A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey V

Post » Tue May 17, 2011 3:01 am

The scenes in Clavicus' realm were quite vivid- as was the Daedra prince's personality.

You are one of the few people who compounds every error by making five much worse errors to save you from the first.


Janus can't get any respect- and I am not sure if he deserves it...

And the introduction (and sacrifice) of Shivani- just wonderful. Although I have a feeling about that "sacrifice"- no, best to just keep that speculation to myself.

Side note- I listen to music sometimes while reading- 3 of the random songs that came up were- "Dice" by Finley Quaye; "Weight of the World" by the Editors; and "Should I Stay or Should I Go" by The Clash.

Rather an appropriate soundtrack, all in all.

ETA- And thank you for the nod to Mrs. Treydog, Mouse-Moose Painter Extraordinaire
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 7:33 am

Melisande went up and raised her hand to knock on the open door of Janus's suite, but put her head in first to see if he was there. Janus was sitting at the table, on either side of him was a chair. On one side the huge figure of Barbas rested, an enormous steak on a plate in front of him. On the other side was a chair with books piled up in it, and Alix sat atop the books, a plate of fruits and vegetables in front of him.

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We already know that Shivani's soul was living in Melisande. What are the odds that Maxical's soul has taken up residence inside of Janus?

As for the picture of Barbas; on the ground in front of him, is that . . . drool? :yuck:
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 6:04 am

Janus has come a long way hasn't he? From an eccentric reclusive to a man giving his gold bath tub to a mouse...... :rofl:
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 10:32 am

@ Acadian - I know, I felt bad for Alix & S'Jirra through this whole thing. I wanted to get one chapter in that caught everyone up on where all the players are right now, as things begin to happen in the chapter after next. (!!!) Thank you so much Acadian!
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@ Hauteecole Rider - I wouldn't go so far as to say poet, lol. I hope you don't mind I suggested your name as sub judge for the Feyfolken. You have an Awesome knowledge of rules of grammar and read quickly - so I hinted you would be a good candidate, lol. Of course you can always say no. Thank you very much Hauty!
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@ Arcry - Thank you so much Arcry! I have wondered what she will do when she gets out of this too, lol.
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@ Leydenne - I can't say the thought of that large soul gem in his pants pocket didn't cross my mind in a funny way too - or the fact that he kept reaching in and clutching it when he was in Clavicus Vile's realm, ROFL - a little pocket pool anyone? ROFL !!! It is really hard to write a serious scene when you are laughing at images that pop into your head, lol. - Thank You so much for dropping by Leydenne!!!! I have an upcoming scene to send you pretty soon for approval, you know how I can get sometimes, lol.
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@ Foxy - Now, I know you don't really put caffiene in that body of yours Foxy! Lol. I'll check for that bill for a WATER STAIN though, lol. I'll send you one of those blow dryers they put in public restrooms, lol. :whistle: Thank you so much Foxy, You ROCK !!
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@ Winter Wolf - I will guarantee you one thing, you will never read in this storyline that Sneakers and Maxical ever make a couple, ROFL !!! I don't know who is worse at spoiling the pets, Janus or Maxical - we'll see I guess, lol. Thank you very much Wolf, you are so appreciated!
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@ Treydog - I studied everything I could about Clavicus Vile and then watched every vid I could find to get that personality down - I am so glad you found it believable !!! Yeah !! On Shivani - more of that will come out when her story does; if I have guessed what you are thinking...you are right. -- On those songs - I loved the lyrics for "Weight of the World" - and may want to use them sometime for something if you don't mind! I have never seen or heard that one before, and immediately fell in love with the lyrics for it! -- And I got a kick out of how everyone in game recognizes Mrs. Treydog's work - "Isn't this a Mrs. Treydog?" - that painting of Alix will be seen - ARGH! I can't tell, but I think you will love it - I will PM it to you to see if you don't mind, lol. Thank you very much Treydog! (I PM'd you)
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@ Destri Melarg - No, that is a puddle left by a guard - he either ate the guard or it saw him, left the puddle, then ran, lol. - Just kidding.
I wonder if a soul trapped inside a soul gem can pop in and out like that? We know Shivani has been watching over Maxical because she (Maxical) has always felt little warnings of danger and promptings to remember things (but always talks herself out of believing them to be valid). Murkwood is the place for lost souls, so we know Shivani was never a lost soul. I'd say she has stuck by Maxical from day one, it may be how Maxical found her way to the Faregyl. Thank you very much Destri!
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@ RemkoNL - Lol, I was shocked by him letting the dog lick his face - and lets them eat at his table but not use his bath, hmmm. Janus may need a brain as badly as Maxical does, lol. Thank you so much Remko!
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@ EVERYONE - THE CEREMONY BEGINS THE CHAPTER AFTER THIS ONE!!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 7:57 am

Chapter 84: Akatosh And The Enemy


Janus traveled at night to reach the Imperial City, and waited in the lobby below till the business of the day started.

