Re-making my RP

Post » Fri May 27, 2011 7:28 pm

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3E 427 - A Several Aylied ruins, Important sites for Arceaological research, Cave in. Flashes of bright light can be seen from the ruins before they fall.

3E 433 - Emperor Uriel Septim is assassinated.

3E 434 - After a year of hardship and strife, Aided by his loyal and faithful blades, as well as the Champion of Cyrodil, Martin Septim prevails over Mehrunes Dagon and the mythic dawn, ushering in the 4th era.

4E 010 - Ten years after Martin's sacrifice, Ocato is named Emperor.

4E 011 - The Champion of Cyrodil leads a Crusade against a rebellion in The summerset isles.

4E 012 - All trouble and doubt in the neighbouring provinces is swiftly quelled under the guidance of Ocato, and the might of the Champion, The new emperor gains the love and trust of his people.

4E 015 - After three years of peace and prosperity, the empire suffers its first blow, when the champion of Cyrodil, is murdered, found hanging from the Avatar of Akatosh. An official investigation is launched, several scorch marks are found on the Champions body, the priests and priestesses of the temple are taken in for questioning, they are found innocent, but show signs of being controlled by illusion magics.

4E 015 - two short months after the shocking death of the Champion of Cyrodil, Arch Mage Traven is found dead, his body charred and burned. Although there is no official link between the two murders, many believe it was the same man, or woman, who killed them both. Mannimarco was named as a suspect.

4E 015 - The body of Mannimarco Is found outside the city walls, the legendary staff of worms skewed through his chest, propping him up against the ground. He is officially cleared of suspicion.

4E 015 - three high ranking members of the elder council are found dead within the chambers, Imperial watchmen show signs of being controlled, they are suspended from duty until further notice.

4E 016 - Emperor Ocato receives letter containing a threat upon his own life, the letter containing this information is found upon his nightstand, no signs of forced entry of any intruders are found.

4E 016 - Ocato disappears from the public eye, growing increasingly erratic and paranoid, he orders the execution of all battle mages who have access to the imperial palace.

4E 016 - Ocato has all remaining elder council members executed for treason.

4E 017 - Ocato outlaws the use of magic, with the help of Dwemmer research, large orb like construct are erected throughout the Imperial city, they sense all magical energy and immediately transport anybody wearing the "bonder" ring to their location.

Mages guild is liquidated, all high ranking members become battle mages and the first line of magical enforcement against any unsanctioned magical use within the city.


4E 020 - After three years Ocato regains his confidence, until an attempt upon his life leaves him maimed and wounded, with his last shred of sanity stripped from him, he constructs a man made island several miles out to sea, all magic users are sent there for imprisonment and questioning under torture.
4E 025 - A large Vampire clan grows bold, taking root within the city, many fear them, but many use their services for their own personal gain.

4E 026 - Both the thieves guild and the Dark Brotherhood enter open warfare with the Vampire Clan, although there is no evidence of an alliance between the thieves and the brotherhood, many simply assume that they have an unwritten agreement to stay out of each others way until their competition is defeated.

4E 026 - Many people begin disappearing in the night, naught is known about their disappearances.

* * *



Now

Deep within the bowels of the Imperial City, several bodies begin to stir in their cramped cage's; waking to find themselves within a dark room with a few streams of eerie green light passing through cracks in the walls and ceiling.

The walls of the room are damp and covered in moss, It is easy to tell that it was not intended as a permanent holding room for who ever captured them.
In a distant room the sounds of boiling water can be heard, mingled in with muffled screams and cry's.

Some are forced to endure excruciating pain, some are forced to watch as he slowly peels the skin away from living muscle, exploring the limits of the physical body and the mortal mind. Pushing the boundries of mental endurance to its limit and beyond.

The few prisoners around you do not make eye contact, nor do they try to. The ones who do look at you with fear or curiosity, for they have broken under the mad experiments of their strange captor.

Every noise, save for the now rhythmical beating of the muscle in you're chest, stops the mysterious captor returns to the room.

"Ah, I see you have awoken," He says, throwing his arms wide as if welcoming and long lost friend. "You are my most honoured guests, and I am you're most humble host.

"You must be wondering why you are here, and answers will be given; in due course. But for now, all you need to know is that each one of you play a pivotal role in my quest, and each of you will undoubtedly die in here." he finished with a grimace, walking over to the nearest prisoner.

The caged man looked up into his captors face, but could not discern any human features other than his eyes and lips, the rest where obscured by a leather mask, held in place by thick iron nails.

He meandered from cage to cage, casting the odd spell upon a helpless prisoner, never looking up from his notes, writing down with a sadistic grin on his face, his hand fluttering to and thro in the different movements needed for his experimental magic's.

"Master, there is a disturbance in the northern passage, the thieves have broken through our defences." A gaunt figure spoke into the room, appearing from the shadows as if he was one with them.

