The Vigilant

Post » Sun May 01, 2011 1:26 pm

Jason Dillon

Jason jumped out of the Vertibird behind Wes after they touched down in Megaton. He sincerely hoped that there wouldn't be any violence against the innocent villagers here, he didn't think he could take any more slaughters.

He was disgusted by the way Eden regarded the valiant defender of the town, and wanted to be behind the sheriff defending the town as well. He hated the Enclave with all his guts, they were cowards that tried to convince everyone they were doing the right thing although it was obvious they weren't. He had been punished many-a-times by the trainers at Raven Rock for disrespect, so he was used to the dissapointed looks he got from the others.

Jason was not the typical Enclave soldier for the simple fact that he hated the cause he was fighting for, every single thing about it seemed wrong to him. The only reason he fought for the Enclave was because they rescued him as a child and he owed them his life, a debt he planned to pay soon.

When the bastards left he kept his gun pointed at the sheriff, as much as he didn't want to he had an image to uphold. The wait went pretty smoothly, apart from the dirty looks from the villagers nothing happened, that is until Wes came back covered in Ghoul gore.

"What have you done!" yelled the Sheriff.

"Taken care of a problem to America little man!" Wes yelled before Eden hushed him.

"Is that what you call that Ghoul? A problem to America? Screw you!" Jason yelled as he lunged at Wes and decked him. The Power Armours connected, Jason fist to Wes' chest plate, and Jason's weaker fist plate cracked, blood pouring out of the opening. No one reacted until Wes reached for his recently acquired assault rifle but Eden stopped him.

What was that look in Eden's eye? Oh no!

Jason had just become one of Eden's newest tools.
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 4:50 am

Eddie Cambell

Eddie handed Luke a large combat knife, he'd found this one stabbed in the back of a child in the wastes, and saw is face. Eddie's first thought was that he was weak and shouldn't be here, but then he realised, this wasn't what Luke did. Meaning, Luke wasn't a fighter, he was an engineer. While Eddies biggest challenge was the guy hiding behind a solid brick wall, Luke's challenge was the mysterious power surges or the like. The way Luke handled himself earned more of Eddies respect, something that was hard to come by. Eddie decided to do him a favour.

"All of you piss off. This area is now temporarily off limits, under Brotherhood control or whatever you call it. Give us half an hour and we'll clean this place up and make sure the Enclave didn't leave anything behind."

"You can't kick us out from our own town" yelled the Sheriff.

Eddie stuck the barrel of his Dragunov to the Sheriff's neck. "A .308 bullet says I can, so [censored] off. Half an hour I said!"

The Sheriff looking pissed as hell but seeing that Eddie was not screwing around he turned to his villagers.

"Everyone over to Sprinvale! Stockholm, head up the back and I'll go up front."

Eddie grinned a little smug over his sucessful bullying of the man.

Luke had cut down the Ghoul and was deciding what to do with him.

"I have a friend who lives here, Jericho, I'll see to it that he delivers the body to Underworld. He needs to get outta here for awhile anyway."
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 4:04 pm

Knight paladin croft, vigilant, megaton

The sun glared in his eyes, as croft climbed over the hill towards megaton, his orders where to join up with the vigilant at megaton, and aid in guarding them against the enclave.

Ashe climbed the hill he saw smoke riseing from what he knew as megaton " that can't be good ", croft spead up his climb of the hill and crouched down at the top to see the smokeing remains of some of megatons defenders and the vigilant and its crew dotted around the outskirts of megaton, he walked slowely towards the vigilant, examaning everything around him as he knew the enclave could be here.

Croft walked up to a brotherhood knight standing next to the vigilant, " soldier, what the hells happened here ? "

" enclave sir, they killed a few of the residents " the knight replied

" damn it, wheres the vigilants commanding officer ? " croft spoke harshly

" er over there sir " the knight pointed to a brotherhood officer

croft left the knight and walked over to the commander of the vigilant

" Knight paladin croft, reporting for duty, whats going on here ? "
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 4:18 pm

Calligula1 and Somegamer, I think you should both improve your grammar so we can all improve the standard of this rp.

I assume you both have Microsoft Word? Pre-write your part in that and do the spell check thing. That should improve your writing a lot.

Things that (in my opinion) shouldn't be in this writing:
-Shortening words (e.g hapenin) unless you are doing it to show their character (e'g Eddie is a rude, imperfect kind of guy so I might say; 'Whhats happenin' guys. Note the ' to show that it is intentional mispelling that is part of the speech.
-Lack of description. (e.g Eddie died). Try and make your posts more descriptive. (e.g A sniper round from the direction of the Enclave ricocheted of the barrel and sliced through Eddie forehead. He fell to the ground with a final gasp and died.)

Will add more later, bed now. B ball in the morning.