High Chancellor Ocato finally arrived, looking irritated to have someone waiting already. It rankled further when Janus refused to discuss his business with him, insisting on speaking with Uriel Septim in a private interview.

"He is busy and has previous appointments scheduled. He can't just cast all business aside for you, Count Skingrad. You will have to wait."

"It is imperative I see him immediately. I shall tell him of your rudeness when I meet with him, Ocato." Janus said quietly.

Ocato led him up to the Elder Scrolls library to wait, hissing under his breath the full way up.

"You seem to have sprung a leak Ocato." Janus stated in the same quiet voice.

Uriel appeared shortly on the landing above, staring curiously at the cowled figure waiting for him in the room below. He descended the steps slowly, a troubled look on his face.

Uriel signaled to Ocato, who hurried up to him obsequiously. "Leave us." Uriel dismissed him.

Ocato glared, but left the room.

"Sire, one of your envoys has?died in County Skingrad. Before she died, she told us that she had given her sworn vow to you of service. It is an albino Khajiit Sire. We have petitioned?" Janus began.

Uriel cut him off mid sentence. "Count Skingrad. I expected someone to come, but find myself surprised that it is you. I expected her father. I assume you know of what I speak?"

"Yes Sire."

"Akatosh has granted the petition. The child?Cyrodiil will have need of her very soon. I have seen things in my dreams?forces that are coming against Cyrodiil itself."

"An attack by Mehrunes Dagon within a year? Sire, how can this tiny child bring his army to its knees? How can the Gods place this on a child who could not possibly survive against such."

"It is not up to us to question the wisdom of the Gods. If they have selected her, then there is a reason for it. These things are not for us to know. Her destiny was mapped out before she was born, just as mine was. You cannot stop this any more than I can. She is a new sun which will rise and change the course of events in Cyrodiil. She must not be hindered on her path, do you understand? It is not for us to question her size or strength. You must release her to do her duty for Cyrodiil. I expect to hear word from you of her progress. There is little time left now. She is a warrior, and must prepare for the battle of her life. Of all of our lives." Uriel's voice held the same inevitability as that which haunted his eyes.

"She will be ill and weak, unable to be moved for some time after this, of course. But I will have trainers brought in to her as soon as she is well enough."

"Do not tarry. For the time grows very near." With that Uriel turned and ascended the curved stairway, his shoulders heavy with the burden of what lay ahead.

Janus opened the door to leave, nearly running into Ocato who was hovering in the doorway.

"Eavesdropping Ocato?" Janus snarled, and then continued down the curved walkway; leaving Ocato standing there with an odder than usual look on his face.

Janus hurried back to Skingrad in spite of the daylight. All was ready for the ceremony to take place.


************************* Melisande

Melisande cast a chameleon spell on herself and slid silently past the bodyguard and into Janus's suite as soon as he left. Rifling his desk produced the key to the cell in the crypt. She slid out past the guard again. As soon as she rounded the corner she dispelled the chameleon and spun around, stepping back up to the suite fully visible this time.

"I am here to walk Barbas." She said to the bodyguard.

"I didn't get any such instructions." The bodyguard said flatly.

"Well, I will inform Janus you stopped me. If Barbas leaves a huge pile on the floor, you will have to clean it, the household staff is gone." Melisande spoke loud enough so Barbas would hear her voice.

Barbas began barking and pawing at the door.

"I guess you had better take the dog." The bodyguard said, picturing the size of mess that giant creature may leave. He opened the door.

"Come on Barbas!" Melisande called. He bounded to her, bumping the bodyguard and knocking him against the wall forcefully.

