Sliding in under the lock-


"Have fun storming the castle!" Sorry- couldn't resist- after all, when this is over, she will be "Miracle Maxical."

The ceremony was incredibly written- one of the best descriptive passages I have ever seen. And there are enough "errors" (not in the writing, but in the ceremony) to give me a feeling things are going to turn out- ah, "differently" than anyone plans. And then there was the curious incident of the dog during the lich visit....

@ Winter Wolf - Thank you so much Wolf! For your kind words, and for everything! You ROCK !!!
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@ Arcry - Thank you so much Arcry! I thought every phenomenon had some cult-type following it as a sign, ROFL !!! It is so great to have you back following the story and seeing excerpts from your own.
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@ Destri Melarg - Wait, let me flip back a few pages - oh yes, here it is: Destri tells mALX that she must have a piece of Lorkhan's Heart to do the ceremony. Quick re-write - Just kidding. When I had the Dwemer and Divayth in the story, it was the next logical step to explain why Yagrum Bagarn didn't go with the rest, lol.

Right up to the day I posted this I had Janus asking if he should get his robes, and Kagrenac saying "No time" - and I was doing a final edit before posting and thought, what the hey - I'd like to see Janus in something other than the black velvet outfit myself! ROFL!!

My son made a statement and as soon as he did, the image of the wiseman following the star did pop into my head, someone always thinks they see a sign, why not? In the next couple chapters coming up, I will reveal what my son said that stirred the idea up! - and it tickles me to death that you love this story, that means TONS to me! Thank you very much Destri!
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@ RemkoNL - Thank you so much! I have been so excited over this segment that I could barely wait to post it myself, lol!
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@ Foxy - Thank You very much Foxy! Those words coming from you mean a lot to me! I fully expected you to break some kind of triathelon record by having your characters appearing in three stories at once with this tourney going on! You are ROCK!!!
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@ Hauteecole Rider - Thank you very much Hauty! And some of the things we talked about will be coming soon!! All the scenes where things fall into the vat I wrote in in an edit - it was all an afterthought, but took on a life of its own in the upcoming chapters!
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@ Acadian - influential? Or JINX? You be the judge! ROFL !! Monkey! I told you I would be pulling them out of bravil way back in case it would hurt your tourney story! Thank you so much Acadian, you are an awesome friend!
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@ - Old Andy - Now Andy, I know you are a fast reader - but some of that stuff in the early chapters is chick stuff. Don't be afraid to jump ahead, because I don't want you missing the exciting stuff that is going on now in the story! Thank you Andy!
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@ Treydog - Yeah! I was hoping so much you would get time to see this chapter! Most of my favorite chapters are comedic, this is one of the few I love that was totally serious - this chapter felt like a birthing to write. It was a vision that came with a ton of work - it means a lot to me that you liked it too! Thank you so much Treydog - for everything!
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@ EVERYONE - A New Sun Rises (Maxical's Journey) is going to a Sixth Thread! I want to thank everyone that has been reading through (I, II, III, IV and V); you all helped me to better my writing and inspired me to keep going. It means a lot to me that you read and care about Maxical, I could never thank you enough for that! You ALL ROCK!!


Here are some links for convenience:


For convenience the whole story is posted on FanFiction, here is a link to the story there:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~malx



If you prefer to stay on the forum, here are the links to all previous chapters:


Maxical's Journey - A New Sun Rises - (Chapters 1 - 23)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1038084-maxicals-journey/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey II - (Chapters 24 - 36)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1050778-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-ii/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey III - (Chapters 37 - 50)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1056626-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-iii/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey IV - (Chapters 51 - 65)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1065146-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-iv/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey V - (Chapters 66 - 85)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1071522-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-v/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey VI - (Chapters 86 - ??)


http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1080421-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-vi/






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And here is my :meh: to you, Leydenne, before this thread is locked, and before I run off to the next thread! Hee hee...forgive me... inner 12 year old comin' out, ya know...

And in apology, here is me :bowdown: to doyenne Leydenne...

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Corrected Links To Story:



Maxical's Journey - A New Sun Rises - (Chapters 1 - 23)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1038084-maxicals-journey/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey II - (Chapters 24 - 36)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1050778-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-ii/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey III - (Chapters 37 - 50)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1056626-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-iii/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey IV - (Chapters 51 - 65)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1065146-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-iv/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey V - (Chapters 66 - 85)

http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1071522-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-v/




A New Sun Rises - Maxical's Journey VI - (Chapters 86 - ??)


http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?/topic/1080421-a-new-sun-rises-maxicals-journey-vi/