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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 4:51 am

Very interesting! Making it not follow the plot is genius!
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Lily Evans
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 4:39 pm

Tomorrow's a friday, so hopefully i'll have a few more hours to make a good entry.

Thanks to everyone who's been reading :)
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 5:57 pm

-17-
Defending Project Purity
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With the scientists virtually powerless, Steven and Amata were left to defend Project Purity all by themselves. They were quick to get in defensive positions- with their Hunting Rifles, they set up a makeshift perimeter. They kissed each other for good luck, and waited for the Enclave too come in.
After several minutes, the doors finally opened. The Enclave came in overwheming numbers, but they held strong. Through aim gained by months of gunning down Super Mutants, Talon Companies, Raiders, and Slavers, they were able to mow down the Enclave relatively easily.
That was, until a laser hit Amata's arm.
"Aaarrghh!" she cringed in pain, and fell down behind their perimeter.
"Freeze!" Two Enclave soldiers that survived the onslaught held them at gunpoint.
"Drop your weapons! Don't make any sudden moves."
Amata and Steven obeyed, dropping their hunting rifles.
Steven looked to her, to she if she had any quick answers or ideas. She only looked at him with a smug smile, and reached for her hip, where she had a gun unseen by the two soldiers.
"Stand up!" They ordered.
She reached slowly towards her waist. Steven smiled at the knowledge.
"I love you." He said to her.
"I know."
The unsuspecting Enclave soldiers were gunned down quickly, and Amata injected a stimpack in her broken arm. The scientists came back from hiding.
"Good job." James said, rushing to greet them. "At least we can get Project Purity up and running now.
"Uh-oh..." Dr Li had a distraught look on her face.
"What's wrong?" Amata inqueried.
"The Enclave must've put some sort of power jammer in the control room-I can't start this thing!"
"Dangit." Steven said, recovering his Hunting Rifle. "What does that mean?"
"It means that we can't start this thing until we eliminate the source of the jamming. And the source, if i'm reading this right, is none other than the leader of the Enclave, President Eden himself."
"So, what does that mean?" Amata said, slightly cautious in her tone.
"Simple." Steven said. "We have to kill the President."
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Emily Martell
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 11:54 pm

AHHHHHHH! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!

AHHHHHHH! SCENE STEALING!!!!

AHHHHHHH! THE SUSPENSE!!!

:ahhh:
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Robert Devlin
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 5:19 pm

Lol, more please?
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Angelina Mayo
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 10:41 pm

AHHHHHHH! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!

AHHHHHHH! SCENE STEALING!!!!

AHHHHHHH! THE SUSPENSE!!!

:ahhh:


WHAT HE SAID AHHHHH :ahhh: :ahhh: :ahhh:
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 10:49 pm

Hehe, I can tell your a Star Wars fan, or at least you've seen ESB or ROTJ

Great addition!
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Sarah Kim
 
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 1:31 am

Hehe, I can tell your a Star Wars fan, or at least you've seen ESB or ROTJ

Great addition!

I was wondering if anyone would pick up on me using that scene :D

Please don't sue me, George Lucas.
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Sakura Haruno
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 1:36 pm

Is That The Part From The Endor Bunker With Han Solo And That Princess? I Thought "Starwars." XD
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Krystina Proietti
 
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 4:13 am

Is That The Part From The Endor Bunker With Han Solo And That Princess? I Thought "Starwars." XD



Yes it is. CHEESY SCENE STEALING!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!


:ahhh:
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Rach B
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 6:50 pm

Well, I read through it, it was entertaining. But, the lengths were far too short for someone used to the high quality fan-fics found on the Elder Scrolls side. It does tell a great story though.
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Adam Kriner
 
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 2:37 am

WHEN IS THE NEXT ONE COMING????? :ahhh: :ahhh: :ahhh:
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Josh Trembly
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 5:42 pm

And so, our young heroes, Flapjackweiner and Bagelbutt Amata and Steven go to Raven Rock....
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 4:33 pm

WHAT HE SAID AHHHHH :ahhh: :ahhh: :ahhh:

AAAAHHHHHHH :banghead:
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Jessica Phoenix
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 10:40 pm

Relax, relax, i'll get one up today or tomorrow. This'll tie in with the Enclave, so it'll require some creative juices.
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 3:12 am

I just watched ROTJ last night.......