Melisande hurried down to the crypt. She tiptoed past the sleeping Hannibal and Marie and slid the staff in the back of the cell under the straw. Then she pulled Barbas in and gently shut the cell door, locking it and pocketing the key. She cast the powerful shock, drain magicka, and reflect spells Janus had given her on the cell front; then hurried out.

The castle was like a morgue with the usual workers gone, the jail eerie in the absence of the guards and prisoners as Melisande skirted out through it to save time. She exited out the main gate and followed Janus, casting chameleon on herself.

Melisande slipped into the Imperial Palace not far behind Janus, and hovered near the guards so he would not smell her presence. It was hard not to laugh when Janus snarked at Ocato for his rude hissing when she followed them up to the meeting room.

Melisande barely made it into the meeting room behind Janus before the door was closed. She was stunned to hear Uriel Septim confirm what Clavicus Vile had said about Maxical. It was true then? When Janus sneered at Ocato as he left the meeting room, Melisande passed the Altmer on the other side and goosed him; leaving him staring after Janus with an odd look on his face. As she was hurrying down the corridor she heard Ocato's stunned voice echo down behind her, "Count Skingrad just goosed me!"

She hurried past Janus as he was exiting. She had to beat him back to the castle lest he shock himself trying to rescue Barbas from the cell; but first must alert Divayth Fyr, Lord Kagrenac, and Sage Vardengroet that all was ready so they could come immediately.


******************* Hannibal Traven

Hannibal woke up suddenly. Something wasn't right, he could feel danger near. He moved Marie's arms from around him and crept up. The first thing he saw was Janus's dog in the cell with him. At first he thought the dog had woken him, but then he noticed that Barbas was staring intently at something outside the bars.

Hannibal moved behind the dog and peered out. A man in ancient black robes with red trim in a pattern Traven had only seen in textbooks was standing over Maxical. When he turned to face him Hannibal received the shock of his life. There was no mistaking the skeletal face of the lich, it was Mannimarco! Traven silently thanked Janus for sending the dog in.

Mannimarco was staring at Maxical's frozen body, but as if sensing Traven's presence he turned. "So Traven! Practicing necromancy these days? Is that why you sit in jail? Hoist by your own petard? I assume you stole my staff to resurrect that frozen fur-ball. I must admit it brings me pleasure to see you behind bars."

"I don't know what you are talking about. I don't have your staff." Hannibal's eyes were hooded, watching for any movement. He lay his hand stiffly on Barbas's neck.

"It is in that cell, I followed it here." Mannimarco snarled.

Barbas growled low in his throat.

"Maybe the dog ate it." Hannibal said, removing his hand from Barbas's neck so he wouldn't think he was being held back from attacking. "He eats Lich for snacks, be careful if you plan to come in here."

Mannimarco's glowing eyes glared down into the dog's. The low growl got louder.

Mannimarco cast a spell at the gate to the cell in an attempt to open it, but the spell fizzled out. He tried again, and again it fizzled. Putting his bony hand out, he stretched his skeletal fingers and a lock pick appeared in them. With a twisting sneer of yellow teeth at Traven, he stuck the pick into the keyhole of the cell. A huge bolt of lightning seemed to come from the front of the cell and struck him, throwing him back against the wall behind him.

"You'll rue the day you did that Traven! I hope you'll enjoy being my Worm Thrall!" Mannimarco growled.

He tried to shoot a spell on Hannibal, but nothing happened. Cursing, and in an obvious rage Mannimarco leapt up. "What have you done to my magicka Traven?" he bellowed. He pulled a Welkynd stone from the pocket of his robe and put it in his mouth, svcking the magicka from the stone. His skeletal grin became more pronounced as the stone refilled his magicka. "All right Traven, prepare to join Vanus Galerion!"

Barbas was growling fiercely now, his eyes glowing fluorescent green. His huge fangs were showing, dripping saliva.

Mannimarco cast the Worm Thrall spell again, and once more a lightning bolt flew from the cell and knocked him down.

Cursing, Mannimarco leapt back up. "You have declared war, Traven; and you will pay dearly. You may hide behind your dog, but he can't protect your precious Mage's Guild. It will be written out of history like the Dwemer when I am finished with it, and after it is destroyed I will come after you. You will be a Worm Thrall and bow to me like your predecessor Galerion has for so long. I will get my staff back and you will dance to its bidding Traven. To my bidding." Mannimarco shouted the words, leaning in toward the cell.

