I have been working a revised version of called....wait for it...Oblivifall - Something Is REALLY Not Right. Basically, I am expanding the 20 or so sayings from the old mod (just repeated over and over in 18 different scripts) and attempted to make every saying unique (100's of new sayings). Additionally, I changed all the sayings to first person to make the mod feel more like a sixth sense/inner monologue than a disembodied voice notifying you of something.

Here are some examples of the old sayings:

The ground here vibrates faintly.
Hmm. No mosquitos.
Stone outcroppings dot the area.
Something's been digging in the sand.
Someone or something has cleared the underbrush here.
You clamber over piles of gravel.
A dank breeze ruffles your hair.

And then some revised/new sayings:

The wind just...stopped.
What was that vibration?
There are so few animals around here.
Where have all the deer gone?
I'm suprised how few birds I hear.
Something was dragged through here.
Some writing on that stone has been scratched out.
I thought I heard growling.

I have finished over 75% of the mod which took some time to come up with so many new lines. However, I could use two things:

1: I am looking for any suggestions on good lines to include in the mod. The more variety I can get the better with the only rules are that it's first person, resembles what someone might notice/think, and isn't TOO location specific (so that it could be used in different locations).

2: Anyone able to contact Cliffworms? I can't reach him on the Nexus and his account on this forum hasn't been accessed since 2013.

Any feedback is appreciated.

Thanks, Martin

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