I'm pretty sure it was the scene when they were on Endor in the bunker and Lea gets shot.

Ewoks are so annoying. They screams make me wanna strangle them!! AAAAAAAAAAAA-EEEEEEEEEEEE-YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 5:36 am

Next post later today.
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Cayal
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 9:02 pm

Holy scene stealing, Batman!
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Robert DeLarosa
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 5:39 pm

Holy scene stealing, Batman!


CANT STOP LAUGHING :biglaugh: :biglaugh: cant wait for next part
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 3:15 am

I just watched ROTJ last night.......

I'm pretty sure it was the scene when they were on Endor in the bunker and Lea gets shot.

Ewoks are so annoying. They screams make me wanna strangle them!! AAAAAAAAAAAA-EEEEEEEEEEEE-YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

i know there so annoying.
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 3:59 pm

Next post later today.


LIAR!!!!!
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 1:00 am

-18-
Raven Rock
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Amata and Steven woke, dazed and confused. They had bit hit with some sort of charge after they left Project Purity. They had no idea, what it was, or why it had happened. But both of them were coming too, at the same time.
"You're awake. Good." An ominous voice penetrated their blurry visions.
"Wha..." Steven began, "what's going on?"
"Hmph. You were hard enough to track. And even harder to capture. But now that's you're both here, I suppose I can explain some thing to you."
"Who..." Amata seemed weak, weaker then Steven, "who are you?"
He seemed to chuckle. "Why, Miss, i'm your President."
Their vision began to focus. They saw a computer screen, apparently speaking to them.
"The...President? You mean that Eden guy? Where the hell are we?"
"You are located in the Enclave's main base, Raven Rock. I need to discuss some things with you."
"Well then, 'Mr. President'," said Steven sarcastically, "I don't know what you want from us, but at least talk too us face to face."
"Hah! I see you are not aware of my true nature. What you see before you is what I am. Embrace it or not, I am a computer."
"And you're the President, hmm? How did that happen?"
"Unimportant. What is important is that given your proximity to Project Purity, you can revive American yet again."
"Revive America? What America? Everything is gone. Destroyed. Burned, 200 years ago."
Even though he was only a computer, Steven and Amata sensed that the President was upset.
"Come now," he said after a moment, "why so pessimistic? With the proper motivation, this country can be made as great as it once was."
"I don't like the sound of that." Steven said, skeptical. "What do you want?"
"I would like you to activate Project Purity, only with a modified Forced Evolutionary Virus. This will effectively kill anyone with heavy radiation. You two will remain immune due to your upbringing in Vault 101."
Amata and Steven exchanged glances, which both said the same thing: this computer was insane.
"We can't do that." Amata said. "Look at how many people are in the Wasteland. The Enclave can't control us. The Enclave needs to die."
"And why, pretell," the President began, "would that need to happen?"
"I'll field this one, Amata." Steven said. "Look at the wasteland. We control it. We've survived for 200 years, scavenging from the pre-war world. We're much more stronger, and much more powerful than the 'pure' breed of humans could ever hope to be."
The President sighed. "I see your point. You are right. I was just hoping that pre-war life was not so out of reach. Very well, you two will have your wish. The Enclave will die. Take the FEV virus before you go-in case you happen to change your mind. I will destroy the base."
They had little time to lose. As soon as they had taken the FEV, the entire base was collapsing and falling on them. When they got out, they looked back to see the entrance get blown out.
"Well then," Amata said, "with the jam gone, it looks like we need to get back to Project Purity, hmm?"
"Yes, yes we do." Steven responded. "Only there's one thing I need to do."
Steven through the FEV virus up in the air, and, with deadly accuracy, shot it into tiny pieces.
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 8:26 pm

EDIT:Changed my mind, i'm gonna keep milking this:P
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Tom
 
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 2:47 am

great addition to the story and what were you going to keep milking
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 2:51 am

I was thinking about ending the story, but I remembered two things:

1. I'd get death threats if I did, and

2. I still have a piece of fiction I want to use :)
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