"Must they disturb me at every turn! Watch the prisoners, I shall be back once I have dealt with these troublesome upstarts and intruders!"

The gaunt figure stood to the side as the mage passed, before walking forward and twisting a large iron wheel on the wall, simultaneously every cage opened, freeing their occupants.

Without a backwards glance he disappeared back into the shadows.

* * *


First of all apologies for the low quality of the prison scene where you finaly find out who the captor is, I found it hard to write it in a way that included every prisoner rather than narrating to just one, but it gets the picture across.

Now, you play a prisoner who has just been freed, you do not have any items (just yet) since everybody was taken in their sleep, nobody sleeps in full armour with a sword by their side do they now?


Another interesting idea (suggested by Lycan_01) is to implement an amnesia system, these people with it will have their character provided, a bare skeleton of a sheet. I will allow you to pick you're race and gender, that is all. The rest will be decided by me, I will give you some memories which you can build on as the story progresses and you regain you're memories. Each person will have one event in their life in common, the event will become obvious when you read the character sheets.

If you decide to submit an Amnesia character I suggest you submit an alternate sheet to.

The Captor is searching for something within the minds our characters, the reason you have amnesia is because he has perverted the way you're mind works. It is all still their, but you're brain doesn't know where to look.

Now those without amnesia are safe for the most part because they do not have the information he desires. But you will be hunted like animals and tortured like traitors until he realises it is not there, so don't go thinking "Why join if I don't have amnesia? Theres nothing for me to do?" Because there will be plenty.


There are factions open, for obvious reasons the Mages guild is not available, any mage characters will have to be from outside the imperial city.

The factions available are

Thieves guild and dark brotherhood (working together)

Order of the shadow (a vampire clan with connections to the captor, more details on when you can join and who they are will be provided at a later date)

You don't have to join the factions since they will be used to progress the story either way.

The way the story is progressed depends on you're character, if he goes with the thieves guild it will be a good path so to speak, but if he works with the vampires he will be working with the captor.

The map we will be using for the Imperial City can be found http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j76/Titus-lord/TheImpeiralCity.jpg (all Credits go to Lord_Tidus for the exceptionally detailed and lore accurate sketch)




Ok so I posted this up last year, it managed to get to 8 pages in a short time but unfortunately I had to leave due to the fact that I was without an internet connection for a long time while at uni, and when I did get back it was well and truly dead.

So I'm reposting it because I feel it has a lot of untapped potential and I would love some opinions on how to build on it, what should and shouldn't change and so forth.

I'd also like to know roughly how many people will be willing to join since the forums are far from busy atm.


Discuss :D
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Emily Shackleton
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 8:38 pm

I would love to play in this game. It sounds like it will be immensely enjoyable
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Charles Weber
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 11:07 pm

I do admit this one had potential.

Hopefully if you were re-open it you could fill the spots of the RP'er calibur from the last one.

I'm undecided if I will join however. :P To many RP's at the moment.....
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DAVId MArtInez
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 3:57 pm

I will join as a amnesia character, if you wish.
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Phillip Brunyee
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 8:24 pm

I do admit this one had potential.

Hopefully if you were re-open it you could fill the spots of the RP'er calibur from the last one.

I'm undecided if I will join however. :P To many RP's at the moment.....

Bsparrow, Illusionary, FC4..

And myself ofcourse :stare:

yep, had some good people in it.
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Claudia Cook
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 1:19 pm

Where was I when this was happening? This sounds like an awesome RP, I'll definitely join, more likely as an Amnesia character :foodndrink:

And what ever happened to Illusionary and BSparrow anyway? I don't see FC4 around as much as I used to either.
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vanuza
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 12:23 pm

Yep, it does sound cool to me too :) Dont know if I will be joining it, school might get in the way, atleast for a week.

Also, I know about Illusionary and FC.

Simply, FC's cheating on us with life. =/
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 1:02 pm

Yep, it does sound cool to me too :) Dont know if I will be joining it, school might get in the way, atleast for a week.

Also, I know about Illusionary and FC.

Simply, FC's cheating on us with life. =/


How could he!? :stare:

Damn him! I fart in your general direction!
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 8:01 am

Well, I'm not sure I can compare to BSparrow, FC or Illusionary, but.. I'll join if'n you'll have me. Looks well written, sounds like it's got some planning already done and seems like a jolly good lot of fun. I'd be happy to submit an Amnesiac and a regular char. I've got an idea in mind for a regular character, someone I've been itching to use somewhere something fierce, so you can send me the basic bits of my Amnesia one. Just make sure you explain in detail what I can and cannot do with the latter so I don't get carried away. :P

EDIT: I will need to know the current year, though, so I get my non-amnesia's age right.

