I loved reading this, as it has many of the qualties that really draws me into the story. You have a brilliant way of describing combat, making it seem so real and so easy to picture yourself in the characters shoes.
Also...I'm a svcker for the whole sixual/romantic tension, and I must have been giggling like a little school girl for a couple of the parts especially when reading Fenix's dialouge.

And I just knew Fenix was too good to be true! I hope you continue this story, seeing as I'm dying with curiosity to read more. The new twist in the story really spices it up, making it far more interesting. Also, I want to know what happens between Felicitty and Fenix

Looking forward to read more!

That's awesome, Serenity; thanks. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far. And yes, I'm glad I put the sudden twist in there too, because I do think that it makes things more interesting. Although, because I hadn't planned on it initially, I've had to spend some time really working it into the story.

All that being said, I think I'm going to stick with telling the rest of the chapters from Felicity's perspective. I think using Fenix really worked for the last one, but somehow, writing from Felicity's perspective seems more natural to me. Which is...weird. But I'm gonna go ahead and roll with it.

So, in conclusion, I'm in the process of working on chapter 15.

I love this story.I don't know why I didnt see this before when I first joined, but it an awsome story. I havn't read a good fan-fic since BSparrow's Fan-fic. Keep it up and I hope you start writing it again.