Will probably revise it later, it got really annoying not being able to refer to Charon by name until Chapter 4, plus other miscellaneous things that annoy me when I reread it.
Will probably revise it later, it got really annoying not being able to refer to Charon by name until Chapter 4, plus other miscellaneous things that annoy me when I reread it.
that is a GREEEEAAAT story and at the end i seriously almost teared up..... its awesome
Wow, powerful stuff. And I was saddened by the ending too, Nuka. At least it wasn't one of those stories where everything has a happy ending, because that's not how life works.
new chapter = GREAT this is a very good story but i dont know i kinda think its better ending were it did before the new chapter . it leaves you with that feeling in you chest like a good sad story does
you my friend, are very creative.
it would be cool if you made a story bout dogmeat and his former owner max