Trap 'em like rats in a cage! It leads that kind of feeling to it. After all, why would Susie Mack point a gun at them and then tell them, "Oh, we can be friends now," if it looks horribly like she's lying?

It has to be a trap. It's gotta be.

EDIT: Otherwise, I'll start the Batman jokes again. Everybody hates those.

please make it a trap for our sakes otherwise he'll keep going with the terrible batman jokes.

batman jokes ftw and go with trap

Sorry if I sound stupid, but what does ftw mean? I know wtf and btw, and others, but not that one.

EDIT: I wouldn't really start the batman jokes over again. I'm not that cruel.

I believe it's because this fic has been here the longest, and because you deliver good, fairly frequent updates. This fic has more reviewers than all the other current fics. People have confidence in you and your writing. To put it simply, you've developed a fanbase.

Sorry for the double post, but PSP's have text limits. It's For The Win.

Oh, and I pick happy reunion, perhaps with a little drama thrown in. I mean, everyone can't want them back. There must be someone there that doesn't like them.

Trap dude makes it more excitingg

Everyone's going to have to keep their pants/skirts on. I'll have something later today

-21-
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After they entered the Vault, they were surprised to see Susie closing the door behind them.
"Now then, don't make any sudden moves." She pulled out her assault rifle.
Amata and Steven were about to get out their guns, when they saw them. At least 20 seperate raiders revealed themselves from stealth boy.
"About time. We've been looking for you two goody-two shoes for years. Guess we got you where we want you."
"Hold on." Steven began, stunned. "You're not Susie. Who are you?"
She laughed. "Nope, i'm not. A shame I had to kill old Pinkerton after he gave me the facelift. Oh well."
"What the hell is going on?"
"I'm talking here kid, not you. The name's Mary, but that's not important. What's important is that you're gonna help us."
"Yeah? Or what?"
She laughed again. "Or...we blow up this Vault. All your old 'friends' are bound and gagged safe and sound in the reactor level. If you want to save them, you'll help us."
Amata and Steven looked at each other. What were they going to do? They may not exactly have been welcome in Vault 101, but it was still where they grew up.
Finally, Amata took a deep sigh, and said to the raider, "what do you want us to do?"
The raider fetched a backpack she had kept at the entrance of the Vault. She opened it, and inside were various explosives.
"I want you two to rig these around Rivet City. Then, meet us over at Project Purity, and watch the fireworks. Once we got that good for nothin' city off the map, you and your old Vault 'friends' will be free to go. Deal?"
They were dumbstruck. Blow up Rivet City? How could they? It was a city full of perfectly innocent people, who didn't deserve to die. But on the other hand, if they didn't, Vault 101 would be destroyed.
Steven looked the raider dead in the eye. "We'll do it."

DESTROY THE VAULT I love rivet city

hmm vault or rivet city............ vault lives

that's my 2 bottle caps

Short, but still awesome BLOW DA VAULLLTTT!!

DON'T LISTEN TO THEM, STEALTH UR WAY BACK INTO THE VAULT AND KEEL THE RAIDERS

that be cooler than blowing up the vault

Never thought of that possibilty but yes possible. Maybe make it you get help from a old pal like Fawkes or something?

Sooner or later, we'll have to make a second topic.

wow a fanfic that needed a 2nd topic only other one i know of that had done this is that barterman thing

I probably would have been shocked, were it not the fact that everybody was screaming for a trap. :shakehead: Nice twist with the rivet city thing though. :thumbsup:

when next one?

Sometime today or tomorrow. I'm running out of space; I think it might be time to end this story

Not forever, of course. I could do a follow-up once The Pitt is released, but I already have an idea for a different story, and i'd like to start writing it soon.

Noo!! Don't end the story!! Keep on going. Start a new thread if you have to!

but there is only 2 ways to end the story both arnt good :cryvaultboy:

Alright, i'll keep going!
I'm gonna make a new thread soon, though.

Woot Woot
Finally changed your avatar

There are a few in the TES forum that reached multithread status. BSparrow's Of Fate, Luck, and Ambition was the best to do so that I remember. She shall be missed, as she was one of the best writers on the forum.

On topic: Only the very best authors have their stories reach a second thread, so congrats.