EDIT 2: Any details you can provide for how both of them may have been tortured would be helpful too. :evil:
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 12:51 pm

I'm in, if only because thats the opening scene from BG 2 :D , seriously though it sounds awesome the amnesiac thing sounds interesting
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 11:31 am

I'd join, I like the amnesia idea, and the plot seems quite interesting. :)
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 12:03 pm

Well, I'm not sure I can compare to BSparrow, FC or Illusionary, but.. I'll join if'n you'll have me. Looks well written, sounds like it's got some planning already done and seems like a jolly good lot of fun. I'd be happy to submit an Amnesiac and a regular char. I've got an idea in mind for a regular character, someone I've been itching to use somewhere something fierce, so you can send me the basic bits of my Amnesia one. Just make sure you explain in detail what I can and cannot do with the latter so I don't get carried away. :P

EDIT: I will need to know the current year, though, so I get my non-amnesia's age right.

EDIT 2: Any details you can provide for how both of them may have been tortured would be helpful too. :evil:


You will have portions of you're memory, vague recolections but nothing in great detail.. I'll dig around in my pm box and show you Bsparrows Character sheer, she used an amnesia character and it was a good sheet.

The guy tortures people to unlock information which is magically stored in you're mind, there is more than one way to get the information out. But he tortures because its theo nly way he knwos how. To break the mind is to break the lock.

And i'll go in to the gory little details about his torturing techniques if i put it up.

Lets just say that my character Almerion, who once tortured a Redguard by corkscrewing his knee cap and peeling the skin off his feet and systematically cutting his tendons.. Has nothing on the antagonist in this story :) makes him look like a bad tempered kitten.
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 9:56 am

You will have portions of you're memory, vague recolections but nothing in great detail.. I'll dig around in my pm box and show you Bsparrows Character sheer, she used an amnesia character and it was a good sheet.

The guy tortures people to unlock information which is magically stored in you're mind, there is more than one way to get the information out. But he tortures because its theo nly way he knwos how. To break the mind is to break the lock.

And i'll go in to the gory little details about his torturing techniques if i put it up.

Lets just say that my character Almerion, who once tortured a Redguard by corkscrewing his knee cap and peeling the skin off his feet and systematically cutting his tendons.. Has nothing on the antagonist in this story :) makes him look like a bad tempered kitten.

Hot damn! More fodder for making my characters suffer! How lovely!

*ahem*

I uh.. I mean.. how very, very terrible. Yes, terrible. :shifty:
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 3:38 pm

Sounds like a great Rp, I'm up for it. Most likely as one of the vampires though, I haven't played as an evil character for soooooo long. Just thinking of the things my character will do... mwahahahaha I SHALL DESTROY YOU ALL!!!! Oh dam I said that out loud didn't I? Not cool....
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 10:37 am

Sounds like a great Rp, I'm up for it. Most likely as one of the vampires though, I haven't played as an evil character for soooooo long. Just thinking of the things my character will do... mwahahahaha I SHALL DESTROY YOU ALL!!!! Oh dam I said that out loud didn't I? Not cool....


Its not a case of starting off as one of the Vampire clan, its a case of what you do after escaping the prison that decides who you work with, if any one.
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 9:50 pm

I'll join with a new amnesia character. I remember the rules for them, (I think). You may have to refresh me on that. I'm trying to start off slowly back into RPing, and may not even have the energy to make a char for it, but I'll try. Just don't expect brilliance from me (wherever that idea came from in the first place). :) It was a really good RP, and has a great premise.
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 12:05 pm

Wellity wellity well, look who's back! Good to see ya IN :foodndrink:

When are you planning on getting this up Solidor? Sounds like it's going to be pretty awesome :)
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 9:38 am

Damn, this RP sounds tempting. I'm sick of joining RPs that go nowhere. The fact that this one died once and people are interested in it again, well... And I don't even have to make up a character...
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 8:07 am

I'd like to join - the casting is too fine to ignore. But I can't entirely garantee i'll have enough spare time to do it justice, that's why I left maybe while hoping for a yes. I'm thinking about playing as one of the captives, though not an amnesiac one.
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 9:35 am

Right, got my character ready (just a re-make of Kaye Stacey from the previous one, my creative energies are low). Get this up soon, would ya?
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 8:43 am

I might, or might not, join. Depends on how creative I feel...
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Maybe. I'm not really sure.
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Jerry Cox
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 10:48 am

How exestensive and seriously enforced is the ban on magic ?

If it's complete and without any distinction between schools of magic, several races (altmers, bretons and maybe dunmers) would find themselves outlawed as just about everyone of them has learned basics in one or more schools of magic and knows a few minor spells.
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 5:28 pm

I know who I'm gonna use for my non-amnesia, but I need the base for my amnesiac, Solidor. I'll work on the normal guy first, but that won't take me long. Most of him was created long before I saw this..
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 7:08 pm

This looks really well planned, perhaps one of the best I have seen recently. So where is the outline Character Sheet that we can use, I will try an Amnesia character as it looks interesting and maybe try it with an old character I haven't used in a loooooooong time. That is if I still have his sheet....
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