aw some one beat me to what i was going to say but on topic another great addition * walks away trying to think of a batman joke

Keep it up!

PS: Sorry i had to say that so i could get to the last page. Oddly, when i clicked page 8, it stopped loading. So i decided to post something Btw keep it up and make it faster Unless that pressures you too much .

Maybe you should write Fall out 4?

I'll get something good up tomorrow, guys.

YES ! Thank you

Dun worry, cake. It'll be later tonight (in a few hours) but it'll be here:P

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Amata and Steven could scarcely believe what they were seeing. Was this really Susie Mack, the woman became overseer of Vault 101, and banished them forever?
No. It couldn't have been. It had to be some sort of joke. This was just too improbable to believe.
Steven started laughing, and pointed his gun at her face. "Haha. You're hilarious. Now then, tell us who you really are."
She didn't flinch. "I'm not joking. It's really me."
"Prove it."
She rumaged around in her pocked, and then got out a picutre. Steven recognized it immeadeatly: it was the picture he and his dad had taken at his 10th birthday party.
"My god...it really is you." Steven quickly switched from astonishment to suspicsion. "What do you want from us? We'd thought you'd forgotten about us."
"At first, we tried to. I mean, everyone hated you. After all, if you two and Steven's dad never left..." she trailed off. "But then we got the Vault working again. After a while, bad feelings went away. People started to miss you guys. We all felt bad that we forced you to leave. We've been looking for you for days. I guess I finally found you."
"All right." said Amata. "Why do you want us to come back? Have another problem you need us to help you with?"
"No..." she said, and she looked like she was about to say something important. "We...we want you live in the Vault again."
Steven banged the side of his head. "I must have dust in my ears. Did you just say you wanted us to live in the Vault?"
"Yes, I did. But not to lock you in there. We just want to see you again."
They looked at each other for a moment. Was this some sort of dream? The same Vault that had kicked them out after they saved all of them wanted them to come back?
"Please," she said, "come back."
"This," said Steven, getting a bit angry, "coming from the same person who kicked us out after we saved your ungrateful lives????"
He shot his gun up in the air. "I don't know why you want us to come back, but I don't care. We're done with that Vault. LEAVE!"
Susie looked away, visibly hurt. Steven felt extremely guilty as soon as he had said that.
"Hold on." Steven said, getting up and walking over to her. "I'm sorry. I just got really riled up. Has everyone really forgiven us?"
"Yes," she said quietly, "we all have. And we want you to come back."
"Well, it would be nice to see everyone again." said Amata, also getting up. "It has been 2 years. Alright, lead the way."
Susie nodded, and led them to the Vault. While they were walking, she gave them the history of what happened: after they left, the Vault slowly began to rebuild itself, under a doctrine of transparency and honesty from her role as Overseer. People were allowed to come and go as they pleased;dying wastelanders were occasionally let in for medical treatment. About 7 months after they left, people started to feel bad. They had left a lot of old friends behind, and as the years went on, more and more people wanted them to return to the Vault. Finally, Susie had ultimately opted to create a scout team to search the wasteland for them.
After many miles of walking, they finally made it to that impenetrable steel door with "101" imprined on it. Susie typed in a code, and the Vault door opened. Amata and Steven were thinking the same thing: this was going to feel akward.

don't go it's a trap!
:nuke: :gun: :ahhh::ahhh::ahhh::ahhh:

TRAP TRAP PLEASE! It will make things more interesting :gun: suzie mack!

ITS A TRAP DON'T GO IN THEY MIGHT CAPTURE YOU AND MAKE YOU WATCH GASP.......... EDUCATIONAL TELEVISION OR EVEN WORSE shoot you in the face

Zonkers, Batman! They're walking right into a trap!

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Next post later today/early tomorrow! Holy overused punchlines, Batman!

YAY CANT WAIT. also batman jokes ftw

Woot!

Ok, this has been puzzling me for a while:
Why do you guys like my fan-fic so much?

I don't really think it is that great, what do you think is good about it?

It's good because:
It's 1337
It tells a story about Amata and the lone wanderer
It's by you
Im reading it
Its a good story
+ many more

what he said.

i dont know why maybe cuz i..... like it and its cool i dont know why

Okay, fine, I get it. I'll stop using the Batman jokes.

I think i'm gonna delay a post until tomorrow. I need some concensus, should I make it:

A joyful reunion

A trap

I'm not sure, because they have been fighting for so long, i don't mind, either are fine.

after the one Ur postin today make some about the DLC's

Also make it a reunion because the saints can take then on e-zly

also make the vault dwellers of 101 make a religion of them

Because it has Amata in it. :celebration: It's also good writing. :goodjob: