Maxical's Journey

Post » Tue May 17, 2011 11:34 am

Links to Story:


Maxical's Journey - A New Sun Rises - (Chapters 1 - 23)

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A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey II - (Chapters 24 - 36)

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A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey III - (Chapters 37 - 50)

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A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey IV - (Chapters 51 - 65)

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A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey V - (Chapters 66 - 85)

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A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey VI - (Chapters 86 - ??)


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*****


After reading the Journals of Buffy the Bowgirl by Acadian; Angel by Bobg; and Arwen by Arwen - I was inspired (and outright pushed into it by Acadian) to write the story of my current Oblivion character.

As I am writing the story while playing the character in the game, the story has been subject to a glitch that occurred early on in game that ended up with some hilarious consequences. Rather than restart the game, I stuck by my character and wrote these changes in. The result has turned out to be one of my most interesting games yet, (barring the first game of course).

All my early role play always started in the jail cell, with no clue as to how she got there. Arwen showed me the error of this, as did Acadian, whose story of Buffy's life before going to jail was fascinating!

This character is the youngest I have ever played, so it took some doing to get her into jail, and the changes the game glitch caused took the story through some twists and turns I never would have expected.

I love this story and hope you will too.




If you prefer to read the full story (to date) without wading through the comments and critiques you can find it here, along with a link to Maxical's Myspace page to view all the pictures that go along with the story. The title of her story on there is "A New Sun Rises"


http://www.fanfiction.net/~malx





Maxical's Journey - A New Sun Rises

Chapter 1: The Beginning


It has always been known that the birth of an albino child is a curse to the family that bore it. It is no superstition, I am living proof of that. We are said to be a jinx to those who dare love us, and again I can testify to the truth of that.

The death of my parents on the roads of Cyrodiil, well, maybe the Gods granted them that peace that they may no longer suffer the shame of my existence. A Minotaur Lord slew them, and would have killed me as well had it not been for the Imperial Legionnaire that arrived in the nick of time. He said I stood over the bodies of my parents with fists raised to the beast, challenging it; my hair and fur spiked out so far he couldn't even tell what I was.

Imperial tongues aren't readily equipped to say Khajiit names, so when I tried to tell him mine, me being only two years old at the time; it is understandable that the Legionnaire wrote down "Maxical" instead of Ma'Thjizzrini Qa which roughly translates to "What the hell did we do to deserve this child," the Ma' being a female child.

From that day on I was Maxical to all but the Legionnaire. He nicknamed me "Little Red Warrior," the red being for the shock of red hair that was in extreme contrast to the snowy whiteness everywhere else on me. It looked like when I was created the Gods forgot to add any color at all, and then at the last minute noticed and poured it all on my head. Maybe they just couldn't make up their minds or argued in my making. The Legionnaire said that red hair would give me a temper, and I found out later he was right. I do have a temper. So I am a bad tempered albino. Oh, and Khajiit are considered 'beast species,' let's not forget. Sometimes the Gods just don't know when to quit.

Being a freak of nature makes it hard to be placed for adoption. They could have tried to place a rat and it would have found a home quicker than I did. I've seen mud crabs more welcome. When enough doors are slammed in your face, you get the message.

I don't fault the Legionnaire for what he did next, it's not unusual to hide away those born with deformity, people have been doing it since time began. He found an abandoned house in the wilderness and placed me there, and stayed there with me until he found a girl who would care for me.

The girl was a thief, caught with a stolen loaf of bread. She was lean from hunger and wearing the ragged sack cloth pants and shirt some prisoner had tossed on his release. The clothes were far bigger than she, and were only held in place by a rope twisted around them and tied in a knot. The Legionnaire brought her to me at the abandoned house. I was never sure if she liked me or just wanted the roof over her head and food in her stomach, but she was good to me.

'My guard,' (as I began calling him) made frequent trips out to that abandoned house for the next three years. Each time he arrived he would carry in his pack, making a show of opening it in front of us, revealing the treasures he brought us. He would reach in his pack very slowly to add suspense, then tease us to guess what it might be he was going to pull out. When we were squealing with delight he would pull an item out for each of us. The girl always got a dress, for me it was sweet rolls and strawberries. Then he would stock the pantry with food for us. The days of his visits were our favorite days.

He would tell us stories about the Imperial City and things that happened there. I always thought it must be a huge magical place and would dream about him taking me there one day to see all the things he had described.

Then he would take me outside and teach me to fight. He said one day I would have to know how. He never said the words "because you are an albino," but I knew what he meant. I loved the lessons though. It felt good that there was something we did together when he came, just him and me. It was very lonely back in those woods, just me and that girl. We spent a lot of time watching the ridge to see if his horse was making its way down it.

By the time I was five years old I could easily handle a mud crab or rat by myself. My guard was pleased with how well I had learned how to fight, and said he had a very special present for me. I followed him to his horse and he opened the saddlebag up and reached in. Then he turned around and started teasing me to guess what it was. When he finally pulled it out, I gasped! It was a silver dagger! He placed it in my hands and I held it up to the sky and watched as the sun played along the blade of it, gleaming and reflecting. Nothing could have been any more beautiful! That was the last time I ever saw my guard.

I still have that dagger to this day, it is my only keepsake of that time and I treasure it. When I am trying to remember that time of my life I will still to this day hold it up to the sun and watch the light shine off it, hoping it will reveal the secrets of my past, my life.

My last day in that house came not long after that. It is a day I will never forget. I was out picking plants for dinner at the old abandoned Priory of the Nine next door - well actually, that was what I was sent out to do. What I was really doing was playing with the dagger my guard had given me.

When I finally wandered home the girl was lying in the yard covered in blood. I tried calling her name, but she didn't move. I was inching toward her when suddenly the door of the house opened and a bandit came out.

The bandit chased me into the woods. I could hear his crashing attempts to beat through the brush that I could slide under. I cut over to the Priory and climbed the ladder to the top of the chapel to watch his progress, but he must have given up. Those woods are tricky if you aren't familiar. Eventually I crawled back down the ladder made my way up the steep hill behind the house. The bandits had taken over, there was no going back home.

***

All I could think of was finding my guard, which meant finding the Imperial City. I climbed up to the ridge we always saw him descend from and just started walking from there. There were no trails to guide me, nor was the moonlight bright enough for sight after darkness descended on the forest. But I was still walking when the sun arose again the next morning.

When I first saw the fort tower rising high above the trees I thought it was the Imperial City. I ran then, even though my legs were aching. When I reached that tower though, it was no magical city like I had expected. It was big, ugly, and I could hear a wolf in the tower enclosure. I ran away from it quicker than I had run to it. I had thought it would be a beautiful place filled with nice people like my guard, now where could I go? Years later I learned that was Fort Blackboot.

I kept running till my legs ached and I was stumbling, then I slowed to a walk. I had wet myself and the legs of my pants were clinging to me, making it hard to walk. When you are scared you don't take the time to stop for things like that. I was starving, and had cried so much that my eyes were swollen almost shut. My hair was tangled and filled with sticks and briars; my white fur now a filthy brown and matted. I may have wet myself again at some point because my pants legs were now twisting around me and felt cold and damp against my skin.

Suddenly a faint odor tickled my nose. I lifted my face up to catch the scent. Just a hint of something that smelled like food, home cooking. With my nose in the air I followed the aroma, stumbling for not watching my feet's path. I didn't care, I was starving. The delicious wafting scent was getting stronger now, and I could feel myself beginning to drool. I started running, still stumbling.

By the time I reached the Faregyl Inn I was drooling heavily and probably looked like a mad cat foaming at the mouth. I followed the scent right to the Inn and pounded on the door, demanding they let me in. When the door was opened I flew in. Spying a plate of breads on the table I climbed on it in all my filth and started cramming the breads into my mouth. That is where I met the woman who has raised me ever since.

Her name is S'Jirra, and what I smelled was her famous potato bread. She always teased me about that, saying "The smell of my potato bread cooking brought you all the way from the West Weald!"

Right from the start S'Jirra loved me as if I were her own. She never cared that I was white; she may have even loved me if I had been an Argonian or something. I love her too. S'Jirra is a Khajiit just like me - well, except she is not an albino.

Alix Lencolia is a Blademaster, and he is S'Jirra's boyfriend, although they never introduce themselves as such and would flatly deny it if confronted. They never married because Alix is a Breton, and social strictures against mixed couples being what they are Alix didn't want S'Jirra suffering from other people's snide comments. Alix isn't the type to worry about what other people think, but he will go through the planes of Oblivion itself for those he loves. So everyone is given to understand Alix is an adventurer traveling around, but he never leaves us. I never once came in that he wasn't home.

Alix is quiet, so people think he is a snob, but they are wrong. He talks when he has something to say, he just doesn't waste words the rest of the time. He's different around us though, teasing and laughing when it is just the family at home. Alix winks at me and calls me his "little kit," and I still like that even now that I am older.

Alix and I have a special bond that goes deep. He never gets mad at me no matter what I do, nor trouble I get in (or cause), not even for my temper. He says my red hair makes me like a wild horse, full of spirit, and that my spirit should never be broken.

When I told Alix about my home near the Priory he went there and killed those bandits. Then he buried the girl that had taken care of me. He said she deserved that much.

When I showed Alix my blade skills he was impressed. "bring me a mud crab or rat and I will show you a good fight!" I bragged. Alix laughed at me, but he taught me everything he could about blades. By the time I was twelve years old I could handle a blade against almost anything around that Inn.

S'Jirra and Alix always wanted a child of their own, even prayed to Akatosh for a child. They called me their gift from the Gods, and they both doted on me, even after they saw how I behaved. The Gods couldn't have sent me to a better home.

***

Abhuki is the owner of the Faregyl, and the Innkeeper. She calls S'Jirra and Alix 'regulars' but treats them more like family. Abhuki is a Khajiit too and she is very funny. She never means to be, and is always surprised when we are all in stitches by something she has said. Abhuki has an opinion about everything and she is extremely blunt.

Another 'regular' is an Imperial Legion Forester. He tried to teach me some things about archery and even let me practice some with his bow till I accidentally stuck him with an arrow once. That was the end of my archery lessons, but he finally forgave me for it.

When you have lived in isolation as long as I have, the open world of an Inn is like finding yourself in another realm. People come and go daily for meals or a room for the night, so many different experiences and personalities, each one a new adventure or treasure to discover. I found I loved meeting people. And people didn't seem to mind me being an albino when they weren't being asked to welcome me into their homes.

The Legionnaires stop in for lunch all the time as well. I have looked for my guard among them, hoping one day he would come in.

When I first came to the Inn, S'Jirra said a guard had come in for a meal, and I ran to him crying and clutched his leg. He may have worn the same armor as my guard, possibly looked like him. After that happened S'Jirra started keeping me out of sight when the guards came in to eat. I think she was afraid that one day my guard would come and take me away from her. After I got older she no longer kept me away, and I have always tried to be available when the Legionnaires dined. I have long since forgotten what my guard looks like, but I'm sure I could easily be recognized by him, even with my baby fur molted off I am still an albino Khajiit, how many could there be?


I guess I just wanted to thank him for caring about me when the rest of the world would have left me to die, ask him he ever thought about me still. When you are born albino, you know most of the world is going to be against you, so you want to cling to the ones that are on your side.






*** The abandoned house in the wilderness:

http://www.uesp.net/w/images/images.new/6/62/OB_Isolated_House.jpg

*** The old abandoned Priory of the Nine:

http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/oblivion/images/e/ea/PrioryoftheNine.jpg


*** S'Jirra:

http://www.uesp.net/w/images/images.new/1/1d/OB-npc-S%27jirra.jpg

*** Alix Lencolia:

http://www.uesp.net/w/images/images.new/1/1c/OB-NPC-Alix_Lencolia.jpg
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Chapter 2: The Imperial City



There was never much magic going on at the Faregyl Inn, so I never learned much. S'Jirra and Alix were discussing it a lot after I went to bed.

A child always knows when their parents are discussing them. It's like the calm before the storm, a tangible quiet in the air and you know they are keeping their voices down deliberately so you don't hear them.

I crept down the hallway and listened at the top of the stairs, it's the only way to find out something you want to know. Sure enough it was me they were talking about. Khajiit don't whisper quietly, I could hear S'Jirra clearly. When Alix talked it was just like the low rumble of thunder in the distance, I couldn't make out a word he said.

"I can't teach her something I don't know, we have to send her to school."

"Rumble rumble"

"Well she has to learn sometime. We can't wait till she is much older."

"Rumble rumble"

"Well I'm going to talk to him, it can't hurt"

"Rumble rumble"

I leaned over the top step straining my ears to hear what Alix was saying and lost my balance, tumbling down the stairs.

"What are you discussing about me behind my back? I'm not going away to any school, I don't want to!" I always figured the offensive is best when you are caught doing something wrong.

"What are you doing up?" Alix asked, his face a pinkish shade from being caught in a discussion he wanted no part of in the first place.

S'Jirra took the bull by the horns. "None of us know enough about magic to teach you what you will need to know when you get out on your own. You need to get a real education like the other girls your age. You need to go to school."

"But I'm only twelve! I won't be old enough to even leave the house for?(I was trying to count in my head). Realizing I was putting my case at a disadvantage I stopped quickly and went back on the attack.

"I don't need to know any more than Alix does, if he didn't need to learn it why should I?" I had caught the look on Alix's face and knew I had an ally.

"Besides, I won't be out on my own, I plan to stay right here and work in this Inn when I get old enough." I threw in as an afterthought. That was my mistake. Suddenly my ally was rethinking his position.

"Come here little kit," Alix patted his lap. I did, and sat down still believing he was on my side. Alix gave me a hug and stroked my hair for a minute before shattering that image.

"See Maxical, it was different for me. I had to go out and fight to survive. I didn't have a choice. A tiny thing like you needs to be able to fight with magic and protect herself. You'll meet girls your own age too, something you've never been able to do in this Inn. And I won't see you as a servant in an Inn, so you can get that right out of your head."

Alix effectively argued S'Jirra's point for her. She sat down and let him run with it.

"It's because I'm an albino, isn't it! You think people will pick on me? I will run them through with my sword! I don't need magic for that." I said sullenly, angry at myself for having changed Alix's stand on the issue.

"That sword isn't going to heal you when you are hit, little spitfire." Alix said firmly. All was lost when Alix got firm. Alix called me a spitfire when I was being stubborn, so it didn't look good for me.

I had one more card left and I played it. "You are really going to send me away? I won't ever see you, how can you do that to me?" I sobbed, and then threw myself onto his shoulder crying. It wasn't fake, I couldn't stand the thought of being away from them.

That was Alix's downfall. That had been his whole argument with S'Jirra. He cried with me then, shortly followed by S'Jirra. A minute later a howling was heard from behind the counter and Abhuki pulled herself up from her mat. She tottered over to us wailing, and we all sat there crying.

I entwined my arms around Alix's neck as if I could anchor myself there and no one could remove me, and just kept sobbing, "Please don't send me away, please. How can I live without you?"

Alix glanced over at S'Jirra, he was devastated.

"Maxical, go on to bed now, we will talk about this some other time. We all have some thinking to do. No decision will be made tonight anyway." S'Jirra said. She would never be able to get me in school if Alix folded.

For the next week I got no sleep. I strained my ears constantly to hear if they discussed it again. During that week S'Jirra was trying to show me some restoration spell. She wasn't good at it herself, and I was much worse. She told me to practice it a lot.

Somewhere in my mind I thought that meant I had won, and would not be going away to school. So I practiced it every time I saw S'Jirra look my way. I know her greatest fear was that I would need to protect myself one day, being an albino. The thing is, I could never see myself ever wanting to leave here. It was my home. And Alix and S'Jirra I never wanted to be away from. They were the only family I had.

The day Fathis Aren stopped in for some potato bread, he saw me practicing what S'Jirra had taught me, and he laughed at me in a snide way, his lip curling in disdain at my puny attempts. Fathis Aren was a Court Mage for the Castle Bravil and was supposed to be famous for his conjuration. I was embarrassed by his smirk and immediately stopped practicing.

S'Jirra's face was the hardest thing though. It embarrassed her and it hurt her feelings. She was doing the best she could.

She went inside with Fathis while I sat outside daydreaming about Fathis Aren adorning the end of my sword (actually in my vision it was Alix's long sword; which looked much more satisfying than my little dagger piercing Fathis Aren's bloated chest).

Unbeknownst to me S'Jirra and Fathis Aren where planning my future. Fathis spent the night that night, which meant Alix slept in the tiny basemant room instead of with S'Jirra.

The next day when Fathis was getting ready to leave S'Jirra came down with a bag packed. She took my hand and brought me downstairs.

"You are going to go with Fathis, he is going to take you to the Arcane University with him. Now you go along and behave, make Alix proud of you."

I couldn't believe my ears! I jerked my hand loose and ran to the basemant door and pounded on it yelling for Alix. I tried the handle and it was locked.

"Alix don't let them do this to me, please Alix! I can't ?please Alix." I was crying harder than I ever remember crying in my life but there was no sound from the other side of the door.

All my crying did was to hurt S'Jirra's heart, but she wouldn't change her mind. It was time I went to school.

"I'll never forgive you for this!" Those were my last words to S'Jirra that day.

I had to leave with Fathis Aren, that bloated blue pompous boar. I was angry at S'Jirra, because if it was up to Alix I wouldn't be leaving. And I hated Fathis Aren for ruining my life. I was surprised his horse's belly didn't drag the ground carrying that bloated windbag.

Fathis made me walk on foot while he rode a beautiful black horse too. You would think he would have walked and let me ride, but no! The whole way to the Arcane University I was glaring at the back of his head, casting darts with my eyes. If I had known any real spells I would have been casting them into the back of his head. I was in a rage, and considered just running away. Twice I veered off the path a bit so it would look accidental if I suddenly wasn't behind him; thinking I could run when he got a ways ahead. Both times I turned my feet back onto the path.

It wasn't just the fear of being homeless again; and it wasn't just the thought of Alix and S'Jirra, I mean they did raise me better than how I was acting. It was both these thoughts; and it was Fathis Aren too. There was something about him, a look in his eyes maybe? I don't know, but I was afraid to cross him. So my fate for the next 6 years was to be a student at the Arcane University.

I could see the Imperial City from the road long before we ever got near the bridge that led over to it. It was bigger than I had ever imagined.

"Coo!" I kept saying, that was all I could get out. For a moment I forgot I was mad about being here.

The bridge leading into the city was huge and really high over the land and water. I was scared I would fall over the sides of the bridge and grabbed on to Fathis' horses tail, gripping it for dear life.

We had to go through a huge gate after Fathis stabled his horse. When the gate shut behind us I just stood there with my mouth cocked. I was stunned at the size of it. I had never seen anything so big in my life! The faint memory of how I used to believe the Imperial City was a magic place came back in full force now, it really must be. It could not be real, it was too big, too many people. The buildings touched the sky, and then some. And there were guards everywhere! My guard has to be here! I envisioned him yanking me from Fathis Aren and shoving his Imperial sword right through him.

I was staring at everything, and suddenly I noticed everyone was staring at me, too. A little white Khajiit, looking around at everything with my mouth gaped open like I had no wits left - I began to feel really small, and a helpless feeling I hadn't felt since I was alone in those woods at 5 years old came over me.

My rage at that hateful Fathis Aren grew so hot then that I could feel the heat of it burning my eyes as I glared at him in front of me. How could he bring me here and subject me to these people who instantly despised what they saw in me? I hated every one of them who stared at me like I was a freak, and I let the rage show in my eyes. I noticed some of them backing away in fear then, so I must have looked pretty scary, small or not, and even with the tears streaking down my cheeks and matting my fur and whiskers. Or maybe I just looked mad - not angry mad, but insane mad - I know I felt like I was going to go insane if these people did not stop staring at me like that.

Khajiit have powers we are born with, I knew I had what S'Jirra called the 'Eye of Khajiit' power. It is supposed to cause enemies to flee in fear of you. I had never used it before that I know of, or can remember, but S'Jirra said I had it. Maybe that is why those people suddenly jumped back from me, I must have used it. Maybe that is what that burning feeling in my eyes had been?

"Maybe I could use it on Fathis and frighten him away!" The idea struck my mind like a bolt of lightning!

I started squinting my eyes trying to make it happen again. Nothing. A weakness started flooding over me. It must have taken a lot of power out of me, that plus my rage and the long trek here. I felt drained suddenly, and my legs began to feel like rubber. I stumbled, then stumbled again.

Fathis Aren turned and looked at me. I'm not sure what he saw, but for a split second he had a kind look on his face, a nice look; like what I was used to seeing from S'Jirra and Alix. In a split second the look was gone and replaced by that perpetual bored look he had worn since I first laid eyes on him. I used every ounce of strength I had to pull myself up and hold my head up. We started walking again.

It felt like I might collapse, so what strength I had left I used to keep my feet moving. I started raising my feet higher than I normally would, marching like I saw some of the Imperial guards do as we walked through the city.

Suddenly everything started swirling around in a funny way, and then I saw the road coming at me. Then everything went dark.

When I awoke I was in Fathis Aren's arms, he was carrying me! That hateful man was actually touching my fur! I could feel his breath wafting through my whiskers, and I wanted to scream! I stiffened up, and then decided it might be better to just pretend to still be blacked out. I let my head loll back and my arms droop down.

"Little minx" Fathis said quietly.

I started to glare and then remembered I was supposed to be blacked out. He was surprisingly strong for such a gas bag, and carried me easily in his arms. I could have been a sack of flour for all the notice he took of my weight.

Keeping my eyelids down, I peeped out under my lashes and saw we were crossing a bridge over some water. He wavered like he was going to the edge of the bridge. Was he going to throw me in? I mean, I couldn't swim if he did! In fear that he would actually pitch me over the side of the bridge I grabbed hold of the front of his coat and clung to it for dear life, giving up my pretended blackout.

Fathis Aren glanced down and saw the damage my claws were doing to his gorgeous clothing, and he removed my hand from his elegant outfit.

"Oh no, he is going to throw me in!" I thought, panicked. I put my arms around his neck and clung to him. "Don't throw me in the water, please! I can't swim!" I started really crying then and wrapped my arms even tighter around his neck.

Fathis Aren looked down at me. At first he looked startled, then a combination of amusemant and that kind look I had seen earlier seemed to flicker in his eyes.

"Throw you in the water? Why would I want to throw you in, silly girl? Look, we are here at the gates to the University!" Fathis chucked me gently under my chin as spoke, and his voice was gentle.

I looked where he was pointing at the huge gate in front of us. Still afraid, I kept my arms wound tightly around his neck while he carried me the rest of the way. We entered the University that way, and he didn't set me down (or rather I didn't release my hold on his neck) till we got inside a circular building.

There were a few people in there, and they did stare at me, but not in the same way as the townspeople had. These people looked intrigued, interested. Not like I was a freak.

Fathis Aren spoke to someone called Raminus Polus for a few minutes, and then he took my hand and led me over to a raised pink circle on the floor.

"Are you ready?" He asked in that same kind voice.

"Ready for Whaaa?" my voice rose up into a cry and I clung to him. There was a rushing sound in my ears, and then suddenly it felt like we were flying. Seconds later we were in another room, and a kindly Imperial man was smiling at me. I let go of Fathis Aren and ran off that pink circle and across the room. I did not want to ride that thing again!

The kindly man was called Hannibal Traven, and he was the Arch Mage of the University. I would have never expected someone in such a high position to be as nice to me as he was. He didn't seem to notice I was a Khajiit at all, no less an albino one.

Seeing as I was so young, a mentor was chosen for me. Her name is Tar-Meena. She is an Argonian. It was my first sighting of an Argonian, her face had every color imaginable on it, it looked like something I may have done and gotten in trouble for. But she was nice. She helped me go down that pink circle thing, and laughed when I clung to her.

Fathis Aren was waiting when we got to the room below. He said, "I have to go now, but you will be in good hands here with Tar-Meena. I want you to take your studies seriously now, and I will stop in and check on how you are doing. I expect to hear you are doing well, this is a wonderful opportunity for you. I hope we can be friends by the next time I come." Then he gently brushed my cheek with his palm and left.

Tar-Meena held my hand while I watched him walk out the door, and then she led me to our room in the basemant of the Mages living quarters. She talked the whole way.