Also, I must look OCD right now, lol.
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 4:59 am

I sent a message to Alexi K but he is offline and there is a great moment for my character to come in. Alexi, if you dont want my character then tell me and ill delete this post and you can carry on like it was never here.

ignored :(
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 4:38 am

yeah, sorry m'heree about the grammer, ill use your advice with word processor..
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 2:42 pm

Anthony Brown, Megaton

Anthony hastily opened the saloon door and entered the dark bar that smelled of booze and six. Most people had fleed the scene of the Enclave attack, other than Nova, the saloon's girl, and Moriarty, the owner. Moriarty was a [censored]. Anthony knew that from the way he treated Gob when he was in town. Moriarty was in the back, hiding under his Terminal like a coward. As Anthony made his way to where Moriarty was, he grabbed a bottle of Vodka. Alcohol splashed all over Nova as Anthony broke it on the counter. He would make Moriarty tell him who did this.

"Get out here, bastard." said Anthony as he pulled Moriarty out from under the Terminal by his hair. Anthony slammed him up against the wall and held the broken bottle up to the old man's throat. Anthony definitely did not normally have the strength to constrain such a person, but the adrenaline coupled with rage gave him power. "Who did this?" said Anthony furiously. "The Enclave! I don't know!" replied Moriarty. "Look, all I remember is that one of them had a buzz cut, but that's it! I swear!"

Anthony let go of Moriarty, and let him fall to the floor, sobbing from the thought of how many customers he might lose. "Damn." said Anthony as he walked back into the main room of the Saloon. From outside, he heard the voice of Lucas Simms yell for everyone to leave the town. It was time for the Vigilant crew to search for clues.
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 4:20 am

ooc:Sorry I'm not responding guys. Found out my mother had a heart attack. i'll get to it sometime tomorrow I swear.
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 7:01 pm

OOC: Thats okay Alexei, we still love you.

Eddie Cambell

Eddie walked over to the bar where he'd seen Paladin Garrett and the boy go. He walked into the bar and saw that bastard Moriarty being threatened by the kid.

Moriarty was on the ground sobbing when Eddie poked his head up in front of him.

"Hi [censored]" I grinned at him. Moriarty looked up and a sudden burst of rage came up in his eyes.

"You! You [censored] [censored] I'm going to [censored] kill you you bastard!" Moriarty yelled at Eddie. Alexa and Anthony looked at him with confusion in their eyes and they reached for their guns.

"Are you that naive that you think you could kill me Moriarty?" Eddie laughed at him. Moriarty suddenly reached for a 10mm pistol on his belt and Eddie punched him. He picked up the pistol and threw it to Anthony.

"Moriarty your going to tell me what you want to know or the kid here is gonna shoot you, you know I don't [censored] around aswell" he threatened as he spoke right into his face. His nose was broken from Eddies punch and blood was clogging up his nose. "Who was it that was here!?" Eddie yelled into his ear.

"There was a officer or something, I don't know! And a...a huge guy! Yeah he was massive with short hair and they asked that good-for-nothin' Ghoul some questions about some [censored] I couldn't understand and then they killed him! Thats it thats all I know!"

Eddie pressed his .357 deeper into his head and yelled "What were they talking about!?"

"I...I don't... Wait... Oasis or something I don't know!"

Eddie hit him over the head with his gun and knocked him out.

The Enclave knew! They knew about the Oasis quest! But how much did they know...?

Eddie put his mind back to the matter at hand and went over to Anthony.

"Thats how you get real answers kid" he told him with a grim look.

"How did that guy know you Eddie?" asked Alexa.

"I ran up a massive tab once and skipped town."

"How massive?"

Eddie sighed and replied "Around 20 000 caps" he grinned "that Nova's a star in bed!" he laughed.
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 3:54 am

OOC: Dang, hope she's alright. And lets say the punch happened on the Vertibird...Considering we're actually on it. And, a personal thing, I hate it when people play my character's reactions, it just doesn't seem right and, at times, changes their personalities.

Wes didn't flinch when the punch crashed against his chest. Sadly for the young soldier, Wes' power armour which had been specially designed to be far denser (and heavier) than normal cracked the poor lad's armour. Yet Wes did not retaliate, initially. He stood for a moment or two, before quickly snapping onto his wrist with a large hand. Wes' eyes, visible through his tinted visor, once again lacked emotion as the juggernaut began to push the boy's hand closer to his own face. He held it right infront of his visor, shards of metal touching the glass. He held it there, looking to Eden to see what orders he'd give.

"..."
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 9:08 pm

OOC: Sorry to hear that Alexei. Hope all goes well. I'll post up a new part sometime soon, but for now, I'm gonna go play Fallout 1 =]
Also, since this one has seemed to die down, I'm gonna try out my own RP. I'll be active in both this and the new one. Cheers.
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 11:11 pm

OOC: Eddie cleared his throat and said where the hell is everyone?
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 4:52 pm

ooc well unexpectedly had to go out of town so i could not post
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 2:39 am

OOC: Eddie cleared his throat and said where the hell is everyone?


OOC: Anthony sits down and shakes his head in agreeance.
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Tina Tupou
 
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 6:43 pm

ooc um.........uh...... john has beer?
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 5:30 pm

i aint checking this anymore if it starts up pm me if you even want me back so cya
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Post » Sun May 01, 2011 10:31 pm

Alexei seems to be gone so I guess something happened with his mother. Sorry Alexei.
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Post » Mon May 02, 2011 12:53 am

Indeed. And here right after I joined. All we can do is hope he comes back at some point to continue this.
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