Prelude

Darkness.
Darkness is all I saw, all I felt.
Nothing more than darkness.
Nothing less than darkness.

I Slowly started to hear again. But all I heard was a loud beeping noise. I couldn't move my body and didn't feel my limbs. I don't even know if i still have them. The beeping sound was interrupted by a voice. A deep voice, probably from a man.

"Just like I said Tom, a RobCo security model 2060-B. Found it today over by the junkyard. I don't know what you think but it seems mighty fine to me."
"How do you know it's still working?" Another man replied.
"Here I'll show ya."
I felt a big shock of power float through me. My sight went from black to extremely bright light and my hearing became much clearer. I started to feel my body again. I tried to move my right arm then my le...
Bzzzzzzz

"There you see Thom? Works perfectly." The load of energy was gone and I lost my sight and my hearing started to slowly fade away again.

Looks good. Very intruiging. there are a couple of small errors, but overall, it looks like it will be an interesting story.

Certainly an intriguing start mate. I'll have to have more too go on before I can give you any real feedback though. Keep it up :thumbsup:

This is a great idea! I've always thought about AI's having souls and this sounds really interesting.