"Fathis has bestowed a great honor on you by paying for your education like this."

"Fathis is paying for my school?" I asked stunned. "I thought S'Jirra was paying for it with the sale of her potato bread."

"No, Fathis has paid for a full scholarship for you till you graduate. He is a very powerful wizard and is the Court Mage for the Castle Bravil, a very trusted and respectable position."

That impressed Tar-Meena at least. Well, I admit I was beginning to be a bit impressed too.





*** The Imperial City:

http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/oblivion/images/6/62/ImperialCity.jpg

*** The Arcane University:

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*** Fathis Aren - I hate him!

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*** Arch Mage Traven:

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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 2:32 am

Chapter 3A: School Years



My first letters home were addressed only to Alix, in some part because I was still mad. A lot of the reason was because I felt bad about my last words to S'Jirra. I just didn't know how to take them back.

In the letters I berated Alix for not being there to say goodbye to me, begged to come home, promised everything I could think of, including good behavior which I am sure they knew was a promise I couldn't keep. Alix wrote me back and I could see tear stains on the paper where the ink was blotted. That tore my heart.

After that letter I decided to make the best of things and write them letters on how well I was doing instead. I didn't want Alix crying. Well, to be honest when I first wrote him I did want him to cry so he would come get me, but since I wasn't getting out of here, I needed to stop hurting Alix.

Once I stopped trying to get Alix to come and bring me home I really started to enjoy being in school. Then I wrote to Alix and S'Jirra both, and even apologized to S'Jirra for what I had said to her.

Having friends my age, I never knew how much fun it would be! I have made some good friends and we have only gotten in trouble a few times.

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My Dearest Alix and S'Jirra -

You may be getting a letter from Raminus Polus, but I am not writing because I am in trouble this time.

Raminus Polus is upset by something that occurred, but there has been no proof that I am involved. Tar-Meena sleeps heavily, and so she could not say whether I had left my bed when someone entered the upstairs Mage apprentice quarters and dipped all their hands in warm water while they slept.

Since they could not prove who did it we were all forced to wash the sheets and air the mattresses. So if you get a letter from Raminus, you don't have to worry that I am in trouble. Besides, he was just mad because he was sleeping in there too and may have suffered some embarrassment.

If you want to you can tear up any letters from the school that aren't from me.

I miss you both and hope you are well. Love, M

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My Dearest Alix and S'Jirra -

If you get a letter from Irlav Jarol, please do not worry that I will be expelled. We all have boot blacking, I'm not the only one that had a tin of it. Alix, it does eventually wear out of skin, does it not? Everything is fine here other than that.

If you just tear up any letters that are not from me you will have less worries.

I miss you both and hope you are well. Love, M

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My Dearest Alix and S'Jirra -

If you get a letter from Raminus Polus then he is just being spiteful. Not everyone can get the hang of conjuration their first semester. Besides that no one was hurt.

Oh, and speaking of hurt, several of my classmates had to go to the chapel for healing. My professor says I can cast destruction spells with the pros but with my aim I should side with the enemy.

Also, I was forced to drop out of Archery class. Please don't tell the Forester, it may bring up some bad memories.

I hope you are just throwing away any mail they send you without reading it. I can tell you if anything important happens.

I miss you both and hope you are well. Love, M

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My Dearest Alix and S'Jirra -


First off, I am not writing because I have gotten into trouble. Other than the watermelon incident in which no one could prove it was me because - well never mind. Irlav Jarol just always thinks everything that happens to him it must have been me that did it.

Back to what I wrote you to say, I am just writing to ask you a question. Please put a check mark in the box below that is the truth.

If letters come from the University that I haven't written, do you read them?



Yes ___________ NO _____________


Please check off the correct box and send this letter back to me. This is important, so please hurry and get it back to me as soon as possible!

I miss you both and hope you are well. Love, M



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My Dearest Alix and S'Jirra -

You may be receiving a letter from Arch Mage Traven and possibly the Imperial Legion, but you can ignore it.

Fathis Aren has already taken care of the guard with a large check and made a large donation to the Arcane University. Besides, we were just borrowing the horse, not stealing it. The horse wasn't hurt at all, and the guard said he will press no charges since Fathis paid him so well. I had to clean up the manure in Arch Mage Traven's bedroom, so I've already been punished. Oh, and Fathis replaced the Arch Mage's blanket with one much nicer, since the horse chewed the old one.

Fathis was not mad, he did that thing with his lips that you do Alix, when you don't want someone to know you are smiling. Alix, it was just an experiment, not a prank, I promise.

Arch Mage Traven said he has begun praying to Akatosh for me to graduate. He said I have high spirits. When he is mad he might mean that but he doesn't stay mad at me long if nothing else is brought to his attention.

I miss you both and hope you are well. Love, M

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My Dearest Alix and S'Jirra -

You may be receiving a letter from Arch Mage Traven and Irlav Jarol. I already wrote Fathis and asked him to pay for the window in the Arch Mage's tower. I was not aiming at his window so was able to honestly tell Arch Mage Traven that it was an accident. Irlav Jarol is just being mean, I am sure he has a dozen robes just like that one. How he thinks I can get his robe down from there, I don't know.

My best friend is Delphine Jend, and she has asked me to come visit her in Bravil after I graduate. She said she may help me get on with the Mages Guild there. She says she is destined for great things and I believe her. She is a lot of fun. She has a blue velvet dress that is almost as nice as Fathis's clothing. I hope I can have a dress like that some day. (hint, hint, Alix?)

Arch Mage Traven said I have wicked imps in my eyes, but he was not terribly mad when he said it.

I would feel so much better if I knew you would not read any letters from this University that did not come from me. There is no point hearing it from them as well as me. I promise I will write if anything happens.


I miss you both and hope you are well. Love, M

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My Dearest Alix and S'Jirra -

You may be receiving a letter from Arch Mage Traven. He is very upset with me. I wrote Fathis and asked him if he could pay for the damages to the grounds. It really was an accident, and that's the truth this time. Fathis said he will pay for them to lay a nice lawn and garden there. Arch Mage Traven said I may be expelled, but I may have talked him out of it since I only lack five or so semesters from graduation.

Arch Mage Traven is going over my grades and going to see if I can graduate earlier than the six years. He said he had brown hair when I came and now it is all gray, but that's not true! He was gray haired when I met him.

I miss you both and hope you are well. Love, M

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My Dearest Alix and S'Jirra -

Don't worry, it's good news! I will be graduating early! Arch Mage Traven said since I did so well in some classes and really applied myself that he will let me slide on some others!

Oh, Arch Mage Traven said he might take a nice vacation after the ceremony. I told him he was welcome anytime at the Faregyl, I hope Abhuki wouldn't mind me making the offer, but Arch Mage Traven declined the invitation anyway. He said he might visit the planes of Oblivion to get some peace. He is so funny.

My best friend Delphine will be getting a nice award for one of her spells, the Arcane is very excited about it. It is called "Enemies Explode." She said she will give me a copy of it. Don't worry about what happened here, she said she thinks it's fixed so I won't be blowing up anything around the Inn. I can't wait for you to meet her.

The graduation ceremony is going to be in two weeks on Saturday, I hope you will both be there I miss you so much! I am writing Fathis and asking him to come too.

I miss you both and hope you are well. Love, M

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"Fathis, I believe you encourage that child in her mischief by laughing each time." Arch Mage Traven said in his sternest voice.

"Oh Traven, she is unspoiled. Would you have me read her a lecture? I won't you know." Fathis said, smiling at Maxical's latest caper.

"I would use the term spoiled rather. She is turning this campus upside down." Arch Mage Traven said, his voice reflecting his exasperation to Fathis.

"Irlav Jarol brings it on himself. And you know Maxical has never acted alone, yet always stands the punishment as if she had. She is a child with high spirits, that is all. She has never been around children her own age before, these high spirits will naturally find a more suitable outlet as she matures. This campus could use some life thrown into it, a morgue has more life in it than Irlav Jarol has. The man is positively Friday-faced. He needs to be retired, or not be in a position to incite the young children." Fathis defended Maxical as he wrote out another large donation to the Arcane University.

As he handed it over Fathis added, "Traven, did you never think of hanging your professor's robes from the towers?"

While Arch Mage Traven was reaching his hand for the donation, his mind was going back in time to a particular professor whose robes had hung from a certain spire "I never tried to blast them up there using a spell, nor broke windows in the process."

Fathis leaned over and shook Arch Mage Traven's hand. "For a second there, I saw a flash of wicked imps in your eyes Traven. Let the child grow as she will. The world will smother that life out of her soon enough and I can stand the Septims for any inconvenience."

Arch Mage Traven shook his head, leaning back in his chair as he watched Fathis exit. His mind traveled once again to that robe hanging from that spire and the rage of the professor involved. Fathis did have a point, Irlav reminded him quite a bit of that same professor. Then he remembered how Maxical stood before him, not bending her head down in shame as she stood for each punishment, instead she would smile up at him as he berated her, the imps dancing in her eyes. Yes, he knew she hadn't acted alone, yet she would stand alone to face him and never give her friend's names up.



Chapter 3B: Graduation Day


Scanning the crowd that had gathered at the Arcane University for the graduation ceremonies I caught sight of Fathis Aren. I tried to twist my head to watch Fathis getting himself seated even though we were instructed to keep our faces forward. As Raminus Polus walked by he clamped his hand on the top of my head and twisted it back to the front.

"I do believe he and Irlav Jarol may throw a party to celebrate my graduation." The thought sprang into my mind and I snickered.

Raminus scowled and whispered, "This is a solemn occasion, there will be none of your hi-jinks." Delphine Jend waited till he passed and then did an extremely accurate imitation of him into my ear. I snorted and Raminus spun around glaring. He has never forgiven me for the bed-wetting incident.

Delphine had to go up first for her award on the 'Enemies Explode' spell. She had already graduated long since but had come here to work on a spell that would make her famous.

I tried to keep my head forward and just turn my eyes to scan the crowds again. Where were Alix and S'Jirra? Fathis was in the front row reserved for important personages, and wearing a robe of such thick black velvet that he looked like a king in it. He saw me looking and winked at me. I smiled and winked back. I heard the slow hiss of Raminus' exhaled breath and turned my eyes to the front again.

When it was my turn to go onto the stage my foot caught in my robe and I stumbled on the step up. I caught myself so I didn't actually fall. Fathis was grinning and Raminus was glaring darts at me.

I made the rest of the walk to the platform with no mishaps. Raminus gave me my graduation robes and began to read off my accomplishments. When he read the part where I had mastered in conjuration I looked over at Fathis to see if he had heard. He smiled at me. He already knew, there was no surprise in his eyes.

Conjuration is Fathis's specialty, he loves it. I hated it, but worked hard to pass it because I knew conjuration meant so much to him.

Fathis had kept true to his word and checked on my progress regularly through my years here at the Arcane. Still, even though he wasn't surprised, it felt good knowing he was proud of me. I could read that in his eyes.

Fathis really surprised me. He never got angry at me for the trouble I got in even when it cost him a lot of Septims. A few times I thought it had even tickled him a bit. We did become friends, and I wrote to him all the time, not just when I was in trouble.

Looking back on that trip to the Arcane I made with Fathis over five years ago I have always felt ashamed of how I acted toward Fathis that day. He did a wonderful thing for me, paying for me to get an education like this, using his influence to get me into the University, checking up on me like he has done, and keeping me out of trouble. I tried to throw him a look of gratitude while it was fresh on my mind. Raminus paused, his eyes steaming, but then resumed his recitation.

I had really come to love Fathis. Every time I saw him step foot on the campus I would run to Arch Mage Traven's tower and wait at the base of it for Fathis to exit, searching his face to see if he was proud or disappointed in me, or maybe even angry. If there had been a way to listen through those transport portals I would probably have eavesdropped on their conversations.

Each time Fathis saw me waiting for him there, he would always smile at me and spend a few minutes talking to me. Sometimes he would even speak to me in Khajiit, he knows a lot of different languages. I lived for the days he would come. Always when he was leaving he would brush my cheek gently with his hand like he did that first day when he brought me here.

These past years at the Arcane seemed like forever, yet at the same time it felt like they just flew by. I wanted to capture this moment in my memory and never forget it, standing up there taking my diplomas and hearing Raminus read off my grades.

I turned my head and scanned the audience for S'Jirra and Alix. Raminus' breath exhaled, so I turned back. He was nearing the classes I did not do well in. I wished he would stop now before he got to the rest of the grades.

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The only Magic discipline I didn't do well in was Restoration. Arch Mage Traven said he will give me the names of some good trainers in restoration but I will have to pay for them. I smiled up at Arch Mage Traven and told him I'd much rather come back to the Arcane for my post grads in Restoration and his face turned white as my fur.

The rest of the courses that I didn't do well in were Calculations, Enchanting, Archery, Speechcraft, Alchemy, and Block. The low grade in Block shamed me, and I hoped Alix couldn't hear that from where he was sitting.

Archery, well let's just say they made me drop the course.

When I stepped down after Raminus finished my grades I saw Fathis stand up and start coming toward me. So he had come just for me, wasn't staying for the rest of the ceremonies? A warm glow filled me at that thought.

Fathis pulled me aside and then turned around to face me, still holding my hand. He chucked me gently under my chin with his other hand and looked into my eyes as he began speaking.

"When I got your invitation I stopped by the Inn and told S'Jirra and Alix that I would come today and represent them." Fathis began.

"They're not here?" I squeaked, looking around as if I doubted his word. I felt disappointed at that, and I think Fathis saw it in my eyes.

"No dear, they are home waiting for you. You've done well Maxical. I am very proud of you. I have brought you a few presents for your graduation, and an early birthday present. You will be 18 soon, but I couldn't wait to give it to you! You have really grown up and made me very proud of you." Fathis was looking deeply into my face as he spoke. He almost looked surprised, or startled.

I fought blushing but don't know if I won the battle. I hope I smiled. I wanted to thank him for everything like the advlt he said I was becoming, but instead I blurted out, "Presents?" I know I blushed then.

Fathis face lit up in a smile. "I see you have grown into a typical woman!" he said, but his smile let me know he was pleased by my response. "I have acquired a tower from a friend of mine who is a Wizard, it's up in the Jerall Mountains; Nord country. He had this tower built especially for a Mage, and I felt it would be a most appropriate gift for one who has worked so hard to master the many disciplines of magic."

I was stunned! I thought he was going to send me there for a job!

"I've tucked away a few surprises in there as well that should delight you." Fathis said.

Fathis was talking, but my head was reeling from what I was hearing, so I am not sure if I didn't miss half of what he said! I am afraid I just stood there staring at him with my mouth gaping like a loon.

"Now here, my dear; here is your early birthday present! This comes all the way from Shivering Isles, you can't find one like this in all of Cyrodiil! Go try this on, I want to see you in it." Fathis was enjoying my excitement over the presents, I saw that in his eyes.

When he pulled out my birthday present I gasped! It was an armor so fine, and of gold! I ran to try it on.

The briastplate of the cuirass was molded to a woman's shape and had a heart shape cutout that showed my skin through. Looking down I noticed that the cutout revealed a little too much. I could see the budding proof that I was now a woman in this armor, it was like nothing I had ever worn before.

I blushed and felt a little embarrassed by my flesh showing; but I didn't want Fathis to think I wasn't grown up enough for the armor, so I quickly pulled the rest on.

My friends gathered around me gawking at my new armor. Delphine Jend said I looked like a grown woman in it, then proceeded to point out my exposed briasts. She started teasing me, pretending to be Fathis and ogling my briasts. I chased her to make her stop, but she teased me even worse after that.

It was with a very red face I went back down to show Fathis the armor on me. As I was walking up to him I heard a 'tap-tap' sound and looked up to see Delphine in the window above me laughing and circling her fingers around her eyes like two spy glasses, pretending her eyes were popping out at the sight of my briasts. My face got even redder then.

Fathis eyes lit up when he saw me in the armor he had given me. I wished we weren't standing so near the window where I knew Delphine was watching everything, it was making me self-conscious.

"The armor is beautiful Fathis, thank you so much - not just for the presents, and the Tower, but for everything, you know what I mean to say." I stammered out, looking up into Fathis' eyes so he could read more clearly the gratitude I was not so good at expressing.

Fathis put his hands on either side of my face and just looked down into my face for a minute. I couldn't read his expression. When he spoke his voice sounded a little husky.

"You look so beautiful in the armor. So grown up. Nae, don't thank me with words. You thank me by doing well for yourself. Keep making me as proud as you have today. And now I have to go, so here are my last presents for you. This is a map I am giving you that has the location of your new tower marked on it, see? And here is the key." Fathis pointed out the location of the tower on the map and then dropped the key into my hands.

I breathed deeply while Fathis bent his head over the map, his head so close to mine. I could smell the scent that he used to bathe in.

Fathis was the only man I had ever met that scented his bathwater. I think it set him apart from other men, that scenting. It would leave a faint trace of scent on my face when he touched my cheek each time. I would always run back to my room and rub my face on my pillow so the scent would be there where I could smell it.

We said goodbye then, and I gave him a hug for the first time since I'd met him. By looking at him, you would never know he was such a nice man. He was proud and haughty acting, but he was really a nice man. He brushed his hand on my cheek, a reminder of that first day when he said goodbye to me at the University.

Fathis wasn't escorting me home, or to the tower. I had to make the trip alone. I was suddenly scared, facing the idea of walking out the world after so many years of being protected. I hadn't been alone out there since I was five years old.

I watched Fathis make his way through the crowds and out the gate and felt the fear grow in me. I felt very alone suddenly, even in this crowd of people.

Delphine was waiting for me when I got back inside to pack my things. We both cried and hugged each other, and I promised to come to Bravil and see her. I showed her where my Tower was on the map Fathis had given me and she teased me about freezing to death up there in the mountains and Fathis coming to thaw me back out again. Delphine could just make you die of embarrassment sometimes, but I loved her.

For my graduation gift she gave me a copy of her Enemies Explode spell. I couldn't wait to try it out! I found Tar-Meena and gave her the biggest hug of her life; then found Arch Mage Traven and warmly shook his hand. Tears were burning in my eyes as I walked out the gates. Before I went out the large gate to the Imperial City I looked back, remembering my first glimpse of the Arcane so many years ago.

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*** Raminus Polus:

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*** Irlav Jarol:

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*** Irlav Jarol after bootblacking incident:

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*** My BFF Delphine Jend in her blue velvet dress:

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***** Picture of me in my new armor:


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*** The Market District:

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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 11:34 am

Whoooooa, Nellie! I'd refrain from posting more than once every other day if I were you. You don't want your readers to get bogged down with so much text.
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 1:11 am

Whoooooa, Nellie! I'd refrain from posting more than once every other day if I were you. You don't want your readers to get bogged down with so much text.


Good advice. I was hoping to get some of the more interesting text up, (as she got older) and the picture of my character, and can't tell how much one entry on here can take. I will definately hold off posting any more of the story. Thanks for the advice!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 2:05 am

Good advice. I was hoping to get some of the more interesting text up, (as she got older) and the picture of my character, and can't tell how much one entry on here can take. I will definately hold off posting any more of the story. Thanks for the advice!

Hopefully I can do more than complain, though it'll be sometime next week (damn short story contest and school work).
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 3:20 am

Hopefully I can do more than complain, though it'll be sometime next week (damn short story contest and school work).


Ooohhh, can't wait to hear about your short story contest!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 2:21 am

Ooohhh, can't wait to hear about your short story contest!

No, that's not what I meant. The short story contest is what's bogging me down. When I reply to your story I hope it's something about the story.
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 4:51 am

I'm delighted to see you decided to start writing! I know we have discussed it. Quite alot to digest, because you posted several installments quickly. Your story flows and makes for a reasonable explanation of how your young kittywizard got where she is. It is a bit rushed though. I would hope, with her background complete, that you would slow things a bit and develop both her and her story as you move forward.

Your writing is easy to read. I chuckled when I learned she was to be raised by Mrs Potatobread. I also complement you on creating a character that has flaws, fears and yet, obvious potential.

I totally agree with redsrock. Slow down now. Allow folks to read, digest, and critique for at least a couple days. Then take the critique items you receive and incorporate them into your future stories.

Speaking of critique, let me offer a couple ideas.
Dialogue. I would recommend you begin to use dialogue to help develop your character.
If you have not done so, review the pinned thread 'So you think you can RP' at the top of this forum. I found it quite helpful for some of the mechanics.

I look forward to hearing more of her story. :icecream:
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 8:13 am

I'm delighted to see you decided to start writing! I know we have discussed it. Quite alot to digest, because you posted several installments quickly. Your story flows and makes for a reasonable explanation of how your young kittywizard got where she is. It is a bit rushed though. I would hope, with her background complete, that you would slow things a bit and develop both her and her story as you move forward.

Your writing is easy to read. I chuckled when I learned she was to be raised by Mrs Potatobread. I also complement you on creating a character that has flaws, fears and yet, obvious potential.

I totally agree with redsrock. Slow down now. Allow folks to read, digest, and critique for at least a couple days. Then take the critique items you receive and incorporate them into your future stories.

Speaking of critique, let me offer a couple ideas.
Dialogue. I would recommend you begin to use dialogue to help develop your character.
If you have not done so, review the pinned thread 'So you think you can RP' at the top of this forum. I found it quite helpful for some of the mechanics.

I look forward to hearing more of her story. :icecream:


Thanks Acadian! I wrote this on my pc and tried to transfer it to the boards, not really knowing how much room the boards allowed for. I was not wanting to just post her 5 year old tales, because they were boring to me, lol. I just wanted to get at least some of the interesting story on before I quit, or where it starts to get interesting. (hopefully).

I know exactly what you mean about it feeling rushed, I noticed that too, when I read if after posting. It definately feels rushed.

As far as the dialogue goes, there is some added to later chapters, I remembered DFoxy (?) had said that same thing before. What was hard for me was to remember the dialog from the game precisely. I could remember some, and used them. What I could find on the internet I used. Some of my dialog (you will see when it gets posted later) is made up from my weak memory, lol.

Thank you so much for reading my story Acadian, and for your helpful tips! She may never be Buffy, but it felt good to give her a past, I have never done that in my role play before!

No, that's not what I meant. The short story contest is what's bogging me down. When I reply to your story I hope it's something about the story.


I hope you win the contest, good luck!
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Chapter 4: The Beginning of the End

I got lost in walking through the Imperial City and ended up in an area called 'The Market District.' I just kept walking from shop to shop staring at all the things one could buy, things like I've never seen before. There was a sword I would give my eye teeth for, shields with enchantments, staffs that made mine look like an old man's cane! And dresses so beautiful, some made of velvet like I always wanted. Clothes like Fathis wore, but for girls, and of such fine rich cloth.

I think I may have drooled, and then and there decided I needed to find a way to make some money.

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Suddenly I noticed the shops were closing their doors. It had gotten late, and was already dark! I became terrified of the walk home then. When I finally stepped out that huge gate to Cyrodiil I stood by the gate for a long time, looking out across the darkness, afraid to move. I would have to cross that high bridge again in the dark, what if I took a misstep?

I crouched down and cast an invisibility spell, and just kept casting it and a detect life spell the whole way. When I saw some of the creatures I would have encountered I was glad I had done that.

I saw the outline of a man hiding in the bushes on the side of the road. I crept across the road and tried to sneak around him, but he saw me. He must have been using a detect life. It was a highwayman, and he demanded my money, his foul breath wafting through my whiskers. It was a Khajiit. I tried to use my Eye of Khajiit on him, but it didn't work on him.

"Don't waste your time, don't think that will work on me!" He said in a gravely voice. When he spoke some spittle from his mouth landed on my face. I thought I would vomit on the spot.

I had no money, but he didn't believe me. He jumped back and pulled a sledgehammer out. I conjured a fire Atronach and while it attacked him I pelted him with fireballs and weakness to fire spells. It was over quickly. I felt very cocky and proud when that battle was over. I was on my own and had taken care of myself pretty well!

