Good story, Jazz. I've always enjoyed them.
Some "technical" feedback - on this story it was very hard for me to read the blue captions; maybe try yellow? Dunno.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b74/Desert-Rat/Oblivionchars/R4-2.jpg
LOL! Very funny caption.
Well, my character finally saved up enough money from working in an inn for a while, and she got a nice place out in the country with her http://i888.photobucket.com/albums/ac87/MartutTES/ScreenShot117.jpg, Berrie (Berrindrel, but she likes the name Berrie) and Faldion. She's really excited about this move because she finally got her kids out of Bravil, and she finally has a steady income of money.
Very nice!
Are those kids a mod or did you create very young looking folks?
http://ludicrousmods.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/lise13.jpg
Wow! That is excellent!
After going on a mod shopping trip...
http://allphasesoftware.com/OB/SS/Aliyah/Cottage/AliyahAndCottage.jpg
http://allphasesoftware.com/OB/SS/Aliyah/Cottage/GirlsGetCottage.jpg
Some posing in the uniform Aliyah wants her team to wear...
http://allphasesoftware.com/OB/SS/Aliyah/Cottage/AdrianaAndAliyah.jpg
http://allphasesoftware.com/OB/SS/Aliyah/Cottage/AliyahAndXenia.jpg
http://allphasesoftware.com/OB/SS/Aliyah/Cottage/AdrianaAliyahXenia.jpg
http://allphasesoftware.com/OB/SS/Aliyah/Cottage/XeniaAndAdrianaMoon.jpg
http://allphasesoftware.com/OB/SS/Aliyah/Cottage/XeniaAndAdriana.jpg (Click to get even closer.)