edit - Ok, I just made a few minor adjustments.. http://i.imgur.com/opB71.jpg Getting better? Worse?
The thing with the lips is ahh.. *mumbles something about not keeping PSD files* sooo.. kind of hard to fix it..
I have to admit, I like both eye shades, both the darker red of the last picture and the brownish-red of the first. Not that I'm trying to demand a million options, here...
Seriously, I think both have a really great look, I love the color you are getting for the eyes in all the Dunmer pictures.
The lips look better in the last picture; I can't from what you wrote above if you fixed it, or if it's just something about the angle, but it looks more balanced. Not that I have the most discerning eye, I admit.
Edit: I really like your new Norn face as well, although I have to admit, I can't quite tell from the screenshot what the skin texture will look like in game. The picture on the bottom left seems very pale, but I am guessing that might be the lighting and not the actual color?