In my state of high bravado I forgot to cast the invisibility again, or even crouch down. I was standing there like a giant svcker with an arrow pointing to me, and never heard the other sneaky Khajiit come up from behind and bash me in the head with his hammer. I went down like a stone, and he took the armor Fathis had given me and emptied out my pack, taking everything. I was left lying naked in the road in a pool of blood. I could feel it's hot dampness sticking to the skin of my back and arms

My head felt like it had been split in two. I began casting healing spells as rapidly as I could, but with my poor restoration skills I was bleeding out faster than I was healing.

I prayed for Akatosh to send someone to help me, but no one came. My magicka was drained and I was still bleeding heavily. In my weakened state it was hard to keep casting.

I started to cry, and it made me feel weaker and that my situation was even more hopeless. I got mad and it drained my strength further. I berated myself for my stupidity in standing there like an idiot, but all these things just drained my strength even further, I had to stop doing that or I would die. I could not raise my head at all, each movement sent such a pain through my head that I felt I would rather die than suffer it another second.

I was still laying there when the sun came up. Akatosh may not have sent me help, but no more enemies came, thank goodness. There would have been nothing I could do if they had. My magicka was spent staying alive, there would be none left for defense.

My throat ached for water, and I could smell the Rumare so near. I managed to roll over and pull myself the short distance off the road and tumbled down the hill into the water. At first I was afraid I would pass out and drown, so I cast a water breathing spell quickly just in case. I hated to waste the magicka that I needed to heal, but it would do me no good to drown while saving the magicka for healing.

The water felt good on my wounds, and I gulped some down as well. Fearing the blood in the water would draw mud crabs to me, I forced myself to move further down toward the Old Bridge. I was too weak to even fight a mud crab right now.

I pulled myself up underneath the bridge to hide till I could heal. I kept washing my wounds in the water and casting healing spells till I finally found my strength coming back to me.

"What am going to do now?" I wondered desperately. My magicka was too low to keep casting invisibility the whole way. "I am naked and still a long way from home."

When I felt strong enough I crawled back up to the road. My pack was lying where the bandit had thrown it, the only thing in it was the map Fathis had given me, they took even my graduation robes. I felt down to the tiny pocket on the bottom and found the key to the tower. The bandit must have missed it, thank goodness. I thought about the golden armor and started crying again. I had not even had it more than a few hours and it was gone. I could not replace it, Fathis had gotten it someplace called Shivering Isles. That was no where in Cyrodiil that I ever heard of. What would Fathis think of me for such carelessness?

***

The thought occurred then that maybe I could find the bandit's lair and get the armor back.

The bandit had crept up from behind, he had to have come from the other side of the Old Bridge, so I cast invisibility and crossed the bridge. Not far on the left was a run down fort. I looked at my map, Fort Homestead. I tiptoed near and cast a detect life. There was the outline of a man.

I was terrified and wanted to use the most powerful thing I had, so I loaded up the Enemies Explode that Delphine had given me. I never knew what to expect I guess, but it lived up to its name! After a huge explosion of fire, pieces of the bandit were raining down everywhere. I searched everywhere, but did not find my armor! Had he stashed it inside the fort?

After a few starts and chickening out, I finally went inside the fort. I don't know what I was expecting, but what I found was much worse. Darts flew out of the walls from all sides, piercing my naked flesh. Creeping in the dark, you would step on the ground and it would give way with a click, and suddenly a huge mace would fly down at you. I kept my invisibility spell in one hand and my healing spell in the other till I smartened up.

Not being able to see was causing all the wounds I was having to heal from, so I stopped and thoroughly healed, then put my healing spell away temporarily. I set my Night Eye instead. That is a lesser power we Khajiit have to see in the dark. It has to be cast just like a spell is cast, but doesn't use up any magicka. It doesn't last long, but it is enough to scout around for traps. The invisibility I kept handy, and every few feet or so I would use the detect life to make sure I didn't stumble up on anyone or anything. This worked a lot better, so I guess I had learned something. They should have had a course on this at the Arcane. 'How To Stay Alive While Dungeon Crawling, 101.'

The fort reeked of mildew, dust, old dead smells. There were rats, I was sure I heard them! And there were marauders, way too many of them for me to tackle on my own. Better to just sneak by till I found my armor.

When I had searched every inch of that fort and had not found my armor, I got mad. What did they do with it? I could not face Fathis Aren without it, and I was not going to go home naked. I decided if they took from me, I would take from them! I readied the Enemies Explode again, and as I headed back out of that fort I hit every marauder in there with it. If there were many in a room I would drop it in the midst so as to get the most kills in one hit. I had to sit in hiding several times to let my magicka restore.

Delphine made a wonderful spell, but it ate up my magicka. Still it gave me a feeling of power and confidence, something I felt I had really lost that night on the road. I was still scared, but to me having that spell was like having Alix there. Something you could be sure would take care of all enemies that came against you. I was just too scared to use anything less than the most powerful thing I had.

There was way too much loot to carry out of there in one trip. I started at the very end of the fort and kept making trips to the door of the fort, carrying as much as I could and just piling it up by the door. Then I started chucking it out of the door till it was all outside. There was no good way to hide the stuff, so I just pushed it up under a stairwell in the outer ring of the fort. I pulled out a leather armor that wasn't too damaged and donned it, disgusted by the thought of wearing someone's dirty armor against my skin.

"Well, at least I'm not naked anymore." I thought as I loaded up the most expensive looking pieces into my pack. If the loot was gone when I returned, at least I would get the most out of it. I was staggering under the weight of my pack as I tottered to the Market District in Imperial City.

I sold that load to a woman named Jensine. She said no one else could give as good prices on merchandise as she could. I couldn't imagine she would say that if it wasn't true so I told her I would bring all my stuff to her. She said that some merchant named Thoranir was undercutting prices on sales, so I secretly figured I might buy from him but come to Jensine to sell. I did get an apple and some cheese from her though.

On the way here I had seen a stretch of land that looked like it went all the way to the fort. I could save some time going that way, so I did. As I was trying to reach it I passed a dock area, and had to step up into a walkway. On the other side was some shacks and a beggar was standing there.

"Got some coins for an old veteran?" he asked. "A few coins will get me medicine."

I figured correctly what medicine he was looking for, he reeked of alcohol.

"What is this place?" I asked him. He said it was called the Waterfront District of the Imperial City. It was hard to believe it was connected to the Imperial City seeing these run down shacks. "I don't have much more money, and it is getting late. Do you know anywhere I can find a bed for the night?" I asked him.

"There be an abandoned house, right there." The man pointed to the nearest shack. I thanked him and gave him some Septims.

The shack was filthy, but had some mats in it. I stretched out on the cleanest looking one and was asleep before I could count the bugs I saw crawling in there. I was exhausted! It felt good to sleep, even in that nasty place.

The next morning I hurried off down the strip of land, but it didn't reach the fort at all. It was an island, and there were goblins down at the end. I was not walking all the way back, so I cut across the water. Khajiit are naturally averse to deep water, but we are a lazy people. We don't stand when we could sit, nor sit if we can lay down. I used a water walk spell, I still couldn't swim.

Cutting through the Waterfront District and across Lake Rumare saved a lot of time and walking. Still it took almost a week before I had finally taken the very last pile of loot from that fort to Jensine's. I just kept making trips back and forth, and staying in the abandoned shack at night.

All that time in the Market District, it never occurred to me to check the shops for my armor. I didn't know what bandits did with their loot.

The day I sold my last bit to Jensine I sat down on a crate outside her store and counted my money. I felt rich, I had never even had a Septim of my own before! I kept the armor I was wearing and one good sword, and I bought two repair hammers from Jensine.

Part of me wanted to go on a spending spree right then and there, the other part just wanted to go home to my family, a bath, and a clean bed. I got an image of Alix and made my decision, I was going home.

I spent one last night in that shack on the waterfront and headed home the next morning.







*** Fort Homestead, there is the bandit that stole my armor:

http://www.uesp.net/w/images/images.new/8/80/OB-Fort_Homestead.jpg

*** The Old Bridge:

http://www.uesp.net/w/images/images.new/c/ca/OB-Old_Bridge.jpg
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Lisha Boo
 
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 3:32 pm

Ah. Now the point of her Golden Saint gift armor begins to emerge. Nice. I'm wondering if she will find it or end up going to SI in search of it.

The impression I get is a young, but University trained character - a bit of a mage prodigy. Nevertheless, I wrestled some with 'Enemies Explode' - both its master of destruction requirement and its base cost of 842 magicka. Do you intend for her to be that much of a prodigy at what seems like a very young stage? If you do, then perhaps a bit more explanation and emphasis on her massive level of skill may be in order. If you decide you indeed want her to be a bit more vulnerable and less skilled, just chalk it up to the writer's practice and move away for using it.

Those of us who use first person constantly have to guard against I, I, I, I, ... starting sentences. You have done well here at mixing things up to avoid that.

Keep going my friend! :)
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 5:55 am

Ah. Now the point of her Golden Saint gift armor begins to emerge. Nice. I'm wondering if she will find it or end up going to SI in search of it.

The impression I get is a young, but University trained character - a bit of a mage prodigy. Nevertheless, I wrestled some with 'Enemies Explode' - both its master of destruction requirement and its base cost of 842 magicka. Do you intend for her to be that much of a prodigy at what seems like a very young stage? If you do, then perhaps a bit more explanation and emphasis on her massive level of skill may be in order. If you decide you indeed want her to be a bit more vulnerable and less skilled, just chalk it up to the writer's practice and move away for using it.

Those of us who use first person constantly have to guard against I, I, I, I, ... starting sentences. You have done well here at mixing things up to avoid that.

Keep going my friend! :)


** I just went to my game and checked, Enemies Explode costs (uses) 168, Fingers of the Mountain uses 143. Somehow it is based on your level and your skill level, because it said 800+ when I first got it, but I was very low in destruction then, and at a low level in the game. Since then I have leveled up several times and got the masters in destruction, which is NOT one of my major skills - (not sure if that has anything to do with the equation). Something about the higher level you are in the magic disciplines, the lower the charge to use the spell.

This is the first character I ever played that was mage based, or used a bow either. (thanks to you and Buffy, who inspired me). What I did with this character to compensate for her story taking her to the Arcane for schooling was to go there and (since I could not get on the grounds yet), and had my character stand out in the outer ring public area and practice (conjuration, illusion, mysticism, restoration, etc. - not destruction though, lol). I am surprised Raminus didn't call the guards on me I was out there for so long conjuring up daggers, lol. I started working on the restoration in the jail cell, and still never made it very far, it takes forever to level up your restoration, (or it does me I should say).

I was not used to either magic or the bow, so I forced myself to not get any blades till I had the destruction and marksman up to a decent level where I felt comfortable with it. I just used a bound bow till I got better with it, then enchanted a bow. I had a lot of trouble enchanting the bow, too! The things I thought would be great did not work on a ranged (bow). So I have a barrel full of "mistakes," lol.

Enemies Explode: What happened is, this character is the first time I ever hit master in destruction, so all those spells I used to die to try out (like Fingers of the Mountain and Enemies Explode) - I was never able to use before - well, I guess because I could finally use them for the first time, I kind of went crazy on them. I hot keyed them and was running around hoping for a fight so I could zap or explode whatever attacked me, lol. They really are fun spells, never having used them before - they give you a feeling of power. I missed out on a lot of fun never playing a mage before! Just reading your descriptions of battle using magic and the bow got me so hyped to try it that I really worked hard at getting good on it. I am still struggling with feeling confident with the bow, but I love the feeling of going into a dungeon with just my bare hands and some spells, it is exciting!

As far as the story goes, I reversed the order of when I did those quests, to account for her age, and that she would need to go to the University to train would be the only way to explain why a young girl had mastered almost all the disciplines! I guess this is one of the reasons I never played a young girl before, but I am really enjoying her so I am glad I tried it !!! (in other words, I actually did the Dark Brotherhood after leaving the prison, not before, etc. - but I could not for the life of me think of anything a girl that young could have done to get imprisoned.

I don't know if you saw my post on another thread, but what happened is that I was still playing her as a 12 year old when that murder thing happened, and I had saved over so couldn't go back and re-do anything. I could not see her at 12 being a murderer, so I had to age her quickly - so I sent her to the Arcane in the story, to add the years to her before the murder took place. So technically, I made her do everything in the story, but just in a different order than it appears here.

I was really livid when she became a murderer (not sure if you saw those posts under a different thread, but I hit first, and although the fight music had already started, for some reason it counted as a murder. The thought that it would be murder never crossed my mind, so I had saved over, and ended up with a young girl with a murder on her record that I could not remove). I was so mad, but did NOT want to start the whole game over, so I just tried to fix it by aging her at the Arcane and reversing the order in the writing - I have always played an older character, so this is a whole new experience for me.

Thanks so much for your critiques Acadian! I obviously need all the help I can get, lol. Since I had never done a "why your character was in prison" background on any of my characters before, I definately did not know where to begin, or how far to take it, so.... Thanks for all the help !!!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 3:26 am

Chapter 5: Trouble on the Homefront


The whole way home I had thought about what to say when I got there; well, more like what not to say. I couldn't tell S'Jirra Fathis gave me the armor if I didn't have it to show her. And I couldn't tell her it was stolen when a bandit hit me over the head with a sledgehammer either. S'Jirra worried too much about me, she would never let me leave the Inn as long as I lived if she found out.

And leave the Inn I would, I needed that armor back before Fathis came by again. How disappointed in me, or even mad he might be if he found out I lost his armor only a few hours after he gave it to me.

The filth on me, the scar healing on my head, the fact that I didn't have my graduation robes or any of the clothes she had sent me while I was at the Arcane, none of these occurred to me that she might wonder about, nor where I picked up the smelly leather armor. I guess I just don't think clearly sometimes. Maybe I am just plain stupid sometimes.

I walked in the door and everyone just stared at me in my filthy bedraggled state.

"What happened to you?" S'Jirra squeaked.

"Uh, n.n.nothing? Why?" I asked, trying to sound nonchalant but failing miserably.

Alix stood up and was staring at the armor I was wearing. "What is that you are wearing?" he asked, his voice brimming with suspicion.

S'Jirra was staring at the split on my head that hadn't healed, her eyes goggling. "What happened to your head?" she asked, her voice rising to a squeak again.

"Nothing!" I said, trying to sound irritated. Then I went on the attack. "Why weren't you at my graduation?"

S'Jirra started crying and Alix got mad, something I have never really seen before.

"Fathis as much as told us not to come, he told us he would go in our stead." Alix said, the anger was tangible in his voice. I had never heard him sound like that. "Fathis did not want to be seen with us because we are a mixed couple." Alix almost spat.

I still didn't get it. "How can you act like Fathis has done something wrong by offering to come in your stead! He is all that is goodness in even coming to my graduation." I fumed and stomped to my room. I drew myself a bath still storming and pounding my feet so they could hear it.

***

Alix glanced over at S'Jirra. He had a bad feeling about what had just occurred. "Dear Akatosh, please don't let her be in love with that man." He thought. The sound of stomping feet was still echoing down to them. "S'Jirra go get that armor, I want to see it." Alix said. He picked up Maxical's pack where she had thrown it down. It was empty except two repair hammers.

S'Jirra came back down with the armor, holding it away from herself and touching it with just her fingertips. She handed Alix the armor and took the pack. "Where is all her stuff?" she asked Alix.

Alix shook his head. He didn't have any answers for S'Jirra, but he knew something was going on, and was not happy. Alix started cleaning the pack, it reeked. When he was reaching inside he found a large key. Alix caught S'Jirra's eye and motioned to the key in his hand. Alix replaced the key in the pack shaking his head.

Alix cleaned the armor and repaired it, paying close attention to all the damage on it. Then he checked the sword out that Maxical had tossed down on the counter when she first came in. It had blood on it and was dinged up pretty badly. He cleaned it and repaired it, just shaking his head at S'Jirra.

S'Jirra knew Alix's signals, when he was shaking his head he didn't want her asking questions because he was thinking, but she couldn't stand the wait. "Where are her clothes?" she whispered.

Alix started concentrating on his boot. That signal was reserved for serious thinking. Alix didn't talk much when he was thinking. He was still concentrating on his boot when Maxical was heard getting out of the tub and slamming drawers open and shut.

***

I came out of the bath and looked through my drawers. I had nothing to wear that fit me anymore. Wrapping a towel around me, I cut over to Alix and S'Jirra's room and grabbed one of Alix's shirts and a pair of his long underwear and put it on. Then I trooped out to the sitting room and put a belligerent expression on my face. "I'm hungry!" I said. It was more of a command than a request. I was acting like a two year old.

S'Jirra brought me potato bread and a glass of wine. (Probably hoping it would calm me down or loosen my tongue).

It wasn't like me to keep anything from S'Jirra, and I could tell she was hurt and upset by my not telling her what was going on. But wouldn't she be more hurt to know I had almost died? Would she ever let me leave this Inn again if she knew? And I was going to leave and find my armor - and soon, before Fathis stopped in to see me again. S'Jirra would never understand why it was so important to me. I would tell her all once I had my armor back.

***




Chapter 5B: Alix's Investigation



Alix put a comforting hand on S'Jirra's shoulder and stepped outside, "For some fresh air" he said. Alix decided to do some scouting around between the Imperial City and the Inn. He had seen armor like that before; highwaymen, bandits, marauders - and the sword too. He was going to find out what happened, and why Maxical wasn't talking about it.

He stuck to the main roads and began walking up toward the Imperial City. Not thirty feet from where he crossed the Old Bridge he found a huge bloodstain in the road. A trail of blood and mashed down grass led down to the waters edge, and there was plenty of blood on the rocks around there. Walking around the waters edge a bit, Alix picked up the trail of blood again and found another pooling of blood under the Old Bridge.

Alix knew it was Maxical's blood, and the sight of it on the road filled him with rage and terror. She had to have been attacked by bandits on that road, and from the amount of blood loss he found evidence of, it was a miracle Maxical still lived.

An Imperial City Legionnaire guard on horseback was slowly wending his way down the road and Alix hailed him down. "What happened here?" Alix asked.

"Dunno, we found the body of a highwayman over there," he pointed to a ways away from the bloodspot in the road.

"How did the blood get over here and the body get over there?" Alix asked.

"Nae, 'tweren't his blood." The guard said. "The highwayman, he were burnt with fire, had to be a mage killed him." he continued. "The blood here, we figured that was who burned him, but we never found the body o' that one."

"Did your investigation turn anything up?" Alix asked, feigning unconcern by concentrating on rubbing the guards horse's nose. His stomach was rolling; the guard had proved he was right that it was Maxical's blood. Not that he had doubted himself, a parent knows these things, they just do.

"Nae, not much. 'Twere a young khajiit girl with a headwound seen in the Market District all week selling armor and weapons. A lot of armor and weapons. Musta' been a doozy of a fight, looked like her head had been split in two. Some of us thinks this be her blood; but those that seen this blood here, and that under the bridge and such; well we don't figure who bled here lived thru it. We thinks necromancers took the body. There's some o' them around these parts." The guard spat after the last words.

"Where do you think the highwayman came from?" Alix asked.

"Ft. Homestead, no doubt. It's always trouble around there." The guard tipped his fingers to his helmet in a mock salute to Alix and he and his horse resumed their slow meandering pace down the road.

Alix vomited then, tears streaming down his face. No wonder Maxical didn't want S'Jirra to know what happened! She may have died, and they would have never known a thing!

In a rage Alix stormed Ft. Homestead, bent on revenge. Sword drawn he burst in through the door.

The place was a tomb; bodies everywhere, all of them stripped naked. So Maxical had exacted her own revenge!

Alix started heading back home when he saw Fathis Aren flying down the road toward him. Alix quickly jumped out of the way, pressing himself into the bushes on the side of the road. As Fathis passed him Alix caught sight of the expression on his face. The man was in a towering rage!

Alix saw Fathis veer off toward the Inn. "Uh oh." Alix said, and started loping on foot after them.

***


Chapter 5C: The Golden Armor

Fathis Aren left his horse at the stables and walked through the gate into the Imperial City. After stopping to talk to a few people he met on the way, he made his way over to the Market District to stock up on alchemy ingredients. Fathis took his time lingering over the ingredients, being careful each purchase was of the freshest. Before leaving the city he stopped in at the Best Defense to talk to Varnado. It was getting late, and Fathis' stomach was rumbling its displeasure. If Varnado could give up his usual dinner at The Feed Bag, Fathis would like his company for dinner at the Merchant's Inn. He had much to discuss with Varnado about some of the new armors he had seen on his recent trip to the Shivering Isles.

As soon as Fathis stepped in to Varnado's shop, all thoughts of what he had come in there for flew from his head, for there hanging on display was the golden armor he had given Maxical at her graduation! He couldn't be right, surely it was a different armor, but no, there was the M he had engraved in the armor!

Rage building quickly inside him caused his face to take on a purplish hue. With what can only be described as a restrained growl, Fathis asked Varnado where he had that armor from.

"A Khajiit brought that in a couple weeks ago, nice, isn't it? Are you interested in..." Varnado blanched, his speech coming to a grinding halt as he stepped back from Fathis Aren. The man was turning purple! As Varnado told Maro Rufus later on, "steam was rising off Fathis Aren's head! 'Ta hate to be in the shoes of who got him riled!"

Without another word, Fathis turned on his heel and stormed out of the shop, leaving behind the satchel filled with the Alchemy ingredients he had purchased earlier.

Fathis was in a towering rage when he left the shop, all thoughts of hunger burned away by the hot rage that was filling him. As Fathis strode through the Imperial City to the stables people were hurrying out of his way; not just from the speed with which he strode, but the look on his face would have frightened the undead!

He fairly jerked his horse to him and leapt on his horse's back in one jump. Without bothering to undo the fence, Fathis put his horse at the gate and squeezed his thighs with such force that the horse did not balk, but leapt cleanly over the fence.

Not even waiting till he was off the hard stone of the bridge, Fathis pushed his horse into a full gallop. The beast whinnied it's displeasure at this disregard for it's comfort, but did as he was asked, and carried Fathis at a full gallop, a great distance to go at such a speed. When he finally pulled up and leapt off, the horse's sides were heaving with ragged breaths, and his flank was covered with the thick foam of over-exertion. His nostrils flared out as he gasped for breath, thankful to be able to rest. He could smell water nearby but did not dare wander, instead dropped his head low as his labored breathing blew the pebbles about on the ground below him.


***



Chapter 5D: Fathis Aren



We all heard the door to the Inn crash against the wall as someone opened it with such force that it shook the walls and floors of the whole Inn. S'Jirra and the Abhuki both screamed, but I didn't. I knew exactly who it was. Fathis Aren loomed over me as I sat glued to my chair. I was whiter than usual in my fear and shaking so badly that I couldn't stand up. Fathis was in a rage, his face was so contorted he looked like a demon, and I feared he would strike me!

"Where is the armor I gave you?" he demanded, almost spitting the words out between lips that were so tight I was afraid they would crack.

My mouth opened, but my lungs were so compressed in fear that I could not speak, and after several tries I finally just started sobbing. Fathis grabbed my purse and emptied it on the floor.

"Is this what you got for selling the armor I gave you?" Fathis was still spitting his words, and with each word his face took on an ever-darkening shade of purple.

I looked into his eyes, trying to plead with him through mine. What I saw in his was rage and pain; it had hurt him to think I hadn't cared about his gift. I couldn't let him leave here thinking that, but try as I might I could not speak, and my legs were like jelly as I tried to stand up.

S'Jirra didn't know Fathis had given me armor; I would have had to tell her how I lost it if I told her it had been given to me. She did not see Fathis' eyes either. All S'Jirra knew was that this man was raging at me, so she charged across the room and jumped between us. I could no longer see his eyes, and he could not see what I was trying to tell him with my eyes, since my voice had failed me.

Fathis turned on his heel and walked out, slamming the door with as much force as he had coming in. I was crawling across the floor trying to stop him, my legs would not walk, my voice sounded like gasping air when I would have screamed his name out. He couldn't leave like this! But leave he did, I heard the horse's hooves pounding down the road.

I collapsed in a crumpled heap on the floor sobbing; I don't understand how he can be so angry with me when just two weeks ago everything was more perfect than it has ever been? And what was wrong with my stupid body that nothing worked on it at this crucial time when I needed it to work the most?

The slamming door did it, we Khajiit can be very skittish around anger. Violence - no, that is totally different. Violence we are very capable of handling. Anger we just don't do well.

