This :lmao:

Everything is falling apart. In other words mALX is in full swing. :twirl:

I enjoyed the jailor just walking out the castle gate. How typical. Lol.

Let me tell you all one thing: YOU AINT SEEN NUFFINK YET.

Just you wait-and-see!!!

Now excuse me while I laugh myself to death in the bathroom... accidents, you know...

@ Rachel (the other Minx) Breton - Thank you so much! I almost wrote that whole chapter around the paragraph you quoted, lol - that line came to me, and I wrote it down, then just went with that theme for almost the whole thing - and it kept getting worse, I get carried away when I get on something like that, lol. Thank you, you are Awesome !!!
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@ Foxy - Thank you very much! You have outdone yourself on poems this week, AWESOME !!!

Er....when I smoothed out the rough draft I sent you, the word count was too high - so the post you are looking for will have to be next (since this one is small I may pop it on there tonight, if no one minds posts that close together, lol. - it will be worth it, as you can see, Foxy is excited about it !!!)

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@ Hauteecole Rider - EW!!! TMI Alert!!! Gaaaaah!! I almost lost my midnight snack on that one!!! ROFL !!! Thank you so much!
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@ Bobg - ROFL !!! Thank you Master Po, you are always appreciated!!!
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@ Acadian - Thank you so much, and I haven't fixed the nit yet, but I will. I had to write this next chapter in kind of a hurry, lol. I thought I had the chapter done, and somehow had saved a blank page. So I had to write this quickly, then it was too long so I had to divide it. ARGH!
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@ SubMinxia the Minxiest Minx - Thank you so much SubRosa, you ROCK !!!
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@ Zalphon - Thanks Zalphon !!!
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@ Winter Wolf - Thank you so much Winter Wolf! I am so excited about you writing and can't wait to see it!!!!!! I already know your character is Awesome from Buffy !!! Yeah !!!


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Chapter 64: Prison Life And Vicente



As Vicente waited to be bailed from jail his frustration was growing. He could tell Maxical was no longer in the castle; or in Skingrad, for that matter. Had Ocheeva rescued Maxical and brought her to the Sanctuary?

Ocheeva finally came to bail him out. "Whew, Vicente! You reek!" She said, wrinkling her snout.

"Of course I do! I'm in here with that stinking Orc, who could not have bathed since birth! He defiled the only mat with his fleas and stench. I have not been able to lay down since we were arrested! Why didn't Antoinetta come get me out?"

Ocheeva made a grimace. "Eyja spilled the beans about this whole mission being over that white Khajiit not long after they entered the courtyard. You would not believe the fit Antoinetta threw! She almost got us all caught. She is sulking now."

"I will kill Eyja for this!" Vicente spat.

"Stand in line. Eyja has not come back, and better not. She svckered you, Vicente. Those maps she made did not match anything inside the castle. She lied about the secret tunnels too, the one you found is the only one there is. She slept with more members than even you have, and in only a couple days. Everyone is at the chapel for healing from some disease she gave them all. She is dead meat if she ever shows up again."

"Gogron needs to go to the healer as well, the cretin does nothing but scratch and stink." Vicente didn't bother lowering his voice.

Gogron laughed. "Say what you want, Telaendril is with me, and I've seen the way you look at her."

"Shut up, you vile green flea-ridden sack of slimy putrid?" Vicente was growling before Ocheeva cut him off.

"You two better quit your fighting, Lucien is here in Skingrad and he is livid. Vicente, he wants to talk to you as soon as you get released."

"Watch out Bicente, you are turning green. Someone might think you are an Orc." Gogran taunted from his mat. He hoisted himself up to a sitting position. "Looks like you are in trouble now, Bicente."

"Shut up!" Vicente strangled out. He turned back to Ocheeva, his face a mild green color. "He?is here? Oh no. Well what about Maxical? Were you able to rescue her? I can tell she is not in Skingrad anymore. Lucien can't be too mad if we were able to save our sister in spite of? the rest."

"It seems Maxical escaped on her own somehow that morning, before we ever arrived. What happened to that nose of yours, why couldn't you tell she was gone?"

"It was that damned Shepherd's Pie. I ate some before we left the house, Eyja has been poisoning me with it, I figured it out finally. She must be putting garlic in it."

"How hard was that to figure out? You can smell the garlic in it from a mile away. Don't you know alchemy at all? Why did you keep eating it if it made you sick?"

"It was better than that 'Goat Herder Pastry' made with mutton." Vicente's face contorted just thinking about it.

"Vicente, if you make Goat Herder Pastry with mutton, it is Shepherd's Pie. She just changed the name to fool you."

Gogron laughed. "I'm an Orc and I knew that."

"Shut up, you reeking mass of filthy infested creeping stench!" Vicente turned back to Ocheeva.

"That is another reason I couldn't smell. Gogron! He walked upwind of me to the castle and I barely survived the trip. Something needs to be done about that?" Vicente spun around and glared at Gogron, who was in the act of raising his arm and fanning his other hand under it so the odor would waft in Vicente's direction.

"Ocheeva, do you see what I have had to tolerate? Between his taunts and his lack of hygiene it is no wonder I have not gone insane and killed that nasty slimy green?"

"Brrraaaaapppp" Gogron was deliberately turned so the escaping gas blew in Vicente's direction.

"All right, now STOP IT you two! You are acting like children, and this is a very serious matter! And Gogron that does stink, I can smell it from out here." Ocheeva moved away from the front of the cell till the odor cleared.

"From what I've learned, Maxical may have been a prisoner of the Count himself, for it seems she was never kept in the prison, and the Count has gone quite mad since she left; roaring like a lion in his suite. I heard him myself when I was scouring the castle for her and trying to find those tunnels. Maybe she was his favorite on the side."

"She is still a virgin!'" Vicente snapped, flying into a rage as he realized the Count must have had intentions towards Maxical.

Ocheeva stepped back and looked closely at Vicente. "Oh, I see which way the wind is blowing now."

"It is not what you think! I can still hear her?sound. It would go away if she lost her virginity." Vicente attempted to cover quickly.

"Did it sound like this? Brrraaaaapppp" Gogron asked.

Ocheeva ignored Gogron and the odor this time, staring hard at Vicente.

"So it is exactly what I have been thinking! Vicente, you have put us all in danger over your lust for her virgin blood. Lucien is here. We may all be killed over this. The Dark Brotherhood does not fire you, they purge you! Lucien may enact the Rite of Purification over this mess."


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And now's the time to rhyme with Dee
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
Let's hear it for Mr Stinking Flea!
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee

He lifts his arm and raises alarms
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
A whiff of the wind brings olfactory charms!
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee

He farts in tune by the light of the moon
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
He farts with onions n' garlic a-pungent!
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee

His stench brings howls and shouts for towels
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
An aroma of rot and congealed snot!
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee

He's as dirty as me when thinking of...heee...
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
Sing this madly and your mind'll be free
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee

Now mad I may be, apostrophizing this flea
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
But someone's gotta praise stinkers - why not me?
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee

So let's hear it for this disgusting Orc
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
Who eats green turds with spoon and fork!
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee

And if that hasn't got you down by now..
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
I'm giving up and saying - HOLY COW!!
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee
Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee diddle Dee!!!!


**DFOXY takes no responsibility for the above lines, which descended upon him in a mysterious fit while reading the Minxical post**

mALX, this was very good! Quick, easy to read and it flowed well.

What a great example of how to tell your story via dialogue! You revealed what you wanted via a three way conversation and did it wonderfully!

I pity the Daedra should you ever send Eyja into an Oblivion Gate.

Well done, my friend!

Oh! but what a way to end the Oblivion Crisis! Marooned Dragon scratching himself insane! bliviongate:

Sorry Rachel, if you're reading this - I can not think of Mehrunes Dagon without crying "Oh, Marooned Dragon!" any more :facepalm:

Again, great write, mALX1! I found myself crawling back into my chair quite breathless from laughing so hard! Between you and Rachel (and Jing-a-ling Foxy) I'm getting healthier by the minute (laughter is the best medicine?)!

I'll try to write something more coherent when I've stopped laughing.... :rofl: :rofl:

I echo all the above! Great dialogue, pacing, and characterization, I know that Lucien's response to this 'crisis' is going to be something to remember!

:lmao:

All I can say is "EWWWWW", and I grew up with an older brother, so I know all about the Gogron's of the world. In fact, whenever I watch Shrek, I think "That is my brother!". But this was much, much worse. I find myself actually pitying Vicente. Well, almost. Truth is the bugger deserves it...

Woohoo, Lucien vs. Vicente...however this ends, it's going to be epic!! Fantastic, as always. It was concise, funny, and got across everything that needed to be said.

And I second SubRosa...I almost feel sorry for Vicente as far as Gogron is concerned. Almost.

LOL, hauteecole rider, glad to see the power of the Great Marooned Dragon is spreading...

She svckered you, Vicente

Rereading the post again, I read that part, missed the ending of the verb, and now I am wiping off coffee stains off my Monitor. Thank you very much indeed, Minxi.

:rofl:

@ Foxy - Thank you very much Foxy, I love your poems, (as you know) - even if the subject of them is phooey, ROFL - it ended up being too large, so the one you are waiting for will be after the one I post today. Gaaah, I know the wait is killing me, lol. You ROCK Foxy !!

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@ Acadian - Thank you so much, I did not realize how much dialogue that chapter had till you said something, lol !!! I wrote Vicente and Ocheeva, then just wove Gogron in and out - then added the responses to his parts. I was in hysterics, his odor is not the only thing that took on a life of its own, Gogron's personality did as well - not an endearing one, but very believable for an Orc? ROFL.
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Hauteecole Rider - Thank you very much, Rachel has def started a few things, I will think of Martin as the manly Dragonheart instead of the whiny guy from my game, and not want to sleep anywhere near Jauffre again, ROFL - so glad it brought a laugh reading, because I was in stitches writing it !!
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@ RemkoNL - Now that is what I love to hear !! Thank you so much RemkoNL !!!!
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@ Destri Melarg - That was my favorite line, I could really hear an Orc saying something like that - maybe I played too much Fallout 3 and picked up on the dialogue of the Super Mutants, ROFL - Thank you so much Destri!
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@ SubMinxette the Rosa-Minx - I never had a little brother, but tried to picture one when I wrote Gogron's part, and then pictured locking the two in a cell for an extended period; Vicente's attitude of superiority mixed with frustration and desperation over Maxical VS Gogron's lack of respect for Vicente's superiority and authoritae - the situation had to be funny, lol. In a situation like that, at the end you find out which had the stronger personality - in this case, Gogron brought Vicente down to his level: name calling, etc.

Thank you very much SubRosa, you ROCK the Minxdom of Minxonia!
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@ Rachel (the other Minx) Breton - who was it I recently read that had Vicente and Lucien going at it - Alexander's "Cyrodiil" I think, I was sitting at my desk hooting! The story was old, but someone (other than me) necromanced the story, and I could not stop reading it! - It was a great fight scene!

In writing, (Not in game) - Lucien is coming across with a lot of personality and I would have to tend toward his side, but in game he is really easy to kill compared to Vicente, lol.

Thank you so much Rachel !! (the other Minx).


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Chapter 65: Lucien Lachance and Eyja



"So if I understand you correctly, Vicente did all this over a girl?"

Eyja nodded, never taking her eyes from Lucien's. "Yes, it seems he was quite interested in her?virginity. I did not find this out till we were at the castle. One of the members told me what was going on."

"I see." Lucien said quietly; then very suddenly stood up, as if a new thought occurred to him. "Are you saying that as a vampire he is interested in her virgin blood?"

Once again, Eyja nodded. "That is exactly the way it was said to me. It seems they all knew."

Lucien sat down again. "And he used all the resources of our organization to run a full scale siege on Castle Skingrad for that? Jeopardizing our entire organization?"

"Yes. I was hired the instant he met me to organize the whole mission. I was told it was to rescue a fellow member. I did what I was hired to do, here is a copy of the maps and orders I gave each of them. It was to be a full scale stealth operation. Everything was timed out to the second; that is until Vicente and Ocheeva took over for the mission. After that it was the biggest mess I've ever seen. Vicente changed my maps so even the Count would not be able to find his way to his own quarters by it. Look, here is a copy of one he gave me."

"This thing is unreadable!" Lucien turned the parchment in different angles, but could not find one in which the map was legible. He looked closely at the writing, it was Vicente's.

"Exactly. That wasn't the worst of it, either. The members squabbled and brawled with each other in the middle of a mission, right there in the castle; drawing the attention of the guards. None of them could follow the simplest instruction. Vicente, Gogron, and Antoinetta all showed their faces to the castle guards, risking the anonymity of the guild. Had they succeeded in kidnapping this girl; who was a guest of the castle I might add; they would have been named easily for the crime. The castle is not open in the middle of the night, how would they explain their presence there? Vicente and Gogron were caught, and they sit in jail as we speak."

Lucien looked over the notes Eyja handed him. It was the most intricately and brilliantly planned out mission he had ever seen, down to the last detail. The handwriting was unfamiliar.

Lucien was not surprised by Eyja's revelations. The Cheydinhal chapter had been lax for quite some time. A purge had been imminent for a while now, increasingly so in the last months.

Vicente caused dissention among the members with his womanizing; disappeared with no notice to anyone for months; most recently the summons and order to drop all contracts for one missing member; dragging the whole chapter halfway across Cyrodiil. And he had hired an outsider without going through proper protocol. He was out of control.

Antoinetta acted more like a thwarted two year old than a professional assassin, and Ocheeva coddled her. The whole promiscuous lot of them spreading disease amongst themselves was unacceptable.

They had all become weak, that could not be tolerated in this organization. Worst of all, the traitor assassin had been traced to the Cheydinhal chapter. It was time for the Black Hand to enact the Rite of Purification.

When Lucien didn't speak, Eyja continued. "I have never seen such an inept and unprofessional crew in my life. I believe in running a 'tight ship' as my father used to say. Ocheeva loves the others?maybe too much. It gives her a disadvantage as the leader of the chapter. They walk all over her and do as they please. She caters to the megrims of that child Antoinetta as if she bore her in her womb. A leader has to distance themselves so respect for their authority is not lost." Eyja declared roundly, then in more dulcet tones added, "More Shepherd's Pie? It's my specialty. I make it with triple the garlic, that is why it is so good."

"This is delicious, I will have to stop into the sanctuary more often if I will be treated like this! I'll bet Vicente was upset he couldn't partake of this, being allergic to garlic."

"Actually he ate quite a bit of it. I repeatedly warned him of the garlic in it, but he loved it so much that he continued eating it anyway." Eyja smiled, ladling out more on Lucien's plate.

Lucien looked up at that, surprised. "I'll bet he suffered." He hesitated, then added, "Would you mind sharing the recipe?"

"I don't give it out. If everyone made it, it would cease to be special. If it is a handwriting sample you seek to verify those are my plans, why not just ask?"

"Was I that obvious?" Lucien was stunned that she had caught him.

"Yes." She said flatly.

"How so?" He was genuinely curious.

"Men don't ask for recipes unless they are married." Eyja looked him directly in the eyes.

"How do you know I am not?" He blanked his expression.

Eyja reached over and lifted his hand to his view. "No ring, no whiteness of your skin showing one has been there."

"Not all men wear rings." Lucien raised one brow, as if challenging her.

"You would." Eyja did not break contact with his eyes.

Lucien stared at her, surprise dawning in his eyes. "Yes, I would. How did you know that?"

"Some things you just know without a reason." Eyja turned away, busying herself with opening a fresh bottle of wine.

Lucien watched her a minute before speaking, but he had already made up his mind.

"Eyja, I have a task that requires a very special person to handle. I find myself very impressed with you. Would you consider working directly under me? If you do this for me, I will give you the running of the Cheydinhal sanctuary. All the members would come to you for their orders. The pay is extremely high. What would you be willing to do for a position like that?" Lucien asked, taking another large forkful of the pie. He watched her reaction carefully.

