Ghoul

Post » Fri May 27, 2011 8:05 pm

Skin rots away fast, as we lurk.

Swifter and more fearsome, then the Mirelurk.


Logic lost, replaced with hunger.

No escape, just the sound of thunder.



We dash through the tunnels,

children screaming as they tumble


To some, hope holds,

but for I, no hope is there.


Love is fiction

Pain is reality


Flesh is food

Blood is drink



Vampiric is comparable, but not the truth

for in the dark reality, I am

GHOUL
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Pete Schmitzer
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 2:46 pm

Skin rots away fast, as we lurk.

Swifter and more fearsome, then the Mirelurk.


I dunno. Does lurk rhyme with lurk? :)
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butterfly
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 8:00 pm

Its pretty alright better than anything I could do.
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Ashley Campos
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 12:25 pm

It would take alot of caffiene to justify that poem :liplick:

As Redati said, Lurk and Lurk = No ryhme
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Natalie Taylor
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 6:27 pm

Skin rots away fast, as we lurk.

Swifter and more fearsome, then the...OMFG MR. BURKE


Fixed.
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Svenja Hedrich
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 6:27 pm

Fixed.


:foodndrink:
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mike
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 10:33 am

Skin rots away fast, as we lurk.

Swifter and more fearsome, then the...OMFG MR. BURKE



OMFG WHERE? -hides from Talon Company-
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Maeva
 
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