I had to pull myself together and go after Fathis, he just couldn't think I had sold his gift for money, I would not let him think I cared so little for what he had done for me. I left the coins on the floor where Fathis had strewn them, and without a word to S'Jirra, and still wearing Alix's long underwear and shirt, I started toward the door.

S'Jirra stopped me, and swung me around and took a deep look into my face. My eyes were filled with pain, I know because I could feel that, but what else they showed I don't know. We Khajiit can read people a lot of times through their eyes; well I didn't have the strength to hide what was whirling around in mine.

"Is that what that key is for? Are you and he...is it to his tower?" S'Jirra asked, dreading the answer.

I didn't answer, I couldn't answer.

S'Jirra's shoulders slumped. I was not her little girl anymore. I saw that look, and knew what she had thought.

It is true. I am a woman now. My body long since developed the curves that clearly speak of budding womanhood. The scruffy thick fur and whiskers of my youth molted away, leaving in its place a sleek skin-like covering. And in the last months a hint of bluish tinge shaded over my nose, the sign of a Khajiit female at full sixual maturity.

Yes, I am definately a woman now, and I am in love with Fathis, I've known that for a long long time now. Finding Fathis and making things right between us again, it had to be the only thing of importance to me. I jerked myself back from S'Jirra so her hold on me was released. Her face registered the pain this action caused, and I was instantly sorry, but could not stop myself. The image in my mind of Fathis leaving blocked out all other thoughts or feelings, I had to find him and tell him the truth, I had to.

S'Jirra gave me a quick hug and then released me to go after Fathis. She slowly sat back down in her chair and kicked at the pot of jumbo potatoes she was warming for her next batch of potato bread. It spilled over spreading the jumbo potatoes across the floor. Steam rose from the water and potatoes, and yet S'Jirra sat and ignored the mess. A gaping hole was taking over her heart, and for once in her life she was not interested in her bread making.

I know she was blaming herself, wondering if she had been wrong in forcing me to go to the University. I wanted to tell her everything would be all right between us again but I still couldn't talk. I stood there silent as a stump.

The child that had left for the University so many years ago would have cleaned up the mess and held her and made it all okay again, but the person I was today was screaming to make it right with Fathis Aren, and that is all I could think about.

Fathis had filled such a huge part of my heart the past almost 6 years, in a way that no one, not even Fathis knew. That day he carried me to Arch Mage Traven, that day changed something in my heart forever. As I grew older, that place in my heart that was just for him, it grew till it was as big as the Imperial City itself, or at least it felt that way.

My love for Fathis is the reason I studied so hard at the Arcane. I lived for the days he would visit Arch Mage Traven and ask how I was doing.

Oh, I knew as a Khajiit I would not, could not be anything to Fathis. Dunmer are notoriously proud people, arrogant some say - mixing of races would not be an option. I had my dreams, of course, and the memories of that soft caress of his hand on my cheek he always did as we would part. To him that was just a careless gesture to what he looked at as a child; but to me - that careless gesture was everything.

I would watch for him to come to the University and make sure I "happened" to be in the entrance lobby to see him when he emerged from talking to Arch Mage Traven.

Do I think Fathis loved me too? Yes, (his reaction about the armor proved that) but that means nothing, he still would not mix races.

If I could not be with Fathis, I would be with no one. Even knowing my feelings for Fathis were just a useless dream, I would rather live single than be with another.

My dreams at the University were that Fathis would give me a position as his assistant, 'tis why I studied so hard at the University. He would not even have to pay me, as long as every now and then he would caress my cheek, just so I could be near him always.

I could not go to S'Jirra, I must go to Fathis and make things right with him. I grabbed my pack and threw on my armor and left without a word to her. I knew she would cry, but I could not speak at that moment, I just couldn't.

On my way out the door I bumped into Alix as he was running in. Alix took one look at my face, swollen from crying; S'Jirra sitting with a dead expression in her chair, her potatoes all over the floor, and Abhuki standing like a rigid statue pressed against the wall behind her counter.

"What did Fathis do in here?" Alix demanded.

"I got to go." I gasped out and tried to brush past him.

Alix wrapped me in his arms and whispered in my ear, "I love you, we love you. No matter what. You be careful, remember everything I taught you, okay? Okay?" he repeated when I didn't answer. I nodded my head but still couldn't speak.

When Alix released me I started off, but turned in time to see him kneeling down in front of S'Jirra, cradling her in his arms.


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Chapter 5E: And Then There Were None




Fathis was not receiving visitors at the castle. I pretended to leave but ducked behind a planter and cast an invisibility spell. I waited till a guard opened the door to the Royal Quarters and darted in.

When I found his room I knew it was his, his scent was in there. I breathed it in deeply. Yes, this was his room, but he was not here. I struggled with the idea of waiting for him or leaving him a note. Being a trespasser I didn't think it would be a good idea.

When I got back into Bravil proper I asked around and someone mentioned that he had a tower south of Bravil. I ran down the road till I saw it up on a hill in the woods. The door was bolted from the inside; no amount of spells I cast on it would open it.

I wished I had died on that road, at least then he would know the truth. I still could not talk, it was as if my throat had closed up. If I could speak I would have stood at that gate and screamed his name till the tower crumbled and he would be there in front of me, but my throat would not cooperate, and all that came out were gasps of air.

He was mad at me and I could not reach him to make it right. I collapsed next to the door to his tower and cried till there were no tear left. I had lost the man I loved and would never be able to tell him the truth.

I lost my will to live that day, lying in the dirt outside his door. I no longer feared dying. I vowed to go boldly into danger and take whatever came, hoping it would end my suffering.

***
I went back to the Imperial City, checking in all the shops till I finally found my armor hanging on display at the Best Defense.

"How much for the gold armor?" I asked Maro Rufus.

"Better ask Varnado," Maro stated, then followed me over to Varnado's counter. He stepped behind the counter and elbowed Varnado. "She's wantin' to know about that gold armor!" Maro said, not taking his eyes off me.

Varnado instantly looked over at me, then both of them were leering like they had an inside joke.

"How much for the armor?" I repeated. Both of them were grinning like goblins! I could have screamed at them. They saw my rage building up, and it seemed to amuse them further. Finally Varnado quoted a price that made my heart drop. There was no way I could come up with that kind of money, no wonder Fathis had been angry when he thought I had sold his armor, it had cost him a small fortune!

As I left the shop disheartened, I looked back to see them elbowing eachother and laughing at something. "What odd behavior those two have!" I thought. Before I was halfway down the street I looked back to see Varnado and Maro standing outside the shop pointing at me and jabbing each other, laughing. "It's because I'm an albino" I thought, not knowing they had their own conjecture about who Fathis had been in a rage over when he left their shop, or that my swollen eyes told my part in Fathis Aren's rage as clearly as any words could have.

Putting the strange behavior of Varnado and Maro out of my mind; instead I tried to concentrate on how to earn the money to buy my armor back. I stopped at all the shops (except the Best Defense) and asked for work. Everyone told me the same thing; the only jobs available were to join the Arena as a contestant.

I walked down to the water stripped down, then washed my armor and laid it out to dry. I splashed around a bit in the water before going to apply, feeling maybe the laughter at the Best Defense could have been aimed at the dirt still clinging to my armor from wallowing outside Fathis Aren's door. Maybe I should have done this before I asked at the other shops, I thought ruefully. I carefully stretched out naked on a small dock by the water and let the sun dry me. When I was good and dry I put the armor on and walked across the bridge into Imperial City.

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Chapter 6A: The Arena


The Arena was dirty; I shouldn't have bothered cleaning up. Blood smeared the walls; the place reeked of death, blood, sweat, and something else really disgusting. Everyone was pretty rude to me, but surprisingly I was given a chance to be a combatant by Owyn, the Blademaster.

My first few fights were over with before they even started; I was casting across the arena before they could cross over to me, just using a small Flare. I wanted to die, without Fathis I felt there was no point in anything. I figured the small Flare would make them mad but not kill them, but I was wrong. They died quicker than a mud crab would have.

I wore a mask so no one would know who I was, and each match I scanned the crowds, looking for Fathis. I had no idea if he even came to the Arena matches, but just in case I was looking. Maybe I was hoping when I died in there that he would be in the crowd and see me lying dead, and be sorry he had misjudged me so harshly.

Because of my high destruction magic skills, I was working my way up through the ranks pretty quickly, even trying to die wasn't enough to keep me from winning the matches.

Then one day they put me in with 3 combatants. I was surrounded and realized that my time had come; it was die or shut up about it. I steeled myself to die, but the first blow stung so badly that I chickened out and started fighting in earnest. The crowds went wild, and started screaming and cheering for me!

It actually felt good to hear them yelling for me. I fought hard and beat the three, but came out of it pretty bruised up.

The Arena has a wonderful fount of healing that refills your magicka and heals your wounds, so my restoration skills (or lack of) weren't tasked too far other than when I was in the ring itself.

There were mats on the floor to sleep, so I began to stay right there at the Arena, sleeping on a dirty mat at the end of each day.

Ysabel Andronicus is the Battle Matron of the Bloodworks, she handles the Grand Championship fights. She is also the trainer and manager of the Gray Prince, even though he is on the Yellow Team, our opponents. At night she managed the women that slept in the Bloodworks on an unofficial basis. We slept where she told us to. She treated us like she couldn't stand us, and I doubt it was an act. If she had her way, I believe she would have been the only female in there. Since she couldn't stop female fighters from being there, she watched over us like a hawk.

Her main point of jealousy seemed to be Owyn, the Blademaster. Owyn had asked her to marry him, and she had turned him down; but for some reason she had a terrible jealousy of any females that had to be around him.

Me being the youngest girl in there, I was her target. She pulled a mat up to the wall behind hers and pointed to it. "That's where you sleep!" she commanded, pointing at me. I didn't care, as long as I had a mat to lay on at the end of the day.

Andronicus would sit in her chair that blocked the way to our two mats and glare at any of the males that stepped near that area once I had laid down to sleep. If they stepped any nearer she would stand up quickly and they would run back where they had come from! If Owyn even glanced over that way she would burn him with the glare she cast at him! I was protected, but probably didn't need to be; after all, I was the only Khajiit down there, and an albino to boot!

***



Chapter 6B: The Gray Prince


I made friends with the Gray Prince, (well, that is his fighting name). His real name is Agronak Gro-Malog, and he is the Grand Champion of the Arena, and a really nice guy (for an Orc). He is from the Yellow Team, but always practices in our Bloodworks. I always watched him practice, trying to pick up some fighting skills. Agronak knows fighting moves I've never even seen Alix make. As huge and powerful as Agronak is, and in spite of the fact that he is an Orc, who are usually anything but graceful - Agronak is. He would spin and leap the equal of any Khajiit.

Like all the other Pit Dogs, I hung around Agronak like a buzzing mosquito, watching him and trying to figure out how he did some of the moves that he was famous for. How we ended up becoming friends had a lot to do with color. Both of us were the wrong color for our race. Things like that have a tendency to draw you together. Agronak is a blue Orc.

Agronak says he is only half Orc, that his father was a Lord. It was the first time I had ever met anyone of mixed race, and it brought back to me all the times I'd wondered if I was. We talked a lot about our color, and how people treated us differently, even people of our own race. Agronak had been treated like a freak just like I had. He had pushed himself just like I had, that is why he was so educated, more so than most Orc. Oh, he was well respected now, as the Grand Champion of the Arena, but it hadn't always been that way for him. He shared things with me he had never shared with another because we had that bond.

I guess because of S'Jirra and Alix I always thought a mix of race could not produce, the Gods would bind your womb or something. Seeing Agronak had really made me wonder, is it possible that I might be only half Khajiit. Not just because of my different coloring, but now that I had grown I had a lot less fur than any Khajiit I had ever seen, it was so sleek that it almost looked like skin. It's not that I hadn't wondered it a million times, but suddenly it was an actual possibility.

That thought began to cross my mind a lot after Agronak and I became friends. I stared at my reflection in the water every chance I got trying to see another race in my appearance, but could detect nothing that clearly spoke of any race I knew.

Still though, if a Lord who was obviously not an Orc could fall in love with an Orc woman and have a baby, maybe there was hope for me and Fathis - that is if he would even think about it. I had even read books on Dunmer and Bosmer matches while at the University, of course I was neither, and maybe the fur made a difference. And of course, Fathis would not even see me, so that ended that.


I readied for my next fight in the Arena, once again feeling that hopeless feeling of loss that filled my heart to exclusion of all other thoughts.

***


One day the Gray Prince asked me to do him a favor. His mother had died, and given him a key to the private quarters of a place called Crowhaven. She said he would find the truth about his birth there. He was supposed to be the son of an actual Lord, and he wanted proof to show everyone that an Orc really could be of royal blood.

It is funny how much Agronak and I were alike. Both of us different coloring for our race, both of us wondering our own heritage, feeling like we didn't fit in, being treated like freaks - well, not Agronak, not any more.

Since he was the Grand Champion of the Arena now, people looked up to him, he was no longer living under that stigma of being a freak.

But he had, just like I had. When you are the wrong color, even your own race doesn't want you, and Agronak had suffered just like I had over that.

Agronak's favor he asked me to do was to go get the proof and bring it to him, as he had matches scheduled all week. People were always challenging him, but they all went home in a box.

Of course he was my friend, and I would be happy to for that reason alone, but he also offered to teach me some of his fancy moves in payment for my troubles. Anyone that has ever seen Agronak in action knows he has some moves that make the crowds go wild in that Arena.

I was happy to help him, even without the incentive of the fancy moves; but I can't say I would turn down the training from him if given the chance. I had some matches coming up too, but I was just a Warrior rank, and this sounded like a great opportunity. I pictured myself doing those fancy moves I'd seen Agronak make; how many times I had tried to imitate him!

Yes, I would help Agronak, even though it meant getting Owyn mad. (That was easy to do, he stayed mad most of the time; but in spite of his overall nasty demeanor toward us, we all liked him once we got used to it, and felt he liked us too). It's funny, Owyn was as hateful to us as Andronicus, but we all felt he liked us and knew she didn't!

Owyn lectured me about taking off from fighting, I expected that.

The Gray Prince was on the Yellow team, our "foes" I guess, and I think Owyn's biggest concern was that I was thinking of changing sides. He had told me already that the crowds were coming to see me and cheer me on, maybe he thought that had given me a big head. I saw the worry behind his eyes. I wasn't big on talking, and neither was Owyn unless it was him doing the talking, so we parted with him still worried that I was going to be wearing yellow next time I stepped into the Arena.

***



Chapter 6C: Crowhaven


Finding Crowhaven was easy enough, although I had to fight my way past two guardian skeletons to get in. The place was filthy with death inside, and you could smell old death as well.

Even with out having ever smelled it before I knew what that smell was. Undead. I stopped and readied some fire spells. I was tempted to ready my Eye of Khajiit, but remembered how weak it had made me before. That and it being a higher power, it would take a full day to recharge it, and no telling how many enemies I would be facing in this place.

"No, don't even bother with that." I thought. "Invisibility and detect life. Yes, that will do till I find out what I am facing down there." I started feeling a little pride at how carefully I was planning till I heard my own breathing. I sounded like a panting dog! I crouched down into a sneaking position.

My detect life spell showed a man outlined by the pink glow just around the corner from me. Oh dear. I crept up to where the figure was, angling myself to get the best shot with my fireball. I admit, I was using the Enemies Explode for this, and I was scared. I may want to die, but not here. Not in this place, where no one would ever find me.

My spell hit the man, but instead of the explosion throwing him into bits like it had on the bandits and marauders, this man flew up in the air in one piece, emitting a horrible hissing scream. My blood turned to jelly in my veins, suddenly thickened. I knew what that meant; I better run or get ready for the fight of my life! I ran.

Before I hit the door, I turned around and cast the detect life again to see if the man was chasing me. No pink glow, had he run too? I stayed crouched and didn't move, being very quiet and listening. Nothing. Another detect life, nothing. Well I was not creeping down in this blasted darkness with that scream still fresh in my mind! I used my Night Eye and invisibility. My heart was pounding as I crept back down the passage, that snarling scream had me terrified!

Against the wall of the adjoining passage I could see a large lump, quite a ways from where I had hit that man. No pink glow, whatever it was it was not alive. I crept closer, but up on my haunches so I could run quickly if I had to. When I got closer to the lump, I could see it was the man, and he was dead - no, not a man. He looked like a man, but reeked of the undead. I searched his body and found Vampire Dust.

"A vampire! Oh no!" I gasped.

We had learned about vampires at the Arcane - or maybe I should say we were taught about them. None of us had ever actually seen one, or fought with one before. Well, I guess I was the first. I wished there was someone a lot wiser than me I could ask for advice from now! Well, that obviously wasn't happening. I strained my brain to remember everything we had learned about the creatures at the University. Kill with fire; drink a potion made of garlic and what else? Mandrake root?

Alchemy, ugh. Oh I passed the few courses I took In Alchemy, but it was not one of my favorite subjects so I had promptly stopped carrying my mortar and pestle. I guess I would have to start carrying it again out here in the real world. The garlic was supposed to keep you from getting some disease vampires had, (with some ridiculous name we all laughed about after class; chasing each other around saying we had it, and never pronouncing it right). Was it garlic and mandrake root? Yes?I think.

My sword was not made of silver or enchanted, it would be useless against the undead. Best forget I had that with me. I needed fire, and the Enemies Explode had fire, and even if it didn't explode these creatures, it did kill them.

Maybe I should leave and come back another time when I was more prepared, but that might be forever, and I had given my word to my Orc friend. In for a Septim, I guess I was as ready as I ever would be.

The rest of the horrible place went about the same as that first vampire, and every time I heard that hissing, snarling scream my blood curdled in my veins. By casting Enemies Explode, I was killing them before I got close enough to be bitten. I checked my magicka, and kept a close eye on it. If I ran out at a crucial time, I would be dead or worse.

Finally I came to a locked door. This must be it, so I pulled out the key Agronak had given me. It fit the lock. His family must have been long gone since this place was taken over by vampires. I just wanted to find the proof Agronak needed of his royal bloodlines and get out of this horrible place!

Being as this was, (in essence), a crypt, I did not expect to find any living creatures locked up within, surely they would have long since died, and yet I sensed or heard a sound, like a movement. Maybe there were rats? I cast a detect life, and was terrified to see the pink outline detailing the shape of a man. How could a man be locked in here? How would he survive? Could it be another vampire?

Crouching very low to the ground, I crept as close to the walls as possible, barely moving forward with each step, just barely moving. What fur I still had was standing out, senses honed in to hear any sounds of movement. I did not want this creature finding me before I found it, if creature is what it was. Especially since he was up one level higher than I was, and could see me easier than I could see him.

"Stairs, good" I thought. It looked like these stairs would lead up to the level this man was on. I cast the detect life to be sure where he was. Thank goodness he was at the other end of this upper floor, but he was moving around in rapid jerky movements, and could easily reach where I was standing very quickly. I had never seen such speed in movements before, it was terrifying!




Chapter 6D: Lord Lovidicus



At the top of the steps I found furnishings! This was someone's living quarters! Was Lord Lovidicus still alive? Somehow I had always assumed he was dead, why else would Agronak have to prove his birth this way? I crept closer; I had to see if that was a Lord or a vampire.

It was Lord Lovidicus! I stood up to talk to him, tell him about his son sending me, but as my first words of greeting left my mouth Lord Lovidicus wheeled and ran at me with such speed that I was unable to move before he was attacking me. It was Lord Lovidicus, yes, but he was a vampire!

The split second I stood up to speak to him, he flew at me and attacked me with such force that it sent me staggering! I had to kill him, my best friend's father, and I had to kill him! The sound of his hissing snarl confirmed to me that he was indeed a vampire, as if I had any doubts.

There were some things you never did learn in the University, things that I learned well in this horrible place. Something I would never forget, and that was what a vampire looked like, and the blood curdling sound of their death screams, and that horrible hissing!

Oh why did I not pay more attention in class when they were teaching us about Vampires! We all giggled and laughed, running around saying, "I'm a vampire!" and pretending to bite each other on the necks after class, we all acted so stupidly, I could see that now.

Still, the teacher could never have ever experienced a vampire in his lifetime, or he would have instilled the horrors of what I had experienced in this place into each of us. There was nothing funny about real vampires! None of us took it seriously, had we but known the real horror of what we were being taught, well maybe we would have sobered up and listened!

The telltale etching of Lord Lovidicus face had declared his condition in the split second before he attacked me, but there was no time to react. I was as frozen in place as if he had cast a spell on me, but he hadn't. I had never seen such speed as Lord Lovidicus had shown when he charged at me; and I stood for what seemed like a long time, still shaken by the speed and viciousness of Lord Lovidicus' attack.

My knees were beginning to buckle, but I could not give in to the faintness I was feeling, and lay on the floor of this horrible place! I had to make myself move!

Oh, how would I ever tell Agronak that I had killed his father! Or what his father had become! "Oh, Agronak!" I sobbed out.

Before I could let the horror of what had just happened take over, I had to get out of this place! I forced myself not to think while I started grabbing up anything that seemed to be of value to bring to Agronak. It was his after all, and shouldn't be left down here for vampire fodder.

As I searched, I began to feel a weakness and heaviness beginning in my arms and legs, then spreading through me. My head was still reeling from the attack, and I began feeling sick to my stomach, and then worse. I could feel something creeping through my blood into my brain. My head began spinning and a weakness took over my body. It felt like I couldn't stand, and I stood there swaying till I fell to the floor. It felt like my limbs were too heavy to move. I had to get out of here!

"Oh NO!" I groaned. It suddenly occurred to me what was happening! What was that stupid name for the disease you catch from vampires? I knew I had caught it. It didn't take a healer to figure that out. What had I done to myself now?

I lay on the stinking floor of that place till the spinning in my head cleared enough to try and move again. My limbs still felt too heavy to move, but I forced them to. I searched through everything I could, not just to find the proof for Agronak, but maybe for a cure.

There were no cure potions in that place, but I did find Lord Lovidicus's journal, a kind of diary he kept I guess. I did not open it, but chucked it in my pack and started struggling to make my way out of there. I gathered up everything of value I came across, to give to Agronak. I did not want him having to come get his inheritance from this place.

His inheritance? How would I tell him that I had killed his father? How could I tell him that? The weakness began to make my head swim again, I had to get out of here; I would have to sort out what to tell him later. For now, survival was all I could afford to waste my strength on.

***


Chapter 6E: Porphyric Hemophilia



I don't know how long it took to reach the door to the outside and fresh air. It seemed forever. When I finally did reach the outside, I collapsed on my back and stared up into the beautiful blue sky outside. How could it be so pretty and clean out here, when such a vile thing had just happened to me right here in this same place? I reeked of the undead and felt the vileness of that vampire's disease running through my veins, while breathing in the cleanest air I had ever smelled. I was fouling the air with the filth on me.

The wonderful scent of fresh sea was wafting up to me from the south. I followed the scent till I found the beautiful sea, and I bathed; scrubbing every bit of the horror of that place out of my fur. I could have scrubbed till I bled and it would never have felt clean enough, not with that disease inside me.

There was a sandy strip of shore nearby that the sun was warming, so I made my way to it and sun-dried; thinking till my head ached from thinking so hard.

What had we learned about this disease? We were all laughing at the name so much that we didn't pay attention to the rest of the lecture. What was the cure? Mandrake root? Probably, but it would take a ton of it, unless it was mixed in a potion. Did I need to go to a healer at a chapel? I think so.

Clinging to the shore, I headed back toward the Imperial City till I reached Anvil, a beautiful waterside town that I had passed on my way to Crowhaven. "Bah!" I spat out. I never wanted to think of that name again!

On the way, I grabbed at every flower I found and ate it, not even bothering to remember if it would do good or harm, just anything to try and get that disease out of me. It wasn't from hunger.

Khajiit rarely feel that constant hunger that other races do, our metabolism is different than the other races. Oh, we get hungry, just not as often, we seem to use every bit of food and process it better than other races. I wasn't eating out of hunger, in fact I felt I would retch up everything I was eating; my stomach seemed to be closing up. No, I was thinking maybe something I ate would stop this disease.

