I was doing a little research for a story I'm writing, and I caught on the events of Red Mountain and Nerevar's betrayal. Inspired, I decided to write an account of my own interpretation, but realized that I was getting into some fairly lore-heavy territory. So I thought maybe I could solicit help from the internet, and specifically this forum and r/teslore. I am no expert on TES lore by any means, having just come into the series with Skyrim, and I want to make sure I'm being faithful to the material.

Would any here be willing to take a look at my story and let me know if I'm following established lore?

Hey. http://www.gamesas.com/topic/1367306-the-editorial-initiative/

And http://www.imperial-library.info/sites/default/files/dogate_til_fishystick.jpg you go.