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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 3:46 pm

Kaelyn's Bed & Breakfast
Mrs. Kaeyln walked into the kitchen, she gave the breakfast orders to the Chef who started to prepare it. She left the kitchen and headed outside into the backyard. She looked out towards where D.C. was that's when she saw it a number of specks started to rain down, then there was a bright light and the earth shook.

Vault 101
Edward Gomez and his family drove through Springvale on their way to Vault 101, the vault that Vault-Tec had assigned them. They came just outside of where it was, they got out of the car and started to walk towards where the vault lied. Suddenly they were ushered in, Edward looked back one more time to see bombs falling down upon D.C. They quickly went inside and the vault door closed behind them.


Hope you like comments are welcome, I'll post some more later.
Also if there is any requests for a place like New Vegas or whatever just let me know.
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Victor Oropeza
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 1:02 pm

It's exellent, but a little short to my liking. I assume the story will take off of Edward's point of view?
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Dan Stevens
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 3:05 pm

It's excellent, but a little short to my liking. I assume the story will take off of Edward's point of view?

Not quite its the point of view of different people around America at the time of the War.
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JERMAINE VIDAURRI
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:50 am

Ah, okay. That actually sounds cool, to see how each characters life takes of and how it. . .ends. . .
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 2:48 pm

Tepid Sewers
Down in the Tepid Sewers a drug addict had fled as his house was being ransacked by the police. He was addicted to Jet and Med-X, it was dark and cold in the sewers. He could hear rats scurrying around, but suddenly the sewers started to shack violently and before he could run away a piece of the ceiling fell and crushed him.

White House
George one of many janitors that worked at the White House was busy mopping the floor, he couldn't wait to go home to his family. He grabbed the bucket and mop and left the bathroom, he headed down the corridor towards the stockroom. He opened the door and and put the bucket in, he left the White House and got in his car. As he drove away to Arlington he looked at the car's side windows that's when he saw it. A number of bombs smashed into the White House and a massive shock wave slammed into the car and George knew no more.

Comments are welcomed.

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Alan Cutler
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 7:16 am

Ah, okay. That actually sounds cool, to see how each characters life takes of and how it. . .ends. . .

Yep, if you got any requests for a place for me to write about let me know. :vaultboy:
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Laura-Lee Gerwing
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 10:45 am

October 26, is my birthday :celebration:
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Stacey Mason
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 10:10 am

October 26, is my birthday :celebration:

How is that related? :confused:
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Robert Devlin
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 3:25 pm

it isnt :hubbahubba:
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KiiSsez jdgaf Benzler
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 11:23 am

it isnt :hubbahubba:

Grrr, I fought someone had left a comment about the fan fic. :banghead:
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Gemma Woods Illustration
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 7:58 am

Could use some more character thoughts in it. And hey, I feel sorry for Geroge. Don't worry Rex, any lawbreaker (spammer, troll) will be caught by the Police of BGSF.
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Betsy Humpledink
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 6:45 am

Could use some more character thoughts in it. And hey, I feel sorry for Geroge. Don't worry Rex, any lawbreaker (spammer, troll) will be caught by the Police of BGSF.

What do you recommend?
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 5:35 pm

Tepid Sewers
Down in the Tepid Sewers a drug addict had fled as his house was being ransacked by the police. He was addicted to Jet and Med-X, it was dark and cold in the sewers. He could hear rats scurrying around, but suddenly the sewers started to shack violently and before he could run away a piece of the ceiling fell and crushed him.


Something like his thoughts on FREEDOM!
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Darren Chandler
 
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Post » Fri May 13, 2011 8:45 am

Something like his thoughts on FREEDOM!

Okay
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