It took forever to walk, my legs felt like tree stumps, thick and heavy. I stayed along the shore, so all I would have to fight would be mud crabs, I had seen wolf in the fields on my way to Crowhaven. "Bah!" I spat again. There was that name again! I did not want that name to ever sully my mind again!

***




Chapter 6F: A Cure By Any Other Name




When I finally arrived in Anvil, I asked the guard at the gate for directions, I told him I had been bitten by a mud crab. He told me where the Mages Guild and Chapel were.

"The Mages Guild, oh no!" They might know me, how embarrassing!" I thought. I chose the chapel instead, but when I got there a guard was blocking entrance to it, and I could see blood all over the doors and steps out front. I backed away. "what's going on here?" I wondered.

The Mages Guild was just around the corner, where I had just come from. I went to the door of the Guild, hesitated, and then walked by it. The Mages Guild is like a hotbed of gossip, you could do something in one city, and within a day all the other city's Guilds were buzzing with it.

What if someone I knew was in there? What if it got back to Delphine? And then the worst thought of all struck me. Fathis was a member of the Mages Guild! No way I would let him know I had this Vampirus Horrifica, or whatever it was called! I would die first! How much worse could my situation get?

I saw an Inn up the road, and went to it instead. I asked the merchant behind the desk what he had for sale, but he had no cure disease potions. When he saw I was disappointed with what he had for sale, he referred me to the dock area where there was a store called "Lelles's Quality Merchandise," he said to try them.

Lelles did have some cure disease, just one bottle. I didn't know if that would work or not, I felt like I should drink 10 or 20 just in case, and still visit the healers. I looked at the rest of his inventory; he had a couple cheap scrolls, so I bought them.

I walked out behind the waterfront businesses and collapsed down on the grass. I could see the mat of some homeless person, and hoped he would not come to it any time soon, since it was not dusk yet. I gathered the scrolls and the cure disease potion, and used a trick we learned at the University for magically multiplying an object. It worked, and now I had two bottles of cure disease. I picked one bottle up and did the trick again, and kept doing this till I had 20 bottles of it, and then I began to drink them, one right after another. I wasn't sure how many it would take, but I wanted to be sure I was cleaned of this vile disease. By the 5th bottle my stomach revolted, and I could not even swallow another drop. I felt the liquid heaving up toward my throat and leaned over just in time to vomit it out.

"Oh no, well this stuff can't cure me if it won't stay down!" I thought. I tried again and again; multiplying more of the cure disease when I came close to running out.

The whole night was spent that way, duplicating and drinking potions, then retching. By then I didn't care if that homeless person did see, he could have sat in my lap while I duplicated, I was frantic to cure this disease!

By morning another problem had taken hold. Between all those potions and raw plants I had eaten on my way here, I felt a rumbling in my stomach like a volcano was going to erupt. I ran to a place along the shore that was out of sight of the waterfront businesses, and removed all my clothing and armor, then dug a hole in the sand and released the raging, burning diarrhea that had threatened to explode the whole way.

When it finally ended, I covered up the hole with sand and waded out into the water up to my waist, cleansing my self fully. My whole bottom felt like it was on fire, and my tail hung to one side in a stiff awkward pose. No matter how I swished it, it held that pose.

"What now!" I asked aloud, ready to scream. "What if someone sees me like this?" I thought to myself.

Someone on the docks (eyeing my tail, I am sure) said that the Chapel in Skingrad had a healer. Skingrad was on my way to the Imperial City, so I headed out.

Somewhere along the way to Skingrad the kink in my tail finally went away, but now my tail hung down limply and I couldn't swish it at all. I guess it was expressing how I was feeling, lower than a snake's belly. Anyway, a dragging tail is better than a kinked one.

When I eventually reached Skingrad, I got directions to the chapel from the gate guard, telling him I had been bitten by a mud crab. The chapel was fairly easy to find from his directions, even though Skingrad is a pretty big place.

It took forever to find the healer when I reached the chapel though. What a place! No one there seemed to keep any regular hours, they just meandered in and out as they pleased! It seemed like I waited forever before a young pretty girl showed up to heal me.

"She has to be too young to know what she is doing!" I thought aloud.

She assured me she did, and the others all gave their opinions that she was as good as Cirroc in Bruma. (Whoever that was). Her name was Marie Palielle, and she was very sweet.

"So am I cured?" I asked her. "I have more Septims, can you do it again to be sure?"

My biggest fear was that she may be curing me for just the mud crab bite I had lied to her about. I didn't know if these healers took an oath of some sort that kept them from telling other people about everyone's diseases!

"Better give me a cure for every disease there is just in case!" I said, pulling out my purse. "Don't start with the diseases that start with the letter A, go straight for the horrible ones just in case! Do you have any cures that start with the letter V?" I asked, trying to sound like I was just covering all the bases.

Well, it was all I could do. I offered to pay her more to do the healing again, and would have kept giving her every Septim I had to keep doing the healing if she hadn't stopped me.

When I finally left she turned to Tumindil, who was glaring at her for not taking the Septims. "I couldn't take her money, she had no disease when she came, just an upset stomach!" she said, letting his glares glance off her.

I left Skingrad, avoiding some weird Wood Elf that kept hissing at me trying to get my attention. Now to face Agronak.





*** The Arena:

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/52/l_7af01ecbb87b4b46a4bcb63b5ed268b8.jpg


*** Owyn:


http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/12/l_b481655aa9164baf9df10bff549d116b.jpg






Here is a picture of The Gray Prince, my friend Agronak:

http://www.uesp.net/w/images/images.new/d/d8/OB-GrayPrince.jpg



*** Lord Lovidicus:

http://www.uesp.net/w/images/images.new/c/c5/Lord_Lovidicus.jpg
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 1:06 am

I see some real skill coming along here, fueled by a solid passion for your story. :tops:

Speaking of the story, the love interest with Fathis is interesting. Is Maxical condemned to unrequited love? I am wondering a bit why she seems to have abandoned or delayed her search for Fathis' armor to pursue the Gray Prince's quest?

I found several of your passages extremely compelling and well-written:

"Oh why did I not pay more attention in class when they were teaching us about Vampires! We all giggled and laughed, running around saying, "I'm a vampire!" and pretending to bite eachother on the necks after class, we all acted so stupidly, I could see that now. Still, the teacher could never have ever experienced a vampire in his lifetime, or he would have instilled the horrors of what I had experienced in this place into each of us. There was nothing funny about real vampires! None of us took it seriously, had we but known the real horror of what we were being taught, well maybe we would have sobered up and listened!"

"I don't know how long it took to reach the door to the outside, and fresh air. It seemed forever. When I finally did reach the outside, I collapsed on my back and stared up into the beautiful blue sky outside. How could it be so pretty and clean out here, when such a vile thing had just happened to me right here in this same place? I reeked of the undead and felt the vileness of that vampire's disease running thru my veins, while breathing in the cleanest air I had ever smelled. I was fouling the air with the filth on me. I followed the scent of fresh sea water till I found the beautiful sea, and I bathed; scrubbing every bit of the horror of that place out of my fur. I could have scrubbed till I bled and it would never have felt clean enough, not with that disease inside me."

How can we make it even better? Just the opinions of a fellow novice, but here we go:

Use more dialogue. One of the best ways to develop the personality of your char is in dialogue with others. S'Jirra, Gray Prince, Owyn - yes, it may mean covering less ground in a story.

Rushing. These two stories covered a tremendous amount of ground. Any one of the several elements here would have made a solid story all on its own. Eg: Arena; Crowhaven; Heck, even Maxical's meeting with the Gray Prince.

Speaking of two stories. I would again recommend at least two days between stories to allow your readers time to savor, digest and even possibly craft some helpful comments. Too much too fast encourages your readers to gloss over things and be reluctant to provide detailed comments that might really help you.

Ork: "?really nice guy (for an Ork). He says he is only half Ork, and he really does have a funny coloring for an Ork, so he is probably?." Later in the story you corrected this to Orc.

Awkward sentence: "What Agronak asked me to do, he asked me to go get the proof and bring it to him, as he was all "matched up" for the week."

Regarding critique, I would not recommend you attempt to edit critique items back into your stories. Rather, learn from the critique comments and consider incorporating those that meet your approval into your stories as you move forward.

I surely hope you will continue!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 4:23 am

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**Well, I considered writing in how Fathis found the armor for sale in the Market District, (then have him appear at the Inn to yell at her), but since this was her journal of memories she is writing, I didn't know how she could have known what happened till he appeared at the Inn that day. See, the bandit who attacked her was a Khajiit, so when Fathis Aren saw the armor for sale in the armor shop, he asked the merchant where they had gotten the armor from, the merchant just said a Khajiit had brought it in. Fathis rage took him out of the shop and straight to the Inn without asking any more questions about the Khajiit, or he would have found out it was a brown male Khajiit. So she knows where the armor is now, but has to earn the money to buy it - which she is trying to do at the Arena. She definately still wants the armor back.

I guess I didn't do a good job there. Bobg's story has a lot of behind the scenes action, and it clarifies what is happening to Angel - that is what I need to do as well, I guess. I was doing it like Arwen did, just her journal - but I can see where a good portion of behind the scenes action cuts out of understanding the full story. I will do better !!! Thanks Acadian, I went back and forth on whether to put Fathis Aren's part in there, I guess I should have.

** I can't tell if what she is feeling for Fathis Aren is the puppy love of a child for a hero, (in her eyes) or if she will grow out of this, now that she is becoming a woman. In the Arcane, he was her main focus point, but now that she is out in the real world, there are so many other things she will need to focus on, so I really can't say at this time. (and no, it is not like Bethesda, knowing but refusing to say, lol. I really haven't figured out where it will go) - but I give my word that even if it continues there will be no six scenes, lol. (I did NOT download the six mod, although I was rolling on the floor laughing when I saw it).

**Oh, I am so sorry I mis-spelled Orc! Thank you for pointing that out!

** I was trying to say he had matches scheduled all week from people challenging him, I guess I phrased it really badly, I really have to be more careful, I also noticed I had written "waste" instead of "waist" - I fixed that.

** You are right, it is still sounding rushed to me too! And I tried to slow it down this time! I guess I need to slow it down even further. Thanks very much for keeping on me for that, I need to hear it!

Acadian you are a huge help to me. I have been having trouble waiting for critiques because no one is writing any, lol. Thank goodness for you, or my story would never get read !!! I really appreciate you wading thru my writing and helping me do better at it.
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 4:22 am

On second thought, I may have been unfair in questioning your plot. After rereading, it does indeed seem clear enough. Fathis has the armor, believing Maxical sold it. Maxical entered a despondent period, wandering to the IC. Arena is a means to keep her fed and possibly address a tendancy towards suicide gesture. Met the Gray Prince. Forgive me; It does make sense.

Like you, I would enjoy seeing some others with more critical talent than I jumping in to provide insights and opinions. You have talent and passion. A touch of encouragement and craft tips would certainly help.

Keep going, my friend. :)
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 6:48 am

On second thought, I may have been unfair in questioning your plot. After rereading, it does indeed seem clear enough. Fathis has the armor, believing Maxical sold it. Maxical entered a despondent period, wandering to the IC. Arena is a means to keep her fed and possibly address a tendancy towards suicide gesture. Met the Gray Prince. Forgive me; It does make sense.

Like you, I would enjoy seeing some others with more critical talent than I jumping in to provide insights and opinions. You have talent and passion. A touch of encouragement and craft tips would certainly help.

Keep going, my friend. :)


I fixed it in the chapter above this one, just added the part where Fathis goes to the Market District and sees the armor, which sends him in a rage to the Inn, and then added her going to the shop to find out how much she needed to buy it back. I didn't mean to leave that part out, (where she went to the shop to see the armor). I can see how it was confusing with me leaving that out. It was in my head, just didn't make it onto the paper, lol.

I do wish it had more readers too, but I absolutely appreciate your taking the time to read it and critique it for me. Your input helps a lot !! Thanks again Acadian!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 9:04 am

I began to read this story out of boredom.

By the time I got to the end I was immersed in it.

You've made me feel for this girl cat in a way I rarely feel about characters - and if that isn't good writing, I'll eat the hat which I never wear.

I'll give you a better critique when I have time, but I think these five words will cover it all -

Well done - and write more!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 12:14 am

I began to read this story out of boredom.

By the time I got to the end I was immersed in it.

You've made me feel for this girl cat in a way I rarely feel about characters - and if that isn't good writing, I'll eat the hat which I never wear.

I'll give you a better critique when I have time, but I think these five words will cover it all -

Well done - and write more!


Thank you so much D.Foxy! That really makes me feel good, because I highly look up to your opinion! I have quite a bit of the story written, but have been holding off posting so that I can re-write after the critiques come in and try to better it.
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 11:02 am

Chapter 7A: Agronak

As I entered the gates to the Imperial City, I was still no surer of what I would say to Agronak than I had been the day I left that hated place he had sent me to.

When I entered the Arena Bloodworks, Agronak hailed me immediately. "You've returned! So my friend, have you been to Crowhaven yet? Agronak asked.

I still didn't know what to tell him, so I just handed him his father's journal without saying a word.

"What's this? The Journal of Lord Lovidicus! My friend you've done it! This is wonderful news! The words of Lord Lovidicus himself! Perfect!"

Agronak was a big kind man, but he was no avid reader, for all his bragging about being a Prince. Maybe he would never read the journal. I watched him closely as he scanned the first page, terrified at what he might find. Agronak didn't ask if I had met Lord Lovidicus either. Was it possible he didn't know his father had still lived?

"I believe I owe you something, eh? Come on, over here, let me show you these moves!" Agronak said. He laid down the journal and began showing me the tricks he used in the Arena.

To play for time while I decided how to tell him about his father, I let Agronak start training me the special moves he used in the ring, the moves that drove the crowds wild.

The whole time I was learning and practicing the special moves with Agronak, my mind was trying to form the words that would take the happy joy from this sweet man. The words that would destroy forever the man he was, and the friendship we had. Every time I started to speak, I would see the sweetness and trust in Agronak's face, and could not bear to destroy it.

"Oh why did I ever agree to help him!" I thought for the millionth time. Oh, I know, he is my best friend. I could do no less than what he asked of me. I had to go. I know I had to go.

"I don't know what to do!" I whispered to the Gods, in case they ever listened.

What could I possibly say that would ease the pain that he would face if he found out about his father? How could I tell him I had killed his father? Should I tell him that part? Especially since he hadn't asked about Lord Lovidicus? Maybe Agronak didn't know his father had been yet alive, maybe I didn't have to tell him that I had slain him; although keeping this secret was eating me alive inside!

Well, I certainly would not tell him I was guilty of his father's death before I told him what his father was, and that I had to kill him or be killed by him. Oh, but how to start to tell him?

Agronak didn't have the intuitive ability of the Khajiit; he could not tell something was bothering me. He went about his usual routines with his usual happy smile; while I was eating myself up inside with the things I knew but didn't dare tell him.

***





Chapter 7B: The Nord





The tricks Agronak taught me were really exciting, and I knew I would enter the Arena with some new skills that would push me to greater ranks because of them, but even more important, they would get the crowds going wild over me.

A lot of the new young Pit Dogs in the Bloodworks had started watching me practice, and tried to emulate me, just like they did with Agronak, and just like I had done with Agronak.

Half of me couldn't wait to try the moves out; the other half felt guilty even thinking about using them, as they were bought by the secret I still held inside. I struggled with my guilt all week as I prepared for my next match against the yellow team.

Owyn was getting really worked up and excited as he watched me practice, and had been bragging about me with the Blademaster over in the Yellow Team's Bloodworks.

As I headed up to the Arena for my next match, I decided not to use any of the things Agronak had taught me in the Arena. Knowing what I knew, and knowing I had not told Agronak anything I had found, or done at that place; I felt it would be dishonest to use them under the circumstances.

I kept wondering; if I never told him about his father, would he ever find out? Surely he would never go there, or would he? It would be just like him to want to see the place of his birth. But how could I tell him?

My mind was far from the fight ahead of me as I entered the Arena.


***


I guess Owyn's bragging had its effect, the Yellow Team sent up a Nord swordsman with years more experience than I had. He was much larger than me and his reach was almost the full length of my whole body when you put a sword in his hand.

My rank was just Warrior, and I had just achieved that before taking off to do the favor for Agronak; this was my first actual fight as a Warrior. I was way overmatched and out of my league.

When I entered the chute I looked across. The Nord towered almost as high as the gates before they were lowered! Well, if I was going to go down today, I was going to look good doing it. I went over the moves Agronak had taught me in my mind quickly, as the booming voice of the announcer said, "Lower the gates!"

Those words never cease to send chills down my spine. Every time you are standing in that chute and hear them, you know only one of you will be leaving that Arena.

I used every one of the tricks Agronak taught me in the Arena that day; I had to just to stay alive.

The Nord was enormous, and he had a sword longer than Alix used. I dodged and parried repeatedly trying to tire him, but he did not seem to tire.

The Nord was not as fast on his feet as I, or as agile; but he towered above me, and with that abundant size and strength on his side, could easily crush me with one blow or stagger me with one hit.

The only chance I had to get near enough to hit him with my blade was through trickery or getting up under his blade, and I had to be extra quick when darting under his sword arm to keep him from dealing me a crushing blow. It was a dangerous move, but the only way to reach him with my blade or dagger.

Every time I darted under the Nord's sword and parried it up or stabbed him, (or both) then darted out again, the crowd went wild screaming! They knew what a risk I was taking to do it and they let me know how much they appreciated my daring each time.

Oh, it felt so good to hear them cheer for me, it gave me an excitement I have never felt in my life!

The crowd's roaring cheers for me egged me on to do more daring stunts. I started taunting the Nord to lunge at me and then doing a spin Agronak taught me to avoid him at the very last second before his sword pierced me; and as he lunged by me I would pierce him with my blade each time.

The crowd was on their feet now, they were literally screaming for me. It was the greatest feeling I have ever had in my life! I could not feel my exhaustion, my own wounds, the cramps in my legs - none of it when that crowd cheered.

For the first time since I joined the Arena I realized what it really means to be a contestant. I understood for the first time why we live for that crowd out there, and why we are willing to die for it.

In light of this revelation I began to feed the crowd's frenzy. I judged the Nord's distance from me and then did a long rolling tumble, more or less thumbing my nose at the big Nord. The crowd almost climbed over the balcony railings!

It infuriated the Nord. His anger did me well, because he was no longer fighting with a clear head, but out of rage. The crowd could feel his rage, it was that intense. A fighter that gives in to his temper makes stupid mistakes in a sword fight. They don't gauge their charges, they lunge erratically - Alix taught me that.

I took advantage of his temper by taunting him until his rage could not be contained, and he was bellowing loudly as he charged, stabbing wildly at me. A line of foamy drool was rolling down his chin and dripping onto his sword hand, making his grip on it slippery. That was my cue to start fighting on the offense again.

I started repeatedly ducking under his arm to parry, catching my blade in the guard of his blade with one quick motion and then using the strength of my full arm behind it would twist my wrist at just the right second to knock the blade from his hands. I would not have had a shot for this to work with a man of his strength if he had not been drooling on his blade hand. I wasn't able to throw his blade out like I may have had he been my size, but twice I dislodged it from his hands; each time he caught it back before I could deflect it away. Both of those times I had to run for my life from the encounter.

Both times I dislodged his blade, as soon as he recovered it he drove his sword hilt down on me once he caught it, using the hilt and guard because I was too close in for him to use the blade. With his brute strength that hilt and guard was just as deadly as the blade. The guard of his blade caught my shoulder a glancing blow both times. I had to dive down between his massive legs to escape.

That was careless on my part. I had to back off, it felt like my arm might drop off it hurt so badly, I could no longer twist my arm hard on the parry. I could not change blade hands either, I am strictly a right handed swordsman, a terrible flaw if your opponent knows.

Alix taught me always to keep a dagger on my left side, should I lose function in my right arm, I could always just stab with my left hand. This trick really stood me in good stead in this fight. When I ducked under his blade I was too close in for my sword to stab him, instead I had to parry with it to deflect his blade. As long as I was in there, I would grab that dagger and stab anything I could reach. A dagger may not kill a man this size, but I may get lucky and sever something important, there was no time to aim the dagger.

My right arm was hanging limply from the strain of holding the weight of the blade in it after that second shoulder blow. I tried to raise my arm and the pain shot through me so badly my knees almost buckled. I was exhausted and bleeding profusely.

The Nord saw this and lunged in. I had to dodge quickly, but was not quick enough. The gigantic Nord staggered me with the force of his lunge and I felt that huge sword pierce me. I tried to lift my sword arm instinctively and couldn't. The Nord saw my moment of weakness and it gave him power. He turned back around to finish me off.

Twice more the Nord staggered me with a lunge I didn't dodge in time. I was tiring badly and blood was dripping in my eyes, I could barely see.

The crowd gasped in fear and began calling my name in a chant. I could barely move or see, but through the blood I saw some movement and knew he was coming toward me.

Using my left hand I cast quickly in the direction of the movement and hit him with a demoralize spell, I had to have a minute to gather my strength. It didn't last long enough for what I needed.

I had to figure out how to fight this monster with my only sword arm useless. My right arm was also the one I used to cast destruction and restoration spells, so I was defenseless now, except for the dagger in my left hand.

I bent over so the blood would not keep draining in my eyes; acting like I was in a collapse, but watching his movements out of the corner of my eye. He charged in again and when he was at a dead run I threw myself into a tumble towards him, knocking him face first into the dirt with the force of his own momentum. When I felt my body contact his legs I stabbed up with the dagger, catching whatever I could with that blade as he flew over the top of me.

Throwing myself down into that tumble wrenched my shoulder badly, but got him where I needed him, down to my size. I leapt onto him before he could get up and jammed the dagger between his legs.

Blood was dripping into my eyes and I couldn't see what I was hitting, I had to rely on my instincts and force the dagger through his armor. He made no scream, so I twisted the blade. Still no scream. I pulled the dagger out and slashed at the tendon on his ankle nearest me. I was reaching for the other tendon when he rolled over howling. I ran like a banshee, my right arm dragging my sword on the ground as I ran. I kept the dagger out in my left hand in case he was able to follow.

Now I had one good arm and he had one good leg. But he still had his sword. I stayed across the ring from him to rest up, but was trying to watch his movements through the blood dripping in my eyes. A new spot of blood was staining the skirt of his Battle Raiment, so my dagger had done its work, even if he hadn't screamed a verification.

The fight had already lasted much longer than anyone had ever expected, what with a tiny Khajiit female against a strapping Nord male.

I was exhausted; my calves felt like they were filled with rocks where my muscles had knotted. My right arm was dangling with the sword drooping to the ground. I couldn't even lift my arm enough to cast healing onto myself without dropping the blade first.

Owyn told us never to drop our blade in the Arena, it was a sign you had given up. I was not going to drop that sword.

Blood was pouring down my face from a gash on my head caused by the hilt of his sword. I knew head wounds always bled heavily, but still I wished I could heal some. I could feel warm dampness running from my side and leg where his blade had pierced me.

I was covered in blood, both my own and the Nord's. But as I stood there limp facing the giant Nord, the crowd started chanting my name over and over again. Every time that crowd yelled my name a rush of adrenaline would flood over me giving life to the tired limbs that ached as if they may break any second.

The Nord was good, I just barely beat him. I was all but collapsed at the end.

The crowd stood and cheered so loud that I couldn't hear the announcer making his call for me to return to the Bloodworks and rest. I just stood in the center ring and just listened to the crowd, calling my name and cheering.

I had never felt such a feeling! Blood was dripping off me from what seemed like a thousand gashes, my limbs ached till I didn't know if I could move them to walk back to my chute; but the feeling of that crowd cheering seemed to lift it all away! I propped my broken right arm up with my good left arm so my blade went up in a salute to the crowd, and their cheers got even louder.

Oh how good it felt, it was a heady feeling! I think for those minutes when I stood in that ring with the crowd cheering, I could forget everything; really forget everything else, just for those few minutes, and just enjoy the moment.

"How I wish I could just stay out here and keep feeling this way." I was mouthing the words.

