Two sides of the River.

Post » Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:35 pm

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Kelly James
 
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Post » Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:10 pm

Nice. Old lady with a shotgun! Run! Be sure to introduce more of conflict. Why did they not like each other is a good question to answer. Also, I was wondering if the world that has been in a nuclear holocaust for more than 200 years, how could a southern accent survive? Was she a ghoul, that lived before the bombs fell and managed to keep the accent? Cultural things like that tend to dissipate in stretched times of crisis. Keep it coming. Vercun out!
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Post » Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:47 pm

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Post » Fri Apr 01, 2011 3:36 pm

I see...Hmm...Well, keep it coming and I'll keep reading...Vercun out!
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Post » Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:46 pm

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Post » Sat Apr 02, 2011 12:26 am

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Post » Sat Apr 02, 2011 5:03 am

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Post » Sat Apr 02, 2011 12:47 am

Just updated the final part to the second chapter. And this is sort of a placeholder/update for that and for the third.

Please leave feedback if you like it, I dont know if I should continue or not really if noone really reads it.

Just a notice for officialities sake, I'm discontinuing writing this, for obvious reasons.
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