In these pages I will tell of my hunt for Nerastarel, a powerful dunmer necromancer. Date and time have no longer meaning for me, only the hunt matters now and to remind myself of that I will not date my entries.

Blasted necromancer! How could I fall for that? I should have known that it would be a trap! No matter, it cannot be helped. There is only a matter of time before the guards find me and I will be honor-bound to surrender. I now face up to 10 years in the Imperial Prison, but that is small compared to the fact that it gives Nerastarel the opportunity to disappear for good. After 2 years it seems she have won, but I'm not giving up yet. When I get out of prison I will continue the hunt.


I want to know if this is something that people here would enjoy to read. I have started a breton battlemage that I am going to RP and have a journal. If you like it please say so as I won't bother to post more of it if no one reads it. Constructive crittic is welcome, but please don't just say "it's bad" without something to add.
Edit: This is the prologe to the game itself, setting the goal of the character and bounderies.

I don't mind you not having dates; maybe put something like "Entry [insert # here]" for sake of clarity?

Besides that, sounds good; keep it up, man.

thanks, I will.

In these pages I will tell of my hunt for Nerastarel, a powerful dunmer necromancer. Date and time have no longer meaning for me, only the hunt matters now and to remind myself of that I will not date my entries.

Entry 1: Blasted necromancer! How could I fall for that? I should have known that it would be a trap! No matter, it cannot be helped. There is only a matter of time before the guards find me and I will be honor-bound to surrender. I now face up to 10 years in the Imperial Prison for the murder of an Ordinator recruit, but that is small compared to the fact that it gives Nerastarel the opportunity to disappear for good. After 2 years it seems she have won, but I'm not giving up yet. When I get out of prison I will continue the hunt.

Entry 2: How many years in that prison? I do not know. Nerastarel have disappeared just as I predicted and the trail is long cold. I know she was heading to Cyrodiil. Fate have a sense of humor it seems, as I was sent here to ensure my survival. Probably the work of the guild, they have great influence with the council. I will start my search in the Imperial City, there is surely more clues there.

A little better insight in how it will be written, and it makes it easier to give crittic.