Finally the roar of the crowds dimmed enough that the sound of the announcer could be heard, and I turned to head down to the Bloodworks. I really needed the healing fount badly, I was damaged much more than I had realized. I was stumbling and having trouble walking. I was afraid I wouldn't make it to the chute when suddenly I saw a giant blue form leaping down from the balcony. Agronak! He hoisted me up on his shoulders. The crowd started screaming again at that. Agronak pretended it was a hero's parade, showing me to the crowds, but he knew I was not going to make it out of that Arena if he hadn't come and got me.

Agronak ran after he passed the chute, bringing me down off his shoulders and carrying me straight to the healing fount. He laid me across it and activated it for me. I was still holding my sword in my broken arm.

"I didn't drop my sword, see?" I said weakly, but I was proud of that.

Owyn came running up, worried and excited. He took over for Agronak making sure I was healed.

"I didn't drop my sword Owyn, I didn't drop it." I was barely mouthing the words, but Owyn heard.

"I know you didn't, I'm proud of you, real proud. Now you be quiet so I can fix you up here." Owyn had to pry the sword out of my hand to assess my shoulder and arm.

***

Between Agronak's tricks and my natural agility as a Khajiit, I think it was one of the best shows that Arena had ever witnessed!

Owyn was beside himself, I think he may have even done a little jig. He was laughing, actually laughing! That is something none of us had seen before, Owyn even smiling. It was kind of frightening to look at, I guess since Owyn didn't smile much, his face didn't make the smile with ease, so it appeared more like a rack of teeth gleaming at you. I mean his lips didn't shape a smile, he just kind of bared his teeth - but I knew it was supposed to be a smile, and that is all that mattered. I never heard him laugh before, and knowing I was the one that had caused this first; well, it was a great feeling.

Several of the Pit Dogs came up to me after that, congratulating me in awed voices and wanting to get to know me; but most surprising of all were the older fighters, the ones that had been so rude to me that first day I arrived. Suddenly they were slapping me on the back (ouch) and grabbing my arm and smiling when I walked by. I don't know when anything had ever felt this good, but boy was I ever hurting now that it was over.

Oh how I wished Alix could have been there tonight to see me fight that Nord, how proud he would have been!



***



I'd like to give credit to D.Foxy and his fan fiction "Of Blades, Fights, and Assassins, Martial Arts techniques for Combat Writing" for the information, inspiration, and battle techniques I used to write the fight scene in this chapter. I hope I have interpreted his teaching correctly. Here is a link to that thread:

http://www.gamesas.com/bgsforums/index.php?showtopic=1037618


There is a future chapter coming up that will actually be co-written by D. Foxy





Chapter 7C: The Aftermath


It couldn't last, of course, eventually everything calmed down and here I was facing the problems I had gone into the Arena thinking about. And just as the thought hit, here came Agronak. He gave me a huge Orc hug (they knock the wind out of you when they hug you).

"I went up to the Arena and watched your fight!" Agronak said, pride filling his voice.

"I wouldn't have made it out of the Arena if you hadn't got me like that" I answered truthfully.

Oh, how could I ever hurt this dear man by telling him the truth? I slipped my tiny white hand into Agronak's massive blue one, and we leaned our backs against the wall. What a sweet person he was! Agronak had taken time out of his training to go up to the Arena and watch my fight, something he never did!

Agronak had a strict policy of never watching the opponents, because one day they may be challenging him, and he felt it would give him too much advantage to know their moves. It was one of the reasons he practiced in the Blue Team bloodworks - not to give himself an advantage by seeing their moves; no. It was to give his opponents the advantage by seeing his own moves. To have such high principles; well, he was a real Prince like girls dream of growing up, except he was an Orc and blue colored.

It always made me feel guilty about my own principles, or lack of; to keep lying to my best friend.

"I brought you some food, your favorites!" Agronak said, holding up a sack. I raised my hand that was enveloped in his massive one to my lips and kissed his bulging blue knuckles, smiling up at him as he towered above me.

"What a dear man you are!" I said to him, my own guilty thoughts swirling through my head as I listened to Agronak talk.

We walked hand in hand over to my mat on the floor and sitting across from each other, Agronak opened the sack and pulled out the sweet rolls he knew I loved, then some strawberries, my other favorite; both things I never bought myself.

While we ate together, Agronak talked on and on about the fight, and the things people were saying in the crowds about me as a fighter. He was as excited as I was over the fight today, and really he should be.

If it hadn't been for his training, the fight today would have ended very differently. I was outmatched, that was clear.

Agronak said the same thing. When he heard who the Yellow Team was sending in against me, it had been all he could do not to fight the guy on his way into the Arena, just to wear him down to my level!

Yes, Agronak was a true friend, the best friend a person could ever ask for.

What kind of friend was I? The guilt hit me hard and turned my stomach.

The strawberries and sweet rolls were not sitting well with the secrets I was carrying, secrets that would destroy this gentle giant of a man. But I just couldn't do it.

I prayed to Akatosh that Agronak would never find out the truth, because I could not bring myself to speak it.


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Chapter 7D: The Prince





The day I was dreading came, Agronak did read his father's journal all the way through, and for some reason Lord Leviticus (that idiot) talked about being a vampire in his journal! Oh, why did he feel the need to write that in there? Agronak came to me, his bluish skin looking even more pronounced in his agony. I could see the question in his eyes before he even asked it, and I think he could see the answer in my eyes, even though I never spoke.

Yes, he knew now that he was the son of a vampire. He said it over and over; that the Lord he was a son of was not a man, but a vile creature.

Agronak changed that day, he went from being the happy outgoing Orc I had always known him to be, to the terribly unhappy man I had always feared he would be once he knew. His shoulders stayed slumped down, and he never smiled. I wished for the hundredth time that I had never gone on that trip for him, but there was no changing the past now, much as I prayed for some miracle to have wiped out that chapter of my life, of my friends life.

Lord Lovidicus had not just destroyed his wonderful son's life, but mine as well. I had to live a lie since I took that trip, keeping secrets from my best friend, was still keeping secret that I had slain his father. I had to live with the fact that the news I had brought him had ruined everything he had ever known about himself, and that he still didn't know all of it. I had to live with that, and it ate through me like an acid, burning through my brain and stomach continuously.


Agronak and I talked about it a lot together, our strange appearances, our strange backgrounds. I had told him about Fathis, and the armor. Agronak knew I had no desire to live, and he had never understood that. Till now. That changed too.

What Agronak learned about himself, it took away not only the happiness, but his very will to live.

Maybe what kept us close was the fact that I was the only one he could talk to about it. Agronak still came every night at the end of our workouts or matches. And we sat hand in hand and talked about it; every night the same conversations. Mostly our lack of desire to stay here on this earth as things stood. Agronak had never understood my feeling that way, but now we had this in common too.

I ached for the pain I had caused him, and ached for the pain I was withholding from him.

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Chapter 7E: The Pact




The day I made Champion, Owyn told me there was only one fight left. I didn't know what he meant, and when he explained I almost screamed "NO!" in his face. I would not fight my best friend! Owyn had not ever had a fighter like me on his team before, and the thought of the Blue Team taking the Grand Championship away from the Yellow Team; well it had been his dream as long as he could remember. He wanted me to make the challenge, wanted it badly. I stormed away from him, and if I hadn't been raised better I would have spit on the floor at his feet!

That night, sitting together, Agronak looked over at me. We had talked about the day I made Champion so, so long ago, long before he asked me to make that trip for him. We had long since planned this night when it came, of celebrating together and how we would toast to each other's success before the Grand Championship bout. That is what we had talked about so long ago, when Agronak was such a happy person.

Agronak is the one that brought up the challenge tonight.

"Congratulations on making Champion!" he said, "I always knew you could do it." Agronak's voice was expressionless, was he doing this just because he thought he should? Because it was what we planned?

"I won't fight you!" I said, as firmly as I could for the tears were crushing my eyes, making my voice break as I said it. "I'll quit the Arena first!"

"We always talked about this day," Agronak began again. "You know you have to challenge me, it is just the way it is." he said. "Remember? We were going to celebrate together, toast each other? We both knew this day would come." Agronak pulled a bottle out from under his vest, it was Tamika 415.

"How did you get that?" I asked, knowing the answer before he said it.

"I slipped it out of the Yellow Team manager's locker," he said with a small twist of his lips that was the closest thing to a smile I had seen since he had found out about his heritage. "Now let us talk about what we have to do." he said, his face reforming back to the haunted look.

"I won't do it, that is final!" I said, the tears pouring down my face now. I threw myself against him and cried on the closest point to his shoulder I could reach. The tears would not stop, once they started. I cried for the great man he had been, who's existence was shattered by the information I was responsible for bringing him; I cried for the secret I had never shared with him, and never would - that I had killed his father; I cried for Fathis, for how I had shattered his faith in me; I just cried.

Agronak cried too then, big giant tears rolling down his cheeks. We huddled on the floor of that Bloodworks in that position for hours, just holding each other and crying.

Looking back on my life that night as we cried together, I came to realize that I had hurt everyone that I had ever touched; oh, I could see that clearly now. S'Jirra crying, and I refused to comfort her; that young girl who took care of me as an infant dying out there in the wilderness, where she would not have been if they hadn't been trying to hide my freakish appearance away in a place no one would ever see me; Fathis. And now I had destroyed my best friend's life and killed his father. Maybe the superstitions were correct, maybe white Khajiit were an ill omen! What was wrong with me? Why had everything I had ever tried to do come out so wrong?

Sometime in the night while we cried, the thought came to me; that if we had to do this Grand Championship match, that I was going to let Agronak leave that Arena still Grand Champion. While this thought was taking shape in my mind, Agronak started talking.

Agronak told me he could not live, knowing what he was, the spawn of the vilest creature imaginable. Nothing I said would talk him out of it. I had always shared my feelings of wanting to die with Agronak, well now he was sharing his with me.

We could have argued back and forth about which one of us deserved to die the most, I guess, but suddenly we were both still. No one brought it up first, I am sure of that. But it was suddenly in both our minds at the same time. The idea, I know I didn't suggest it, and don't remember Agronak suggesting it either. But somehow the idea was there as plain as day. We would both die in the Arena Match. Both pull our strongest weapon and at the same time, strike.

We both just knew what we had to do; our bond of friendship was strong enough that we would do this one thing for each other. We looked each other in the eye for a long time, and then we shook hands on it. I didn't release Agronak's hand, but continued to hold it, the hand of my best friend; our last time we would have on this earth, and we just sat silently side by side, holding hands. It was nothing like the celebration we had planned when I first met him and we became friends, nothing like it. It killed me to see the change in Agronak, changes that were there because of me. Yes, we would both strike, and each help the other out of this misery we both felt was our lives. I guess friends do that for each other.

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Chapter 7F: The Challenge


The formal challenge was made two days later.

Owyn contacted the Black Horse Courier and all three Khajiit came to cover the formal challenge. Owyn slipped them each a blue press pass to the Grand Championship fight hoping it would help them to think more kindly when reporting about his team in the future. He had not exactly received kind reviews before, not up till my bout with that Nord.

The staging for the formal announcement was outside the Arena in the garden area on one of the stone platforms.

A huge crowd had gathered, I couldn't believe how many! It looked like everyone in the whole Imperial City was there on the lawns to watch the formal challenge! I tried to scan the crowd for familiar faces, but all the fighters from both the Blue and Yellow Teams were gathered, and it would take someone a lot taller than me to see over their heads!

Owyn and I stood on one side of the platform, Agronak and the Blademaster for the Yellow Team stood on the other. Andronicus and the Arena Announcer stood in the middle of the platform to conduct the challenge, his big booming voice carrying well over the sound of crowds as he began his spiel.

"We have the Gray Prince here, ladies and gentlemen! One of the greatest fighters Cyrodiil has ever seen!" First he gave a buildup of the Gray Prince, going over all his accomplishments and highlights of his career. Then he turned to me and Owyn. "And then we have the Challenger from the Blue Team!" He went over my career and quick rise through the ranks from Pit Dog to Champion; and then gave some highlights from my career, beginning with that fight against the Nord.

The Black Horse Courier was given front row access so they could do an interview afterwards, and they were following every word, frantically scribbling it down.

When it came time to make my challenge I waited till Agronak had stepped up to the center before I stepped up, out of respect for him. The crowd cheered when he stepped up. These people loved Agronak. They loved me too, when I was not going against their favorite. I would get no cheers in the ring in this fight! I stepped up to the sound of booing.

I gave my formal challenge as loudly as I could, but the Arena Announcer still had to repeat my words for the crowds. Agronak accepted, we shook hands, each looking in each others eyes with a million thoughts about what lay ahead. The crowd cheered; and then hushed as Agronak and I answered questions for the Black Horse Courier.

"Who do you think will win?" "What thoughts went through your mind when you were making the challenge?" "Do you think you can beat the Gray Prince?" "Aren't you two friends?" "How will this affect your fight?" "Are you scared going into this match?"

The questions went on and on. I followed the scripted answers Owyn had schooled me in before this formal challenge. He knew what questions would be asked, and gave me the right answers to give.

"We'll have to see now, won't we?" (smile) "I have always been in awe of the great Gray Prince, so I'd say my thoughts were just hoping to be a worthy opponent!" "I hope I can, but in the event I lose there is no greater honor than to have fought the Gray Prince, it will be a spectacular fight!" "Yes, we are all friends. Arena fighters, we are all one family till we get into that ring." "When you get in that Arena, there are no friendships. Any thoughts you have in that Arena other than the fight will get you killed." "Wouldn't you be?" (grin).

It was a staged event to get the public in a frenzy so the Arena seats would be sold out, and it worked! All of Tamriel was abuzz with the news!

This was not just any fight, Agronak was challenged all the time, and it was rarely made into a huge event like this, only the few times that the challenger was someone who would give the crowds a good fight worth laying the Septims down over.

Because of all the new moves Agronak had taught me, I made a splash in that Arena. People knew me and came just to watch me fight. I had Agronak's moves and the natural agility and acrobatics of a Khajiit, and I was exciting to watch, just like Agronak was. My bouts had all been scheduled on the weekends for a quite a while now too, just like Agronaks were, to bring in the bigger crowds.

This match would be the fight of the century, and the Arena box seats were sold out almost instantly when the word went out that the challenge was on, and a match scheduled. The name I took as Champion and Challenger was "The Divine Avenger."
The fight was scheduled for the same day as my 18th birthday. What a day for them to pick, of all days!

***
I wasn't able to talk with Agronak again before the fight; he was over in the Yellow teams Bloodworks getting ready for the match. I was nervous, but determined. Even if I pulled out from striking Agronak, I was going to let him strike me and end my puny existence. I wrote a note to S'Jirra telling her I loved her, and that I was sorry I had been so heartless the last time she had seen me. Then I wrote one for Fathis, thanking him for everything he had done for me, and telling him the truth about the armor. I signed it with all my heart, M. I put the notes in Owyn's locker, for him to deliver when the fight was over. And then I dressed for the Arena Match.


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Chapter 7G: The Grand Championship



I didn't want to be too obvious, by walking into the Arena naked, but I didn't want to wear heavy protective armor either. Something that would look like I was serious about fighting, but would offer me little or no protection so death would come swiftly, that is what I needed. I found some battered Arena Raiment in one of the cupboards and donned it, not even bothering to repair it. It gave little enough protection, and had plenty of places that exposed my skin so Agronak could take a good swipe and kill me quickly.

We both had promised to use our most powerful weapon, so when we entered the Arena, I was surprised to see Agronak carrying his usual Elven sword.

Well, I'd seen him swing that blade plenty, he was deadly with it. I had enchanted my sword with the power of lightning. It might hurt for a split second, but would release Agronak from his life quickly, and with the least amount of suffering. I knew I had to be able to kill him in one hit, and knew I couldn't do it without a strong enchantment.

When they lowered the gates, we both charged out a bit, out of habit. But facing each other, each of us looking into the other's bleak face, we both slowed our steps. When we reached the center ring Agronak said, "Just kill me, please, just kill me!"

"We agreed to do this together; we have to do what we promised!" I told him. He raised his blade, and I raised mine. We touched the blades together in salute to each other. "Count of three?" I asked Agronak. He nodded without a word. I counted aloud, and on two we both raised our swords. I squeezed my eyes shut so I would not have to see the pain on Agronaks face when I struck him.

I don't know how I didn't see that Agronak could not follow through with our agreement. I swung on the count of 3, but felt no piercing stab in return. I looked down and there lay my friend Agronak, dead. He had dropped his blade and never swung at me!

I dropped to my knees beside him and threw myself over the top of him, trying to cast healing spells into him, but he was gone. I rocked back and forth on my heels while a terrible pain welled up from the depths of me until it felt like a volcanic eruption going to explode out of me. I could not hear the announcer's words over the pain that was filling up in me, even though the crowd had gone dead silent. I was groaning in agony, and then the eruption came. My head fell back and I looked up into the heavens and just screamed, and screamed, and screamed. I fell over the top of Agronak's body and sobbed and wept throughout the announcer repeatedly telling me to leave the Arena. They finally called Owyn, who came out and carried me down into the Bloodworks, grabbing Agronak's armor and weapon as he went. I didn't have a scratch on me; Agronak had never even hit me.

As Owyn carried me out of the Arena, I saw a familiar face in the crowd, Fathis was there, and had witnessed me kill my best friend. The one fight he did make it to.


***



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Crystal Clear
 
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 1:51 pm

Well Done, my friend! :celebration:

Overall, beautiful. The emotions, action and story all flow nicely. Wonderful twists to the in-game events we all know and love. Abolutely your best effort so far. Initially, from your first stories, I was concerned that Maxical might to too wimpy and whiney - too much of a 'scared kitten'. That concern has been dispelled. She has blossomed into a capable, yet vulnerable young woman - quite a compelling character now.

Many of your passages created beautiful images for me. Just a couple:

"Yes, Agronak was a true friend, the best friend a person could ever ask for. What kind of friend was I? The guilt hit me hard and turned my stomach. The strawberries and sweetrolls were not sitting well with the secrets I was carrying, secrets that would destroy this gentle giant of a man. I just couldn't do it. I prayed to Akatosh that Agronak would never find out the truth, because I could not bring myself to speak it."

"We both just knew what we had to do, our bond of friendship was strong enough that we would do this one thing for eachother. We looked eachother in the eye for a long time, and then we shook hands on it. I didn't release Agronak's hand, but continued to hold it, the hand of my best friend; our last time we would have on this earth, and we just sat silently side by side, holding hands. It was nothing like the celebration we had planned when I first met him and we became friends, nothing like it. It killed me to see the change in Agronak, changes that were there because of me. Yes, we would both strike, and each help the other out of this misery we both felt was our lives. I guess friends do that for eachother."

For the early part of this story, I was disappointed that you were not using dialogue, despite several opportunities. Later in the story however, once you got Agronak and Maxical really talking to each other, you did wonderfully with the dialogue. I encourage you to keep working with the possibilities that dialogue provides.

I do have some nits. Please bear in mind that they cumulatively pale in comparison to the overall impact of your fine work. Nevertheless:

Lore (sort of). "I penned a note to S'Jirra telling her I loved her, and that I was sorry I had been so heartless the last time she had seen me. I penned one for Fathis" I would have been happier seeing a more lore-friendly term than penned (quilled, scrawled, even wrote).

"...the Yellow Team sent up a Nord swordsman three levels above me." This tells me that Maxical is aware that she is in a PC game and has an understanding of game mechanics. Perhaps I read too much into that, but just wanted to point it out.

Awkwardness / grammar. I will leave it to your review to see if you concur:
"How could I tell him I had killed his own father?"
"...as he went about his usual routines with his usual happy smile, I was eating myself up inside with the things I knew but didn't dare tell him."
"Oh how good it felt, it was a heady feeling!"

Typos. A few. I realize this story was quite long, but just thought I would point them out:
"...to parry the next lung from that gigantic Nord."
"...sitting across from eachother..."
"...thoughts kept swirling thru my head..."
"...sitting across from eachother..."
"...still came evrey night at the end..."
"...holding eachother and crying..."
"...we would do this one thing for eachother. We looked eachother in the eye for a long time..."
"...guess friends do that for eachother."

You seem to be blossoming as a writer, just as Maxical is blossoming as a character. Keep it up!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 6:06 am

** I tried to do what you said and limit the chapter to just one story, and make it more developed. I re-wrote most of this one from what I had originally written for this chapter, and it made it longer, but much more in-depth, thank you so much for your tips on this!!!

** scrawled - oh, great word! I wish I had thought of that one!

** Oh, I see your point. I thought it could have meant levels above re: rank, but that wouldn't fit either, would it. I guess that was a bad mess up.

I proof read after I post, so I got the "evrey" and "lung" already, but I would never have picked up on the "eachother" is it supposed to be "each other?" I apologize to you and my elementary school teacher, how embarassing! I should know that! Also for the awkward sentences, I apologize! Can you believe I majored in English? (Lol, maybe too many years ago?).

Acadian, if my writing is improving it is due to your keeping after me to make it better, and I thank you so much for that!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 10:09 am

Chapter 8A: The Fuel And The Fire


The day Fathis saw Maxical's armor hanging in the shop at the Best Defense, it had shocked him. Why would she have sold the present he had given her? What did she need to buy, S'Jirra took care of all her needs, and she had said she was going there first. Surely she didn't need to sell the armor to make the trip to the tower, S'Jirra could well afford to have funded her that trip. Why had she sold it?

The thought of that blue nose had taunted him then. Maybe she sold the armor because she had a beau, and was putting good old Fathis behind her! A white anger had filled him then, and he had flown down the Faregyl Inn and raged at her.

Maxical's eyes had pleaded with him then, but pleaded with him for what? Understanding that she had a new man in her life? That would never happen!

It all started that day of her graduation, when he had seen the blue markings shading across her nose, and had been startled by it. That blue on her nose meant she was a woman now, Fathis had not expected that, certainly not this soon. He had been relieved to still sense the innocence of youth clinging about her. Maybe she was not ready yet, but very soon would be.

Fathis had decided that he would wait only two weeks and then visit the Faregyl Inn to see if she was still there or had gone on to her new tower. If she was still at the Inn, he would escort her to the tower. He realized she would want to spend time with her family first, she had told him as much.

That was his plan. But soon after that day his own thoughts began to intrude on him, thoughts about Maxical and thoughts about that blue flag on her nose and what it stood for. Fathis had been shocked to realize that she had blossomed into womanhood before his very nose, it had caught him totally off guard.

The thought that soon she would be with a man had suddenly occurred to him, and just as suddenly overwhelmed him. The thought of her being with another man was intolerable!

Fathis realized then that he must act quickly before her youth and innocence were taken from her by another. He had known for some time that he loved her, but that day for the first time he realized that he desired her as well.

***

Fathis wasn't sure when his feelings for Maxical had started. Maybe it had been as early as that first day, although at that point Fathis had not desired her in the same way as he did now.

For so many years he had been bored by the tedium of his life as the Court Mage, and had sought by any means to alleviate it.

The day he had taken over the guardianship of Maxical, that had all changed. That day, bringing her to the Arcane, boredom was overwhelming him at the thought of having to escort a child.

She had surprised him out of his ennui that day, and he had not felt that boredom or tedium since. In Fathis lifetime he had never met a female that had been able to alleviate his boredom, but that tiny Khajiit had managed to do just that.

She had been a little spitfire; her rage, her pride. She would burn to rebel, and yet remain obedient. She was like a little warrior, and it had tickled him when she had taken on those rude crowds with her 'Eye of Khajiit' although he knew it was probably meant for him. Fathis smiled remembering that day.

In her fear of the water, she had turned to him for protection, and he had suddenly felt an overwhelming desire to protect her, a feeling Fathis had never experienced before. To this day he could still remember the feel of her arms clinging round his neck, and how it made him feel that he would easily slay dragons on her behalf to make her feel safe.

Fathis had never had any children of his own, nor ever wanted any. But that day, when Maxical turned to him for protection, Fathis had suddenly had a vision of having his own child looking up to him, turning to him for protection.

A long list of his previous conquests flashed through his mind then, all of them dissatisfactory as candidates to be the mother of his child. As yet he had never met a woman he was willing to wed, although he had found many he was willing to share his bed with.

As the years had passed, whenever he visited the Arcane to check on her progress, he would always find Maxical waiting there at the base of the tower when he finished his meetings with Traven. She would always look worshipfully up at him with those huge eyes of hers; her tiny face turned up at him; like he was a God, or a hero; this was another first for Fathis. What a feeling it was to have someone look up to you like that, in his lifetime no one ever had before.