Barbas leapt up, growling viciously; foam dripping from his mouth and fangs. His tail and back were rigid; the hair raised up stiffly. With his eyes fluoresced, he looked nightmarish.

Mannimarco tried to magically leave and could not. It was obvious to Traven that the necromancer's magicka had been depleted again.

The useless attempt made him look foolish, and Hannibal barked a short laugh at him. "I'm 'enthralled' you stopped in to see me, looks like you were in such a hurry to visit that you forgot your body." Hannibal sneered, but inside he was quaking. What in the world was going on? Mannimarco alive? And in Cyrodiil? His Mage's Guild?

Mannimarco stormed out, and Hannibal quickly started searching the cell. He found the Staff of Worms against the back wall of the cell, covered in straw. What in the world were Janus and Melisande thinking, this was necromancy!

******* Mannimarco

In a rage Mannimarco had stormed out of the castle. Traven would pay for this. He would send someone Traven would trust to get the staff, Falcar. Traven would give it to him thinking to lock it safely away in the Arcane, along with the Bloodworm Helm and Necromancer's Amulet they took from him. He would have them all back at the end of this war. Traven would rue the day he stole that staff.

Spotting an Altmer on the road below him, Mannimarco melted into a vapor and entered the man's body; stopping his heart. Mannimarco changed the Altmer's direction and began the trek up to Echo Cave.

Mannimarco began planning; he would gather together the necromancers in the area and begin a series of attacks on the Mage's Guild, but first he would get his staff back. Once it was retrieved he would let Falcar run Silorn. Traven he would deal with personally.

He arrived at Echo Cave and began giving orders and dispatching necromancers across Cyrodiil to gather forces. Mannimarco sank into his throne and turned toward the adept on his right. "Bring me Falcar." Without a word the man slid over the bridge and into the tunnels. Mannimarco juggled an overly large black soul gem in his hands as he watched him go.

Then Mannimarco turned to look mockingly at the Worm Thrall on the left side of him. "Well, Vanus Galerion, it looks like one of your successors will be joining you sooner than we thought."



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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 10:16 am

Maxical is rubbing off on Melisande!
Melisande passed him on the other side and goosed him; leaving him staring after Janus with an odd look on his face.

She goosed High Chancellor Ocato? Really? I like this old woman! I also liked her pile-o-crap threat to the bodyguard. Gotta walk the dog or he'll - :yuck:

And now we see the beginning of the Mages Guild questline! You're just weaving it all into one story, aren't you? :chaos:
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 4:30 am

Lots of pieces and parts, all swirling around.
Are Melisande's plans destined to run aground?
I was impressed when Mannimarco frowned,
then smiled as Ocato's nose browned.

The furball destined to save all Nirn,
Shall soon awaken and return.
Will it be in time, and will she learn?
Or rather, enter Dagon's gate and burn?

What of the Fox, now sitting the bench?
And his eccentric Nordic wench?
Will she spread some disease of the trench?
Or into the works, throw a wrench.

And Janus, that spineless louse,
What will become of him, and the wonderful mouse.
For though we may be impatient and grouse. . .

maLX shall soon, and with skill, bring down the house.
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 2:35 am

Lots of pieces and parts, all swirling around.
Are Melisande's plans destined to run aground?
I was impressed when Mannimarco frowned,
then smiled as Ocato's nose browned.

The furball destined to save all Nirn,
Shall soon awaken and return.
Will it be in time, and will she learn?
Or rather, enter Dagon's gate and burn?

What of the Fox, now sitting the bench?
And his eccentric Nordic wench?
Will she spread some disease of the trench?
Or into the works, throw a wrench.

And Janus, that spineless louse,
What will become of him, and the wonderful mouse.
For though we may be impatient and grouse. . .

maLX shall soon, and with skill, bring down the house.

How am I supposed to follow that?

This chapter was an absolute blast from beginning to end. The meeting with the Emperor, Melisande's quick thinking with Barbas, Traven and Mannimarco's exchange. All of it was just plain fun to read. I didn't think it possible, but you've actually made the King of Worms look ridiculous. Kudos mALX!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 8:12 am

What a way to bring in the Mannimarco gang! How inventive :goodjob:

I didn't understand this part:
Melisande slipped into the meeting room behind Janus and was stunned to hear Uriel Septim confirm what Clavicus Vile had said about Maxical. It was true then? When Janus sneered at Ocato as he left the meeting room, Melisande passed him on the other side and goosed him; leaving him staring after Janus with an odd look on his face.

How did she do that when Janus is in Imperial City? Unless Melisanda is in IC as well but from your description I'd say she is still in Castle Skingrad.
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Post » Mon May 16, 2011 11:59 pm

@ Hauteecole Rider - I missed putting a line in that, thank goodness Remko que'd me to go look at that passage! It now reads that Melisande heard Ocato saying "Count Skingrad just goosed me!" as she is walking away - I may need that line in here for a future episode, lol. HA !! Thanks so much Hauty!
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@ Acadian - I love this poem, how you thought of this stuff !!! Aweseome, and thank you so much !!! And you got all the plot threads in, too !!! Thank You, Thank You !!!!! (and thanks for the POV heads up!)
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@ Destri Melarg - No one can escape, there are none sacred in this story, lol. I knew I was going to have him think Traven was doing it so it would start the war - but the humor from Traven snuck up on me while I was free typing the chapter. I started to take it out as it didn't fit the game Traven's personality. Then I reread everything I had written about Traven in the past chapters of this story, and decided to keep it in. I have always given him a quick, dry humor throughout the story. This was a little bit bolder than he usually is, but I blame Marie. He has been having quite an active six life suddenly...I thought it may bolden him up some, lol. Thank you very much Destri, I really had a blast writing it, and it means a lot that you enjoyed it!
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@ RemkoNL - I can't thank you enough for pointing that out to me! When I went to fix it, I found I had used 'Staff' in two diff ways in the same paragraph, and found I'd missed that line I meant to say about Ocato - and did some shaping up on the POV problems Acadian noticed between Mannimarco and Traven in that segment as well - your advice helped me TONS !!! Thank you so much Remko, You ROCK !!!
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@ Everyone - my son thought up the joke "Mannimarco must have been here, I'm enthralled!" - so I used part of that in that last chapter - (Mom, that is NOT the part I've been telling you about that he came up with, it comes up in the next couple chapters though, lol).
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@ EVERYONE - NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! It is down to the wire, next chapter starts the Rite of Resurrection !!! Yeah !!!


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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 2:54 pm

Oh how angry that Lich must be.

Loved the newest chapter, but I cannot wait...Really want to see....Our fiery furball rise...To take on the task the Nine have thrust upon her.
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 2:57 pm

Oh how angry that Lich must be.

Loved the newest chapter, but I cannot wait...Really want to see....Our fiery furball rise...To take on the task the Nine have thrust upon her.

Thank you so much Arcry! It is coming up NEXT !!!! Yeah !!! - well, not the Nine yet, lol.
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 3:46 am

Thank you my friend, for the kind words on my poem, but it is your wonderful thread that inspired them. I will admit the poem was a touch better than the exploits of Bobo, no? :toughninja:

I don't know how you keep track of so many changing pov's, :ahhh: except that you do it very well. The couple possible burps you tweaked look solid now.

As you stand at the threshold of bringing our kit back to us, let me simply wish you luck and thank you for the wonderful excursion her 'death' has brought us. ;)
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 10:00 am

My wolfy paws are tapping with excitement. The day is close....

And an Acadian poem to mark the occasion. Wow, now that is something that doesn't happen everyday. You could say that it is as rare as hen's teeth or a well spoken minotaur.
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 3:58 am

My wolfy paws are tapping with excitement. The day is close....

And an Acadian poem to mark the occasion. Wow, now that is something that doesn't happen everyday. That must mean that the coming event is really BIG.


I was waiting for you to comment before I posted it, wanted to be sure you saw that last chapter with Mannimarco - because it is integral to the plot, lol. Do you want to be the first to see it? I will post it now if you are going to be on here for a few minutes? I was stunned by the poem, and now we know another hidden talent of Acadians, lol. Thank you Wolf !!!


@ Acadian - thank you so much friend !!! You ROCK !!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 2:18 pm

Chapter 85: The Rite of Resurrection


Divayth Fyr, Lord Kagrenac, and Sage Vardengroet returned with Melisande to Castle Skingrad. She pointed to the private quarters and then scurried down to the secret crypt. She instantly removed the spell from the cell door and opened it to let Barbas out, darting to the back for the Staff of Worms. It was gone.

"Is this what you seek?" Hannibal asked, holding the staff up where she could see it.

"Hannibal, you scared me. I?I need the staff Hannibal. It is the only way to bring Maxical back." Melisande reached her hand out.

"You can't do this Melisande, do you realize what you have done? Mannimarco was here looking for it! He followed it here and is now in Cyrodiil! You must stop this, before it is too late! He has threatened to destroy the Mages Guild! You have no idea the power he possesses! This is necromancy!" Hannibal was trembling, and whiter than the dead Khajiit on the slab behind her.

Melisande reached over and twitched the staff out of his shaking hands and darted out of the cell quickly, locking it behind her. "Stay out of this Hannibal. It has gone too far to stop now."

She gathered up her supplies into her pack and grabbed several bottles of fortified wine on her way out; sealing the vault on Hannibal's continued pleas. Hurrying past the bodyguard outside Janus's suite she called out, "Long walk." She returned the key and Barbas, then hurried to the private quarters to gather blood from Divayth Fyr.

"This will not be enough, we will have to use that which we drew from Janus already." Melisande said when Divayth's blood was barely trickling at the end of the second bottle.

Janus arrived shortly thereafter with the news that Akatosh had granted the petition. He was surprised but pleased to find Divayth Fyr, Lord Kagrenac, and Sage Vardengroet had already arrived.

Janus brought the reviving paste to Divayth Fyr to build his blood back, and platters of fruits and meats for everyone. "When can we begin?" He asked, motioning Melisande to pour wine for the ancients. She glared at him, but obeyed the directive.

"The ceremonial fires can not be started till the O'clock plus one minute on the 30th of Evening Star. You may have everything laid out in advance, and set up the wood but not light it. Melisande, you did say you had obtained a piece of Lorkhan's Heart before it was tainted? It must be untainted to be usable." Lord Kagrenac eyes bored into her as he waited for the answer.

"Yes, it was from before the corruption. You yourself cut the sliver of it for the Dwemer, with the blade you made for your own use, unlike those weapons you left behind to be found by Dagoth-Ur that would poison the heart and destroy its power. Later when you distributed the slivers, you could not understand why you were one short; but it was too late then. That is why Yagrum Bagarn did not get to disappear with the rest. I took his sliver. He had Corprus disease anyway, you should thank me; he would have infected the others. He has been well cared for by Divayth, so all turned out for the best." Melisande looked challengingly back at Lord Kagrenac.

"You should have the grace to blush when you admit theft. You had best start preparations, the time draws near." Lord Kagrenac's tone revealed more than his words; it was clear he knew already, probably since she first admitted she had an untainted piece of the heart.

"Can we start infusing the blood into her yet?" She asked, dismissing the discussion.

Lord Kagrenac gave her a hard look. "No. Nothing can be done till Old Life has begun. Bring me the heart for sanctification before the ceremony."


************ Old Life

"You don't understand the impact this could have, you must stop now! The ramifications of what you are talking about doing won't end with her return to life, can you not see that?" Arch Mage Traven was screaming to an empty crypt; Janus and Melisande had not stayed to listen to him.

Melisande had picked up the two bottles which contained her own blood and hurried out of the crypt. Janus was not far behind carrying the body of Maxical. They sealed the vault shut on his cries and hurried up to the courtyard to begin.

The wind howling through the paraqets seemed an imitation of Traven's pleas. It was whipping through the courtyard causing the flames under the cauldron to flicker wildly.

"Janus! Get some of those crates and put them around or we'll lose the fire!" Melisande had to shout to be heard over the wind.

Janus still carried the tiny figure of Maxical. Melisande pointed to the cauldron where a bronze slab had been angled across. He gently lowered her stiff body onto it and began hurriedly dragging crates, placing them in an arc around one side. It didn't help, the wind seemed to be coming from all directions. He tried to shout to Melisande, but the wind took his words before she could hear them.

Janus hovered over Maxical's body trying to block the wind as he watched Melisande pour the satchel of ingredients the Sage had given her into the bubbling liquid. She began chanting, but the wind was whipping her voice away so Janus could not hear the words. The vapors swirling out of the large kettle enveloped Maxical as if drawn to her.

Melisande pushed the Sky Child into Maxical's chest, snaking the tube down into the large vein. She hooked the first bottle of blood to it, motioning for Janus to hold it.

