Sounds fine. Thanks.
Like I said, I think what's more making me a bit uneasily at the moment is the fact that its a young girl. Which is a bit jarring.
If Truax was doing this to a gruff n' tough MLA veteran or something. I wouldn't have even said anything. I mean, hell, remember the interrogation scene in Heart of Aztia? That was pretty rough. But we were also torturing a torturer, so sympathy sort of went out the window.
So yeah, next time I'll try to direct that a bit better with regards to interrogation opportunities etc.
Yeah, that's what Ranger suggested to. Keep it detailed, but not too detailed. Being too visceral might cause issues.