Fathis was not used to being around younger girls. Mothers usually shepherded their chicks away from Fathis; he had a reputation for being a womanizer. And yet, Maxical had been placed in his care, and he had honored that, not touching her, even as she got older and was obviously developing into a shapely young woman.

Maybe it was that which caused his feelings to grow so strongly, the fact that he had over five years of her acquaintance in which she was too young to bed. The females Fathis usually dealt with fell quickly into his bed and were just as quickly cast out of it. His feelings for Maxical had definitely surpassed anything he had ever felt before.

The fact that she was a Khajiit, yes that had bothered him. Fathis had never even thought of Khajiit in that way before. He had always been partial to Wood Elf, actually, even preferring them to his own race.

Maxical was different than most Khajiit though. Her bones were tiny and refined, and as she aged her fur had shed away to almost a skin, and it was so fine, not like the coarse fur of other Khajiit. Fathis had long since begun to wonder if she had been the product of a mixed union.

And then there was her innocence. Yes; her innocence, that would be another first for Fathis. His desire for her, though only recently born, moved rapidly into an obsession that threatened to drive him mad. Her innocence; the thought of her untouched, belonging only to him - and then immediately the thought of that blue flag waving in the eyes of all the males in Cyrodiil had crossed his mind. Fathis found himself overwhelmed by a terrible jealousy, something he had never experienced before. That jealousy grew so powerful that it was beyond his ability to control, and would lead him to do things he could never imagine himself doing before.

Fathis had originally purchased the tower for Maxical with the purest of intentions; but as his jealousy grew his visions of her being in that tower centered on her being isolated from all other males that may see that blue flag shining on her face like a banner of invitation. He was driven mad by the thought of another having her.

The thought of her going home to S'Jirra and Alix had at first comforted him, but upon further reflection he began to realize the vast exposure to males Maxical would be receiving at that Inn - why he himself had met her there!

For the first time since his fifteenth year Fathis became celibate, not by conscious oath, rather his mind had become so obsessive over what may or may not be happening with that blue nose that it blocked thoughts of any other subject from his mind, including other women. Fathis was even neglecting his duties as Court Mage.

Finally, feeling he would burst if he didn't act soon, Fathis had gone to the Imperial City to stock up on Alchemy supplies. He thought he would talk to Varnado about armor over a nice dinner, get a room for the night at the Merchants, then stop by the Faregyl Inn on his way back to the Castle, bringing Maxical with him to his tower. That was the day he had seen the golden armor hanging in the Best Defense and ridden like a man possessed to rage at Maxical.

Fathis remembered S'Jirra rushing over to defend her kit that night, as if he would have hurt her. If S'Jirra had not interfered, Fathis would have shown Maxical the error of her ways and then swept her off to the tower, picking up the golden armor on the way.

***

After leaving the Faregyl Inn that night Fathis had gone to his tower. He felt he had made his point clear to Maxical, that he would brook no other being with her. Fathis was sure she would race to her tower and wait for him after that, so decided he would be there waiting for her when she arrived. Away from the over-protective eyes of S'Jirra they could make up this argument. The thought of that made his senses swim. Fathis thought he would burst from the anticipation. Maxical was the most exciting thing that had ever happened to him, and she was going to be his soon! He would buy back the golden armor for her again once they had made up and she realized that he was the only one for her.

Fathis made his way to the Wizard's Tower he had given Maxical, and he waited for her there. He waited and waited, his patience (never a virtue he possessed in abundance anyway) was stretched to the limit, and then it suddenly occurred to him that she was not coming!

Fathis instantly laid the blame at S'Jirra's door, sure she had forbid Maxical to leave.

"Ah, that has to be it, Maxical is ever obedient. But S'Jirra will have to realize she can't keep us apart. I'm not a green young buck that will just fold under to her will." Fathis mused, envisioning himself laying a ladder up to Maxical's window and stealing her in the night.

Fathis, for all his firm plans found himself hesitant to face S'Jirra again after their last encounter. He rode up to the Faregyl Inn and eyed the door. Spotting the Imperial Legion Forester outside, he spoke to him rather than face S'Jirra's wrath.

The Forester hesitated, wondering if he should tell Fathis what he knew in light of his recent behavior. The thought occurred to him that maybe Fathis would be the one to bring Maxical home again, so he decided to tell him.

"The Little Miss left that same night you were here last, she's not been back since." he said, watching Fathis for a reaction. Satisfied with what he saw, he continued.

"I heard she was seen in the Imperial City." The Forester said.

Fathis vaulted onto his horse and dug his heels in. The horse's initial balk at such treatment was corrected quickly and soon they were galloping down the road to the Imperial City.

The Forester shook his head and went in to tell S'Jirra and Alix about the visit.

Fathis may have galloped his horse straight into the gates of the city but for the guard on duty's glare and shout.

It wasn't long before Fathis found out Maxical was fighting in the Arena. The talk of a white Khajiit fighting in the Arena was buzzing everywhere.

"Trying to get that armor back I'll wager!" Fathis had thought at the time. "Well good, that visit got her mind back where it belongs," Fathis had thought to himself.

That thought was instantly followed by one of Maxical in the tight one-piece Battle Raiment of the Arena with their short skirts, that blue shading on her nose waving like a flag in front of all those young bucks in the Arena.

Fathis then weighed the image of himself crashing into the Bloodworks demanding she come with him immediately and found the vision was always followed up by 18 young bucks pounding him into the filthy floor of the place. He decided it was best to wait it out a bit. The Arena was no life for a delicate little thing like Maxical; she would probably run home after her first real match.

Fathis took a room at the Merchants Inn so he would be close when she had enough of that Arena. Maybe she would turn to him again as she had as a kit, wrapping her arms around his neck. He went to the Arena to watch one of her early bouts, but as he stepped onto the balcony he had spotted Alix! What was he doing here? Fathis had tiptoed back out, forfeiting his bet.

Thinking Alix had come to take Maxical home, Fathis had gone back to the Castle Bravil and waited a week. Then he had ridden confidently up to the Faragyl Inn, ready to take Maxical to the tower himself. She was not there.

The Imperial Legion Forester saw Fathis making his way toward the Inn and just shook his head. Fathis questioned him anyway.

"She's never returned, but her last letter says she now works at the Arena as a combatant."

"I know that," Fathis snapped, scowling. "Didn't Alix go bring her home?"

The Forester looked surprised. "No sir."

"But I saw him there at the Arena last week." Fathis said, wondering if the man had all his senses.

"Alix? He just goes to watch her fights, keeps tabs on her he does, if you get my drift." the Forester replied.

Fathis didn't get his 'drift' at all. He couldn't believe Alix hadn't yanked Maxical out of that horrible place. With a snarl of frustration Fathis mounted up galloped back to the Imperial City. If Alix wouldn't do what he should be doing, Fathis guessed it would have to be up to himself to get her out of that place, and when he did he was bringing her to that tower, not back to this Inn!

Fathis stormed straight to the Arena. Maxical was not on the schedule anytime this week or the next either.

"So she has given up, huh?" Fathis startled himself by saying his thoughts aloud. "Then where is she?" A purple rage had filled Fathis then, what game was this she was playing now? Had one of the young bucks from the Arena set her up somewhere in some hovel?

***

Fathis wanted to begin his search by crashing into the shacks on the waterfront first, but instead decided to question some of the guards. Sure enough he found out that Maxical had been seen leaving the city heading west. Fathis galloped his horse across the bridge to Weye where a one legged man stood in the road.

Leaping off the back of his horse Fathis shouted to the man, somehow assuming having just the one leg may have effected his hearing. "You seen a white Khajiit pass by here?"

"She passed through here heading west." the man said in normal tones.

"West?" Fathis shouted back. "Who was with her?"

"She 'twere alone. Say, I could use some help getting these fish scales, I've only got one leg now?"

Fathis drew himself up to his full height, which in his riding boots was only four inches short of six feet. "Fool, stand back!" With that shout Fathis leapt back onto his horse and dug his heels in, heading west. "Where could she be going?" he wondered. "Well, at least she is alone, that's a relief."

Fathis picked up Maxical's trail in Anvil and followed it to Skingrad. It seems she had been sick, bitten by a mud crab the guard had said. She had been healed at the chapel in Skingrad.

"The poor thing must have been scared." thought Fathis after talking to the people in the chapel at Skingrad. It seems she had not even been ill when they healed her, other than an upset stomach; but she had insisted on them healing her repeatedly. Fathis made a large donation to the chapel for their assistance.

"All over the bite of a mud crab" Fathis laughed as he left Skingrad. Now that was the little kit he remembered! Still, what had she been doing in Anvil to get bitten by the mud crab? Fathis wondered for what seemed like the hundredth time.

Another stop at the Faregyl Inn gave him the information that she hadn't come there on her return from Anvil. Frustration and rage were beginning to build quickly in Fathis as he headed once again to the Imperial City and the Arena.

Fathis stared at the board that held the schedules for fighters. There was Maxical's name scheduled for a fight this very evening! Fathis didn't bother getting a hotel room and bathing, even though a cloud of dust poofed out of his clothing as he sat down on the bench in the Arena Box Seating waiting for Maxical's match.

He almost laughed when he had seen her in the chute with that silly mask on, till he saw the size of the Nord she was fighting. His throat closed tightly then, and he felt a little dizzy with fear for her.

Fathis felt a hand on his shoulder and looked up. It was Alix. Alix shook his hand, and for a split second Fathis was afraid he was going to cry. Somehow all the things he had been through since that day of the graduation came down to this minute, and he was having trouble controlling his emotions. Had he finally found Maxical just to watch her die at the hands of that Nord?

Alix read Fathis' eyes correctly. He drew back his long coat and showed the hilt of his blade. Fathis understood. Alix was watching the fights, but if it came to it, he would be off the balcony and in the ring. Fathis understood for the first time why Alix came to each fight but never pulled Maxical out.

"Does she know you come?" Fathis asked.

"No. She looks up into the stands after each fight, I duck back in there." Alix pointed to an alcove. "She is looking up here for you, not me." Alix said, turning his head away from Fathis. It hurt him a bit.

"How do you know?" Fathis asked, turning to look at Alix.

"She wrote it in her letter when she said she was working here. Said she looks in the stands for you each fight. I've seen her do it." The pain in Alix voice was palpable.

A feeling of relief flooded over Fathis on those words.

"Why don't you let her see you here?" Fathis asked.

"She never asked me." Alix said.

Fathis could feel the hurt in that short sentence. He didn't understand, and his face reflected it.

It was a rare thing for Alix to explain himself. He was a man of deep thoughts and few words.

It had occurred to Alix on more than one occasion that Fathis infatuation with Maxical was one more of the head than heart. It was not that Alix doubted Fathis love for Maxical, but that he was in love with a glimpse of her, an image he had in his mind of who she was. It was the same for Maxical, neither of them really knew the other. But with Maxical, being so young, she didn't even know her own self yet. She had been a child, then locked away in school so long. She may get out in the real world and find her feelings for Fathis changing. Maxical had Fathis on a pedestal, he could do no wrong in her mind, and she would brook no words against him. Her image of him was that of a God, or a hero. When she was mature enough to see him as a man, well then that would be different.

But Alix had also seen and heard what Fathis was going through in trying to keep up with Maxical, why the man was acting like a teen in love for the first time! Alix took an accurate guess at Fathis age and it put him quite a bit older than Alix himself was. And yet Fathis had been mooning around Cyrodiil like a bawling calf over Maxical, making a fool of himself to the gossipers!

Alix had noticed that Fathis had lost a lot of weight since Maxical's graduation day, along with the fact that his usual immaculate appearance was suffering greatly. On several recent occasions, including today, Alix had seen or heard of Fathis covered with the dust of travels and wearing the same clothing a few days in a row, and obviously without his scented baths. The gossip about Fathis's pursuit of Maxical had at first given both he and S'Jirra concern, but as it progressed had begun to leave them in stitches. Fathis had lost all that haughtiness and high image of his own importance. He was fast becoming a laughing stock, and many thought he had lost his mind entirely. In a moment of feeling sorry for the man, Alix explained.

"See, Maxical is just tasting life out in the world for the first time. She has to find her own way, who she is, who she wants to become. I am just here to make sure she doesn't get hurt along the way. If she makes mistakes, I want her to learn how to get herself out of them on her own, but if she can't - I am here." It was probably the longest speech Alix had ever given - up to that point.

Fathis tried to word his next question carefully, forcing nonchalance into his voice. "But aren't you worried about her living in the Bloodworks with all those men?" Fathis voice had squeaked on the last word.

"Maxical has to make her own choices now. She is becoming an advlt. And she can protect herself if need be."

Fathis did not find that answer to be very satisfactory at all. "But she is so na?ve and trusting." Fathis pushed on.


"She'll learn soon enough how to tell the good from the bad." Alix knew what Fathis was getting at with these questions, and it was starting to rankle him.

"Do you think that is the wisest?" Fathis didn't have enough time to finish the thought before Alix burst in.

"How much concern did you have for her safety when you left her to come home from the Arcane alone in the dark? You kept S'Jirra and me from attending our own kit's graduation ceremony, afraid we might be an embarrassment to her, to you more like! You said you would act in our stead - well WE would have escorted her home! Do you know she was attacked on the way home and almost died? And you can smugly lecture me on her safety? Why did you not escort her home? How did you think she would get home if you didn't bring her, fly? In all our years together that is the first thing I have ever kept from S'Jirra, to this day she doesn't know what happened to our kit on that walk home, but I do, I saw her blood, my own kit's blood in the road. Do you have any idea what that feels like to a father? No, of course you don't!" Alix had a very long chain on his temper, but this issue had been brewing in his mind for too long.

Fathis blanched. "She what? Why was I not notified of this?"

"Well maybe because the only time she has seen you since then you were frightening her half out of her wits! Accusing her of selling some armor? Did you know she was robbed of everything she owned, even her graduation robes? She almost lost her life, and you came and yelled at her and walked out! She thinks she loves you, and you walked out on her!" Alix was just getting warmed up.

Fathis was turning white with shock. "I didn't know, I didn't think"

"You didn't think anything about letting a 17 year old walk on the roads by herself? A girl who has been sheltered and protected? Didn't you think she might be scared? Did you even ask her if she wanted you to accompany her? No, you just left her to go it alone."

Fathis was eyeing Alix's hands, worried by the rage he was in that Alix may decide to pull that blade out now. Alix saw the look and laughed scornfully at Fathis.

"I'm not going to hurt you, you fool! If I was going to do that it would have happened that night you came crashing in the Inn. The only reason you survived that night is because my kit thinks she is in love with you. What fool maggot got into your head to think she would sell something you gave her?"

"Bu, bu, da" Fathis stammered out.

"Why do you think I've not stopped her from joining the Arena? She is getting some life training in there that will help her defend herself the next time. She is getting a safe place to learn it too, as long as I sit here - I will make sure that she is safe in there. She will learn to fight and gain confidence in that Arena, so the next fool that sends her out walking alone across Cyrodiil won't be sending her to the grave."

"Bu, I didn, please, how can I?" Fathis had tears forming in his eyes, his face was so pale Alix thought he may faint.

"How can you make it up to her? If you love her, be worthy of her. Now Fathis, I have said all I am going to about this. S'Jirra and I are grateful to you for all you have done for our kit, and as long as she thinks she loves you we will welcome you with open arms, but we expect her to be treated with respect and not abandoned like you did her that day - ever again. As long as you treat her with love we will put this behind us, but the Gods help you if you ever hurt her again."

Fathis tottered over to the bench seat and collapsed onto it. His thoughts were whirling. Alix sat down beside him and offered his hand. Fathis took it. Alix shook his hand with slightly more than his usual firm grip. Fathis gasped slightly from the firmness of that grip, wondering if he would have any bones in his hand at the end of the handshake.

"Good, that's off my chest, now let's watch the fight." Alix said, turning to look out at the Arena so Fathis wouldn't see the quirk on his lips. Alix had seen Fathis reaction to the handshake.

The gates were lowered and Maxical and the Nord charged out into the Arena, swords drawn.

Several times during the fight Alix had leapt to his feet and placed his hand on the railing ready to vault it, but had hesitated because he could see Maxical regaining her strength, rallying.

Fathis had come close to swooning or losing the contents of his stomach from the sight of all the blood and the sight of Maxical injured. When Maxical stuck her dagger in the Nord's groin Alix glanced over at Fathis and saw him pressing a handkerchief tightly against his mouth, his face as green as any Orc's. Alix looked back at the Arena right away with just a slight quiver of his lip as indication he had seen.

But both Alix and Fathis were in shock over Maxical's fighting skills. Maxical had used moves even Alix didn't know. Where had she suddenly learned these moves? Not even the blades themselves had moves like that! Only one he had ever seen move like that?Alix looked over at the large blue Orc in the stands. It was very odd to see him watching a fight; in fact Alix had never seen him up in the stands before.

"Well, it looks like Maxical has found herself a blue Orc trainer." Alix thought to himself.

Maxical didn't search the crowds that night, the only fight that she hadn't. She was standing their saluting the crowd with her sword in the center of the ring, her eyes lit up like stars, and a dreamy smile on her face. Alix knew that look and what it meant. He too had once been an Arena contestant. That crowd cheering for you can be a very powerful thing, and he realized exactly what she was feeling.

When Maxical turned to go to the chute, she faltered, her legs were buckling. Alix saw the look on her face as her legs buckled and leapt up, about to vault the railing, but as quick as he swung up he saw the Gray Prince vaulting over the railing. Alix pulled back in, but stayed standing and watching.

He saw the Orc carrying Maxical on his shoulders like a hero, but then saw him enter the chute and flip her down from his shoulders and run. Fear gripped Alix's heart.

He vaulted the railing and ran down the chute. When he got to the healing fount he stopped, she was moving and talking. Alix heard her say proudly that she hadn't dropped her sword and it made him want to cry and retch at the same time. He waited, watching the Orc healing her in the fount. The Orc knew exactly what he was doing, he was good. She would be hurting for a while, that was certain, but she would live. Out of the corner of his eye Alix saw Owyn charging up. Owyn knew him, he would call his name out. Maxical would know he had been spying on her to protect her. Alix backed back up the chute and managed to shimmy up the side wall and back onto the balcony again.

"What happened?" Fathis choked out, his normally blue face as white as Maxical's fur.

"Nothing, she's okay." Alix said. He was not going to let Fathis know how close that had been, or tell S'Jirra either.

Alix felt sick. He would have stepped in at any time, but every time he had started to Maxical had rallied, he had seen her rally with his own eyes. Alix hadn't realized during the fight that she was just rallying for the crowds. He never realized that until he saw her face at the end of the fight. His kit almost died with him sitting right there to watch it. She was giving her all for the crowd, and he never knew how much trouble she was in till she couldn't walk at the end. Alix looked down at that huge Nord she had just beat. That silly mask she wore was laying beside the Nord's body. Looking at that mask Alix had a strong urge to cry.

"Who was that blue Orc?" Fathis asked, his voice still shaking from all he had seen tonight.

"That's the Gray Prince," Alix said. "He's the Grand Champion." After the shock Alix had just gone through he was not inclined to talk.

"Hey Fathis, you are welcome at the Inn anytime you know." Alix said and shook his hand. Then he slowly turned and walked out, almost leaning on the wall as he went.

When Alix got outside the Arena he found the nearest bush and emptied the contents of his stomach on it. He didn't think there was enough vomit in the world for what he had felt seeing the Gray Prince run when he had hit that chute.

***




Chapter 8B: Fathis To Himself


Fathis sat in the box seat for a long time. He wasn't an avid fight watcher, and had been sickened by the blood, by seeing Maxical injured. He didn't understand how such a delicate girl could fight like what he had seen. She was a real warrior, not like he thought when she was just 12; not just throwing the 'Eye of Khajiit' at a bunch of rude people. The image of Maxical turning to him for protection, throwing her arms around his neck in fear?Fathis sat in that box seat and stared down into the Arena as that image faded away into the dust and dirt that lined the Arena floor.

Watching the fight, Fathis had been torn between that sickness and the excitement and pride at the way she played that big Nord, mocking him, her spins and sword play - she was as graceful as a deer leaping out there. Fathis had never in his life seen anything like it. Fathis knew Alix was a master blade trainer, but Alix himself had been surprised by her moves. Where could she possibly have learned to fight like that?

Fathis was shaking like a leaf. He didn't feel well enough to go home, so headed to the Market District and got a room at the Merchant's Inn. He stopped downstairs to get a bottle of wine to take to his room, and there the answer to his question had come soon enough, in the gossip he overheard as he waited for the Innkeeper to bring the bottle.

"Aye, the Gray Prince taught her those moves, alright; and he be teaching her some other moves as well, so I hear!"

A wave of jealousy and anger overwhelmed Fathis, and he spun around, his hand going instantly to his sword hilt. He took a step toward the one who had said it, ready to ram his sword fully down the throat of the man; and may have done it but for the whole room agreeing with the man.

Fathis was purple with rage. He slammed out of the Inn, even though he had already paid for the night and bottle of good wine; and the Gods help any creature or bandit that tried to cross his path on that ride home!

In the privacy and quiet of his room though, Fathis had time to reflect on what he had heard, and what he knew of Maxical. He began to discount the gossip the more he thought on it. Picturing tiny Maxical with the Gray Prince was ludicrous. Let's face it, blue or not, the Gray Prince was an Orc. Surely Maxical would never, not with an Orc. That thought was unfathomable.

Alix had told him that Maxical would always scan the crowds looking for him, Fathis. Alix was a man of few words, he would never waste words to lie. That and Fathis had sensed Alix's hurt over the fact that Maxical was seeking himself rather than Alix, who had raised her.

Fathis had been very surprised over what he had learned about Alix tonight. The man had depth and intensity that Fathis would never have imagined before. His deep love and care for Maxical was obvious this night, and Fathis felt a little ashamed of his earlier thoughts on the man. And the things Alix had revealed to him made him ashamed of his own self too. Why had he left her to get home on her own? It was his own fault that S'Jirra and Alix weren't there that day. The thought of her walking the whole way alone had never crossed his mind at the time, but now, today he wondered how he thought she would get home if he didn't escort her. She had no horse. What a fool he had been!

Oh how badly he wished he could go back to that day at the Arcane, when she had hugged him, and everything had been so right between them. She looked so young and beautiful in the armor he had bought her. Could he take back any day of his life and re-do it, it would be that day. He should have escorted her home and then straight to the Wizard's Tower. Oh what a fool he had been.

Had he known that moment held such an important place in time, he may have done so many things differently. But that moment was gone now, and Fathis was helpless to bring it back. Why didn't the Gods let you know when your life has reached a turning point? Give you a sign?

Even as these questions entered Fathis mind he saw Maxical's face that day turned up to his, the blue flag on her nose. The Gods had given him a sign, he just didn't realize its importance till it was too late.

Fathis reverie was brought to a crashing end at the thought of that blue flag. The thought of that blue flag waving under the nose of that Orc or any other of those young bucks in that Bloodworks, or for that matter any other male! He had to get her out of that Bloodworks, it was no place for her to be staying at night, or any other time! It was high time he took her away from that Arena, and instilled her in her tower where he could protect her and make it up to her how he had misused her in the past. But how to do it?

Fathis leapt up from his bed and dressed. He had come up with a plan.

His tired horse saw Fathis hurrying toward him and probably would have hidden had there been a more than just the one other horse in the paddock. Resigned to his fate, he waited for Fathis to leap on his back and dig in his heels.

Fathis arrived in The Imperial City and went straight to the Arena district. Once he reached the Arena, he loitered near the gate to the Bloodworks, trying to appear inconspicuous.

Fathis waited till the Bloodworks had emptied out, and then tiptoed down into the Bloodworks. His biggest fear as he crept down the steps was that he may find the Orc down there with her, the two of them together. Fathis had never committed murder, but seeing something like that would be more than he could take. Even not necessarily the Orc, he knew if he was to see her there with anyone the fight would be on, and with the rage he was feeling at just the thought of it, Fathis believed even the Gray Prince would not have a shot against him.

