[PLOT]
2278. The Capitol Wasteland has evolved. Less Mutants and more civility among the towns. The Good fight is truely winning.
The Brotherhood of Steel has finally opened up to the Locals and have begun recruiting young people who come to them from their homes. They even have posters set up throughout the wasteland asking for soldiers to fight the good fight.
From a measly 300 in 2277, to a strong 3,000 standing army for the Lyons Faction.

The Wasteland is coming to a more peaceful time...Until a Vertibird was seen flying around the Old Jefferson Memorial where one Vault Dweller now rest in peace with her father.

The Brotherhood was alerted of the Vertibird and sent several Fresh squads to search the area and watch over it. For 10 days nothing happened.

Another Sighting at the GNR building where 4 Vertibirds flew over towards Canterbury Commons. A Battalion(100) of Brotherhood soldiers were sent. Again no luck.

Finally, a small squad patrolling the Raven Rock area discovered 17 Vertibirds flying away. Before the Squad could get back to their Garrison, they were shot down by an unknown weapon from the sky.
One soldier survived only to be captured.

-Characters-
Lucy -Main Hero-
Enclave -Low ranked Grunt-
17-18 years old -A fresh soldier-
5ft 3in and 47kg -average build-
Prefers close combat -Using swords, powerfist and paralyzing palm-
Asian -Chinese-
From Little lamplight, Capitol Wasteland
The Hero of this little story. She had left little lamplight at an early age to saveher the embarrassment of being kicked out. Afew meters from the door and she was captured by Enclave troops. The commanding Officer, Captain Porter, showed her mercy and gave her a new home among the Enclave. She was taken to a hidden base where soldiers would be trained. She made progress and a Scholor but prefered to be a front line infantry with her friends. A year later, she and her company is called to battle.

Squad Leader Tir -Supporting hero-
Enclave -High ranked. Leader of the Liberation Squad-
20-21 years old -Veteran Soldier. Seen combat-
5ft 7in and 87kg -muscular build-
Prefers Eng weapons -Lasers, plasma, pulse-
American -Half white, half black-
From Hidden Enclave base
A young and talented soldier who's powers are recognized by high leaders of the Enclave and who's name is feared among the ranks. He is a calm headed man who's cold eyes alone tell others that he is dangerous. He befriends Lucy during Army training in the hidden base. He is the Squad leader of the Liberation Squad and even takes some garrisons as field commander. He is one of few soldiers who will listen to people before killing them, or letting them live. He keeps quiet to many people but enjoys talking with Lucy. He is head of the Old Olney Garrisons.

Knight Raphael -Mysterious Hero-
Brotherhood of Steel -A proud lone warrior-
34-35 years old -Experienced Soldier-
6ft 3in and 117kg -large build-
Prefers lead weapons.
Commonwealth -Welsh-
From the common welth
A man who escaped his past to make a new future. Originating from the commonwelth. Is a former Z soldier making him a well trained soldier eearly. Joined the Brotherhood as soon as he made it to the DC ruins near the Mall. Before the Lone Wanderers adventures, he is already outside of the Capital Wastelands, doing God knows what. He returns finding the BoS in a large and powerful strength with several Initiates a day. During the Encalves attack, he leads a strong force of 50 knights to Old Olney where they encounter heavy combat.

Colonel Williams -Commanding Officer of Operation Vault B-
Enclave -Leader-
28 years old
5ft 9in and 67kg -average build-
Prefers Plasma weapons
American -English-
Unknown origin
An Officer who was part of the Raven Rock operations before the self-destruction. He escaped with a small legion(45) of troops and headed towards the Jefferson memorial on Autums orders. On arrival, Williams and his troops are to late and witness Project Purity under works. He has no choice but to flee to the Enclave Home base with whats left of the Enclave in the state. Enclave have lost DC. A year later, he makes the rank of colonel and is given the command to lead the secret vault mission into the DC with fresh weapons and soldiers.

Hmm i had a better idea of this story last night dammit >.<

Might try again later.

What is this? Story/RP? What one? ;/

I can see where its going, and thats bad. Its probably because you wrote it while you were tired. I'd rather go trough all of this again and work more on some basic bios, Lucy's for example. It has great potential the way its set, but as I said, I'd give it another consideration before going deeper into it. Its better to have two pages of good story, than a book full of "fell-out-of-nowhere" crap...

Cheers.

@ Drake. I guess its a story. Im new at Fanfic'ing.
@ Alek. Yeah it does sound bad reading it now. So ima fix it up in afew minutes and make it alot beetter because the original thought was alot better.