"I'd kill for an arrangement like that!" Eyja declared, pouring more wine in Lucien's glass. She slowly raised her eyes to his, the wine bottle poised over the glass momentarily. With a flicker of a smile she added, "Literally."

"I hoped you would feel that way. I am enacting a total purge of this chapter. We have had a traitor in our midst, and our organization cannot tolerate the weakness I have seen in these members. You have more than proven yourself to me." Lucien hesitated, she was looking intently at him.

"I will make a gift to you of my personal blade. This Purification is a sacred Rite, a ceremony of cleansing. This particular blade was handed down through the ages specifically for this ritual." Lucien un-strapped the sheath from his waist and held it out to her.

Eyja took it, drawing the shortsword out and examining it. "Blade of Woe." She read aloud, then fastened the sheath around her.

Lucien stared hard at her, shaken out of his sangfroid. The words on the blade were etched in enchanted code, and she had read them easily. Who was she? He shook himself and began with the instructions.

"If possible, isolate each member before killing them, so the others don't realize the Purification has been enacted. We prefer things like this to be done cleanly and quietly. There is a bonus, when completed I will give you my enchanted mare for your own. Shadowmere is the most loyal mount you will ever find."

"Shadowmere." Eyja repeated. "Will you not miss her?" She asked softly.

"I hope to continue to see her, with her new owner aboard." His voice was sincere, and he looked deeply into her eyes as he said it.

"I will do it. When?" Eyja kept her eyes and voice steady under his intense scrutiny.

"As soon as possible. I think we will work well together, Eyja." Lucien lifted her hand and placed some spells in it, smiling up at her. "Take these. This one is a vengeful ghost. Don't rely on it to help you, it is really just a party trick."

"Hmm, I wonder what kind of party I would pull this out at?" Eyja laughed. "Lucien, I will strive to see you always feel we work well together. Thank you." Eyja smiled, looking briefly into his eyes before removing the empty plate from in front of him. "More wine?"

"Yes, thank you. This wine is excellent! I usually have Surilie Brothers delivered to me, but this is much better. What is that, Tamika's 399?"

"Yes it is, and I will tell you a secret few people know. The Surilie Brothers don't even drink their own wine, they prefer Tamika's themselves."

"Eyja, you are a gem!" Lucien smiled up at her again. She was the one good thing that came out of this mess. "By the way, where is everyone else? Why are you here alone?"

"Oh, they all had to go to the chapel for healing from that disease. It seems Antoinette also gave it to several of the guards at Skingrad Castle during the mission. They were at the Chapel getting healed at the same time our members were there. Had the guards found out that our members were being treated for the exact same thing, it would have directly connected us to the trouble at the castle."

"Yes it would. What did they have?" Lucien was watching her eyes intently. Her eyes did not even flicker once, nor evade. Her body seemed relaxed and open toward him. She had to be telling the truth.

"The healer said they all had 'Red Rage' and 'Brain Rot'. Antoinetta caught it from the beggar that hangs in front of this manor. He is well known to have both diseases. 'Nigidius the Needy' is what they call him. I guess Antoinetta is the one that was needy." Eyja gave a tinkle of laughter. Lucien laughed, still watching her eyes as she spoke.

"The healer said the disease made them weak as newborn babies in more ways than one." Eyja flipped her index finger against her temple to demonstrate weak minded. "I noticed them all itching, and stayed as far away from them as possible."

"That was smart." Lucien said, pushing back his chair and standing up. "The others will be returning soon, and I would like to take my leave before they do. You seem to have this well in hand. I have had a surprisingly pleasant morning, Eyja. I may come visit you often when you are the new head of the Cheydinhal chapter. I don't know when I have been more intrigued with a woman." He looked deeply into her eyes, a questioning look in his.

"That is not supposed to be a question." Eyja whispered, her cheeks pinking from his intense look.

Lucien lifted her left hand, turning it palm up. He pressed a key into her palm, then curled her fingers over it. "I've already given you keys and the code for the sanctuary, this key is separate from anything to do with the sanctuary. It is the key to my personal quarters in Fort Farragut. I want you to feel free to use it anytime, you will always be welcome. If I am out, you are free to wait for me there." Lucien's eyes sought hers before continuing.