His plan had been concocted at the spur of the moment, but Fathis thought it was a good one. He would carry her, by force if necessary, out of this place for good, and take her straight to the tower.

Fathis got no further than the middle of the room, all the mats were empty. There was no one at all in there, where could she be?

Fathis left without seeing the small break in the wall that led to the manager's area behind the wall, where Maxical slept on the mat behind Andronicus.

Fathis' previous theory remerged where some beefed up young buck had lured Maxical to his hovel on the waterfront. Fathis headed straight over to the waterfront and began creeping around the shacks, putting his ear to the doors and outer walls. As he was coming around the corner of one house he spotted a group of people standing in front of one man with a torch.

"What are these idiots doing out here in the middle of the night?" Fathis wondered, straightening up and pretending he was inspecting the foundation of the shack nearest him.

After what Alix told him about Maxical getting robbed Fathis decided to go buy back that armor and bring it to Maxical. He headed over to the Best Defense first thing the next morning.


***


Maro Rufus saw the door opening, and hurried over to jab Varnado in the ribs. Although the two of them rarely got along, the recent situation over that gold armor had caused them so much amusemant, and afforded them quite a listening audience at the Feed Bag, that for once they were acting as a team.

Fathis Aren stepped in, and walked up to the counter. Varnado and Maro looked like cats with canaries in their mouths. "May we help you?" they asked in unison.

"That gold armor, I wish to purchase it." Fathis Aren said.

Maro jabbed Varnado, and they looked at each other with unmasked amusemant. "I think we have another party interested in that particular armor." Maro said, jabbing Varnado again. This armor had afforded them too much amusemant to sell, they could make money any day, but this kind of entertainment didn't come around often in an armor shop.

"Who!" Fathis demanded.

Maro and Varnado exchanged glances of unholy glee. "Did you write down HER name?" Maro asked, putting too much emphasis on the "HER."

Fathis face was turning purple again! Varnado and Maro could barely contain their enjoyment of the interchange, would he stomp out again?

Staring at Fathis Aren with their eyes goggling, Maro witnessed what Varnado had described to him, as steam seemed to literally begin to rise off of Fathis Aren's head, and the shade of his face turned a deep purple. They both stared fascinated at this metamorphosis, while Fathis Aren's temper hit its breaking point.

"I want that armor!" he demanded. "What is with you two, you are acting like you have lost all your senses!"

Maro jabbed Varnado again, and they both tried to stiffen up and act businesslike, but their laughing eyes and twisting mouths gave this little credence.

"I told you, I have another interested buyer, I would have to find out if SHE is willing to give up HER claim to it." Varnado said, following Maro's lead in over-emphasizing the pronouns.

With a sound like an explosion escaping his taut lips, Fathis Aren stormed out of the shop, slamming the door as he left. The whole store shook from the impact.

Varnado doubled over, and Maro fell to the floor in laughter. Oh, they couldn't wait till closing time tonight, what nice meals they may be offered to sit with others and discuss this new development in the case of that Khajiit and Fathis Aren.

***




Chapter 8C: The Gossip Grows

From the first day Fathis had first stormed out of the Best Defense on finding the golden armor Varnado and Maro had become celebrities of a sort in the Market District among the other merchants and guards who dined at the Feed Bag after the Market District closed for the evenings.

Fathis' hauteur had been to blame, he appeared to hold the working class as beneath him, which rankled. The appearance and effect of that golden armor had suddenly put them in a position of power over the Dunmer who was always so blown up in his own conceit. All the merchants loved gossip anyway, but to have Fathis as the subject increased the interest. Someone with a good Fathis story would be wined and dined in exchange for the information. Many a free meal or pint of the stout was exchanged over Fathis sudden eccentricities.

The subsequent entrance into the shop of the white Khajiit, in a rumpled state and obvious emotional agitation had been an immediate hit with the gossipers and speculation about Fathis and the white Khajiit became the main topic of conversation throughout the Market District and amongst the guards in their barracks.

Many of the shop keepers hoping to find something interesting to talk about would be more than willing to foot the bill for dinner for some interesting conversation, and that white Khajiit had gotten Varnado and Maro plenty of free meals since she had first graced the town that day, searching for that golden armor.

Before long the guards were getting in on the action as well, and many a guard who had witnessed Fathis Aren riding helter-skelter across Cyrodiil at any given day had discovered his stein was never empty as he repeated his tales in the most descriptive way possible.

"That Fathis Aren near trampled me with his horse, I swear on Akatosh that he was putting his horse at the city wall to jump!" One guard declared as he drank his free ale at the Feed Bag.

The conjecture of how the armor came into the picture, no one knew, but any one of the scenarios dreamed up by the gossiping merchants in the Market District could have been made into a play, even before the Gray Prince was thrown into the conjecture. After the Gray Prince entered into it, the Golden Armor had taken on a whole new depth of mystery and intrigue.

Each detail of every action of the players in the little scenario was watched closely, and every move they made became of interest, and by the time the action was repeated thru gossip, it was accompanied by a detailed story which added romance, intrigue, danger.

The merchants had begun to go to all the matches that featured the white Khajiit, hoping to see some drama unfold before their very eyes. They were not disappointed. Fathis was seen in all his travel filth walking in to the Arena Box Seat section, then at the sight of Alix Lencolia had sneaked back out like a thief in the night.

Then there was the night when Alix Lencolia had seen Fathis in the Box Seat Section and grabbed him by the shoulder, berating him over that white Khajiit and frightening Fathis with his sword. Varnado and Maro had been in the same Box and had witnessed it all. They gave details about how Fathis was seen weeping into his hankie after Alix had crushed his hand.

That same night Alix Lencolia had been seen vomiting outside the Arena, and the word spread that Fathis had poisoned Alix.

The story of Fathis creeping about the Waterfront District in the middle of the night pretending to be a housing inspector lost nothing in the telling, nor did the tale of him skulking about the Arena in the middle of the night. The imminent expectation was at first just the kidnapping of the young Khajiit, but later the possible murder of the Gray Prince in his sleep was added to that conjecture.

The entry into the gossip of the Gray Prince threw the gossipers into a frenzy of speculation. It began not long after the Khajiit had begun fighting in the Arena and grew from there.

The addition of the Gray Prince into the gossip began due to the fact that many of the Pit Dogs from the Arena ate at the Feed Bag, and when the talk had turned to the up and coming white Khajiit, Maro and Varnado had perked up their ears.

It seemed the Gray Prince was meeting with that Khajiit daily, bringing her treats, they held hands. None of the young bloods dared go near her, the Orc was very protective of her.

At the time, trying to free up the tongues of the young bloods, Maro and Varnado had then of course given their full description of the Fathis incident concerning that same Khajiit at their shop, and her turning up all dirty and swollen-eyed to buy the armor.

The Pit Dogs closed ranks against them at that though, the Khajiit was their hero.

The shopkeepers, however were all ears. Within short order, Maro and Varnado had spread their version of the Orc and that white Khajiit into the gossip.

"She lives in the Bloodworks. Need they have said more?" Varnado and Maro said later as they tipped up their pints of ale and forked the big slabs of venison the other merchants supplied them with.

As the talk of the Khajiit and the Orc heated up, the merchants were treated to the scene at the Merchant's Inn when Fathis first learned of the gossip, and grabbing his sword hilt had run from the Inn, not returning even though he had paid for his room and wine. Everyone fully expected to hear of the death of either Fathis or the Gray Prince by morning.

When Fathis had been seen entering the Best Defense the next morning the word was spread that he had killed the Gray Prince and buried his body under one of the houses in the Waterfront District. That story failed the first time the Gray Prince was seen after that.


The great Orc carrying her about on his shoulders after that match with the Nord, well that just confirmed that Varnado and Maro must have told the truth about what was going on there.

The Gray Prince had never gone to the stands and watched any matches before in his whole career, but suddenly he was seen up there at every one of the Khajiit's matches, "Jealously watching his 'Love O'Life' to make sure Fathis didn't jump into the ring and kidnap her" the gossipers tagged at the end of the fact.


Fathis drastic change in appearance also fed the gossipers. After decades of being immaculately dressed and perfumed, as well as being quite rotund, suddenly Fathis was a pitiful rumpled sight, and was said to be pining away for the Khajiit, probably the most truthful rumor.

The Golden Armor was displayed prominently in the Best Defense and the shop began to fill daily with people in on the gossip wanting to stare at it. They would hang out in the store hoping to be a witness the next time Fathis or the Khajiit came in for that armor. Even the Imperial Legion guards were seen lingering in the shop. It had brought in more interest into the shop than any sale they could have cooked up, and more excitement than they had seen in their lifetimes.

Maro and Varnado agreed not to sell the armor. They put an astronomical price tag on it and put that price on a large sign that hung above the armor. The few people that could afford to sink that many Septims (Fathis Aren being one) were told that the armor was being held for a customer that had previously expressed interest in it.

The merchants in the Market District had not found anything this intriguing, in quite a long time, (if ever).

***




Chapter 8D: The Quiet Before The Storm


Every weekend Fathis made his way to the Imperial City to watch Maxical's fights. Occasionally he found himself in the same box seat with Alix. There were no more close calls after that fight with the Nord, even though with each fight the Yellow Team sent up tougher contestants hoping to knock Maxical out from the competition. When Maxical breezed through an Orc with a sledgehammer and that with her sword arm in a sling it seemed like she had thrown down the gauntlet before the Yellow Team. It was almost as if they took it as a challenge to come up with harder and harder matches each time. On several occasions they sent up two or three combatants to the Arena, one time they even sent up three escaped prisoners!

On the few occasions they found themselves in the same Box Seat, Alix would sit next to Fathis and point out to Fathis the different Yellow Team fighters and give him some background on their level of expertise and experience, and how it was much higher than Maxical's own experience level. Alix's voice would ring with pride. He told Fathis what an important development it was that her fights had been moved to the weekends now.

After every fight Maxical would lift her head and scan the crowds, and Fathis would duck back into the alcove. If they had found themselves in the same Box, they would duck out together and stand for a few minutes talking outside the Arena.

"Why don't you come by the Inn for some homemade potato bread, you look like you could use some good home cooked food. Have they fired the chef down there at the castle?" Alix asked, trying to make a joke out of Fathis gaunt appearance. "Not on Skooma are you?"

Fathis was in the middle of sputtering a denial when Alix put his arm over his shoulder.

"Come Fathis. Come home with me and let S'Jirra feed you well. Stay with us a while. I was just trying to make you smile. Why don't you spend a few days with us?"

Alix was glad he had only mentioned the food to Fathis and not the hot bath and clothes laundering he had planned to add.

For the third time Alix made Fathis feel tears pricking his eyes. Alix was young enough to have almost been his son, yet he was taking on a fatherly role, more so than even his own father ever had. But his last encounter with S'Jirra instantly popped into his mind, so he turned down the invitation. Alix shook his hand and they parted company.

A merchant that had been exiting the gates overheard Alix words to Fathis and made a beeline for the Feed Bag. "Fathis is a Skooma addict, I heard it with my own ears! Alix Lencolia has caught him! Fathis began to cry!" Suddenly Fathis drastic change in appearance took on a whole new meaning.


***


Alix told S'Jirra about the fight as soon as he got home that evening. Then he told her about inviting Fathis to come stay a while. "S'Jirra, the man was this close to crying like a babe," Alix said snapping his fingers. "He is so thin he looks like a blue stick draqed in dirty cloth. He is not bathed, nor changing his clothes. I don't think he may survive being in love with Maxical. I know his mind hasn't survived it, I heard tell he was caught sneaking around the Waterfront district acting like he was inspecting property at three in the morning. Fathis is losing it S'Jirra, loving our kit has pushed him around the bend!"

S'Jirra tried to picture the fastidious Fathis in dirty clothing and unwashed, mooning around the Waterfront inspecting property at three in the morning and the image caused her to go off in a peal of laughter.

Alix grinned and began giving detailed descriptions of the particular odor that Fathis now sported to replace his scented bathwater, giving names to the smell and mimicking the vendors in the Market District.

"A powerful fragrance to give strength to the weaker man, we call this scent 'Oh-no a scamp' it goes well for those of you who work nights as a housing inspector in seedy neighborhoods."

S'Jirra joined in with "And for the man who can't find the woman he loves, we have 'Musk of Dunmer' - let her find you!"

Abhuki chimed in "Nothing smells worse than a Dunmer that hasn't bathed, unless it's an Orc. - What? Why are you laughing?" S'Jirra and Alix were doubled over.

***




Chapter 8E: The Grand Championship Fight


The day of the Grand Championship bout Alix had seen Maxical's face when she came into the Arena and a terrible premonition about her mindset hit him. His kit did not plan to leave the Arena that day, he saw the bleak look on her face and it went beyond fighting her best friend. Alix started to vault the rail and stopped. The Gray Prince had the same bleak look. Alix didn't know what to make of it.

"Was the gossip about those two true then? Were they in love? What should I do?" Alix wondered. He decided to wait and watch very closely. He didn't have long to watch, for in seconds it seemed the fight was over and the Gray Prince was slain. The crowds had fallen to a dead silence and then he heard his kit scream over and over again. The crowds ran to the front of the box then and crowded him. He was trying to vault the railing but couldn't get over it, the crowd was pushing him tight against the railing.

Alix saw Owyn carry Maxical from the ring and he turned around and shoved the nearest people out of his way and leapt down into the Arena. He was too late, the gate was locked behind Owyn.

Alix was trying to scale the wall up to the balconies like he had before, but under the strain of his emotions he was finding himself weakened. The more failed attempts he made, the more frustrated he was becoming.

Alix pounded on the doors to both the Blue and Yellow Bloodworks chutes, but both were locked down inside and out, his pounding could not be heard. Alix sat down by the body of the Gray Prince and waited. Sooner or later someone would be out to remove the body. He looked at the face of the big Orc, now in peace and wondered what in the world had just gone on in this Arena tonight.

***

In another Box Fathis was watching the match. Fathis was too stunned by Maxical's emotional reaction at the death of the Gray Prince to duck back. The whole crowd had gone dead still, had he moved it would have drawn attention to himself. Had he been wrong? Had she really been in love with that Orc? The thought had burned through him, and the disgust and anger were fighting each other for a place on his face when she had spotted him. Her eyes looked tormented.

Fathis was shaken badly by the scene he had just witnessed. As the crowds were rolling down the ramp to exit Fathis sat staring at the body of the dead Orc and thinking.

Fathis had not believed the gossip about Maxical and that Orc after his initial flash of jealousy, not till tonight when he had seen her reaction after that fight. Then a jealousy like he had never known rose up in his throat as he watched her cry over that Orc. He could have slain the Orc himself if he hadn't already been dead.

He finally reached a decision, he was going to go get that armor, then go get Maxical, and take her away from all of this. Orc lover or no, and the Gods help him, he loved her.

Whatever had passed, he wanted to take her home now, and they would be together from here on. There would never be another chance for another man to claim what was rightfully his, he would make sure of that! Fathis had come to the decision to marry Maxical.

He walked down the ramp and exited. Upon finding the Market District closed for the fight he decided to wait for Maxical at the Faregyl Inn. He had seen Alix vault the railing and assumed Alix would be taking her home.

***

All of the Market District had closed their doors early and gone to the Grand Championship bout, and thereby witnessed the scene the Khajiit had made upon the death of the Orc, in their minds confirming that what Varnado and Maro had told them must be the truth.

The scene was repeated over and over again, and lost nothing in the telling. By the time it got around the room at the Feed Bag, it was being said that the Khajiit had cast herself on the Gray Prince's sword screaming, and her lifeless body was carried from the Arena.

***




Chapter 8F: And Insanity Follows


As Fathis rode to the Faregyl Inn the scene at the Arena kept playing in his mind. By the time he arrived at the Inn he was in a rage of jealousy over that Orc touching Maxical.

It was the middle of the night when Fathis arrived at the Faregyl Inn, but the crashing door as he stormed in alerted the Innkeeper to his presence. Abhuki awoke with a jerk.

"Maxical!" Fathis demanded in a shout, his shrill voice reaching to even the back rooms.

"Now that her lover is dead, she should come straight home." Fathis thought to himself. Even just the thought of Maxical and that Orc together caused the purple to rise in his face again.

Seeing the ever darkening hue taking over his face and his demonic expression, the Innkeeper ran to S'Jirra's room to get her up. (Not that she was asleep with all that racket going on downstairs).

S'Jirra came downstairs with Abhuki to find a man who looked tormented, but was in such a rage he was capable of doing some tormenting of his own.

In their nightshirts and caps, the two Khajiit women looked like twins, both standing there staring at him with mouths agape.

"Come, sit down. Let me get you some potato bread and ale." S'Jirra broke the ice. She was not going to make the mistake of chasing out the man her kit loved again.

"Where is she?" Fathis fairly shouted.

"She lives in the?" S'Jirra got no further before Fathis broke in.

"I know where she was living, but the Orc is dead now, why isn't she here?" Fathis barked it out.

S'Jirra felt a huge relief at those words. It wasn't like Alix to be late coming home, and since he had yet to arrive she had been deathly worried about Maxical. "But what did the Orc dying have to do with where my kit is living?" she wondered. "Has Fathis gone mad?"

S'Jirra eyed Fathis out of the corner of her eye for any signs of madness (other than the purple hue and the crashing into the Inn in the middle of the night ranting).

S'Jirra hesitated, not sure what to do. She would never again step between Maxical and Fathis, that had been a disastrous mistake. "Well, if you think she is coming, then why don't you stay, she may be on her way." It was the only thing she could think of to say.

Fathis strode over to one of the chairs and sat down, but then rapidly jumped up again as if he had sat on a spring.

"He looks uncomfortable and confused," thought S'Jirra. "Let me make you more comfortable," she said aloud; "would you like a little wine?"

Fathis sat down in the chair again, but jumped up again so rapidly that he nearly knocked the wine bottle out of S'Jirra's hands.

She poured him a glass of wine. He sat, took one sip, then leapt up again. S'Jirra was getting dizzy from watching.

Fathis seemed to have come to a decision this time, he strode toward the door rapidly. "Forget it, just forget I was ever here tonite." he said in more of a growl or snarl than the apology the words meant.

"Did that mean he was calming down or getting worse?" they both wondered as they watched him storm back out, slamming the door shut behind him.

"Well, that will be hard to do!" they both said in unison.

***




Chapter 8G: And Trouble Will Follow


Fathis forced his tired horse into a gallop as he headed back to the Imperial City.

When he arrived, he went straight to the Arena Bloodworks and crashed in the door there.

The place was filthy, Fathis wrinkled his nose at the stench. How could she have lived in this horrible place? He searched every inch of that Bloodworks, but there was no one in there at all. He found the bag of Septims with Maxical's mark inked on it though. Her winnings from the Grand Championship fight.

"So, she didn't take the money?" he thought aloud, his voice echoing eerily against the empty stone walls.

Fathis was dumbfounded. He had always assumed Maxical was fighting to buy that armor back; Maro and Varnado's words had all but confirmed that! So why would she not take her winnings? It certainly gave her enough to buy the armor back!

Fathis found the manager's area behind the wall this time. It was also empty. He opened up Owyn's cabinet to place Maxical's winnings inside, and his eye caught sight of two letters in Maxical's handwriting. He hesitated, then picked them up and read them. One was addressed to him! Fathis read both the notes, then slowly replaced them in the cabinet, placing Maxical's winnings on top of the notes.

The note to himself brought tears to his eyes. So Alix had told him the truth. "Oh how I have misjudged her, misused her." Fathis whispered. It had all been over jealousy, and yet she had signed her note 'With all my heart.' Fathis drank in those words, he was hard put not to take the note with him, but he was no thief.

Fathis closed the door to Owyn's cabinet and slowly walked back out of the Bloodworks. He had to wash the stench off him, it was disgusting him. Before he did though, he was going to find out where she had gone.

A young Dunmer lad was standing outside the gate to the Arena, but when asked, he said hadn't seen "the Grand Champion" leave the Arena grounds. He spoke in a voice that sounded like he worshipped Maxical, or as he called her, "The Divine Avenger." Fathis grunted at him and walked away.

Fathis then stopped at the gate and asked the guard on duty if he had seen the white Khajiit leave. The guard gave him a knowing grin, but then told him the information he needed. Maxical had headed out the gate and gone toward the west not long ago.

"So she is going home!" Fathis thought. There was a feeling of satisfaction at having found her, and in following that feeling Fathis decided to change his tactics.

Fathis was sure S'Jirra would tell her of his visit, so he was sure she would wait there for him. Fathis had decided on a course of action. Rather than run to her in all his dirt, he would come to her as a king coming for his queen and sweep her off her feet. But he would not take too long to ready. Too many men passed thru that Inn to get that potato bread, he didn't want to take a chance on another moving in on his territory again!

The guard watched the expressions on Fathis face with particular interest. "This information will net me plenty of ale!" he thought as he watched Fathis facial expressions range the gamut from anger and confusion to a particularly saturnine expression. "It was like watching a cat stalking a mouse!" he told the room later, as he tipped up one of his many gratis pints of ale.

"I put my septims on the wizard, now that the Orc is out of it, 'th wizard, he's hot on her trail now! But which one 'ta get the Golden Armor first, eh?" one of the ale buyers commented. With that the shouting started, septims were pulled out, and the betting began.

This added a new element of interest to the intrigue, as the guards had eyes everywhere. Bringing the shopkeepers into the bet, now that would bring in some good money to the one who won that pot!

It became of utmost importance to the guards to keep their eyes peeled for Fathis or Maxical, "The Divine Avenger," as it were; noting every movement and sending the information down the chain - for a price. Every bit of gleaned information was sold for a meal, or ale, or anything the person who wanted to know had, and was willing to part with.

The Bravil Castle guards were easy, a little grease in the palm, and they would know every time Fathis took his daily constitutional.

****

Fathis plan rejuvenated him. He felt like he hadn't felt in months, and the first thing he was going to do was bathe.

Fathis stripped down as soon as he entered his private quarters in the Castle Bravil and threw the clothes he had been wearing into the fireplace. They could never be worn again, not with that stench on them!

Then Fathis drew a hot bath and put extra scent in the water. He scrubbed himself thoroughly with scented soaps.

When he was finished bathing he stepped out of the bath and dabbed some extra scent on. A choking sound came from right outside his door. Fathis paused, "Who's there?" A scuffling sound answered. Fathis found a robe and poked his head out the door. Only two guards. Mighty slovenly too, Fathis was going to have to complain.

It had been so long since Fathis had felt so clean. He took off the robe and stretched out on his bed to think while he dried.

What could it mean that Maxical had left her winnings behind? Fathis was sure she was only fighting to get back that armor because he had raged at her and accused her of selling it. Her note in Owyn's cabinet proved that, as well as what those idiots at the Best Defense themselves had said. Maybe Alix had finally had enough and pulled her out of there, leaving her winnings behind?

And what of her reaction to the death of the Orc? In her letters she did not mention her heart belonging to anyone but himself, so she couldn't have been in love with the Orc, could she? Fathis sat up. What if there were other notes he hadn't found? Maybe he needed to search the Yellow Team's Bloodworks for notes to the Orc!

Fathis head was beginning to hurt from the strain of trying to figure out how this female cat was thinking. He was going to step down to the dining hall and find a potion for his head. Donning his robe he pulled open the door to his quarters. As he did, those two slovenly guards almost fell in the door!

"What are you two doing, listening outside my door?" Fathis shouted.

"Uh, we thought we saw a mud crab." one of them stuttered out, not very convincingly.

"What? Have you been drinking?" Fathis demanded.

"Why, the whole world has gone mad!" Fathis thought, remembering how odd Varnado and Maro had acted, and even that Ogier girl at the Main Ingredient had acted sillier than usual when he had gotten Alchemy supplies a while back. Fathis looked back at the two guards and saw them punching each other.

"I'm reporting you!" Fathis shouted.

"I need to get away from here, from people!" he thought. It seemed that everyone he spoke to lately had been acting like idiots!

He went back in his room without going down to the dining hall. As soon as he entered he slammed and bolted the door with as much noise as possible. He then cast a spell at the door, hoping it would scare those two ninnies away.

Fathis went to his mantle and moved a lever. The wall opened up revealing a secret tunnel. He closed the wall up behind him and then followed the tunnel to his private tower. At least there he could get some peace!
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