She yelled to be heard above the wind. "Hold this up, just like I am doing. When it is empty hook the others up the same way."

Sage Vardengroet watched, and when they were all emptied he yelled, "It's not enough, she needs more!"

Melisande bit her lip. "It's been too soon to take more from Divayth. Fyr. You'll have to use mine." The wind almost took her words before they could be heard, but Janus heard them.

"No! Use mine." Janus yelled, giving her a strange look. Why had she said that?

Melisande hesitated, then with an angry look dug the other Sky Child out of her pack and pierced Janus's arm, hooking it directly into the one in Maxical's chest. When the bleeding slowed Melisande switched the Sky Child to Janus's other arm. It was not placed properly, and a trickle of blood was making a snaky trail down his arm and dripping into the vat.

The Sage produced a tiny vial and poured it into Maxical's gaping mouth, chanting words in another language that could barely be heard above the howl of the storm. He lay some odd looking leaves in her mouth and signaled to Melisande.

The section of Janus's old cape that held Maxical's blood stain on it had been thrown into the vat, but when Melisande touched the silver dagger to Maxical's heart and then held it into the cauldron the piece of cloak rose to the surface of the bubbling concoction. The blood stain pulled off of it and moved across the roiling liquid to the tip of the dagger, clinging to it.

Very carefully Melisande lifted the blade over Maxical's mouth and dripped the concoction and blood onto the leaves in her mouth. Maxical's face slowly relaxed into a more peaceful repose.

"We're ready for the Priest!" She screamed to Janus. "Hurry!" She pulled the Sky Child from Janus's arm, laying it on one of the crates. Janus picked it up, pocketing it so it wouldn't get blown down and broken in the storm. He ran inside the castle door where Lord Kagrenac was donning his robes for the ritual.

"She's ready." Janus said, then gaped at the sight of Lord Kagrenac in his High Priest robes. Divayth Fyr had also changed out of his Daedric armor into a mages robe that was nearly as fine as that of Sage Vardengroet. Janus quickly ran and donned the rich purple robes of ceremony he held as Count Skingrad. He clipped the white fur collar in the front and let the folds of velvet billow off his shoulders like a cape.

"You look magnificent, my boy." Divayth said, clapping him on the back.

"No time!" Lord Kagrenac grunted, stepping out the door into the howling wind. Janus followed the spry figure of Divayth Fyr out.

Sage Vardengroet was leaning over Maxical's mouth chanting, shaking some liquid over her head every few words. He moved all down her body with the little vial, chanting and shaking it over her.

Melisande was spooning the liquids from the vat under the slab so the vapors would rise and swirl around her. She slipped on one of the bottles that had held the blood, dropping the spoon down into the vat. Cursing, she grabbed up the bottle from the ground and tried unsuccessfully to retrieve her spoon using the bottle as a trawl. Giving up, she dropped the bottle down into the vat.

Lord Kagrenac nodded to Divayth Fyr, and he stepped forward, sprinkling something over Maxical and then poured something into the vat. The bubbling concoction turned a deep blue and the vapors thickened, clinging around Maxical.

Janus felt helpless while the three worked over Maxical, wondering if he should be casting healing spells over her or something.

Lord Kagrenac raised his staff up and began an incantation in his own language. His voice boomed around them in spite of the wind. An echoing of distant thunder answered his words, seeming to come from all directions. As he continued the rumble of thunder sounded closer with each chant until the ground began to shake from it.

Janus looked up to see black clouds rapidly descending on the castle from all directions, and as it neared the thunder and lightning increased, the shaking of the ground became violent till Janus feared Maxical would fall from the slab.

Everywhere he looked the sky was filled with a rolling blackness that blanketed everything, blocking out the moons and even the lights from the fires at the top of the paraqets blanked out as the cloud approached.

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As the thick blackness converged on Cyrodiil, it left its inky trail of fear in its path. Guards on duty began shouting, wanting to get under cover. The few citizens out at that hour of the night thought the end of the world had come, and were fleeing for shelter.

The massive cloud encircled Cyrodiil and began converging rapidly across the lands toward the city of Skingrad. Most of the citizens had hidden in terror; but the rumbling thunder and crashes of lightning that illuminated the sky to a blood red within the cloud did not have the same effect on some.