"Whether you ever avail yourself of the sanctuary or not, matters not for this invitation. It is from a man to a woman who has caught his interest greatly, and has nothing to do with the Black Hand or Dark Brotherhood. The entrance is within a great oak to the left of the main enclosure." Without taking his eyes from hers, he lifted her other hand to his lips. Giving it a brief salute, he turned and walked out the door.


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So who IS Eyja really.... boggles the mind how cleverly she's been misleading the Dark Brotherhood. And now she's taken in Lucien.... Agatha Christy, eat your heart out!

:read: mALX, this was pure joy to read! Brilliant in all regards. I loved some of your clever and descriptive use of words - too many to quote in fact.

This certainly ranks among the very best of your wonderful stories.

In my mind, I have a good idea of who Eyja is, who she works for, and why. I shall be interested to see if I am correct.

At the present moment, You may call Foxy Acadian....

Oh my! Will the real Eyja please stand up?

I have not played the game enough to be able to make a guess who she really is. Although my thoughts naturally run to the Morang Tong, as I know they are rivals of the Brotherhood. Or a member of the Black Hand themselves perhaps?



One nit:
"Oh, they all had to go to the chapel for healing from that disease
You missed the period at the end of this sentence.

Your plot twists are absolutely FANTASTIC, I never even saw that coming. I can't wait to find out who she really is.

My thoughts too...Hmmm...

Anyhow, this is an awesome write...gives a whole new twist to Ejya's character -- one that I, for one, did not see coming. Well written -- and very exciting stuff!!

Well! So there's more to Eyja (with a 'j') than meets the eye!

Hmmm . . . .

Like the others, I never saw that coming either. Give the woman a Golden Globe, somebody!

I repeat: YOU AINT SEEN NUFFINK YET.

All right, as of this moment I vow never to take anything you present at face value again! What a twist!

Lucien should jump on Shadowmere and spur her back to Fort Farragut where the dark guardians can at least try to protect him. I feel genuine pity for every member of the Cheydinhal sanctuary.


That grease spot you see is from the bolt of lightning that just disintegrated Antoinetta! :clap:

Oh mALX, that was one of your best yet. :bowdown: You kept Eyja at the perfect level. Her tone of voice ran clear and true throughout this chapter. Wow !!
The ditzy female has proved that she is the most dangerous assassin of them all. :twirl:

In relation to the coming chapter I am not even going to guess. I know that a certain D.Foxy has a hand in the storyline. That is a very dangerous thing....for everyone involved.

My mind does spin; however, on what impact Eyja had at the end of the DB storyline. Lucien..... :blink:

Give the woman a Golden Globe, somebody!



Make that TWO Golden Globes with an Oscar sandwiched in the middle...

:hubbahubba: :rofl:

And with this. post No. 199, Malx, make the next post your farewell to this thread and the opening of a new thread, with the Eyja revelation coming!!!

I want to thank everyone that has been reading A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey, (I, II, III, and IV); and for the help you have given me to improve it, I could never thank you enough for that. For every one of you that has encouraged me or lit a fire under my tail to make me go back and fix things - You ROCK !!!!


Here are the links for the threads, now I have my V thread out, let us hope Bethesda takes the hint and puts out TES V !!!!!




Maxical's entire journey has been captured in the picture albums of her Myspace page, if you would like to visit it:

http://www.myspace.com/oblivion_khajiit




For convenience the whole story is posted on FanFiction, here is a link to the story there:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~malx






If you prefer to stay on the forum, here are the links to all previous chapters:



Maxical's Journey - A New Sun Rises - (Chapters 1 - 23)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1038084-maxicals-journey/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey II - (Chapters 24 - 36)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1050778-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-ii/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey III - (Chapters 37 - 50)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1056626-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-iii/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey IV - (Chapters 51 - 65)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1065146-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-iv/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey V - (Chapters 66 - 85)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1071522-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-v/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey VI - (Chapters 86 - ??)


http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1080421-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-vi/







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*** PS For everyone who wants some inside scoop on up-coming storyline - visit Maxical's Myspace, I just posted some very revealing clues !!!


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