Sanity
Has
Escaped
Our
God
Of
Rules
And
Transcendent
Harmony

I may do these for all Daedric Princes one day.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 5:27 am

Acrostic poems:
I may do these for all Daedric Princes one day.
Now that is fun.

Might
Exert
Harmful
Retribution
Under
Needlessly
Excessive
Situations

Doesn't
Acknowledge
General
Orderly
Nonviolence

Meh I tried lol
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 7:03 am

Something I made up quickly:

Monarch of the land and sea
Of the cursed who were once free
Blessed by ancentry and name
Ruler knew not stars to tame.

Yes, it's about Barenziah.

I wrote this one months ago:

Death comes to he who is mortal
Death only I can heal, dead king.
I have witnessed their chortle,
You shall end the song they sing.

Your kin shall always remember
The one god that loved them well
Now that they have surrendered
To false gods and their spell.

Ash shall paint their pale skin
And the shadows of this day
In the colors of the sin
Till the hunter becomes prey.

King, save your faithful kin,
Free those that long for freedom,
Crush the sinners from within,
Heal the sick, reclaim your kingdom.

It's supposed to be from Azura's POV...Actually, it's more like a mockery of her motives.
Acrostic poems look fun.
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 6:04 pm

Spoiler
Something I made up quickly:

Monarch of the land and sea
Of the cursed who were once free
Blessed by ancentry and name
Ruler knew not stars to tame.

Yes, it's about Barenziah.

I wrote this one months ago:

Death comes to he who is mortal
Death only I can heal, dead king.
I have witnessed their chortle,
You shall end the song they sing.

Your kin shall always remember
The one god that loved them well
Now that they have surrendered
To false gods and their spell.

Ash shall paint their pale skin
And the shadows of this day
In the colors of the sin
Till the hunter becomes prey.

King, save your faithful kin,
Free those that long for freedom,
Crush the sinners from within,
Heal the sick, reclaim your kingdom.

It's supposed to be from Azura's POV...Actually, it's more like a mockery of her motives.
Acrostic poems look fun.
Love them! I had no clue the first was barenzia. Don't spoil them. Wanted to decrypt them. :smile: Spoiler tags next time?

This is an old poem I posted here months ago.
Spoiler

Cursed of Ash and raised by dragon devils,
entrapped in a maze of countless levels.
A man rose up to strike down the god-kings,
in the process he destroyed everything.

Fire and death and ash and bones,
the fool had saved the world only to destroy his home.
Redemption was something he long sought,
but search as he might he could find naught.

Cursed with a form of Immortality.
by a disease induced divine malady.
He never would find true rest,
as he left his homeland's mess.

So he traveled the land, cursing and praying,
in many far lands twas evil he was slaying.
Though all his words went unanswered,
and his life was never allowed to be pampered.

His search began for a stolen God-king,
but it left quite a bit of a sting.
His failure now totally complete,
he shuffled back to his exhausted feet.

Searching for so many years,
had yielded nothing but new fears.
In vain he had certainly looked,
but regretfully he closed the book.

He found some joy at long last,
in an enemy from a far distant past.
A small snake youth he soon found,
who was at first severely bound.

A young hatchling he was,
but I suppose that was the rub.
Resembling the ones born in kelp,
as he was freed he asked for help.

For over five score years or more,
he trained him like himself years before,
But alas in the end,
he had to lose his friend.

Upon his long time awaited return,
from the land that the dragons were burned,
As the lizard folk who killed his kin,
stood to unjustly accuse him.

They thought the youth was their own,
when an ocean stood between him and his home,
When in fact he had been saved,
from an early uncovered grave.

But no matter our hero was taken,
and his hopes were long forsaken.
When he was sold to the Sons of the North,
without having a chance to fight the hordes.

But soon he could feel it in his cell,
a new threat had arrived but not from hell.
Curious he looked out from the prison,
to notice the stone that had grown an incision.

He looked upon a face that unleashed a breath,
claiming you are destined for more then death.
He told you that you must stop the shadow of the wing,
for you are the one proclaimed Dovahkiin!!

Newer one.

Frigid winter he was,
until he found his dove.
A thousand thoughts then swirl,
all about a single girl.

His heart fit to burst,
he prepared for the worse.
Then he asked her for a kiss,
a chance he could never miss.

From two very different worlds,
understanding soon did unfurl.
And the loved blossomed forth,
Of the cold blooded warmth.
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 7:38 pm

Long ago we ruled our own lands
we were content

Long ago the nords came upon us
we were defeated

Two score centeries down the ages
we simply waited

Empire shattered: a change in the wind
we began to stir

Taking our lands back into our own hands
we were victorious

Held no grudges we ruled the reaches well
we were watchful

Remains of Empire sought parlay with us
we would become a kingdom

Then the evil Nord came with the Thalmor behind him
we were slaughtered

What was left of us, took refuge in remote locations
we licked our wounds

Now we hide waiting for a chance for freedom again
we are despised

Used in plots unending until our king was freed
we rejoiced as reachmen

We will take back our lands from the murdering Nords.
We Are Forsworn.
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 5:59 pm

There once was a man Ulfric Stormcloak,
Whos' servent fed him a tin of baked sload,
Said Ulfric with a frown,
that hurt going down,
Next time take the tin off, bloke.
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 6:48 am

I posted this years ago but seeing as how there's a new topic floating around;
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Past the shore and through the rain
Bitter Coast of rot and pain
To Balmora, Hlaalu's stain
Moon and Star sought once again.

In the guilds of sword and spell
Earned my life and earned my hell
Why I dreamed I could not tell
My own mind became my cell.

Iron's rust and Silver's sheen
One to crush and one to keen
What other horrors I have seen
To earn the name Nerevarine.

To the spire wrapped in red
'I am your friend' the demon said
Many lies I have been fed
Heart and Gods and demon dead.
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 7:16 pm

You may need to get your facts straight though. As I remember M'aiq does not like people being nekked. :deal: :tongue:

In Morrowind he did, in Oblivion he didn't. I will amend it, and add a new verse.

Mai'q was a Khajiit
He wore a helmet of gaudy fur
and lived on an island
He liked nekked people
Except when he didn't

He once met a heroic adventurer
With boots of blinding speed
And a sword from the depths of Oblivion
Who asked about weird crap
and went on to kill Dagoth Ur
Ma'iq thought he was really weird
And was glad to see him get eaten
By angry Tsaesci with scales of gold
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Ludivine Poussineau
 
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Post » Thu May 03, 2012 12:42 am

Love them! I had no clue the first was barenzia. Don't spoil them. Wanted to decrypt them. :smile: Spoiler tags next time?

Thanks a lot. I didn't think someone would guess who the poem was about, that's why I didn't put a spoiler tag :D but yes, maybe next time.
Anyway, lovely poems, everyone! You know what, we should make a Bards College Forum RP.
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Post » Wed May 02, 2012 8:33 pm

Thanks a lot. I didn't think someone would guess who the poem was about, that's why I didn't put a spoiler tag :biggrin: but yes, maybe next time.
Anyway, lovely poems, everyone! You know what, we should make a Bards College Forum RP.
That is actually a very good idea in that you know. If you want to make it we can transplant the poetry placed in this thread and just have that new thread as a place people from the "Bard's College" to post up ideas for songs and poetry and such for attention"critique"
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