In Leyawiin, a small Bosmer stepped out of the Fighter's Guild and looked up into the sky. With an excited yell he ran, trying to keep up with the movement of the clouds. As he left the gates to the city, he leapt on a horse he spotted in the stable and kicked it into a full gallop, trying to keep up with the movement of the cloud.

As he galloped past Bravil he was met by an Altmer girl and an older Nord, still wearing his smithy apron. They also grabbed any horse they could, riding at breakneck speed to keep up with the ever-rolling black cloud.

By the time they met with the main path into Skingrad the roads were alive with people following the blackness as it moved across the land. "It's a sign!" they called to one another.

Else God Hater heard the rumbling approaching and felt the ground shaking. She stepped outside the West Weald Inn in time to see the rolling clouds converge from all directions onto Skingrad Castle. The lightning increased as it neared the castle, lighting the entire sky with a bloody red hue painted with the ever changing pattern of the thick black mist that rolled and billowed below it. The streets looked darker than they ever had, the fires that usually lit them and the castle were smothered by the storm as it approached. The ground rocked and shook below her feet.

Hearing shouts, she saw people running toward the castle, excitedly calling to each other, or maybe to the cloud. A smile spread across her face, and she felt her legs stretching into a run as she joined the followers greeting that cloud.

"Lord Dagon, you have finally come to take back what is rightfully yours! Dawn's Beauty it will be once again, this is the sign we have been waiting for!" Else shouted and then as she caught up to the others she was able to hear what they shouted and joined in the chant.

"As Mournhold fell, so will Cyrodiil; as Mournhold fell, so will Cyrodiil!"



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Hilm Music
 
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 11:19 am

Epic read. I felt like I was falling into a maelstrom. Deeper and deeper.

The events are outside the control of Janus and Traven. I love it!!

Surrogate voices snake tendril like from across the void. They call out, "Bring back the kitten, now!! Only she can stand against Mehrunes Dagon"
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Jah Allen
 
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 7:00 am

Oh no...The cultists are coming! The cultists are coming! Really liked this chapter..Probably will enjoy the next even more! For our kit shall return to life...Only to find a great many things has happened in her absence...
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Kate Norris
 
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 5:00 am

Melisande steals a sliver of Lorkhan's Heart from Kagrenac himself?! Saucy Wench! I wonder why she did that? I love the fact that you dovetailed that event into an explanation for why Yagrum Bagarn didn't disappear with the rest of the dwarves.

Traven really is turning into a buzz kill isn't he? He has been looking at Maxical's corpse lying on the slab this whole time! How did he think they were going to resurrect her except through necromancy? I always felt that it didn't say much for him as Arch-Mage that he seemed to soil himself every time the thought of Mannimarco reaches his ears.

That's right Janus, even with the wind whipping and the blood congealing you don't want the old guys to out dress you at the ceremony do you? <_<

I swear on the road outside of Bravil, with your three cultists a-horse; I had this image of them bearing Gold, Frankincense, and Mir!

Have I told you lately how much I love this story? :rock:
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 12:37 am

Oooohhh... The maelstrom has started... AWESOME!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 2:10 pm

I swear on the road outside of Bravil, with your three cultists a-horse; I had this image of them bearing Gold, Frankincense, and Mir!

Ditto here.

Powerful, and moving....
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 7:38 am

Great stuff!

The descriptions are awesome, and I really liked how the cultists started following the storm to Skingrad Castle, calling on Marooned Dra - (ahm, wrong thread!) Mehrunes Dagon!

And the things falling into the cauldron! Maxical is baaack!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 1:20 am

It seems Maxical is now the focus of all Cyrodiil and forces well beyond. What an influential little kit! :dance:

A powerful and mysterious ceremony.

The weather change was well-depicted, in its enormity and influence.

I was pleased that I instantly drew the connection between Cingor, Hans and Ranoline. I like how you then added Elsie, and mention of Dagon, to help clarify things for those not as attuned with all the sleepers.

And excitement reigns!
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 7:15 am

and I'm still in chapter fourteen -I think- and have all this ahead of me :ahhh:

Yay, lots of fun reading :celebration:

:unsure: gotta admit though, it's hard for me to read when I'm writing..
:embarrass: muddles me thoughts..
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Post » Tue May 17, 2011 12:20 pm

*Twitch*...*Twitch*...
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